computer is important.
作文:
一、连接词
1. To begin with, 首先
2. In addition, 其次
3. What’s more, 再者
4. Also, 此外
5. Evidently, 明显地
二、引导辞
1. there is no question that
毫无疑问
2. an army of publics put that 一些人说
3. from a substantial amount of individuals’ perspective, 在一些人看来
4.with the rapid development of industrialization commercialization,
随着工业化商业化的快速发展
一+二+computer is important.
and
1.1 + 2.1
To begin with , there is no question that computer is important.
1.5+2.3
Evidently, from a substantial amount of individuals’ perspective, computer is important.
三、定从和同位语(位于核心词之后)
1. which lies extremely close to our life
与我们的生活紧密相关
2. which caters to the needs of different groups
迎合了不同人的需求
3. , as a great force to call on people to develop constantly, 作为一种伟大的力量驱使着人们持续发展
computer is important.
1.2+2.2+3.1
In addition, an army of publics put that computer which lies extremely close to our life is important.
1.4+2.1+3.2
Also, there is no question that computer which caters to the needs of different groups is important.
1.5+2.4+3.3
Evidently, with the rapid development of industrialization and commercialization , computer ,as a great force to call on people to develop constantly, is important.
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四、插入语(be后行前助行间)
be后:
computer is important.
computer is ,as a matter of fact, important.
行前:
computer influences our life.
computer ,directly or indirectly , influences our life.
助行间:
computer will influence our life.
computer will ,to a large degree,influence our life.
1. ,as a matter of fact,
事实上说
2. ,directly or indirectly,
直接或间接
3. ,to a large degree,
很大程度上
computer is important.
1.3+2.1+4.2
What’s more , there is no question that computer is ,directly or indirectly, important.
1.5+2.2+4.1
Evidently, an army of publics put that computer is ,as a matter of fact, important.
五、句子连连看
1.computer plays an indispensable role in our community.(左右都可以)
电脑在我们的社会中扮演着重要的角色。
1.1+2.1+3.1+5.1
To begin with, there is no question that computer which lies extremely close to our life plays an indispensable role in our community.
1.3+2.3+3.2+5.1
What’s more, from a substantial amount of individuals’ perspective , computer which caters to the needs of different groups plays an indispensable role in our community.
1+2+4+5.1
Evidently, an army of publics put that computer
,as a matter of fact, plays an indispensable role in our community.
1+2+4+5.1
What’s more, with the rapid development of industrialization and commercialization , computer ,directly or indirectly, plays an indispensable role in our community.
2.computer betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking.(左右都可以)
电脑促进了我们工作和学习的效率。
1+2+3+5.2
Also, an army of publics put that computer which lies extremely close to our life betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking.
1+2+4+5.2
In addition, there is no question that computer ,to a large degree, betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking.
3. the needs of chinese economy has largely been met due to sustainable development. ,which leads to the result of this consequence/phenomenon.(只能单独出现)
中国的经济因为可持续发展已得到极大地满足,这就导致了这种现象的结果。
4. publics have placed a very high value on education for a long term ,which leads to the result of this consequence/phenomenon.
(只能单独出现)
公众在长期都很重视教育,这就导致了这种现象的结果
5.nothing is more important than to do something.(出现在左边) 没有什么比做什么更重要了。
6.computer will exert a positive/negative influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth/decline of our living standard.(左右都可以)
电脑会给我们的生活施加积极/消极的影响,进一步导致了生活水平的上升/下降。
1+2+3+5.6
Also, there is no question that computer which lies extremely close to our life will exert a positve。。。。。
1+2+4+5.6
In addition, an army of publics put that computer will ,as a matter of fact, exert a。。。。。
7.publics throughout the world could achieve something incredible under the condition of sustainable development.(只能出现在右边) 在可持续发展的条件下,全世界的人们可以成就一些难以置信的事情。
8. the quality of our livelihood will go from bad to worse due to economic depression.(只能单独出现)
我们的生活水平因为经济萧条变得每况愈下。
9. the quality of our livelihood will be good , better and best due to economic boom.(只能单独出现)
我们的生活水平因为经济繁荣变得蒸蒸日上。
10.publics throughout the world will fall in love with this effective,extremely useful technology—computer.(只能放在右边) adj,adv+adj+n
全世界的人会爱上这种高效的,极其有用的科技—电脑。
1.主系表
2.主谓宾
3.主系表+主谓宾
computer is important
computer plays an indispensable role in our community.
因为:
due to the fact that
primarily owing to that
To begin with , there is no question that computer which lies extremely close to our life is important due to the fact that it plays an indispensable role in our community.
Evidently, an army of publics put that computer is ,as a matter of fact, irreplaceable due to the fact that it betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking.
basic skill
1+2+3主系表+主谓宾(5.1)
4.主谓宾+主谓宾
5.2+5.6
computer betters the efficiency of our academic performance and
undertaking due to the fact that it will exert a positive influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth of our living standard.
使用原则:
1. 连接词每个句子都要有
2. 尽量少用引导词
3. 定从、同位语、插入语只能在句子中出现一个。
4. 主谓宾 主系表+主谓宾
主谓宾 主谓宾
cultural fusion
第二段:
好 坏 一好一坏
第一句:主谓宾(好)
第二句:主系表+主谓宾(好5.4)
第三句:主谓宾(5.6)
第四句: 主谓宾
To begin with, there is no question that cultural fusion which lies extremely close to our life/prosperous history plays an indispensable role in our commuity / harmonious society. Also, cultural fusion is ,
directly or indirectly , very impressive due to the fact that publics have placed a very high value on cultural fusion , which leads to the result of this phenomenon. In addition , cultural fusion will exert a positive influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth of our civilization.
Evidently, publics throughout the world has fallen in love with this varied , extremely vivid civilization------cultural fusion.
cooperation
类型:好
To begin with , there is no question that cooperation which lies extremely close to our life betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking. In addition , cooperation is , as a matter of fact , irreplaceable due to the fact that publics have placed a very high value on this valuable , extremely useful force-----cooperation.
Also, cooperation will exert a positive influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth of our comprehensive quality.(综合素质) Evidently,publics throughout the world could achieve something incredible under the condition of cooperation , which leads to the result of this phenomenon.
大作文:第一段
第一句:As is vividly pictured from the picture which describes a common phenomenon.
第二句: From the picture,
there be + adj +someone who is doing sth(找次要动作) doing sth doing sth and doing sth.
eg: From the picture,there is a young man who is leaning beside his friend sitting on a boat throwing junk into the river and ignoring the environmental protection.
From the picture , there are some young men who are sitting in front of their table staring at the screen suffering the Internet ignoring the face to face communication in order to excape from the reality.
From the picture, there is an extremely beautiful girl/ a beautifully decroated young lady who is coming from America smiling brightly wearing a traditional Chinese costume.
From the picture , there are two disabled men who are encouraging each other/embracing each other tightly throwing their sticks far away behind them running rapidly.
From the picture, there is a helplessly old father who is in the middle of the picture rejected by his cruel / indifferent sons hoping some helps from them.
From the picture, there is a delicious and nutritional hot pot which is in the middle of the picture/ rolling/spoiling strongly having/containing/including a substantial amount of extremely abundant cultural elements.
双图:(控制数字---要么多 要么少)
From the picture,there are a substantial amount of fish which appears in the first picture swimming happily in1900.Meanwhile, there are an army of artificial boats which reveals in the second picture representing the victory of modern industrialization in 1995.
From the picture, there is a healthy flower which appears in the first picture
protected by something/a greenhouse . Meanwhile, there is a bad flower which reveals in the second picture exposing/suffering changeable storm/bad rain and wind.
From the picture , there is a young/smart man who appears in the left picture writting a famous football star’s name on his face. Meanwhile, there is a handsome boy who reveals in the right picture spending 300 yuan to make a fasionable hairstyle.
第三句:The picture aims at informing us
1. the importance of + 主题
2. the advantages and disadvantages of +主题
3. the disadvantages of +主题。
扔垃圾:
To begin with, there is no question that the quality of individual’s morality which lies extremely close to environmental protection has gone from bad to worse due to the lack of supervision. Also,
environmental protection is ,to a large degree, important due to the fact that it betters the conservation of water and soil resource. In addition, white pollute will exert a negative influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the decline of our living standard/ circumstance. Evidently,publics throughout the world will achieve a high level of ecosystem under the condition of environmental protection , which leads to the result of this consequence.
第三段:(好)
From my perspective, it is high time for us to speak highly of +主题 in the peroid from present to future.Otherwise, our life would be negatively influenced .Only in this way can we live a decent life.
第三段:(一好一坏, 坏)
From my perspective, it is high time for us to make the right use of +主题 in the peroid from present to future.Otherwise, our life would be negatively influenced .Only in this way can we live a decent life.