【写作指导】语文提高作文分数的7个要点,手把手教你!
1.关于卷面:卷面的整洁、写字的工整、段落结构的协调,都直接影响着阅卷老师的视力感觉,对阅卷老师的打分心理产生冲击。
2.关于文体:仅记叙文一种体裁,同学们在备考的时候,要阅读优秀的记叙文范文,掌握几种叙事方法。
3.关于标题:近两年的作文命题和半命题作文成为主流。如果是半命题或其他形式,我们则要尽力求新。
4.关于立意:作文的立意必须积极向上,对于有争议的内容,不要太大胆。其次,无论中高考作文怎么出题,立意的范畴基本分为8类。生命意义,自然景物,情感体验,享受幸福,成功成长,道德修养,哲理品悟,告别往昔。上面几个方面,有侧重也有交叉,同学们要根据作文题目,明确不同的立意。
5.关于题材:在这里我明确反对写古人,我的建议是,把上述的8个立意的范畴,各准备一个比较典型的题材。这里需要强调的是,无论同学们写什么题材,强烈建议用第一人称,写你自身经历的事儿,写你生活中真实的感悟。
6.关于结构:作文的结构无非是“总分总”、“分总”、“总分”。就考文而言,前两者比较适用。作文的开头不要很长,关于结尾,我们一定要明确,结尾就是抒情和扣题的。在结尾必须抒情,归纳你想表达什么,而且扣题。同学们要记住,六七百字的作文,要有六七段,不要出现“大肚子作文”、“大头作文”,“大尾巴作文”。
7.关于语言:在此给考生们提几点建议:一是遇到你喜欢的句子段落,干脆背下来,也许能用在考场上。二是要有描写,写人要有动作和语言描写,写事注意细节和环境描写。三是句子最好短一些。四是注意修辞手法。
总结:我们明确了作文的命题规律,搞清楚作文的几个构成要件是什么,阅卷老师注重的是什么,这样就能有针对性地复习,以期取得较高的分数。
第二篇:0提高作文分数的技巧
2. 写作的困境与对策
1. 语言表达尴尬
注意:多记多背多练
It is surely not easy to be a good supervisor because you have to manage so many things and to deal with a lot of people, including your employee and your clients. In my opinion, the most important qualities that a good supervisor should have are discretion(谨慎,周全),finesse(灵活) and impartiality(公正).
1) Wealthy parents shouldn’t spoil their children. Otherwise, their children will
become too dependent on them
2)Today, newspapers report lots of crime in horrible detail.
3) Serious crimes harm people’s lives
4) The advantage of space research is more than its disadvantage
5) Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to do advertisements.
6) The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with this situation.
7) So, we should make sure that globalization does not harm our own traditional culture!
8) We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, “Treat your neighbors
as you would like to be treated”.
1. 抛弃全文模版,尽量采用__DIY 小模版______
2. 字体大小(最好每行14-16个词);尽量不要写花笔,连笔
2. 冲刺高分作文的技巧
1. 加上适当的副词,使句子产生一种长短结合的节奏感,层次感。
Basically/realistically/evidently/ apparently/obviously/traditionally/
specifically/essentially/in essence/ ultimately/frankly/fortunately/
Undeniably/ indisputably/on the whole/as a rule/in the long run
2. 句中小动作
适当使用___________,使句型_____________.
1) A positive attitude, after all, is essential for a student’s academic performance
2) We’ll all die in the end, and because of this, we should cherish every moment
of life
3. 适当使用程度副词修饰形容词
The ability to speak English is increasingly important in a global society
Approximately/markedly/substantially/considerably/slightly/marginally(=slightly)/fractionally(略微地)/exponentially(呈几何级数地,如grow/decrease exponentially)
4.倒装
1)_________________________________________(父母不仅应该多花时间和孩子们在一起),they should also try to communicate with their children more often.
2)Only in this way _______________________(儿童肥胖症obesity 才能被有效控制)
3. 强调
Although friends definitely play a significant role in shaping teenager’s personality, it is the parents and siblings that have a far greater impact on the development of their personality traits.
4. 适当使用一次虚拟语气
The recent crisis_______________(不会发生) without the participation of the biggest players on the Wall Street.
Had I lived in a small town, my life ______________(confine to)very few possibilities.
5. 抽象的of
Of use/importance/help/value/significance/necessity/quality/benefit/interest
Fossil fuel is _____________(很重要) to the development of industry, transportation and tourism
6. 被动句
It_____________________(科学家已经确认) that prolonged exposure to high levels of noise in modern cities can lead to hearing loss and high blood pressure.
It has been noted that
It is estimated that
It is generally believed /acknowledged that
It is widely accepted that
7. 凑字的副词
副词排长队,形成排比,感觉相当有自信,让人感觉相当大的震撼作用
Some people argue that the new instruction methodology can help students develop _____________________(智力上,情感上)emotionally /intelligently
All the material is now _______________________(快捷,廉价,易获得) from the comfort of our desks and work stations available.(easily accessible)
8. 双重否定
It is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.
These days, it is not uncommon that young people have a break form studying after graduation from high school
Not surprisingly, students who are under constant stress in their studies may suffer from mental problems or even commit crimes/suicide.
9. the + 形容词
The elderly _____(be) valuable part of society and deserve to be treated as such
第三篇:安徽省无为第一中学20xx届高三第一次月考语文作文及其分析
安徽省无为第一中学20xx届高三第一次月考语文作文及其分析
作文试题:
想起了一个著名的心理效应----鸟笼效应。19xx年,著名心理学家詹姆斯和物理学家卡尔森从哈佛大学退休了。一天,他们俩打了一个赌:詹姆斯说:"老伙计,我一定会让你不久就养上一只鸟的。"卡尔森笑着摇头:"我不信!因为我从来就没有想过养一只鸟。"没过几天,恰逢卡尔森生日,詹姆斯送上了他的礼物--------- 一只精致的鸟笼。卡尔森笑纳了:"我只当它是一件精美的工艺品。"然而从此以后,每逢有客人到访,看到卡尔森书桌上那个精致的、空荡荡的鸟笼,便会问:"教授,您养的鸟什么时候死了?"卡尔森只好一次次耐心解释:"我从来就没有养过鸟。"态度虽然诚恳,客人的目光却分明是不信任的。最后,出于无奈,卡尔森只好买了一只鸟。这就是詹姆斯著名的鸟笼效应。 分析:
这则材料主要是体现了人类的从众心理,自觉不自觉地受多数人或权威人士的影响,这可以让人多些安全感,但也常常让人自我价值迷失,不知不觉中为自己设置一个枷锁,从这个角度立意应该是一类立意。
别让“鸟笼”牵着走
不要让自己迷失方向
正确对待别人的看法
活出自我
莫困于心、坚信自己、坚定目标、坚守本心、
作最真实的自己
你的心理被控制了吗
行由心变
反立意:生活中的身不由已
因环境而改变 二类立意 从客人角度:
语言的力量
环境的影响
眼见为必为实、不畏浮动遮望眼、透过现象看本质 思维惯性的影响、小议先入为主对我们的影响
人性的“弱点”
反向立意:打破思维定势、别让自己的思维住进牢笼 (注,此立意,如果语言很好,事例新颖可向一类靠) 詹姆斯的角度:
制定目标收获成功
新思路彰显智慧人生
转个弯也许会成功
打破常规 懂得转换
出奇制胜是解决问题的最好方法
三类立意:
如果仅从某个句子着手,如从“卡尔森笑着摇头:‘我不信!因为我从来就没有想过养一只鸟。’着手得出观点:一切皆有可能、凡事无绝对或没有什么一成不变,筧三类作文,当然如果写得好可以靠二类下。
论逻辑的必然性(看似无关联的事物往往能发现他们之间的逻辑关系,)
掌握人的心理
事情有其存在意义