武中秘籍之写作黄金冲刺
冲刺二 建议信
一、 包括内容:
问好,表明写信人的目的;(说明来信人的主要问题)
建议的内容;
总结,并表达期待收到对方的来信
二、模板句型:
开头句:
Hi, I am…, from… I’m writing to…;
The reason I am writing is that…;
Why I am writing is that…;
The purpose of this letter is to…
I am writing to express my views concerning….
主体:
I have 3 suggestions as follows;
Here I’d like to make 3 suggestions as follows;
I’d like to give 3 suggestions as follows;
The first is…/ The most important is that…;
in addition, … is also very important/
… comes next; last but not least, …;
Besides/In addition/What’s more/ Furthermore, if you …, you would be able to …
I think/believe it would be better/very helpful / beneficial if you … It is desirable that … I would like to suggest/ recommend that …… /
Why not …… I hope that you may consider doing ……
结尾:
If you can do the above mentioned, I believe…
Those suggestions are what I believe important for you.
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I hope you can take them into consideration;
I’d appreciate it if you can take the above-mentioned suggestions into account.
I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration, and your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated.
衔接词:
First and foremost; first of all; the most important is…; in addition; besides; what’s more; what comes next is…; last but not least; the last thing to bear in mind is…
三、 万能模版: 豪华版
Dear XX,
I'm so sorry that you are having trouble / difficulty / a problem in ____________, I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
Firstly, If I were you, I would consider doing_________, because ___________. In addition, it’s necessary for you to ___________. Last but not least, it would be better if _________, by doing which, you can _______________.
I believe, with your determination, you can overcome these difficulties and make greater progress.
乞丐版
Dear ______,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to(关于) ______ , and I will try to make some conductive(有指导意义的) suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
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四、写作范文:
Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信,帮助Brad用英语写一封回信, 给出分析并提出合理建议。 Dear Brad,
I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied. So I feel lonely sometimes.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
yours, Li Hua
注意:1.可适当增加细节。2.不少于80词。
Dear Li Hua,
I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents.It’s a common problem shared by almost everybody in their adolescence. As for my advice for you, first, don’t hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, convince them you have tried your best. It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child. I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard.
Anyway, there is no one who loves you more than your parents in the world. Whatever you are, they will always be there for you. Love them, and love can heal everything.
Yours sincerely,
Brad
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五、写作指导配套练习
假设你是李华,是重庆的一个高中学生。你看到有网友Tommy在Twitter上发了一条推文,向中国的学生求教汉语的学习方法,他觉得汉语的发音和书写很难,不知道如何开始。请广大网友给他发电子邮件提出一些建议。现请你据以上信息给Tommy发一封电子邮件,给他提出一些学习中文的建议和方法,字数不少于80。
Dear Tommy,
I came across your message on Twitter.
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第二篇:考研英语建议信写作常用句型及范文
A letter of Advice建议信是向别人提出合理性的建议,以便使对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题,因此要求建议信要写得简明扼要,目的明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。
常用句型:
1. I'd like to suggest that you can give me a prompt response.
2. May I suggest that you can…
3. I wish…
4. I really hope that…
5. What about… ?
6. How about… ?
7. My suggestions are as follows.
8. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…
9. If you could take what I suggest seriously, you would…
10. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can… 范文:
Directions:
Your friend Wang Li wants to get some advice from you about what to study in university,
computer science or history. Write a letter to him, which includes:
1) what do you think about the two subjects,
2) give your advice to him, and
3) encourage him in his future study.
Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)
Jan. 30th, 2010
Dear Wang Li,
I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. As you said in your last letter, you couldn’t make a decision about which to study in your college, computer science or
history.
In my opinion, nowadays, with the development of science and technology, computer plays an increasing role in our work and daily lives. As it turns out, one who wants to find a good job
must be an expert at computer first. Referring to history, I don’t think it is a subject that could contribute to your capacity of finding a satisfactory job. You could take it into account that you
may regard history as one of your hobbies.
On the whole, I hope that you should pursue your study in computer science. Remember it is up to you. No matter what you would choose, after making the decision, you should make every effort to master it.
Please write to me if you need other help.
Best wishes
Li Ming
(168 words)