范文一

给自己一个理由

风不吹了，树不摇了，叶子也不在空中旋舞，然而天气始终那样寒。鱼儿静静游着，行人静静走着，一切都在静静地变化着。静得出奇的天地，静得出奇的世界，不禁有一股寒流涌入心头，是因为对大自然的怜悯，还是因为寒而战栗？

不知为什么，天一寒身子就无法暖和，心里有无法说出的空虚。不知寒冷的理由，而我却呆呆地等待老天的回答。看到地上的落叶，不禁想到生命的脆弱和无常，那无助和空洞的感觉，就像心也被风吹走，被土埋藏。有人说，无知的少年不会因为生命的短暂而感叹，为何我又有这番感受？

漂浮不定的是风，随波逐浪的是树，无可奈何的是叶。只要风一吹，树就动，叶子也要落下。长椅，期待着，渴望着恢复昔日的热闹和生机，然而陪伴它的却是变得光秃的小树。一片树叶，孤零零的挂在枝头，枯黄的，毫无光泽，失去了生命力与斗志力，显得那样若不禁风。单薄的身躯穿上温暖的大衣，戴上舒适的手套、帽子，围巾追随着风飘荡。站在树下，痴痴地望着那片枯叶，托在手心，似乎是为了呵护它，也为了告戒自己，在我面前还有经受不住秋风的弱者，我显得高大了。

茫茫宇宙，渺小的是地球，芸芸众生，渺小的是我。我无法触及这宇宙，也无法颠覆这地球，甚至，连主宰我的世界也无能为力。那么是谁在控制着我，让我哭，让我笑，让我寒冷，让我战栗，让我对生命如此怜惜？是风钩起我的忧愁，是寒冷扑灭我的希望，还是变化莫测的只是心底的感受？

给风一个理由，给寒冷一个借口，每天给自己一个希望，也许世界会大不一样？ 范文二

给自己一个希望

有位医生素以医术高明享誉医学界，事业蒸蒸日上。但不幸的是，在某一天他被诊断患有癌症。这对他不啻当头一棒，他一度情绪低落。但是最终他不但接受了这个事实，而且他的心态也为之一变，变得更宽容，更谦和，更懂得珍惜所拥有的一切。在勤奋工作之余，他从来没有放弃与病魔搏斗。就这样，他已平安度过了好几个年头。有人惊讶于他的事迹，就问他是什么神奇的力量在支撑着他。 这位医生笑盈盈地答道：是希望，几乎每天早晨，我都给自己一个希望，希望我能够多救治一个病人，希望我的笑容能温暖每一个人。这位医生不但医术高明，做人的境界也很高。

在这个世界上，有许多事情是我们所难以预料的。我们不能控制际遇，却可以掌握自己；我们无法预知未来，却可以把握现在；我们不知道自己的生命到底有多长，但我们却可以安排当下的生活；我们左右不了变化无常的天气，却可以调整自己的心情。只要活着，就有希望，只要每天给自己一个希望，我们的人生就一定不会失色。 每天给自己一个希望，就是给自己一个目标，给自己一点信心。希望是什么？是引爆生命潜能的导火线，是激发生命激情的催化剂。每天给自己一个希望，我们将活得生机勃勃，激情澎湃， 哪还有时间去叹息，去悲哀，将生命浪费在一些无聊的小事上。生命是有限的，只要我们不忘每天给自己一个希望，我们就一定能拥有一个丰富多彩的人生。

范文五

给自己一个理由

给自己一个理由，活着，善待自己，也善待他人。从此便从容淡定，从此便海阔天空。给自己一个理由，其实是对生命的诠释，是理性幻化成感性的流动。给自己一个理由吧！让心灵也来一次“御风而行，泠然善也”的逍遥。

天涯苦旅，无论悲歌，也无论欢曲，生命的旋律已经奏响。现实的咄咄逼人，我们有时心累，有时身累。那么给自己一个理由吧，善待自己，让自己活得洒脱。像陶潜一样，领取

“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”的恬静与淡定，不为物质的收获，只为内心的愉悦。像李白一样，追求“且放白鹿青崖间，须行即骑访名山”的飘逸与释怀。让世间的琐碎喧闹纷繁少来惊扰我们本应平和清凉的心境。

我们向往巅峰，向往高度。结果巅峰只是一道刚能立足的狭地。不能横行，不能直走，只能享一时俯仰之乐，怎可长久驻足安乐。回首间，忽然发现之前的种种努力，只为了使周围的人都对我满意而已，为了博得别人的赞许和微笑，我们战战兢兢地将自己套入所有的模式，所有的桎梏。何时才能跳出圈来，获得生命的自由与快乐？

是该给自己一个理由的时候了。外界的压力太多，在学校、家庭、社会的三座山中穿行，行路难，行路难！让我们摆脱内心的重负，轻装上阵，让青春的舞步飞扬，让生命在旅途中自由扩张！

给自己一个理由，让自己释压，并学会善待他人，从此收获一片波光潋滟的凡尔登湖，把风和日丽，草木扶疏放入，把天阴雨湿，魍魉魑魅扔出。让自己找到快乐的平衡点。中华民族是追求卓越的民族，中国国民的忍性让外人咋舌，一如这次奥运的51枚金牌让世界惊叹，但刘翔的临战退阵，又让多少中国人扼腕叹息。四年的苦苦训练，让身累，更让心累。最后只能带着遗憾与懊恼离开，让人动容。如果给自己一个理由，凿破这沉重的心壁，不让自己背负太多，结果又会是怎样？让人臆想：

君临万物的高度，到头来成了自我的嘲弄？

世间最温煦的美色，都熨贴着大地，潜伏在谷底。给自己一个理由吧，好好地活着，冲破这世俗的铁门，勘破这逼仄的暗夜。给自己一个理由，让心御风而行，再来次“泠然善也”的逍遥。

第二篇：20xx年北京市中考作文评分标准及优秀范文

北京市中考作文评分标准 ........................... 1

第一档：（15—13分）

完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。

第二档：（12—9分）

符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

第三档：（8—5分）

部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。

第四档：（4—0分）

与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示内容，所写内容难以理解。

一 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

英语老师要组织一个经验交流会，他要求每位同学写一篇发言稿。内容包括：谈谈你对英语学习的认识，介绍你是怎样学习英语的，你希望英语老师在课外活动方面开展哪些活动。

提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film…

参考范文：

English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well. English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a lot to improve my English. Firstly, it's very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that I can go over my lessons later. Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.

I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English

party or English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English.

二 假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友Tom的一封信，请你给他写一封回信。在信中回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。

Dear Li Ming，

I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What should I do?

Yours, Tom

参考范文：

Dear Tom，

I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right. She wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you. It’s good for your study. I think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve your English. Your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. As a student, we should work hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers.

Yours， Ling Ming

三 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

某英文报纸就“绿色出行”话题开展征文活动，请你投稿。

环境保护，从我做起。目前越来越多的人提倡骑自行车出行。你对此有何认识？你对骑自行车上学有哪些感受？对未来环境你有哪些好的愿望？

提示词语：duty, protect, environment, ride bikes, go out, helpful, air, clean,

do exercise, traffic jam, hope, believe

参考范文：

It’s our duty to protect our environment. More and more people ride bikes when they go out nowadays. It’s helpful to keep the air clean.

I usually ride to school. I only take a bus on a rainy day. On my bicycle I can breathe the fresh air and do some exercise to keep healthy. On the other hand, I can keep away from the traffic jam and make sure I can arrive at school on time. To my joy, I can also do a bit for keep the air clean by riding a bicycle.

I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. I believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.

四 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60个词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假设你叫张华，美国中学生杰克是你的网友，你们约好今年暑假期间他要来你家生活、学习，你收到了他的电子邮件。请给杰克写一个回复，回答他的问题，并谈谈你自己的美好愿望。

参考范文：

Don’t worry about the food. My parents will prepare each meal for us. If you don’t get used to eating our Chinese food, we can buy some western food in the supermarket near my home.

I also think it’s a good chance for us to learn from each other. In our free time I will take you to visit the Great Wall and other places. During the trips I can practice my spoken English with you. I’m sure you can also make great progress in Chinese.

I hope you will get used to the life here soon. So you can have a good time together with our family. Perhaps next year, I will have a chance to go to the USA and live with you.

Yours, Zhang Hua

五 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

某英文报纸就中学生业余生活话题征文，请你投稿。

“中学生业余生活调查”的结果显示: 目前很多中学生喜欢“宅”在家里上网或看电视，而不去参加户外活动。请针对这种情况，谈谈你的看法并给同龄人一些建议。

提示词语： surf on the internet, watch TV , play sports, do outdoor activities…

参考范文：

Nowadays, many middle school students prefer to surf on the internet or watch TV all day in their spare time. But they don’t want to do any outdoor activities.

I don’t think this is good for us to do so. Instead, we should spend our spare time in a better way. First, we’d better do sports regularly. By doing this, we could not only keep healthy but also relax ourselves. It is also a good idea to go out with our friends. Such as watching movies, climbing hills or joining some clubs.

In a word, as middle school students, it is really important to lead a healthy life.

六 学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你是Li Hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词：Li Hua，student, Class Four, Grade Three , the Old People’s Home, sing, dance,

参考范文：

In the lake of my memories, there is a photo which always shines like a pearl. It’s a gift from my former teachers and classmates in Shanghai – the best one I’ve ever got.

Before I came to Beijing, they gave me this photo. I was shocked that the photo was taken a year ago during our spring outing. All my teachers and classmates were in the photo. At the back of the picture, there are 48 signatures and best wishes from them. I read them one by one. I didn’t realize that my tears were running down my cheeks until my friends hugged me.

I love this special present so much because it shows me the wonderful time which I spent with my dear classmates and teachers. Besides, it is their wishes that fill my heart with love and warmth all the time. I’ll always treasure it as the most valuable pearl in the world.

七 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信中。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫张华，是美国中学生琳达的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。

Dear Zhang Hua,

Last Saturday, my friends visited me and asked me to go out to play with them.

But my parents didn’t allow me to go out and they even talked to my friends about it for a long time. I felt embarrassed in front of my friends. What’s more, my parents often told me not to play with them because their grades are not good. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.

Yours,

Linda

Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from you.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

参考范文：

Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. First of all, I think you should have a talk with your parents. Maybe they will say you don’t understand them. But at least they will know what you are thinking. Then you can invite your teacher to your home to talk with your parents. Maybe this can change your parents’ ideas. Finally, I think you should let them know that your friends are not so bad as they think.

In my opinion, all parents love their children. So try to communicate with them and I’m sure they will understand you.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours，

Zhang Hua

八 我们的家乡正在发生着日新月异的变化，为配合我区举办的“礼仪门头沟(Charm Mentougou)”活动的开展，请你以“How to behave well ?”为主题，写一篇不少于60词的英语作文参赛。

内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. ??

注意：1. 文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。

参考范文：

How to behave well?

As a student in Mentougou, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules. Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in

our life.

九 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。 所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

目前环境变得越来越糟，我们都应该 “低碳(low carbon)”生活。现在某英文报纸就此话题征文，请你投稿。请谈谈我们应该如何做，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：environment, become, worse, protect, have a “low carbon” life, reuse, save, important

参考范文：

The environment is becoming worse and worse. We should do something to protect the environment. We need to have a low carbon life. First, we should go to school on foot or by bus instead of going by car. Second, we should save energy by turning off the lights, TV sets and air conditionings in time when we don’t need them. Third, don’t use plastic bags when we are shopping. Instead, take shopping basket with us. In addition, water should be reused as much as possible. Lastly, we should plant more trees to make carbon low.

I think it is very important to protect our environment. It’s our duty to have a low carbon life. Our life will become better and better if more people take actions to offer their help.

十 假如你是李冰，你美国的笔友Mike遇到了一个难题，发邮件向你求助。请回封邮件，写出个人看法，并提出解决问题的建议。

参考范文：

Dear Mike,

I have received your e-mail recently. I can understand you .I think you are right .I hope you can get ready to help others as possible as you can.

I can give you some advice. First when you meet such things ,you'd better call110 to ask the policeman for help .Besides you should try to explain to his daughter ,I think maybe she didn't know the reason and just was too worried. What's more, don't think more about that, I think you did right ,sooner or later she will

understand you and thank you.

I hope you can go on helping people in trouble .I'm sure if everyone can give a hand to others ,the world will become more and more beautiful.

I wish you are happy all the time!

Yours,

Li Bing

十一 昨天你高兴地看到许多同学在校园里自觉地做了一些事去保护环境。请你以“Learn from Them”为题给你校英语周刊投稿。内容包括同学们在校园里的具体做法以及你要向他们学习什么。

提示词：pick up the trash, plant, reuse, save

参考范文：

Learn from Them

Nowadays more and more people have done a lot to protect the environment. Yesterday, I was glad to see many students volunteer their time to make our school environment better. Some students picked up the trash on the playground, some

students planted the trees, and other students made posters calling on people to lead a low-carbon life.

I was moved by what they did. The environmental protection is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us. Even a small effort can make a great difference so I made up my mind to learn from them.

I will turn off the lights when I leave the room, and I won’t keep the water

running when I am not using it. Besides, reusing some old things I plan to throw away will be my choice. What’s more, I will remind people around me to take part in such activities.

Action speaks louder than words. Let’s work together!

十二 21世纪英文报初三版开展题为“My Best Friend in Middle School Life”的征文，作为初三学生，你应征写文，内容包括：他/她是谁? 突出特点是什么？他/她留给你深刻印象的一件事(如初识、一件难忘的事等)，以及你对你们友谊的展望或期待。（好友的名字用Mary或 Jack代替）

提示词语：kind, friendly, help, hope

参考范文：

My best friend in my middle school is Jack White. He impressed me deeply with his kindness when we met for the first time. I had a fall when we new students lined up on the playground. Jack came over then and helped me. Since then, we have become good friends.

Tom is not only kind, but also smart. He does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and have time for relaxing activities. He always looks happy. I’ve learned a lot from him.

I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship.

十三 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。提示词语供选用。

某英文报纸就他/她的微笑（His/ Her Smile）话题征文，请你投稿。

微笑，是对他人表示友善和关爱。微笑可以给人激励，可以使人奋进。请你结合自己的经历谈谈在你的生活中谁的微笑打动了你，为什么他/她的微笑会打动你，你有什么体会。

提示词语：show, encourage, difficult, brave, learn to do, feel good, cheer up, try one’s best

参考范文：

Smiles are beautiful and important. A smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that person’s day. I was once moved by a smile from my friend. Three years ago, when I made a speech on my first day of class, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Tony, one of my classmates, sitting in the front row, smiled at me and spoke in a low voice, “Yes, you can.” I was greatly encouraged by his smile. His smile was important because it gave me self-confidence.

I will never forget my friend’s smile because I’ve learned that something so simple can make a big difference.