考研英语大作文修改范例

原文：

From this picture, we can see a farmer planting the corn, he works hard and then he could drink a drop of water.

Life is also like this. Our life is just like drinking a cup of tea, you feel the bitterness, and then sweet after taste could be get after bitterness. Life is not always so smooth, you might come across frustration and sadness, failure and even disaster, but you must be brave and stick on your dream. If you worked hard on your dream and tried your best to make it come true, you must get the sweet after bitterness.

Therefore, once you have a dream or when you do something, please don’t give up, stick it on and you would be successful after that.

修改以后的文章：

As is vividly depicted in the picture, we can see a farmer planting the corn. He should work hard so that he could drink a drop of water.

Life has something common with this phenomenon. Our life is just like drinking a cup of tea, you may feel the bitterness at the first sip, and then the sweetness. We should believe sweetness can be got after bitterness. Life is not always smooth; therefore, you may come across frustration and sadness, failure and even disaster. If you can hold out, stick to your dream and continue to strive for it, you will definitely get a bright future and an upgraded life.

In addition, once you have a dream or feel like doing something important to you, please don’t give up when there are some difficulties or obstacles on your way to success. As the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” If you try to avoid the arduous course of realizing your ideal and make hardly any efforts, you will never enjoy the feeling of being successful.

第二篇：考研英语大作文篇

我的考研经验（大作文篇），政治英语想考140分以上的进来考研英语能否取得高分很关键的一点就是作文，尤其是大作文，现在把我总结的经验告诉大家，希望会对正在复习的朋友有所帮助。

很久很久以前的考研是图表作文或者命题作文，但是最近10年来基本上都是看图作文，我想今年也不例外，每年题目给出的图是五花八门，如果你想指望题海战术“蒙”对题的话，基本上，这个很难。但是，这其中还是有规律可循的，如果你看过最近10年的真题，会发现这样一个规律————给出的图要么是一个要么是两个，要表达的意思要么是褒义要么是贬义，这样就出现四种类型的划分，单图褒义，单图贬义，双图褒义，双图贬义。————考研是国家考试，是为国家选择优秀的人才。所以争议很大，褒贬不一的图出的可能性微乎其微，给图作文不会超出这四种类型，万变不离其宗。所以重点就是把这四种类型的作文模版总结好，背诵以后按照模版对每个类型进行有针对性的练习，我结合选择题估计了一下，当时我可能考了12-14分左右，我不是很满意（每个类型的练习可能不是很够），所以，我建议大家每个类型要做5套以上的题目。

下面就单图双图两种类型的题目，把我当时的笔记总结给大家，可能不是很全面也可能有错误，望大家指正！

单图(褒贬义通用)：第一段：It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that ______________(介绍图画本身的内容，描写神态，动作，表情，心理等等)。

第二段：Undoubtedly the cartoon subtly conveys the meaning in which the profound significance should be taken more seriously that_________(精心提炼主旨，并表述出来)。and we can see clearly that_______(进一步表述细化中心思想)。There are many examples to prove that ______(主题思想)。A case in point is_____(举例一)，and another_____(举例二)。It is widely acknowledged that the only way we can rely on is _____(段落总结，强化主旨)。

Thinking of ourselves,we must be well aware of the importance of _____(强调重要性)。For one thing___(建议一)。Second,____(建议二)。Only in this way, _____(段落总结，回到主旨，表明态度)。

双图(褒贬义通用)：第一段：As is shown in the vivid pictures above,we can seeclearly that____(简要介绍两副图的内容)。In the first picture,___(进一步介绍图1)。 On the contrary,____(进一步介绍图2)。We may draw the conclusion that_______(提炼主旨)。

第二段：内容和单图作文基本类似，只是举例的时候最好举一正一反两个例子。

第三段：Thinking of ourselves, it is vital for us to derive the positive implications from the pictures.On the one hand____(方法一)。Another,____(方法二)。Only in this way___(回到文章主旨，表明下观点)。 大家都知道，每段的开头语和结尾语一定要精彩，所谓的模版大多也体现在这个地方，这样会让你的文章在阅卷老师的眼里上一个档次，毕竟，

阅卷量那么大，老师不可能每篇都看的那么仔细，我们必须要抓住有限的机会提高自己的分数。至于用书，我用的是北文考研12句法，学苑出版社的，感觉不错，根据那本书我总结了自己的模版，大家也可以根据自己的情况总结自己的模版，然后有针对性的练习，相信有很多朋友的英语功底比我强，也可以自创一些模版更好。