《背影》是一篇回忆性叙事散文,写的中心事件是车站告别,作者重点刻画父亲为儿买橘去时的背影,从而反映出父子深情。至今读来真实感人,已成为经典名篇。文中许多地方,值得我们中学生写作时借鉴。
文章第一段:“我与父亲不相见已二年余了,我最不能忘记的是他的背影。”短短24个字,突出了本文写作的重点“背影”,一个“最”字又突出了“背影”在作者心中印象之深。开篇点题,决不啰嗦。这在写作学上叫作开门见山,是老师平常着力提倡的作文开头法。它的好处是直入主题,简洁明了。
文章第二第三段有点特殊,作者在写车站告别之前,写祖母去世父亲的工作也丢了,家中光景惨淡的事,看似与中心“背影”无关,实则有侧面烘托的效果,因为就是在这种祸不单行的景况下,父亲对儿子还是那样无微不至地关心,更能体现出父亲对儿子的爱。同时,也为后文父子离别渲染了悲伤的气氛,这就为后文写“背影”打好了厚实的基础。所以说这两段不是闲笔,而是文章不可分割的一部分。当然,这两段不是文章要写的重点,作者也惜墨如金,讲清就可,两段总共只有162个字。
第四段到第六段写车站送别,集中刻画父亲的背影,写得细致生动,描绘出一个真实感人的父亲形象。在写法上,主要是运用白描,我们看望父买橘的片段:“我看见他戴着黑布小帽,穿着黑布大马褂??两脚再向上缩;他肥胖的身子向左微倾,显出努力的样子。这时我看见他的背影,我的泪很快地流下来了。”父亲的背影,儿子是太熟悉了,但这次要描写的,却不是那常见的背影,而是在特定场合下,使他极为感动、终生难忘的那个背影。作者记写了当时父亲的穿着打扮体态动作,特别着重描绘了过铁道的情景:怎样走去,怎样探身下去,怎样爬上月台,攀上爬下,移脚倾身,都细细地如实写下。在这白描中,动词的运用极为精当,准确、生动地描绘出父亲过铁道买橘的情景。我们读后有身临其境之感,仿佛我们当时也在场,也看到了一位仁慈的父亲对儿子的关怀和体贴。作者没有用华丽的语言去渲染它,只用极朴实的文字,却生动地勾画出父亲的形象。这种笔墨,乍看似觉平淡,实际上却在平淡中显露新奇。我们不能不佩服朱自清的描写技巧。这三段是作者重点记叙的内容,写得详细生动感人。
第七段即文章最后一段,写分别几年后接到父亲的来信,想到父亲老来光景越来越不好,不禁悲从中来,在泪光中再现父亲的背影,抒发对父亲的思念之情,与文章开头形成呼应,结束全文,可以说是水到渠成,自然成文。
朱自清这篇散文的最大特点是抓住人物形象的特征“背影”命题立意,组织材料,在叙事中抒发父子深情。文章通体干净,没有多余的字眼,即使一个“的”字、一个“了”字,也是必须用才用。次要的地方惜墨如金,重点体现中心的地方细描细绘。没有华美的辞藻、生僻的词语,都是质朴自然的家常话,生活气息非常浓厚,提炼得非常简洁。尤其白描手法的运用达到了炉火纯清的地步。这是一篇经典散文,可学习的地方还有很多,可以说是常读常新,在我们中学生的学习过程中,尤其是在学习写作中,可以作为范文来借鉴。我们经常讲学习中要搭梯子,这样才容易攀上学习的高峰,那么,朱自清的《背影》在中学生学习写作的实践过程中,就是一架很好的梯子,可好好利用,一定对我们中学生的写作很有帮助。
第二篇:英语写作范文
1 心态 Attitude
1.我们的未来由很多事情决定,例如机遇、贵人相助等。
2.但是我们自己的态度、决心与勤奋起着更重要的作用。
3.也就是说,我们的未来由我们自己做主。
提示:尽量使用高级表达:such as;in other words等。
连句成篇 (将以上句子连成一篇50词左右的英语短文)
Our future is determined by many things,such as opportunities and others’ help,but our own attitude,determination and hard work play a more important role.In other words,we are the master of our own future.
我们的未来是由很多东西决定的,比如机会和别人的帮助,但是我们自己的态度、决心和努力发挥着更重要的作用。换句话说,我们是我们自己未来的主人
2 A famous ping-pong player 一个著名的乒乓球运动员
A famous ping-pong player Zhang Yining is a famous Chinese ping-pong player.She was born in Beijing on the fifth of October,1982.She is 1.68 meters tall.She started to play ping-pong when she was six years old.In 1991,she joined the Beijing table tennis team.When she was 11 years old,she joined the national table tennis team.At the age of 16,she became a ping-pong champion.In 2004 she took part in the 28th Olympic Games in Athens and won two gold medals.And she won two gold medals at the 48th World Table Tennis Championship in 2005.
著名的乒乓球运动员张怡宁是中国著名的乒乓球运动员。她是十月五日出世在北京,1982.she高1.68米。她开始打乒乓球时,她才六岁。1991年,她加入了北京乒乓球队。当她11岁时,她加入了国家乒乓球队。16岁时,她成为乒乓球冠军。她在2004参加了第二十八雅典奥运会上获得了两枚金牌。她赢得了两枚金牌在第四十八届世界乒乓球锦标赛2005。
3 图书馆 Library
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do Libraries Become Useless at the Age of Information? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人认为信息时代不再需要传统图书馆了,因为……
2. 有些人认为信息时代传统图书馆仍然有重要作用,因为……
3. 你的看法……
There has been a heated discussion about libraries at the age of information among people. Some people, especially the younger generation, challenge the value of conventional libraries. When they need any information in their studies or work, they can turn to their computers for help. For this reason, they do not need to go to a library for borrowing or returning one or two books.
在人们的信息时代图书馆有一个激烈的讨论。有些人,特别是年轻一代,挑战传统图书馆的价值。当他们在学习或工作中需要任何信息时,他们可以求助于他们的电脑。因为这个原因,他们不需要去图书馆借阅或归还一本或两本书。
While others, including most old people as well as scholars, value libraries. They love libraries because they can enjoy peace and quietness in an isolated spiritual world. And they also have access to rare academic works needed for their studies in the libraries.
而其他人,包括最老的人,以及学者,价值库。他们喜欢图书馆,因为可以享受在一个孤立的精神世界和平和宁静。他们还可以获得在图书馆的研究所需要的稀有学术著作。
In my view, conventional libraries are still available though there is still much room for improving. At the Age of Information, as long as knowledge is respected and cherished, libraries won’t extinct from our lives. On the other hand, libraries should not refuse the latest information technology, which will enable them to regain those young readers.
在我看来,传统的图书馆仍然可以提供,但仍有许多改进的空间。在信息时代,只要知识被尊重和珍惜,图书馆就不会从我们的生活中消失。另一方面,图书馆不应该拒绝最新的信息技术,这将使他们能够重新获得那些年轻的读者。
4 树立目标 Set goals
话题:
树立目标
1. 树立目标很重要
2. 原因是……
3. 如何设立和达到目标
范文:
The Importance of Goal
目标的重要性
There is no denying that setting a goal is very important. We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals. They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.
不可否认,设定一个目标是非常重要的。我们发现,成功的人总是那些拥有并实现他们的目标的人。他们设定目标,短期或长期的,以帮助实现他们的愿景。
Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life. It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for. With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want. On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life. You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless. Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.
为什么目标设定很重要?通过设定目标,你可以控制你的生活节奏。它有一张地图,引导你到你想去的地方。有了明确的方向,具有一定的计划,你会直接得到你想要的。相反,如果没有目标,你会活得有一种流浪的生活。你不知道要去哪里,你想要什么,你为什么无精打采。那么你的生活变得枯燥和毫无意义的就像在一个泥泞的湖泊死水。
From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize. First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals. Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many winners do.
从我的角度来看,目标是不难设定和实现。首先,你应该明确你真正想要的是什么,这构成了你的目标。然后你做了详细的计划跟着通过,许多成功者做。
5 充分发挥我们的日子Make the most of our days
Make the most of our days充分发挥我们的日子
As we all know, our living conditions are getting better and better. We have a lot of things to do every day. After class, we can watch TV, go to the net bar, go to the cinema and so on. But being a student, I think we should make the most of our days.
One of my friends used to be an excellent student in our school.But he got used to be on line since last year. Whenever he has a chance, he would go to a net bar near our school. And he would stay there far into the night. Now he has lost interest in his study .
So we can make a conclution that we should make the best of our days and be a good student.
大家都知道,我们的生活条件越来越好. 我们有很多事要做,每天. 下课后,我们可以看电视,到酒吧网,去电影院等. 但作为学生,我认为我们应该充分发挥我们的日子.
我的一位朋友曾经是一个很好的学生,他在我们school.But习惯是自去年上网. 每当他有机会,他就到学校附近的酒吧净. 到目前,他将在那里过夜. 现在他已失去了他的研究兴趣.
conclution,我们可以说,我们要充分利用我们的日子,是一个好学生.
6 写作的重要性 The Importance of Writing
As is known to all, writing is an important andnecessary skill for all students. However, many students don’t reallyunderstand the true importance of writing, as they just consider writing as atask of exam. As far as I am concerned, writing has deeper importance in manyways.
众所周知,写作对所有的学生来说是一项重要和必要的技能。但是,很多学生没有真正明白写作的重要性,因为他们只把写作当做是考试的一项任务。在我看来,写作在很多方面更重要。
Firstly, improving our ability of using words is abasic function of writing. For example, in order to write a good Englishcomposition, we must use every word carefully as much as possible to ensure itscorrectness. In the process, we have improved our ability of using words andwriting skills imperceptibly. In this aspect, writing is a good way tostrengthen our ability.
首先,提高我们用词能力是写作的一个基本功能。例如,为了写好一篇英语作文,我们必须极可能谨慎使用每一个词以确保文章的正确性。在这个过程中,我们不知不觉地提高了我们用词能力和写作技巧。从这一方面来看,写作是加强能力的一个好方法。
Moreover, writing is an effective way to enlarge ourvocabulary. Different compositions we write need different vocabularies.Therefore, the more compositions we write, the more vocabularies we get. At thesame time, it is helpful to enlarge our reading.
其次,写作是扩展我们的词汇量的有效方法。我们所写的不同作文需要不同的词汇。所以,我们写得越多,我们就掌握越多的词汇。同时,这也有助于我们扩大阅读量。
And last but not the least, writing makes greatcontribution to our logical thinking and analysis ability. For one thing, towrite a good composition, we must collect and arrange writing materialssystematically so that we can show off what is essential and what is not soimportant. In the process of dealing with materials, we are also learning toanalyze and deal with the different problems. For another, it is also a processto practice our own thinking ability and form different thoughts. By dealing withall kinds of compositions, we can get in touch with more thoughts and becomewiser.
最后但不是最不重要的一点,写作对我们的逻辑思维和分析能力很有帮助。一方面,为了写好一篇作文,我们必须系统地收集和整理写作材料以便能够掌握什么事必要的,什么又不是那么重要的。在处理材料的过程中,我们也学会分析和处理不同问题。另一方面,这也是一个锻炼我们思考能力和形成不同思维的过程。通过处理各种各样的作文,我们可以接触到更多的想法从而变得更理智。
In a word, writing is an important skill, especiallyfor language learners. Thus, we should improve our writing ability as much aspossible to improve our overall levels.
总之,写作是一项重要的技能,特别是对语言学习者。因此,我们应该尽可能提高我们的学做能力以提高我们各方面水平。