20xx年北京市中考英语作文优秀范文及评分标准
评分标准：第一档：（15~13分）
完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（12~9分）
基本符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（8~5分）
部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（4~0分）
与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。
听力材料
一、文段表达。（共15分）
根据中文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的英文短文。
临近中考, 同学们学习时间长、压力大。有人害怕压力，有人认为有压力并不是一件坏事。某学校最近开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你是否也有压力和你对压力的看法，并提供一些缓解压力的好办法, 与同学们分享。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。短文的开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure.
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Friends，although pressure is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to face it bravely and try to make “Less Pressure, Better Life”.
That’s all. Thank you!
文段表达。（共15分）
Some students are afraid of it, but some of them think we also need pressure. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student. So they send me to all kinds of weekend classs. I really felt tired. So I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy and I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. What’s more, in my opinion, listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they are really helpful to both my health and my study.
二、文段表达（20分）
51. 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。
信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给的英文提示词语
仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是Mike，远在美国的妈妈想了解你在中国最好的朋友的情况。请你
给妈妈写封邮件，介绍你在中国最好的朋友。请你根据妈妈的问题回复邮件。
提示词语：interest, know each other, help, kind, friendly
Dear Mum,
How are you? Everything is fine in China. You want to get to know
my best friend and I will tell you about him / her.
Best
Mike
范文：Dear Mum,
How are you? Everything is fine in China. You want to get to know my
best friend and I will tell you about him / her.
My best friend's name is Li Hao. He is tall and thin. He has short
black hair with big eyes. He is a lovely, smart and helpful boy. He
studies
wishes
hard and has a good relationship with our classmates.
We both take an interest in playing basketball and reading books. I think that is the reason why we have become good friends. Sometimes we talk about the novels that we read together and share our opinions. After school or at the weekend, we often play basketball with our classmates. I have a lot of fun with him. I enjoy my school life in China. I hope he is my best friend forever.
Best wishes
Mike
三、文段表达（15分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74．假设你是Shirley。你的笔友李华和父母情有一点小矛盾，想要向你倾述。
下面是他给你的电子邮件。请你根据他的邮件内容写一封回信,谈谈你对这
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.
I don’t think you need to
be so upset, nor should you be unhappy with your parents. Don’t feel strange if I say your parents are right about
the matter. As a teenager you should learn to take some responsibility
about your own future. I think the most important thing you are doing now
is to get prepared for the future by working better on your lessons.
Computer is just a tool for both education and entertainment，while
mid-term exam is an important stage to test your learning.
So, I think, for the time being, you should put the exam before the
QQ pet. I suggest you have a good talk with your parents and ask them to
feed the QQ pet for you for a time.
I hope what I said can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Peter
Possible version two: (107 words)
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.
First I want you to comfort yourself by having a nice walk outside.
To keep calm is important for you to deal with these matters. In fact,
I disagree with your parents’ idea. It’s true that students should work
hard on their study especially when the mid-term exam is coming. However,
to feed a QQ pet doesn’t harm your study. It is a good way to relax yourself. We all know that we can study better after proper relaxing.
I think you should have a good talk with your parents. Tell them your ideas
and your study plan. I think they will understand and support you finally.
I hope what I said can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Peter
四、文段表达（15分）
74． 假如你是王平，你的英国笔友Cathy发来邮件说她在 “Cozy Reading Week
（惬意阅读周）”时读了几本有趣的书，她想跟你交流一下，了解你的读书情况。
请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示词语：books on , because, get, knowledge
范文：
As for me, I like reading the books on science. Because I like science and I want to be an inventor in the future. I hope to invent more things to help people live an easier life. Though I’m busy with my studies, I keep reading for about half an hour every day.
I think reading is very important and necessary for us. We can get not only knowledge but also happiness from the books.
五、文段表达 (15分)
74． 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50
词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的学校活动，他想了解你最喜欢的一项学校活动。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。
范文：
We have quite a few after-school activities, but I like out goings
best. Last month our class went to the Great Wall. While we stepped
on the Wall, we saw it stretch far into the distance and also saw kinds of flowers on the mountains. Of course, we took a lot of nice pictures and sang and shouted on the way. We enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenes. It helped us learn more out of school, such as history, photograph, and so on. (84)
Yours,
Li Hua
六、文段表达（15分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74. 生活中我们每天都在与人交往，也许你曾经遇到过这样的困境：你想在聚会
上穿的衣服
脏了让妈妈帮你洗，然而妈妈因为工作太忙没有时间洗；与同学共同完成墙报(a
wall
newspaper)时，你有一个自认为很好的想法没有被采纳；你最近学习很忙，但是
向你请教问
题的同学很执着；…… 你是怎样做的？
现在，请你就与人交往(communicating with others)的话题向《21世纪英语报》投稿。 描
述一次你解决与他人交往困境的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语：experience; get on well; help; talk; by oneself; understand; respect; share; enjoy
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In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each other. However, it’s not an easy thing. Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall
newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me
the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.
From the experience, I know how important it is to have a
heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.
七、文段表达。74. 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑，不少于50词的文段。目前，北京的车越来越多，对空气产生极大影响。某网站在开展出行方式大讨论。假如你是李华，你喜欢哪种出行方式？请根据提示词语和相关问题，给网站投稿。稿件的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入总词数。
提示词语：expensive, relax, easy, be good for, reduce, save energy
? How do you go to school, by car, by bus, by bike or on
foot?
? Which way is the best? What are the advantages?
? Dear Editor,
I know you are organizing a discussion about the ways of going out. I’m a middle school student and I want to join the discussion.
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Yours respectfully, Li Hua
Nowadays, you can see more and more people riding bikes on the road and I am one of them. I go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way. Why do I like riding a bike? Let me tell you the reasons.
First, it's not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more. Second, I can relax myself while riding a bike. It’s good for my health and it’s easy to get a place for a bike. Third, the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy. I hope everybody can ride a bike to go to school, go to work and travel to other places. Let's ride bikes from now on!