Dear Mr. President,
I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus.
Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they remain the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is to add variety.
Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also inexpensive food.
Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax.
The above-mentioned suggestions are not just mine, but also many other students’. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.
By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food.
And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of a helping they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well. Some students have no seats when eating.
Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.
The focus of compkunt is the poor quality of Ur food. The rice and buns are like stones and they aretoo hard for us to bite into and chew. And the vegetables are sometimes so ctrercoomeariososioseiznorsoste (and maybe nutrients too). The fish and meat are often given short measure. Nforeoverelli0 Rice of thl food is unreasonably high. It costs us at least twelve yuan to have 3 ina.ls 3 day. Mate canteen..Finliva service staff are not at all hospitable to us students. As a result.manyor us eV) to outside restaurants or snack tars to have meals to keep body and soul together.
Henestly speaking, the dining room setting has been improved, with the wall painted and some Chinese paintings posted up. But there are only two canteens on the campus.As the number of students has increased greatly since last year, there is no longer enough space or seats for all of us to have meals on campus. And another thing I'd like to commend is the free soup available most of the time. In a word, there is still much room for improvement on the canteen service. We honestly hope that you could do something about it to that we will not suffer for the remaining days we are here.
Best regards!
Sincerely yours.
Li hem
第二篇：英文模板 - 客户抱怨篇2
Dear Ms. Bland,
Thank you for your order number: 354.
Statement:
Item 1 20 kg Australian standard cotton (no. 764844) $90
Item 2 80 kg Egyptian cotton (no. 231126) $650
Item 3 60 kg Merino wool (no. 459998) $450
TOTAL $1,190
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Yours sincerely,
Abrams Customer Services
Dear Abrams Customer Services,
I received your statement today, but there is an error on it.
Item number 3 is a charge for 60 kilos of wool (no. 459998). Please check your records. We never received this item. I wrote to you on January 19 to cancel the order. Your secretary told me the order was canceled.
I will send you a check for the correct amount.
Yours sincerely,
Janet Bland
Accounts Manager, Webber
Dear Mr. White,
Thank you for your order number: 23897
Invoice:
4 X Australian Chardonnay
Cost per bottle: $12.46
Total number of bottles: 4
4 X Australian Chardonnay
Cost per bottle: $12.46
Total number of bottles: 4
Total: $99.68
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Please make checks payable to Jones and Sons.
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Yours sincerely,
Sales Department
Jones and Sons
Dear Jones and Sons,
I am writing to query the figures on the bill I received yesterday (Order number: 23897).
According to this bill, I owe $99.68. In fact, as you can see, you have overcharged me. On December 9, I ordered four bottles of Australian Chardonnay at $12.46 each, making a total of $49.84. This figure is quoted twice on the bill (the charges are for the same date).
We are waiting for your confirmation before going ahead with payment of the bill.
Yours sincerely,
Nicholas White
If a company is writing to query the figures, it is making sure that the numbers are accurate or correct.
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According to this bill, I owe you $10,000.
According to George, I owe you $50.
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You have overcharged me for the last delivery by $200.
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Dear Jones and Sons,
Dear Abrams Customer Services,
Explain the problem
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Be specific. Give details about any documents you need to refer to. For example, put a date or reference number.
Be direct, but polite.
Useful Language
I am writing to query the figures on the bill I received yesterday (Order number: 23897).
I am writing to tell you that there is an error in the statement I received from you on February 2.
Details of error
Give full details of the error, clearly and carefully.
Include any information which will help the company find and correct the error. For example, name/reference number/cost of items, date of order.
Useful Language
According to this bill, I owe $99.68.
On December 9, I ordered four bottles of Australian Chardonnay at $12.46 each, making a total of $49.84.
You have overcharged me.
We never received this item.
Find a solution
Say what you are going to do. For example, you will wait for them to send you a new, correct bill, or you will pay only the correct amount.
Useful Language
We are waiting for confirmation before going ahead with payment of the bill.
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I will send you a check for the correct amount.
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Yours sincerely,
Yours truly,
Dear Smith and Co.,
I am writing to query the figures on the bill I received two days ago (Order number: 20272).
According to this bill, I owe $479.96. In fact, as you can see, you have overcharged me. On June 8, I ordered two cell phones at $119.99 each, making a total of $239.98. This figure is quoted twice on the bill (the charges are for the same date).
We are waiting for your confirmation before going ahead with payment of the bill.
Yours sincerely,
Bob Mould