作文修改标准及05-09作文题目和范文

时间:2024.5.14

大学英语四六级考试写作应试指导

1、概述

纵观近10年的大学英语四六级考试,作文内容偏重工作、学习、交通及社会文化等方面的问题。考试形式中,给出英文题目和中文提纲式作文占68.4%,图表作文21%,给出英文题目及中文提示作文5.3%

大学英语四六级考试作文评分原则来取总体评分,就文章的总体印象给分及奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。如14分作文的标准是:切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。 如何进行准备

首先要了解四六级写作考试大纲的内容,评分标准、原则,历年真题范围,从而掌握出题原则及规律。同时,弄清自身在写作方面存在的问题:词汇贫乏还是不知如何下手。只有这样课下才能有针对性地学习,才能做到知已知彼,百战不殆。

打好基本功。了解四六级写作考试选词要熟悉、简洁、具体及多样化;句子要语法规范,具有一致性,连贯性及多样性;段落要中心突出,思想上保持一致,内容上有连贯性等特点。

熟悉各种文体的结构特点,写作技巧及常用句型、套话等。如论说文的常用开头法有谚语法、定义法、引用法、提问法、直接法、

间接法、故事法、概括法及综合法;中间段的扩展法有时间、空间、定义、分类、过程、例证、比较与对比及因果法;结尾段常用方法有重述法、总结法、提问法、预测法、建议法及名言法等。了解各种书信及简历的结构特点和写法;熟悉英文摘要及图表作文的具体要求:如何归纳信息、描述中心内容,如何用词简洁等。

背诵一些常用于论说文中的起、承、转、合结构的词(组),句型以及各种书信(如求职信、申请信、邀请信、感谢信等)中常用于开头或结尾的套话等。勤学多练,熟能生巧。在阅读范文前可根据所给作文题目及要求按自己的思路试写一下,然后与范文对照

找出差距,并有意识地背诵一些涉及科技、社会、文化等各个侧面的代表性文章,储存多种信息,以防写作时无话可说。

平时在阅读英语文章、报纸以及做模拟题时,要注意积累常用词汇、表达法及句型,分析文章的构思、组织方法,以便在写作考试时能做到有条不紊,顺理成章。熟悉各种应试技巧:如何识别提纲中的关键词;如何将提纲转化为各段的主题句;如何描述图表内容,提出相关问题并加以分析、说明;如何开头;如何结尾等。

3、临场注意事项

放松情绪,消除恐惧感,必要时可借助深呼吸来缓解紧张的心情。认真审题,弄清文章

及各段主题,实现由提纲到主题句的转换。打草稿:摆事实,理清思路,从易于表达,且论证丰富的观点入手,不局限于一种看法,一种表达法或一种句式。

具体写作时最好分段来写,各段之间空二至三行,以利于随时增减或删改。而且字迹要工整,卷面要保持清洁,给判卷人一个好印象。

写完后仔细检查作文中用词、句法方面有无不准确的地方;句式有无变化;句与句之间,段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡等。

总之,为了顺利通过四六级写作考试,突破最低分类线,不但需要了解相应的考试

要求,评分原则,掌握各种文体的写作要领,而且更需要平时多读多练习,加强实践。

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2.作文修改参照标准 作文内容修改 内容是否为主题服务,是否根据作文的主题的需要进行安排、阐述、解释、证明、充实等; 如果是论说文,作文中的每个段落是否只有一个主题,各个段落是否为整篇作文服务,段落中的推展句是否存在与主题句不相关的内容等。 作文结构修改 作文的结构安排是否合理; 所选用的素材安排是否合乎逻辑,如

时空顺序是否颠倒,因果关系处理是否得当,递进关系安排得是否恰当等。

三. 语法错误修改

1. 句子结构是否完整,句与句之间的结

构是否连贯;

2. 平行结构使用是否恰当,主谓关系是3.

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2.否一致; 句子结构是否有悬垂现象,修饰语是否错位; 代词在性、数、人称等方面是否保持一致,关系代词与先行词是否一致; 时态、语态、语气等使用是否恰当,前后是否一致; 时态、语态、语气等前后是否一致、呼应。 词汇及表达方法修改 词义是否有辨别不清现象; 选词是否有不当或不符合英语表达习惯的现象; 词义是否有模糊现象。 加工润色 句子结构是否多样化; 选词是否精确。

2009.6

Free admission to museums

越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?

也会带来一些问题

你的看法

范文一:

Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are open to the public with free admission. The reason for it lies in the fact that the government has been

attaching great importance to provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world.

However, the opener attitude of

museums may also bring some problems as well. For one thing, with more visitors, there is possibility that displays of

the museums can get damaged more easily. For another, it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors. As far as I am concerned, I am

absolutely in favor of this practice. First and foremost, not worrying about the admission fees, ordinary people are allowed to enter the museums to enjoy the displays freely. Moreover, kids and teenagers can learn about knowledge in various domains in a more vivid and interactive way in the museums out of the classroom.

2008.12 1.一次性塑料袋的使用

2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题

3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义 Disposable Plastic Bags

Nowadays we may find ourselves

surrounded by a sea of disposable plastic bags. And recently the problems of using disposable plastic bags have been brought into people’s focus.

First of all, the use of disposable plastic bags causes irreversible harm to our environment. As these bags are not

biodegradable, they are blocking the drainage system and causing water pollution.

What’s more, customers using disposable plastic bags may think that they are of great convenience. But what they don’t quite realize is that there will be remarkable negative

impact on our health. And sometimes careless disposal of these bags may even poison some innocent animals.

In view of the severity of this issue, effective measures have been taken in our country. There has been a strict limit on the using of disposable plastic bags in

supermarkets, which not only enhances people’s awareness on environmental

protection but also cuts down the cost of the running of supermarkets.

20xx年6月21日英语四级作文及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率

2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习

3. 你对于网络的看法

The Internet

In the era of information and

technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society. With the

Internet, it's easy to get the

information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work. We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet. However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet. Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it.

Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.

20xx年12月英语四级作文及范文

1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

3、以你自己为例……

范文一

Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from. However,

students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.

Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation. Because they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job. Others may have their choice made just for fun. They tend to hold the idea

that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.

As far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.

20xx年6月英语四级作文及范文 欢迎辞,欢迎加入俱乐部。 标题:Welcome to our club

本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞,属于一篇应用文写作,与04年6月的导游词类似,笔者认为难度不大,可按照以下提纲书写:

1.表达你的欢迎;

2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。 Welcome to English Club! It could serve as a platform to show your

outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.

You can be involved in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions and watching Oscar-winning movies. These extra-curricular activities could offer you ample opportunities. First, your active participation is helpful to strengthening the sense of

responsibility and managing

interpersonal relations. Second,

various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English. A good command of English empowers you to enjoy decided

competitive edge over your peers.

You can file a written application to our staff office or email us via

bonoo@diandian.net. The deadline for entries is Sept. 25th. Come on, join us now!

20xx年12月英语四级作文及范文

作文题目:1、许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会;2、但有的人认为应该取消; 3、你的看法

范文:

The Spring Festival Evening

Get-Together has been held in China for over two decades, which seems to have been an indispensable company during the traditional New Year’s Eve for a great number of people, who appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it, as more diverse life styles have emerged nowadays. Some prefer to go to a fancy restaurant to enjoy a gourmet meal; some intend to go on a vacation to an incredibly exotic destination for a novel and thorough relaxation; others may have even more post-modern notions, like go bunging, hiking, or cycling for entirely new different experiences, forgetting all about the Spring Festival.

To me, the Evening Get-Together is supposed to be here to stay. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the

variety of holiday activities. Besides, with such a gathering, family members will have a perfect opportunity to enjoy

more fun and happiness, for nowadays most people are so engaged in their daily businesses that they can rarely find any extra time to stay with their family, which, if not properly adjusted, might add further to the already worsening situation of the values of Chinese families.

20xx年6月英语四级作文及范文

An anouncement for a voluntary program:

1、校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动,现招募志愿者

2、本次志愿者活动的目的,内容,安排等

3、报名联系方式

The student union is launching a campaign against drunken driving in the city and participation in the activity will be totally on voluntary basis. We want you to join us as voluntees.

In view of the ever-increasing car accidents and deaths caused by drunking driving over the past 5 years, the campaign is designed to help car drivers to be aware of the danger of drunken driving, prommote responsible driving and urge the local authorities to

introduce a designated driver program. We are going to print posters and

pamphlets, make banners and signs and send petition letters to the officials of local government. The tasks also include posting posters on streets, distributing the pamphlets among car drivers and mailing the letters to local officials. The event will last ten days, from July 10 to 19, 2006.

Any students of this school who are physically energentic, mentally

enthusiastic about public affairs and socially committed to local road safety

and awarnesss of drunken driving are eligible for the the event. For signing up for the campaign please contact us at 12345678.

Please get involved, today! 20xx年12月24日英语四级作文及范文 Part V. Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同

3.我认为……

[参考作文]Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

[参看范文一]

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus. During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites. In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.

In fact, there are many royal

gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the

Universities. Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students. Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these

universities can widen their influence

as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.

In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists 20xx年6月18日英语四级作文及范文 Teacher’s Day :

1. 向老师致以节日的问候。

2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。

3. 我如何报答老师。

This is Teachers’ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special

recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers’ Day.

The whole secret of the teacher’s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible. Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than

parents, who merely gave them birth; for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life. What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule.

My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.

20xx年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文 1 你认为自己具备是什么条件(能力,性格,爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作,

2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么?

[范文]A Campaign Speech

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union. I am junior in Chemical Department. Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class. I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise. I am good at communication and organizing. And I like to help others.

Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball,

football, pingpong, etc. I am sure that I am qualified for this position. If I become the president, I will try my best to do well. I will organize some siutable activities for you. I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well. I am sincerely hope you will give me a

chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.

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