小作文
高频命题（英一）
（基于对张剑、朱伟、陈正康等模卷数据分析）
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序 言
本品是基于对张剑、陈正康、朱伟等英一模卷小作文部分的数据统计分析，以所押小作文的主题类型为主线，精心选出了6类主题，并围绕这些主题整理了常用表达和经典范文（含译文），其中对于重点句型做了标红，需要大家重点记忆。
Top 1：投诉信
押题：陈正康、朱伟、红宝书
1必背表达
第一部分：说明投诉问题
I must complain about…
I am not satisfied with…
I feel something should be done about…
I am writing to inform（告知，代替tell）you that I find…unsatisfactory…
I am writing to express/ air dissatisfaction/ disappointment/ concern regarding …
第二部分：描述具体情况
The noise disturbs my sleep so that I can't concentrate during the work time, and as a result, I have made several mistakes these days.
For me this environment is very difficult to make studies and I need a quiet room.
第三部分：期待解决方案
I expect to hear from you soon.
Please give this matter your immediate attention.
I would be very grateful （感激，代替thanks）if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. And I am looking forward to an early reply.
It is high time you took some measures to solve…
I hope you will take steps to rectify（纠正、改善，代替improve） this situation soon.
I believe you will take my complaints seriously. I would ask you to give back my money, or I would file my complaint（投诉） to the authorities concerned（相关部门）.
To solve this problem/ surmount this difficulty/ improve the situation/ crack this hard nut（解决问题）, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.
2高分热文
I am writing to air（表达） disappointment（不满） regarding accommodation. I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate's inconsiderate behavior（不体谅行为）. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.
To crack this hard nut（为了解决这个难题）, I hope to draw the attention of （引起）the authorities concerned. I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a single room. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably（最好）not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3精彩译文
尊敬的先生或女士：
我写信是为了表达关于住宿的不满。由于我发现目前的居住状况很不方便，我想下学期搬到一个单间。
我需要解释的是，我不满的原因是我室友不体谅的行为。首先，他的朋友经常来访。其次，他经常举办一些吵闹的聚会。
为了解决这个问题，我希望引起相关部门的注意。我相信您也会同意，唯一的解决措施是搬到一个我自己的房间。因此，如果您可以给我找一个最好不在同楼，但离校园越近越好的单间，我将非常感谢。
您真诚的，
李明
Top 2：申请信
押题：陈正康、朱伟、吴耀武、付博
1必背表达
第一部分：说明写信目的
老子是癞蛤蟆黑岩沦陷的书生 http://www.jiezhong.org/html/8/8128/
I would like to apply for （申请）admission to your college.
I would like to further my studies in… department of your university.
I hope to pursue my Master's degree in your university.
第二部分：展开申请原因
My major interests are…, and I understand your university has a good program in those fields.
I feel the need to study further in order to develop my potential in this field.
第三部分：期盼回复，表示感谢
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to your reply.
If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be most grateful.
I hope you will kindly send me an application（申请单） form.
I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms（申请表格） and any instructions（说明） you may be so kind to give me regarding my possible admission.
Enclosed（附上） are my score reports on all subjects and two recommendations（推荐信）.
2高分热文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university（贵校）. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information（基本信息）.
First, what qualifications（资格） do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I have already had a bachelor's degree from Peking University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements（学术要求）. Second, how much are the tuition fee（学费）? Although I intend to be self-supporting（自费）, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships（奖学金） available for international students（留学生）. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?
I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3精彩译文
尊敬的先生或女士,
我是一名中国学生，希望到贵校这所著名大学学习。我计划下学期开始我的课程，如果您能好心提供一些基本信息，我将非常感谢。
首先，我到贵校上课需要什么条件？我已经从北京大学获得学士学位，但我想知道是否有进一步的学业上的要求。其次，学费是多少？尽管我打算自费，但我想了解一下国外学生可否获得奖学金。最后，住宿情况怎么样？
期待您的回复，希望成为贵校的一员。
您真诚的，
李明
Top 3：建议信
押题：陈正康、朱伟、张剑
1必背表达
第一部分：说明写信目的
You have asked me for some advice on how to improve…. I will try to give some useful suggestions.
I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of … so as to…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise you of…
第二部分：提出建议
I'd like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…
Could you please…
Why don't we…
In my opinion …
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
第三部分：期盼回复
Thank you for your attention.
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
I hope you will find these suggestions/ proposals/ recommendations（建议） helpful/ practical/ useful（有帮助的，实用的）.
高分热文
Dear John,
You asked for advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university. I will try making some suggestions.
You must keep in mind（记住） that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career. There is no doubt that（毫无疑问） the field of computer science offers far more job opportunities than history. We are now in a high-tech age（高科技时代）. For the foreseeable future（可预知的未来）, it would be necessary for everyone to be equipped with （配备）computer skills merely to earn a living.
Of course, I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3精彩译文
亲爱的约翰：
你问我关于该学历史还是计算机的看法，我将尽力给你一些有用的建议。
首先，你必须牢记的是，你在大学所受的训练是为了将来的职业做准备的。毫无疑问，计算机科学将比历史提供更广泛的工作机会。我们都处在高科技的时代，在不久的将来，每个人为了谋生还需要具备计算机技能。
当然，我仅以你在业余时间继续读历史。
您真诚的，
李明
Top 4：求职信
押题：陈正康、红宝书、吴耀武、付博
1必背表达
第一部分：说明写信目的
I am writing in response to（回应） your advertisement in …
I am writing this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in…
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for…
I would like to apply for the vacancy（职位空缺） of…advertised in…
第二部分：展示个人能力、经历及求职动机
I am now studying at … and will soon be graduated as a/an … major. Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in…
Upon graduation, I first worked as… The following job was… and currently I am working for… I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of…尸衣 http://m.jiezhong.org/info-356/
Born in… in… I graduated from… University majoring in… I have been working in… since my graduation, and I have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field. It seems to me that this experience, together with my education, has given me preparation to assume the role of… in a firm such as yours.
第三部分：希望面试机会，表示感谢
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to your reply.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
Your prompt response will be much appreciated（感激）.
I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience（方便之时）, when I could give you further details concerning myself.
我在泰国卖佛牌的那几年http://www.jiezhong.org/html/3/3843/
I am available for a personal interview（个人面谈） at your convenience. Please contact me at…
2高分热文
Dear Mr. Byron,
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. Enclosed with（附上） this letter is my resume, which further details my qualifications（资历） and previous work experiences.
Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate（完美候选人） for the job, but my personality is well suited to（适合） working as a waitress. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.
I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3精彩译文
亲爱的拜伦先生，
写信是想表达我对您近期刊登的女服务员的岗位很感兴趣。附件中是我的简历，进一步详述了我的资历和先前的工作经验。
我的资历和经验都非常适合这份工作，而且我的性格也很适合做服务员的工作。我性格随和，能很快跟不同年龄阶段的人建立起友好关系。
希望能尽快在您方便之时见面，探讨在您酒店工作的可能性。感谢您对我申请的关注，期待尽快与您见面。
您真诚的，
李明
Top 5：邀请信
押题：陈正康、张剑、朱伟
1必背表达
第一部分：说明邀请目的
On behalf of…, I have the honor to invite you to…
It is with the great pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to…
It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to…
We should be very grateful if you could…
第二部分：说明活动安排
Will you and Mrs. Smith give the pleasure of dining with us at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o'clock?
There will be a dinner party to be held at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o'clock. Will you and Mrs. Smith come and join us?
I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English Evening at 7:00 p.m. on February 1st.
第三部分：期盼回复
We are looking forward to seeing you.
I do hope that you will be able to come.
We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company.
2高分热文
Dear Xiaobao,
I will hold a dinner party at my house on April 1st, 20## to celebrate Mr. Guo Jing's marriage with Miss Huang Hong. As you are a close friend of ours, we would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.
The occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree(晚会), at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.
If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1st, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3精彩译文
亲爱的小宝，
20##年4月1日，我将在家举行晚宴庆祝郭靖先生和黄红女士结为连理。你是我最好的朋友之一，非常高兴你能参加这次庆典分享我们的快乐。
庆典将在晚上7点开始，届时会举行结婚典礼。之后是晚宴，大概10点钟左右会举行一个小的音乐晚会，乐队将演奏巴赫和施特劳斯的一些作品。
如果4月1日你没有其它安排，很高兴并且期待着你的加入。
您真诚的，
李明
Top 6：祝贺信
押题：朱伟
1必背表达
第一部分：表示祝贺
I was very happy to learn that …
I was very delighted to hear the news that…
It is with great pleasure that I hear of your success. Please accept my warmest/heartiest congratulations（最衷心的祝贺）.
Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to …
第二部分：表述贺喜内容
How time flies! Here you are graduating from high school and planning to attend the university in the fall. Congratulations on a job well done, and good luck to you during the next four years of university.
第三部分：表达美好祝愿
Wish you good luck!
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
Happy New Year to you and may each succeeding year bring you greater happiness and prosperity.
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2高分热文
Dear Mr. John,
Just a note to wish you a very happy new year. May the new year bring you joy, love and peace. My memory of you is one of the most delightful experience I have ever had. I would very much like to continue our friendship.
As another year draws to close, it gives us great pleasure to say how much we have appreciated（感激） working with you over the past twelve months. We sincerely hope that our pleasant business relationship will continue for years to come.
Our staff here join me in wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy Prosperous New Year.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3精彩译文
尊敬的约翰先生，
寄上简函一封，祝您新年快乐。愿新的一年为您带来幸福、友爱和平安。与您在一起的回忆是我一生中最愉快的经历之一，但愿我们的友谊长青。
又一年即将结束，我们很高兴地看到过去一年我们之间的合作非常愉快。衷心希望我们之间融洽的业务关系在今后的日子里继续下去。
在此，我和公司的全体员工一道祝您圣诞愉快！新年快乐！生意兴隆！
