广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（14）附参考范文
（重庆卷） 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months .
This is the first time that I′ve been away my family for such a 76.
long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve 77.
soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia,like 78.
many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79.
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80.
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81.
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83.
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84.
will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85.
to China several times.I just can’t wait.
【答案】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Today is Sunday .I′ve been in Canada for two months .
This is the first time that I′ve been away ^ my family for such a 76. from
long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I′ve 77. mine
soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia,like 78. living
many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. is
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. met
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81. hard
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82. families
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83. and
we are planning a small party for the next Sunday.There ,Katia 84. the
will introduce me to some of her friends,one of who has been 85. whom
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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
8．高考英语(江西卷)
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。
留意：1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容。
2．词数为100左右。
3．参考词汇： 网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be cheated
开头：Should students make friends on line ? 展开：Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. 展开：Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
结尾：It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going. I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparations to make. Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
参考答案----短文改错:
1. what-----how
2. anything----everything
3. find----found
4. on second-----on the second
5. friend----friends
6. on----with
7. warmly----warm
8. to stop----stop
9. mine----my
10. for-----so
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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
10．可持续发展已成为全球共识，如何实行可持续发展是摆在世人面前的重大问题。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。(江苏省20##年高考全真模拟试卷)
留意：
1．不要逐条翻译。
1． 可适当发挥
2． 词数：150左右
3． 文章的开头
部分以给出
4． 参
考词汇：差距gap相关法律relevant laws
One possible version:
The idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet.
The present situation is worrying. First, natural resources are becoming less than before. Second, as some peo
ple are not aware of the importance of the environmental protection, the problems with it remain extremely serious to some degree. The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to become wider and wider.
To our great joy, many countries have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and regulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. One the other hand, popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out.
As for myself, I should take the responsibility to devote myself to sustainable development, our future and the lives of our children and our grandchildren will be in danger.
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.
What’s more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself.
Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam?
I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
答案解析------短文改错
Dear John,
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to
of
going to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, I
sharing experiences Much
will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around ∧corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.
the
What’s more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself.
worse am
Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam?
I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I
truly accept
look forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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(一)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：
段首句
1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to………Some people suggest that____.
2.俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying ……It’s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many case seven today.
3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……
Today，……，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First，……Second，…….
What makes things worse is that…….
4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。
Nowadays，it is common to ……,Many people like ……because…….Besides，…….
5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。
Every coins has two sides and ……is not an exception.
6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about…… vary from person to person. Some people say that……,To them，…….
7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem……which is becoming more and more serious.
8. …… 已成为人的关注的热门话题 ，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
……has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重
的问题。
……has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，
It can be seen that ……while .Obviously，……，but why？
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第三套
短文改错（满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening.
In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter
in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he
reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, he
discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the
airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but
with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he
caught a next plane back to England.
参考答案\\\\\ 短文改错（满分10分）
In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter
in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/\ Kennedy Airport. When he
to
reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, he
arrived still
discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the
couldn’t either
airport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but
trying that
with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he
no
caught a next plane back to England.
The
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短文改错（10分）
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。
注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。者据
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard.
She praised me for that I had done.
短文改错参考答案
giving—given 去掉out her---herself they---we
said----say turns---turn
too---so kind---kindly do后加it that---what
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【西南师大附中】
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
When I was a small child my parents didn’t have many money 76．_______________
and I had a very few Christmas gifts. My cousin was 10 and he 77．_______________
had gone out singing Christmas carols and made quite a bit 78．_______________
money. With telling anyone he went to the shop and spent almost 79．_______________
every penny of his money on a teddy bear; then he using the 80．_______________
change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming on them. He 81．_______________
came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these 82．_______________
things for me as Christmas gifts. Twenty-five years late the 83．_______________
moth-eaten teddy bear has long since been thrown away, but I even 84．_______________
have the little rusty necklace in my jewelry box to remind of my cousin’s kindness. 85．_________
短文改错：
76. many→much 77. 去掉 a 78. bit 后加of 79. with→without
80. using→used 81. them→it 82. what→that 83. late→later
84. even→still 85. remind后加me
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小題1分，满分10分）
When my twenty birthday came , I was not at home. 76.________
In order to celebrate such important day with my 77_________
Parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them 78_________
For having raised me for twenty years, and expressed 79_________
my love to them. Later mother talked me when they 80_________
read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. But father 81________
appeared much cool. After that. he read it alone carefully, 82________
and then he put it up into a desk drawer. I can imagine the 83________
scene clear because I know father. Being a man with few 84________
word, he prefers to show his love for me in a silent way. 85________
参考答案
76.twenty-twentieth 77.such 后加an 78.him-them 79.正确
80.talked-told 81.去掉were 82.去掉much或改为very
83.up-wawy 84.clear-clearly 85.word-words
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高考英语书面表达写作指导---议论文
1. 引段
高考英语议论文的引言可以有两部分组成：现象+观点。
现象就来自作文题目。所以学生必须要理解题目中的每句话，把题目中的中文用英语表达出来就能成为不错的开篇。然后再开门见山地亮出自己的观点。
2. 主体段
① 引证法(即引用一些名人名言、成语、格言、谚语灯作为论据)；
② 例证法(即举例来进行论证 )
③ 喻证法(用比喻的方法来论证事理，把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅显易懂，使文章既生动又形象 )
④ 对比论证法(通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来分析论证，使文章的表达效果更强烈，给人留下深刻印象 )
⑤ 归纳法 (从分析典型，即分析个别事物入手，找出事物的共同特点，然后得出结论。)
⑥ 推理法 (从一般原理出发，对个别事物进行说明、分析，而后得出结论)
⑦ 驳论法 (先列出错误的观点，然后加以逐条批驳，最后阐明自己的观点)。
在主体段中，务必要牢记应采用先总后分的手法——先亮出主题句，然后再用发展句充实段落。你必须围绕着引言段的观点展开，千万不能让人觉得的的文章段落之间没有衔接。
此外，在主体段中要恰当地使用过渡词，有明显的层次感，引领阅读者一层一层地根据你的分论点走向最终你要阐述的观点。
3. 结尾段
结论，用一、二句话来结束文章，做到首尾呼应。一定要再次澄清你的观点，切记与引言段的观点一致，建议用不同的词句法表达一个意思。
(四)、英语议论文范文
Private Tutors
With the development od science and society, more and more students are keen to take on private tutors.
Some people think taking on a private tutor is good for students in some ways. The tutor can answer the students’questions individually and carefully and give them detailed advice; some private tutors assign their students more exercises to do and the students will learn extra knowledge from their tutors; it is known to us all that a good and experienced teacher can help his students to review their lessons in a very good way so that they can have a better understanding of the knowledge learned in class, which is help to them in their examinations.
But every coin has two sides. Some people look upon it with disapproval. They hold the opinion that the students rely too much on their tutor and they even take little notice of what their own teacher says in class; the private tutor assigns them to do a lot of extra exercises, thus occupying plenty of rheir spare time and they will be too worn out; contrary to what their parents hope, their studies become worse than before.
So it is hard to say whether taking on a private tutor is good or not. It all depends on the individual. But in my opinion, if you want to take on a private tutor, you should choose one carefully since he or she will have a great impact on your studies.
Money for Education
In my opinion, it is worthwhile to spend more of the money in order to have the children better educated.
First, as there are more than 40 or even 50 students in a class, in most cases, teachers can not take care of all the students in class. Therefore many students have to attend spare time classes or even go to the tutors to make up for this.
Second, we are now in the 21st century. With the development of society, only those who have a good education are more likely to get good jobs. So the more we learn now, the more chances we will have in the future. Of course we will get a high pay.
In a word, spending money on education is certainly rewarding.
III. Post-task ( Each composition 120-150 words)
请你谈谈在学习上遇到困难时，如何想办法去解决，如何克服这些困难？
IV. Sentence patterns:
The point is that….
From my point of view…
As for me…
As far as I am concerned…
We must recognize that…
There is no doubt that…
The main reason is that…
As we all know…
V. Summary:
VI. Assignment: ( Each composition 120-150 words)
1.每一位高三的学生都面临着巨大的压力。对压力，高三的学生看法不一，有的害怕压力；但有的却认为压力不是件坏事。请你谈谈你的看法。
2 .20##年世博会将在上海举行。为了办好这次国际盛会，上海市将进一步改善环境。与此同时， 提高市民的素质和修养也势在必行，因为文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要。作为年轻人，我们自身也存在着一些不文明行为。请例举你所观察到的2-3种不文明行为（如：大小便后不及时冲刷；随地乱扔纸屑、废物；随地吐痰；插队…）并就此做出评论或提出建议。
Feed-back
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短文改错（辽宁卷）
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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_________
far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful 67_________
if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school 68_________
looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in 69_________
a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study 70_________
better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_________
photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons 72_________
and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but 73_________
unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a 74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which
73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we
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短文改错
When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it won’t be very harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January named after God Janus. He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month on which one looks forward to the new year and it’s also a period of time how people think about the past year.
Now can you share with us the stories about rest of the months?
参考答案：
When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the
difficulty
months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it won’t be very
However
harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January ∧named after God Janus.
hard was
He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look
had
forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month
and
on which one looks forward to the new year and it’s also a period of time how people think about the
in when
past year.
Now can you share with us the stories about∧ rest of the months?
The
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【渝东七校名校联盟】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
参考答案
76. to后加 be 77. lies-lay 78. such so 79. came后加to
80. photo-photos 81.去掉were 82. did-made 83. of后加a
84. wholly-whole 85. little-few
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短文改错（10分）
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。
注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。者据
Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later, she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turns. When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard.
She praised me for that I had done.
短文改错------参考答案
giving—given 去掉out her---herself
they---we said----say turns---turn
too---so kind---kindly do后加it that---what
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中间段落句
1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of …….At the same time，they say…….
2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve …….For example，…….Worst of all，…….
3.首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
First，…….What’s more，…….Most important of all，…….
4.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，
Confronted with……，we should take a series of effective measures to …….For one thing，……For another，……
5.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example .…….In addition. …….All
the measures will certainly……….
6.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However，just like everything has both its good and bad sides，………also has its own disadvantages，such as……….
7.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless，I believe that……is more advantageous.
8.完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that……because…….
(三)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：结尾句
1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent .I think that……
2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word，the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of……Only in this way can……in the future.
3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于……
But……and……have her own advantages .For example，……while……Comparing this with that，however，I prefer to……
4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally，I believe that……Consequently，I‘m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because……
5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society，…… necessary to……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society，it will be better and better.
6.至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……
For my part，I think it reasonable to……Only in this way can you……
7.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….however，from a personal point of view find……
8.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above，we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that……
9.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means，we may not control this trend，and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly，so what we should do is……
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