姓名：朱怡辰 学号：1210030106

Education pays

The bar chart above reveals the relation between the degree level and the

unemployment rate and the median weekly earnings in 2011.From the graph,we can see that there is a strong negative correlation between degree level and the

unemployment rate.On the contrary,there is a positive correlation between degree level and positive correlation.

The unemployment rate of the people whose degree is less than high school diploma is 14.1%，which is 11.6% higher than the one whose degree is doctoral degree.As for the median weekly earnings,the people with doctoral degree can get 1551 dollars,which is 1100 dollars more than the salary of the people whose diploma is less than the high school diploma.The reason is apparently:Firstly,as the economy developed rapidly, it also makes the occupations’ requirements go higher.Secondly,the higher the degree level is,the more efforts the people should make,and as the compensation is proportional to one’s efforts he has made,it’s reasonable for them to get higher salary.

In my opinion,I think whether to chase a high degree lies on what your dream is or to say what lifestyle you prefer.What behind their highly paid salary are their swink and dedication that we can not see.However,if one whose dream is to change the world or make so much money,he should try his best to achieve his goal.

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第二篇：Education Pays-英语范文

Education Pays 的几例范文

范文一

As is shown above, the bar chart clearly demonstrates the relationship between the education level and earning in 2010. It is obvious that well-educated persons such as owning Doctoral degree and Master's degree have a high salary than those who have relatively low degree. Isolated as the figure seems to be, as a matter of fact, we can observe that the higher level of education you receive, the higher income you get.

People’s opinions about investment in education differ from person to person. Some people say that knowledge could no longer change destiny. To them, it is not only a waste of money, but also a waste of time. Others deem that education is worthy of investment. As for me it is no doubt that education offers favorable working opportunity and handsome income, which enable us to buy what we want ,please what we love, and fulfill what we dream, and correspondingly we are able to build an ideal paradise where life can be enjoyed to the uttermost.

In conclusion, we should realize significance of education, which plays a crucial role in personal growth of career. In addition, it is convinced that education is the prospect of a nation.

范文二

From the chart above, we can definitely get a conclusion that the more you learned, the higher your salary would be. The figures in the chart denied the claim that knowledge is useless. However quite a few people still hold the opinion that a higher education does no good to a better job since that there are many university students who can not get an ideal job.

What I want to point out is that there is more than one factor that contributes to the failure of finding an ideal job for those who got a higher education. While those who failed to get a better education will hardly succeed in getting a good job because they didn’t get the knowledge systematically and scientifically.

As the proverb goes like this, Knowledge is power. Education pays, sooner or later.

范文三

From the bar chart given above, we can observe that it reflects the statistics of income among people of different educational background. Those who possess a doctoral degree earn 1,551dollars median weekly, ranking first among people of other education level. The median weekly earnings of people with associate degree and below can not reach the average of 797 dollars, ranking from 768 dollars to 451 dollars. As for the unemployment rate, 2.5 % of people with doctoral degree will suffer from unemployment. However, the unemployment rate of people with some college, no degree and lower degree surpass the mean value of 7.6%， ranking from

8.7% to 14.1%。

The bar chart of Education Pays reveals a phenomenon that there exits some difference in incomes and unemployment rate among people with different educational level. Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon: for one thing, with the advancement of technology and the adjustment of industrial structure, quite a few high-tech industries emerge overnight, which leads to a soar demand of workforces with high educational degree, thus, it is natural that graduates with bachelor’ and higher degree get a high pay-packet and enjoy a stable job. Additionally, those with educational background under associate degree are easily dismissed and paid by low salary. They can be replaced any time due to the fact that their jobs are easy and can be finished by average people。

Definitely, the higher education degree you get, the more likely you are to enjoy a competitive edge in the employment market. Thus, the authorities should enforce some policies to ensure the equity of education. Only in this way can more people lead a stable and comfortable life。