◇第一段思路点评：
综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带来的多彩和便捷的生活。
语言点提示：
has drawn…, realized…, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。
详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。
resort to借助、诉诸、求助于
先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。
（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用
（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者
（3）fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界
（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品
（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗
（五）
Opening Psychological Courses
1. 许多人建议大学开设心理课程
2. 我对这一问题的看法
审题
Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons.
On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.
In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development.
首段提出主题，其中第二句为过渡句，引出下文；第二段提出三点同意的理由；最后一段得出结论，与第一段首句呼应，其中第二句是解释型的补充说明句。
范文首段提出许多人建议大学开设心理课程。作者同意这一建议，并分三点在第二段中叙述理由。首先，目前的学习以及将来的就业压力需要开设心理课程。其次，教会学生如何调整在不同环境下的情绪。最后，给学生介绍有利于其身心健康的好习惯。第三段总结呼应首段内容。
第二段第一点中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”，修饰两个名词词组，对比鲜明，at the moment表示“现在”，in the future表示“将来”，open a door for…表示“开启了……之门”；第二点中的regulate表示“调节，控制”；第三点中的conducive表示“有益于……的”，后接介词to。
（六）
Online Games
1．现在有一些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡
2．但有人认为网络游戏并不是一无是处
3．你对此的看法是……
审题
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出对于某问题的一种反面看法，提纲第2点指出对于该问题的正面看法，提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”对该问题的看法，由此可判断本文 应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生沉迷于网络游戏的问题，阐述家长和老师对该问题的否 定态度和他们的担忧；指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度，并阐述网络游戏的好处；表明“我”对网络游戏的看法。
Online Games
As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much
worry from the teachers and parents.
However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.
From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and
benefit a lot from them.
（七）
Extravagant Spending on College Campus
1．据调查显示，现在大学生每月的花销越来越高，很多大学生花钱如流水，根本没有节俭的概念
2．分析产生这一现象的原因
3．我的看法
审题
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指 出校园内的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要 求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象 解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生花钱没有节制的现象；分析导致大学生这种消费习惯的 原因；阐述“我”对大学生消费观的看法。
Extravagant Spending on College Campus
According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been
on the sharp rise. Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in
their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is mainly caused by the following factors.
First of all, nowadays most of students are the only children of their families. They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Thirdly, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.
From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.