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托福阅读、独立写作高分心得

边拍拖边学习地准备了三四个月，学习效率不高，自然分数也不高。虽然分数不高，但备考路上的酸甜苦辣也尽数尝过，所以也想为托友们奉献一点自己的东西。

总成绩虽然不高，但我的阅读和独立写作考得还是比较出乎我意料的，阅读：29分；独立写作：GOOD（4.0-5.0）。 在此和大家分享一下我准备这两门的经验，最重要的，是想帮助对阅读和写作不是特别自信的战友减轻心里负担。

阅读

一个很大的感受是：只要单词过关，阅读绝对不成问题。我用的单词书是张红岩的《TOFEL词汇精选》，在进考场前，我至少已经把这本书背过10遍，在苦攻单词的过程中，我把阅读停了一段时间（这个停顿是因为当时觉得其他方面太烂，顾不了阅读了，所以不提倡战友们借鉴），彻底背完单词时，我才又拿起阅读，这时距离考试已经只有几天的时间，我掐时间做完了OG的三篇阅读，突然发现在单词上有了质的飞跃后，看阅读的感觉完全不一样了。这套题我得了25分，这是我背完单词后一直到考前做过的惟一一套阅读题，也是我托福备考过程中，做的惟一一套阅读模拟。

我参加的是5月17号的考试，考试时做阅读的感觉就和做OG一样，因为在词汇上基本没有障碍，题做起来非常顺手。之前上过新东方的托福班，积累了一些做题技巧，但真正考试的时候，凭借自己的词汇量便可以轻松搞定题目，没有凭借任何做题技巧。 单词确实是托福的基础，这是我考完托福后的最大感受！

独立写作

我的综合写作稀烂，这里就不说了。把独立写作单拎出来说，并不单单因为我得了个GOOD（4.0-5.0），最重要的，是我从我的作文中看到了T考作文的希望！说实话我的写作不是太好，考试之前总在试着写一篇完整的作文，但几乎每一次都因为实在写不出来而半途而废，以致于考试之前只写成过一篇作文。当时考试的题目是“应该看纯娱乐性电影还是看能引发思考的电影。”我选的是前者，以下是我的答题情况：

理由：1.（太忙）没时间思考；

2.（现代生活压力那么大）没心情思考；（这一段字数很少，只叙述完理由和对理由进行了一句改写就没了。）

3. 娱乐电影是大家讨论的话题，可以促进communication。

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三个很小儿科的理由，没有任何类似范文里的深刻思考。字数304，刚刚够要求，相信大多数人为求保险，不会让自己的字数少于350.

用词：都是些基础词汇，连is bad, feel sorry这样的词都用上了，并用了很多大家平时比较避讳的I believe, it is 等简单句型，完全没有有技术含量的句子。

考试时间太紧张了，而且在准备考试的过程中才写过一篇作文，平时积累的好词汇、短语根本不扎实，到考场时一紧张就什么都想不起来了。我以为我作文只能得个Limited，没想到最后竟然是GOOD！

这就是我的复习基础和考试感受，我想这可以给很多对自己阅读和作文还没有很大信心的考生打打气。大家在考试之前一定要好好准备，别像我一样最后连作文模板都没背熟，但准备的过程中一定要多给自己一点信心，托福作文并不像我们想象中那么可怕（我当时在看了作文范文之后，吓得连笔都不敢下）。只要把单词背好（我每天都花整个上午的时间背单词，用晚上睡前1-2的时间复习单词）就能搞定阅读，把句子写通顺、完整，再用点简单的模板就能搞定写作。

啰嗦了这么多，希望可以对还在托路上奋斗的战友们有点帮助，最后祝大家考试顺利，申请成功！

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第二篇：托福独立写作模板

写作

独立写作模板

一、 结构篇

1、开头

Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况（二选一，agree or disagree,除了个别)；

On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era（与科技有关的背景），XX（中心词） serves as a catalyst for our future success/ However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:题目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “编____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要). 要做的：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目

Sample two：（如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time，就用下面的）

On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era（与科技有关的背景）)/ On account of …，XX（中心词） serves as a catalyst for 背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whetherpeople get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that以下最后决定怎样写：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).

要做的：想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起（最后写）

2、分点一：分层论证

Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from

_______ is that__________/ First and foremost,

On one hand_________, On the other hand_________

Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.

这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子！

3、分点二：举例论证

Further lending credence to my position is that____________ （简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话）I can think of no better illustration than the example of（典型例子）/ A case in point is that（不是很典型）________,…..（例子见后面）

一句话总结例子：As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

4、让步段：

Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______ However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

二选一：Admittedly,BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) However，Compared with AA, （which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, ）it pales.

5、结尾段：

Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用), I reinforce my stand point that Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________; only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...（不好写或显得累赘就不要了）

二、 语言篇

1、 基本句型

? 因果

On account of/owing to/due to+ N

For the reason that/as/since+句子

It is due to____that

eg:It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(强调句)

derive/arise/stem from来源于

eg:His success derives from his persistence and perseverance. ascribe A to B 归结于

eg: His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance

? 条件

A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)

If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________

? 让步

Despite the fact that/regardless of

2、 经典句型

? 倒装

1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__ ef: Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know

about American typical type of spending leisure time.

2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__ of

3) So +adj+主谓倒装+that__

4) Not only 主谓倒装 but also...

eg: Not only should education prepare children to compete

Not only do people care their economic needs,they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.

5) On no account 主谓倒装（决不....）

? 强调

It is/was....that/who(m)....

? 插入语

1) 限定性副词 probably/directly or indirectly/to some(a large) extent

2) N+,ving,+v

3) 同位语

3、经典中的经典

? 排比

1) It is tourism that gives me the opportunity to know the culture of this dynamic, robust and alive country.

2) It is computers that make our life diverse, convenient, dynamic/ vibrant, without which our life would probably pale.

3) A/which needs to be/In this way, A can be readily accepted, respected,appreciated and advocated.

4) Only via university education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration. And Only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.

? 十大副词

1) Considerably

2) Invariably

3) Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly

4) Increasingly

5) Most/exceedingly/exceptionally 格外地

6) Insightfully 富有见底地

7) Regrettably

8) Effectively and efficiently

9) Gradually and eventually

10) Readily

? 其他

1) It is not difficult for us to imagine that 不难想象

2) B makes it possible for us to have an universal access to A/A is readily available. A容易得到

3) In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society, people have no choice but to work and study hard. 4) Ruthless and relentless无形/fierce and intense competition

The ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pressure on each and every individual, and therefore, there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future,

enabling us to survive and thrive in the modern world.

5) Inspiration, aspiration and perspiration

6) Vision,passion and mission

7) 其他词语见最后清单p120

三、论证篇（详见讲义）

1、模糊论证

Range from...（其他见讲义）

2、举例论证

? 自己的例子

I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore. Only after going shopping on Orchard road, the main shopping district in Singapore,did I realize what "a paradise for shopping"really was. Only after roaming in the City Hall,the financial center of Singapore, did I experience the quick pace of modern life. Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.

? 名人的例子（Yu Minghong，。。。）

? 社会的例子

For example, on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society, employers tend to hire people equipped with a wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited

knowledge.

? 瞎编的例子

3、数据论证

I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that the average sleeping time an adult has everyday, compared with 8 hours in the 1970s, has decreased to 6.8 hours due to the busy work and study.

4、引用论证(开头）

5、假想论证

Imagine/visualize/picture/suppose ....

四、思路篇

怎么好写怎么来~

详见讲义