动 机 信

尊敬的签证官：您好！

我们是xxx的父母，父亲：xxx,生于xxxx年x月x日，母亲，xxx,生于xxx年x月x日。现在我们决定并同意我们的孩子终止中国的课程前往法国奥诗学校继续学习，恳请您给予她去法国深造的机会。

介绍父母双方工作情况，如工作单位，职位，收入等。后面的内容为参考，不一定要一摸一样。 因此，我们希望能送我们的孩子来法国接受更好的基础教育，在初中或高中基础知识以及语言方面早做准备为今后进法国的大学学习打好基础，通过在法国的学习深造，掌握一些实用的知识与技能，同时具有语言方面的优势，让孩子在未来的激烈的就业竞争中顺利的找到好的工作岗位。

本段介绍下孩子的基本情况，如孩子性格，兴趣爱好，现在就读什么学校几年级等。

通过了解，我们夫妇认为法国奥诗学校这个项目非常有特色同时优势明显，目前已经有很多中国学生参加了这个项目，所以目前我们的孩子已经申请了去法国奥诗学校学习法语课程以及中学的课程。如果一切顺利，他将于20xx年xx月前往法国开始在法国奥诗学校国际部学习法语，之后在他法语的法语水平达到学校的要求后，再进入奥诗学校的高中部学习高中课程，在高中结束后参加法国的毕业会考。我相信孩子一定会有能力考上一所她心仪的法国大学。

我们十分清楚地知道对于一个未成年的孩子来说，独自一人赴法留学的征途是艰辛的，但我们也相信他或她完全有能力很好的独立生活并成功的完成学业，这是因为我们从孩子的童年时期就注重培养其独立生活能力，因此，他或她的独自生活能力远远超过了同龄人。

我们现在已经根据使馆的要求制作了签证申请材料，并恳请签证官给予xxx到法国深造学习的机会。顺致衷心的谢意！

xxx的父亲：

xxx的母亲：

2013-xx-xx

第二篇：动机信格式

留学动机信格式：

1--个人基本情况：与个人简历不同，这里的个人基本情况是要着重表述个人的学习和工作期间的主要业绩。

2--申请原因：明确阐述申请某某学校以及某某专业的理由，要告诉校方这个学校为什么吸引你，学习这个专业对你有什么帮助。

3--未来职业构想：具体说明在毕业之后，你准备从事的工作。切忌使用贡献、奉献、报效之类空洞的词汇，而应该表明去什么企业、公司，在什么职位上负责什么工作，并且最好把预期的年薪也写出来。 另外，在申请高等商学院的时候，学校还会特意让学生谈谈自己的优缺点和性格特征。

注：留学动机信一定要具体并且全文贯通、有前因和后果，按照西方人的说法就是有逻辑性。在撰文时，一定要以具体事例配合你所表达的中心思想，使文章显得生动。

总之一句话：具体、生动、逻辑性强、中心思想明确。

this kind of major, which is generally called “Interdisziplinare Forschung” in Germany, can approve me a lot in both aspects of electronics and finance. Nowadays every thing needs “Synthese”. For instance: in cultural respect, “Synthese” provides much more chance to make people all over the world know about each other; in financial filed, it makes common wealthy of different countries. It will make me more competitive, with good command of electrical knowledge and the extra economical information. When I graduated, I can seek a job not only in an Electrical Company, but also in a Financial Planning Corporation. I am planning to be an engineer only electrical technology.

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First of all, the major I am applying for is “Precision Manufacturing”, while in China my major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation with a Bachelor Degree. In my opinion,the major Precision Manufacturing is an extension for my current major.I think I can get more professional knowledges than I can get inland and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength.

Secondly,as we know, the major of Precision Manufacturing,which has an close conection with industry,is an important major for a country’s development.It is in an indivisible relation with science and technology.I have strong interest on this major because I intreset in all kinds of measures of manufacturing especially incredibile and innovative processes.

Thirdly, Switzerland possesses internationally recognized qualities and skills in the fields of education,science and technology. Its university including SUPSI focuses on education based on professional need and on applied reseach the university.They provide a practice-oriented education and offer a wide range of bachelor’s and master’s programs. For my part,I prefer practice-oriented educcation to pure reseach-oriented. I think that it's more important to use what you have learnt in virtual life than to reseach various of theories beyond our application.

In addition,the institution cooperates with our university.Due to the cooperation between the Chinese and Swiss governments on this project,the fees are low. Living and studying in cities with the highest living cost will exceed my budget. And I think my choice can lower the financial pressure to my family.