Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about a Microcomputer I purchased from your company. I purchased a computer from your company on 05/07/2010 and it was delivered by your company to my house on 08/07/2010. When we opened the box, we noticed there was two dents at the back of the computer and there are some scratches on the screen. I would like you to arrange for another brand-new computer to be delivered to me as soon as possible. Otherwise, I would like to have my full refund.
Yours faithfully,
xxx
第二篇:英文投诉信表达及例文
写信投诉抱怨的题型很常见,怎样才能合理的表述不满,又能显得理由充分?下面介绍下这类书信的常用词汇和句型
Complaint Letter
词汇:
complain against sb. about sth.投诉......
dissatisfaction with不满于......
put up with / bear / tolerate忍受
awful 糟糕的
poor service糟糕的服务
inconceivable不可思议的
out of one’s expectation令某人大失所望
look into / go into / investigate调查
incident / matter 事件
sanitary situation卫生条件
bad manners 不礼貌
disturbance干扰
nuisance 麻烦事
remedy 补救
solve解决
recurrence再次发生
句型:
1) I am writing to you to complain about ...
2) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
3) There are some problems with the flat that I wish to bring to attention. For one thing, there is?For another,...
4) I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more.
5) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.
6)I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing, better service to the public.
7) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
8) We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.
考研英语小作文模板:投诉信
投诉信1
结构要点投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件,一般分三个部分:
1. 提出投诉内容;
2. 说明具体情况;
3. 提出解决办法。
Suppose you bought a woolen scarf(围巾) by mail order but later found a hole in it. Write a letter of complaint to describe that matter and require settlement. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter,
using “Li Ming” instead.
To whom it may concern,
The woolen scarf I bought by mail order from your company arrived on time the day before yesterday. But when I checked it, I found a hole in the middle. I was astonished because the hole was obvious and I did not think you should neglect this deficiency when you delivered it. I have dialed your service number for several times and it was always busy. Now this problem keeps worrying me. Can you change a new one for me as soon as possible? How shall I send this scarf back to you? Thanks for
your consideration.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
投诉信2
语言注意点投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因,叙事应客观、准确、简洁。最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。在表达自己的不满时,语言要把握分寸,不失风度。 Write a letter to complain about an unhappy experience in about 100 words to describe the matter and ask for the mistake to be corrected. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you about a most unhappy experience. Last Tuesday morning, we took a longroute bus of your company from Dukou to Lijiang. The bus was scheduled to arrive in Lijiang at 7 o’clock in the evening, but it stopped midway at four p.m. for mechanical problems. The driver and the ticket seller could neither solve the problem by themselves nor
seek help from others.
Where we stopped was nowhere near a village. Up until 8 o’clock, another bus finally carried us to a shabby rural motel. We had to pay for our accommodation. The room was too small and the quilt was so dirty. To our surprise, when we just managed to sleep at around 2 a.m., the driver
came to wake us up—the bus had been fixed!
I suggest that you look into this matter immediately and deal with
it quickly and properly.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Ming
考研英语投诉信经典范文举例及点评
20xx年12月27日 09:26 来源:竞学网
范文之一
[Directions]: Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem. Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement, Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Dear Sir,
I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time. But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities.
After we used it for several days. we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly. When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperture range from 0℃ to 9℃.
This problem has affected our normal life. Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
[文章点评]
这封投诉信可以说写得非常好,结构很清晰,第一段首先肯定对方按时送货上门的做法,随后简述冰箱出了问题。第二段说明具体问题,第三段提出要求。
范文之二
Dear Sir:
With reference to our order No. W98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged.
The packages containing the computer sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question. We
unpacked the computer sets with care and can only assume that damage must be due to careless handling at some stage prior to packing.
We shall be glad if you will replace all 20 sets as soon as possible. Meanwhile, we have put the damaged computer sets aside in case you need them to support a claim on your suppliers for compensation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
范文之三
Dear Mr. Chang:
On September 10, our order for 280 women's cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.
We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.
Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers. We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
一般说来,一封投诉信应包括三个最基本的方面:
1.投诉内容。一般放在信的开头。常用的表达法有:
I am writing to you about... which I received/bought ...
I am going to complain about ...
I am sorry to have to return with this letter... which I received/bought...
2.投诉原因。一般讲述对商品质量或售后服务不满意的地方。常用的表达法有: When we checked..., we noticed...
When I took... out of the bag and examined... closely, I found...
When I unpacked... and tried to use it, it did not work.
3.希望得到的结果。常用的表达法有:
Please let me know what you intend to do in this matter.
I am returning... under separate post and look forward to receiving a full refund of... In view of the inconvenience that this has caused, I feel you should...
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China,消息it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi