作文——六级经典英语范文

时间:2024.4.20

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)有的人喜欢独自旅行,有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行

2)两种旅行方式的好处

3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么?

Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

___________________________________________________________________________ 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式,提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好:有人喜欢独自旅行,有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式,并说明理由。

高分范文

Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

[1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.

[4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. [3]Moreover, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery.

[8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another,

[4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.

[9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you ccan find the pleasure from either one.

【亮点点评】

[1]“当涉及到或谈到?时”。

[2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。

[3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。

[5]“倾向,趋于”。

[6]“意外的惊喜”。

[7]表示列举。

[8]“和?相比”。

[9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。

[10]“或者?,或者”。

佳句临摩

1.佳句:When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. 临摩:当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时,人们的看法各不相同

2.佳句:Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 临摩:和城市相比,乡村的经济相对落后。

3.佳句:Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光,他们被称作“月光族”

2)有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念,但很多人反对这样消费

3)我对此的看法是??

The Moonlight Clan

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述“月光族”现象,引出对这一现象的不同看法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。

高分范文

The Moonlight Clan

Nowadays, more and more people, [1]especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings.

[2]Many people think this is a fashionable life style, [2]while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.

[3]Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. [3]However, more other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will [4]place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position [5]in case of unexpected expenses.

[6]Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, [7]though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, [8]in the long term, it [9]is unfavorable to their family and career. [10]Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.

【亮点点评】

[1]“尤其,特别”。

[2]用于提出两种对立观点。

[3]用于引出两种对立观点各自的理由。

[4]“使?处于艰难的境地”。

[5]“以防,万一”。

[6]用于表明“我”的倾向。

[7]though引导让步状语从句。

[8]“从长远来看”。

R> [9]“对?不利”。

[10]引用谚语结尾,值得借鉴。

佳句临摩

1.佳句:Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.

临摩:勇敢的人往往会获得更多的机会,而懦弱的人面对机会也有可能错过。

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2.佳句:Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.

临摩:持悲观态度的那些人认为地球上有限的能源很快就会枯竭。

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3.佳句:Just as a proverb says, o

, one should always prepare for a rainy day.

临摩:正如一句谚语所说的,“机会只给那些有准备的人。”

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Long Holidays. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 长假给大学生带来的好处

2. 长假可能给大学生带来的问题

3. 我应当怎样利用好长假

【范文】我要收藏

Long Holidays

Generally speaking, long holidays are good for us college students. On the one hand, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesses and further develop strengths. On the other hand, we can take part-time jobs, which can make us realize responsibility

and make ourselves better prepared for social life.

But every coin has two sides. Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicted to various computer games. I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way.

As far as I am concerned, I will try to make the best use of my precious time. I will spend most of my holidays studying English for that I am very poor at it. In addition, I will take a part-time job as private teacher. By this means, I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well

Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况

2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性

3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活

【范文】

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory will be disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On the one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.

There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends. In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Silence Is Not Always Gold. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 在现代社会中,“沉默是金”不一定是好事

2. 请举例说明

3. 总结全文

【范文】

Silence Is Not Always Gold

“Silence is gold” is a popular saying in which many people have belief. To these people speaking too much is not a merit. However, if you always keep silent, you will probably miss many golden opportunities instead of obtaining the gold of silence.

Last week I read an article written by an office lady. The company where she worked had two kinds of offices: cubicle office and window office. As a new employee she worked in a cubicle office together with twenty colleagues. Two years later she still worked there but some colleagues who came later than her had moved into the window office. She felt confused. One day one colleague told her that window office wasn’t obtained without request. But believing that she certainly gained one if she did a good job the woman had never asked for it.

From the woman’s experience we learn that silence is not always gold. In the modern society one needs to speak his mind and speak for his own interests

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Renew Knowledge. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 更新知识的重要性

2. 怎样更新知识

3. 你自己的感受

【范文】

Trying to Renew Knowledge

Today’s society is of knowledge economy age, in which new knowledge emerges much faster than ever before. Moreover, knowledge plays an important part in the whole economy. Therefore, everyone finds it necessary to renew his (or her) knowledge, otherwise he (or her) will be left behind the society.

There are some ways to update knowledge. On the one hand, one can attend different courses at all types of schools, either part-time or full-time. On the other hand, self-study is, in a sense, a more convenient and practical method by which one can effectively renew his (or her) knowledge.

In my view, I have primarily depended on self-taught method in the recent years. Although I am busy doing daily work, I still insist on teaching myself at night. In this way, I can not only keep up with the swift development of society but also apply new knowledge to my practical work, which benefits me a lot.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Western Fast Food. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 洋快餐颇受中国消费者的青睐

2. 产生这种现象的原因

3. 我的看法

【范文】

Western Fast Food

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. Today, nothing is more representative of the fast pace of modern society than fast food.

There are several reasons for its popularity. For one thing, it is fast and convenient. Go into a fast food restaurant, and your food will be ready in a minute. Precious time won’t be wasted in waiting-in-line to order or waiting at your table for your food to arrive. For another, its popularity is also attributed to the clean food, the excellent service and the comfortable environment of the fast food restaurants, and American style.

However, I think that fast food isn’t healthy enough because it doesn’t compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a whi

1) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the topic Should College Students Be Allowed to Live Off Campus? and base your composition on the following outline.

教育部发布消息称,原则上不允许学生自行在校外租房居住。对此,人们持不同观点,有些人赞成,有些人反对。你的观点如何?

2) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic On Lottery Games. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 有些人认为彩票游戏有很多好处。

2. 也有人认为彩票游戏有很多危害。

3. 我的看法。

3) Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled TV Talent Show --- A Good Thing or Bad? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 有些人对电视选秀节目持肯定态度

2. 另一些人则反对电视选秀节目

3. 我的观点

4) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.近年来出现了大学毕业生就业难的问题。

2.产生这一问题的原因。

3.如何解决这一问题。

5) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Food Safety. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.食品安全成为我们面临的一个严重问题。

2.这一问题造成的危害。

3.如何解决这一问题。

6) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic

Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way. You should write at least 150 words.

1. 为什么“有志者事竟成”?

2. 请举例说明。

7) Directions: In this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on The Increase in the Number of Students Attending Graduate Entrance Exams. Study the following chart carefully and base your composition on the outline given below.

某大学参加考研的学生人数

1. Describe the changes in the number of students attending graduate entrance exams in University X in the past decade.

2. Give possible reasons for the changes.

3. State your own choice.

模拟题参考范文

1.Should College Students Be Allowed to Live off Campus?

Some time ago, China's Ministry of Education banned university students from renting private accommodation. To this people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They say that most students prefer to live off campus for the purpose of living with their boyfriends or girl friends, which might severely affect their study. Besides, living on campus can ensure the safety of students and facilitate communication between them.

However, many others hold the opposite view. They claim that the living conditions on campus are unbearable. The dormitory is usually crowded and badly equipped. Besides, the university cuts the electricity too early every night. Therefore, many students choose to live off campus in rented houses with the purpose of enjoying a reasonably better living environment and concentrating more on their studies.

As far as I am concerned, I tend to believe that universities should be more flexible towards the administration of dorms. The ban should never be a cut-off measure and special situations should be considered. Meanwhile, the school should try to upgrade the overall condition of dorms and provide all students with a better service at a low price.

(或Personally, I am in favor of the decision of China's Ministry of Education. Anyway, college students, most aged 18-22, are still too young to control themselves or make proper decisions. Besides, living on campus promotes a sense of belonging by being closely connected with other students. This could truly be a valuable part of the four-year college education.)

2. On Lottery Games

There is no denying the fact that lottery games have become a hotly debated topic in China. Opinions on this issue differ from person to person. Some people believe that lottery games are beneficial in many ways. For one thing, they help collect money for the poor, the disabled and the cause of sports. For another, lottery games provide people with a means of entertainment or pastime.

Many others, however, hold the opposite view. They claim that lottery games are, in fact, a kind of gambling. People are tempted to earn money through their luck instead of down-to-earth labor. They also aruge that the ticket buyers attach more importance to the prizes than to the support of the disabled or the cause of sports.

As far as I am concerned,// Weighing the arguments of both sides, I believe that it is OK to buy lottery tickets. Anyway, it has been existence for many years and proved to be more

beneficial than harmful. Actually, we don’t have to worry too much because facts have shown that most people can treat lottery games with a peaceful and normal mind.

(Personally, I think that both sides have something right. Actually, lottery games should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up eating for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and minimize their unhealthy influence, so that they can benefit us in a better way.)

3. TV Talent Show --- A Good Thing or Bad?

An army of people today are fond of the TV talent show. They support it and see themselves as fans of one or another show star. They believe that the TV talent show can change one’s fortune. At least, they argue that, the show offers the opportunity to show and develop one’s talents.

On the contrary, a number of people hold the negative attitude to TV talent shows. They maintain that the TV talent show today is like a river that has risen to its flood level. It misleads the youth and makes them believe that they can make a fortune or become famous overnight. As a result, a lot of students can’t calm down to study on the show’s season. Some of them take interest in imitating their idol, so much so that they can hardly recognize themselves.

For my part, I believe that the TV talent show is like a double-edged sword, which can do both good and harm. Therefore, it is extremely important for us to face it properly. For one thing, the TV studios are supposed to create more positive and favorable shows. For another, the media ought to guide people, especially the young, to right way and refrain from exaggerating the effect of the show.

4. College Students’ Job Hunting

There is no denying the fact that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted. Reports are often heard upon the number of students who fail to find a job on graduation. Actually, the problem has become so widespread that it has severely affected the graduates’ life and hindered the development of economy.

A number of factors account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. First, in recent years, colleges and universities have enrolled so many students that the number of graduates are far greater than the need in the market. Secondly, many graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs to do than go to small towns or the country. Last but not least, the ongoing financial crisis and economic depression aggravate the difficulty in job-seeking.

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is essential that the government create more job opportunities by all means. For another, graduates should change their attitude towards employment and go to work in small cities and the country. With these measures taken, we have reasons to believe that the problem can be solved in the near future.

5. Food Safety

There is no denying the fact that food safety is a grave problem with which we are confronted. Reports are often heard upon food products of bad quality. The most notable instance might be the notorious San Lu milk powder scandal which has drawn considerable publicity in the past months. Actually, the problem has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s life and hindered the development of economy.

Fake and shoddy food products are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to them. First and foremost, they directly infringe upon consumers’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even lives. Besides, the production and sale of such food cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful producers. Last but not least, the destruction of the food means a grievous waste of the nation’s resources.

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is high time that pertinent laws and regulations were worked out and rigidly enforced to crack down on any production and circulation of substandard food products. Meanwhile, inactive and incompetent civil servants should be immediately purged from the team of food safety supervision and administration. Only with these measures taken can we expect a bright future of this nation.

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