动物:
1. Some people hold that we should spend money and time on the protection of wild animals while others suggest that the money should be spent on populations living in the poorest areas of the world. What is your opinion?
[Sample]:
In these years, animal protectionhas become a subject of ongoing scientific research and an issue of concern. People take different views/attitudes toward the enormous spending (that is)required by wildlife conservation. It is suggested that the spending should be diverted to helping human populations, especially those living below poverty line, because human life is more valuable than animal life. In my opinion, the investment in animal conservation is worthwhile.
Poor adj needy poverty n.
Needy
rewarding
。。。has attracted the public’s attention
Protection /conservation/ preservation animal /wildlife
Animals, as a significant part of an ecosystem, have profound impacts on the sustainability of an ecosystem and on the well-being of humanity. All animals are connected in one way or another in food chains. For this reason, the demise of a species can lead to overpopulation or underpopulation of another species and then put this species at the verge/brink of extinction. The natural balance will be disrupted and the ecosystem cannot be sustained. It would disable vegetation from purifying water, recycling nutrient and pollinating crops. We humans are eventually affected.
Justified fair pure
Sustainable development
Another justification for animal protection is that animals play a significant role in the development of industries, as an important natural resource. People derive substances and materials from animals for different purposes. A typical example is that animals provide essential substances for drug-making. It is also very common that designers and engineers turn to wildlife for inspiration. For instance, the invention of water-proof(防水的) clothing drew upon the research on sharks.
Draw upon/on 借鉴
Draw inspiration from =turn to sb/sth for inspiration
….is a case in point.
On account of those benefits, wildlife protection is a significant strategy that has far-reaching effects on the future of human. However, when (the strategy is)implemented/performed, this strategy should be adopted in different contexts. It should be noted that spending money simply on animals is not the approach that promises/guarantee the best outcomes in all circumstances. For example, in those regions where inhabitants struggle with weak economies and have few job sources, direct spending on any animal program would not stop people from hunting and trading animals for a living. An alternative strategy is creating jobs or providing subsidies, lifting these regions out of poverty.
Improve their employability
Get rid of poverty 脱贫
Simply/solely / merely/ only
Subsidy /funding/investment /spending
Subsidise v. get rid of poverty
Have inborn/innate ability to make a living
Lack in job sources and are poor in academic backgrounds
From what has been discussed, animals are key components of the whole natural order and have relevance to the sustainability of an ecosystem and the interests of humanity. Animal protection is a strategy that applies to the whole world, and might vary in different circumstances.
The views towards this issue vary from person to person.
Be relevant to
The views towards this issue vary from person to person.
第二篇:大作文总结2
大作文总结 红色下划线标出的内容可通用。
第一段:客观地描述图画。
一句总述,两句细节(或一句细节,一句文字说明),共三句。 of them stands in a different corner of a football field. The eldest son kicked out the father, with the other three children guarding their goals.
(cartoon “图画”的同义词: drawing/picture/photo)
注意同义替换!
第一段可从一下几个方面去写:事物+动作+环境
或 人物+衣着+表情。
文字说明:
若两幅图并列:In the first cartoon, the caption indicates that.... In the second photo, we are 当只有一幅图时,两句取其一)
当两幅图相互对比时,第一段的写法:
The drawings vividly illustrated the changes of numbers of fishes and fish-boats in the past 100 years (总述boat in 1900 (细节fishing boats. (细节2,与前一句对比)
第二段:意义阐释,寓意(1句)+分析(4句),共五句。
寓意(1句),引出现象(问题):
表述1:Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist/photographer is
表述2:
表述3:Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist/photographer is
分析(4句),可以从原因分析、现状列举、例证、分析事物利弊的方面去考虑。
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完全掌握!
原因分析(原因基础句型,适用于任何需要讲述原因的情形):There might be three main reasons, I
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插入句式
现状列举:………………
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例证:As an example of
…… ……; ……; …… ?
分析事物利弊: …… is the driving force behind the swift progress of industry, agriculture, science and ………… is that ………………convenience generated by …………………… .
第三段:评论,个人观点,建议措施(1句总述,2句建议,1句包装)。
1句总述+提建议:
表述1:disturbing trend illustrated/revealed in the picture.
表述2:All things considered, it is high time for us to work out concrete solutions to the problem/ (to improve the situation)
……………… and only in this way can …….
发表个人观点: ………… and …… at the same time. Only in this way ……
再补充几个句子:
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提建议(个人方面):
We each individual should start from right here and now, and attach great value and importance to the urgency of the issue.
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讲环境保护,结束语: become more harmonious.(强调句型,在20xx考研英语大作文中本人就采用了这句)
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提建议(用于凑字数):
Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem independently, there is a increase awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible measures to produce the best effect.
To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who……. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that ……
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(此句尽量用) affluent nations, as
well as affluent individuals, ought to be doing much more to help the poor than they are generally now doing.(强烈支持……观点不会有什么困难)