【Every man is the master of his own fortune.
每一个人的命运都掌握在自己手里.】
高三写作——对比观点题型
个性化学科优化学案
考点、热点回顾
二. 重难点讲解
1. The skills of writing this kind of composition(观点对比类文章的写作技巧): Please read the article quickly and finish the following exercises.
It is well known that Sichuan Province has been suffering from terrible earthquakes since May 12th .People around the world begin to show support by donating(捐赠) money. Recently there has been a contribution on the web. There is a heated discussion among us students.
Some students think that the amount of the money you donated can not be equated(换算) with your love ,and meanwhile, there are various ways to aid the people in the disaster area besides donating money. On the contrary，others think that the money in donation is a standard which can measure your love, and the more money you donate, the more help victims can receive, so the more, the better.
In my opinion, it does not matter how much money you donate. The most important thing is to show care and support to the victims(受害者) of the earthquake.
Please fill in the blanks according to the article in order to find out the skills of writing:
● what way is used to develop the article(文章写作手法)：
____________________→_____________________→_____________________
●The reference sentence patterns(参考句式):
1. 引出主题的套语: _________________________________________________ 其他套语：1) As is known to us all, 2) It is reported that….
3) With the development of society (economy, science and technology))
2. 表示不同观点的套语: _____________________________________________ 其他套语： 1)Different people hold different opinions.
2) People have different attitudes towards …
3) People have different opinions on this problem.
3. 不同观点之间的衔接: _____________________________________________ 其他链接方式：1) Some people believe that...Others argue that...
2) However, every coin has two sides.
3) On the other hand, people object that ….
4) On the other hand, other people are against the idea .
5) The majority of people are in favour of the idea….. However, other people hold the opposite opinion that…..
4 .提出你的观点: __________________________________
其他表达：1) As for me, …
2) As middle school students, we should… in my view / opinion,
3) As far as I am concerned,
4) I agree with…
2. Steps(步骤) of writing a composition:
1. To write the outlines(轮廓)
2. To write the draft(草稿) (using different sentence structure)
3. To revise(修改) your draft(using proper transitional words(过渡语))
4. To make the final copy
3. 高分作文模板(观点对比类)
（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1． 有一些人认为……
2． 另一些人认为……
3． 我的看法……
A.
There is a heated discussion over whether_____ (作文题目). Different people have different opinions.
The majority of people are in favour of观点一________. The reasons for it are as follows: First of all ____(理由一). Besides,_____（理由二）.What is more,_____（理由三）. On the contrary, others think that _____(观点二) . Firstly,_____. Secondly (besides, What’s more),______. Thirdly (finally),_____.
In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二____. It is not only because ________, but also because _________.
B.
Recently, we have had a discussion about ________ (主题). There are two opposite opinions about it. Those who favour the idea think／Some students hold their view for the reason／Some students agree to the point that ________ (支持A的理由一). What is more, ________ (理由二). Moreover, ________ (理由三).
On the other hand, the majority of people believe that／Those who are against the idea think／Others prefer to do… Firstly, ________ (支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ________ (理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ________ (理由三).
Personally／From my point of view／I think________ (我的观点). The reason is that ________ (原因). As a matter fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is sorely a wise choice.
模板范文鉴赏：
Recently, we have had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. There are two opposite opinions about it. 60 percent of the students support the point that fee should be charged for parks, because they need money to pay gardeners and other workers. Moreover, buying plants and young trees also need a lot of money.
On the other hand, 40％disagree. In their opinion, people need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. Besides, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of the city.
Personally, I think an entrance fee should be charged for parks. However, fees should be charged low.
（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④
-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之
二)．
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．
模板范文鉴赏：
Some students believe that cheating in the examination is reasonable. For
example, they think they have too many examinations, which are too difficult for them. And if they cheat in the examination, they will get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion, this reason can never be the point. For one thing, it breaks the rules of schools t0 cheat in the examination. For another thing, we students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in the
examination. What’s more, we should improve our learning methods and get well prepared for the examinations.
From all what l have said. I agree to the thought students should be forbidden to cheat in the examination.
经典例题
实战训练：
实战训练一：
Should students make friends on line ？(学生应该网上交友吗?)
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的
2. 词数为
120 左右。
3. 参考词汇：网络朋友 on-line friends（s），上当受骗 to be cheated .
Should students make friends on line？
Nowadays, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Many people like making friends on line. Should students make on -line friends? To this, different people have different opinions.
Some people think that__________________________________________________. First of all, ________________________________________________________.Besides,_____
______________________________________________________________.What is more,_____________________________________________________.
contrary,
_______________________________.Firstly,_________________________________. so it will do harm to their study. Secondly, On the ________________________________________________________.
In my opinion, _________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________.
实战训练二：
时下，很多学生带手机上学。为此，你们班组织了一场辩论，辩论的主题是：中学生是否有必要带手机去学校。请根据下表信息，客观的介绍讨论的情况。
2、参考词汇：攀比 vie with 在校园内 on the campus
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实战训练一答案：
Should students make friends on line？ Nowadays, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Many people like making friends on line. Should students make on -line friends? To this, different people have different opinions.
Some people think thatFirst of allBesides, On the contraryFirstly
to their study. SecondlyIn my opinion
实战训练二答案：
There is a heated discussion over whetherDifferent students have different opinionsThe majority of students are in favour of it. They hold the view thatThey also think thatOn the
contrary, others hold the different opinions. They think that What’s more In my opinion
教学进度： 模拟试题】
学生掌握情况： 存在问题及改进措施：