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懒惰是很奇怪的东西，它使你以为那是安逸，是休息，是福气；但实际上它所给你的是无聊，是倦怠，是消沉;它剥夺你对前途的希望，割断你和别人之间的友情，使你心胸日渐狭窄，对人生也越来越怀疑。

—罗兰

20##年6月大学英语四级考试作文及其范文

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

    1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写；

    2. 出现这种现象的原因；

    3. 我认为……（措施）

范文：

        Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

  Nowadays, students pay little attention to the spelling of words in English-learning. Their writing abounds with lots of careless spelling mistakes.

  There are mainly two reasons accounting for this phenomenon. To begin with, exam-oriented education, in which the focus is English grammar, makes the teachers attach little attention to spelling in teaching. What’s more, some students are unaware of the importance of the spelling. Some of them hold the view that the content of writing outweighs the form; others believe it is a waste of time to remember words, since there is an E-dictionary.

  Spelling to a piece of writing is what appearance to a person. Correct and neat spelling can not only present the writer’s opinion in a more clear and valid way, but also reflect the writer’s serious attitudes of writing. Schools should set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance of spelling. For students, they should try to remember words through many effective ways.

                                                                        （171 words）

20##年12月四级真题作文

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline below in Chinese:

1. 建设绿色校园很重要

2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……

3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

【写作提示】

   本文是一篇问题解决型论述文，主题仍然是环保类的社会重要话题，并且将其与我们每日生活的校园环境结合起来，要求考生从实现绿色校园着手来阐述自己的观点。文章可分为三段：第一段指出建设绿色校园的重要性；第二段具体提出绿色校园的定义；第三段解决问题，指出我们应当如何才能建设出绿色校园。

【写作范文】                            【范文点评与注解】

第二篇：20xx年6月大学英语四级考试作文范文

新东方学校四级作文教师 李艳华

Among various recipes one enjoys in his or her college life, recreational activities can by no means be ignored. It is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, that help to make campus life colorful and diversified.

Facing so many interesting extracurricular activities, we college students have trouble to choose the proper ones. As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds of posters for students’ clubs to recruit new members. There are two opposite views about recreational activities. One says they exert positive influence on a student’s physical and mental development, for they can explore a student’s talent, develop a student's ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent. While, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, and therefore may hinder student from focusing on his or her study.

As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that as a college student, he or she, besides the academic information, should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development. Recreational activities do give us a good chance. And, so long as one can arrange the time by reason, activities besides study will definitely provide more benefit for us.

Recreational activity

In people’s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.

Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately. On one hand, recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others. On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying our working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.

As far as I’m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.

Recreational Activities

In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.

However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.

分析：此次写作题目与昨天我们预测的写作题目之一The Internet重合度非常高，都属于正反论证类，需要考生论述正反两方的观点，并最终表明自己的观点。写作中可用的句型和表达也与The Internet的范文达到高达70%的重合度。具体参加下面的预测范文。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in hinese:

1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率

2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习

3. 你对于网络的看法

The Internet

In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society. With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work. We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet.

However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet. Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.

In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it. Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.

Recreational Activities

21st century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones, the latter of which is a great appeal to the young generation. So I’d like to narrow my topic down to online recreational activities.

It goes without saying that various activities brought by modern technology have greatly broadened our horizon and brought much excitement to us. With access to the Internet, you can get to know people from any country in the world and you can talk with them, play games with them --- a temptation very hard to resist, and even see them via web cam. The disadvantage, however, is that anyone who lacks self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the online world, which in turn might seriously affect their life, work and interpersonal relationships.

As a college student, I think what really matters is to make better choice and exert more discipline. We’d better take advantage of good online recreational activities to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those addictive, time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.

Recreational Activities

With the development of living standard, people spend more time on various forms of recreational activities. People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.

Recreational activities are good to people’s health, both physically and mentally. Sports and dancing can keep people fit. Singing karaoke, playing video games or online games can satisfy people’s imagination. Surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and knowledge.

However, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted. Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously influence people’s normal lives, especially work and study. Therefore, people will benefit from recreational activities only if they take part in them properly.

此次作文难度适中，沿袭了往年的常考题型—argumentation型，讨论某一主题的利弊。本

次题目recreational activities涵盖面宽，因此考生需要注意把话题缩小到某一个范围，对于大学生而言，对于网络上的娱乐活动可能更有话可说，所以可以把这个很泛的话题限制在网络娱乐活动。而对于网上活动的利弊想必同学们都可以说出一二，好处比如能够开阔眼界、增长知识，弊端就是很容易上瘾，影响学习生活；而个人的看法就是用其精华弃其糟粕，即利用其好处，对不好的地方避而远之。这是个比较容易套用模板的题目，如果同学们在考前熟悉了这种体裁的写作，拿到相对理想的分数应该不是难事。

附上该体裁写作的模板，供同学们参考。

3．Argumentation型

1） some, others, I 型

（1）模版一

There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _________ (主题). Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A的例子).

On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. According to them, ______________ (观点B). The most typical example is that __________ (支持观点B的例子).

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convincing.

（2）模版二

___________ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to ______________ when they are asked _________________ (观点A) because _______________________ (支持观点A的原因). The most typical example is that ____________________________ (支持观点A的例子).

However, others argue that ________________________ (观点B). They point out that _______________________ (重申观点B) for the reason that _______________ (支持观点B的原因).

As far as I am concerned, I will choose to __________________ (你的观点) because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.

2） My View 型

（1）模版一

When asked about ______________ (主题), some people hold the idea that _________________________ (观点A). As far as they are concerned, _________________________ (展开观点A). But I could not agree with them in several points. In my opinion, ______________________________ (观点B). The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.

In the first place, ___________________________ (支持观点B的理由1). In the second place, ______________________________ (支持观点B的理由2). In the third place, _______________________________ (支持观点B的理由3).

For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe ____________ (重申观点B).

（2）模版二

Some people believe that __________________________ (观点A). For instance, they hold the idea that ______________________________ (支持观点A的例子). And it may bring them _____________________________ (A带给他们的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, _____________________________ (我不同意的理由1). For another, _____________________________ (我不同意的理由2).

As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, I agree to the thought that ______________________________ (重申自己的观点).

3）利弊型

（1）模版一

Nowadays many people prefer __________ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, ________________ (主题的优点1). On the other hand, ___________________ (主题的优点2).

But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its

negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.

（2）模版二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of ___________ (主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one.

There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, __________________ (原因1). Furthermore, ______________________ (原因2). Eventually, ________________________________ (原因3).

Good as ____________ (主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that ______________ (缺点例子1). In addition, _____________________ (缺点例子2).

On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________ (主题现象) and make our life more comfortable.