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20xx年英语专业四级大小作文
大作文：35min
According to a recent survey on college students’ mental well-being, 20 percent of college students experience various kinds of stress. Interpersonal communication, finding jobs, and study are among the top factors that cause anxiety and stress among students. Have you ever had such problems? And how do you tackle the problem(s)? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
How I Deal with Stress
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state the kind of stress you have experienced.
In the second part, explain how you deal with the stress.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
小作文：便条作文NOTE-WRITING 10MIN
Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:
You are going to send a book to your friend Mary or John by express mail. Write a message telling him/her TWO reasons why you send the book.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness.
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20xx年英语专业四级真题大作文（15分）范文（1）及炳璋点评
How I Deal with Stress
In today’s increasingly competitive society, the tempo of people’s living is speeding up and more and more people are loaded with a growing amount of stress and tension. Everyone feels overwhelmed and stressed in some way, as stress is an unavoidable consequence of life. The moments when I was caught up in extreme stress and overwhelm are when I was experiencing great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs.
So what can we do when we feel overwhelmed and stressed about the things over which we have little control? In my opinion, one way to work off stress is to get moving. When I am stressed, I just take a walk, after which I always feel calmer and relaxed. Besides, I’ve learned to confide my stress to others, which does help a lot. Friends and family members can be a great source of ideas and encouragement. Last but not least, I try to get enough rest and eat well, both of which enable me to be healthy enough and properly fueled to help me de-stress.
As is mentioned above, like it or not, it is impossible for us to live completely free of stress. However, as long as we can come up with our own ways to cope with it, stress will not discourage us from living a pleasant life.
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【李炳璋点评】
思想内容上：观点清楚，前后不矛盾，并有充分、恰当的例证说明自己的观点 组织结构上：细节安排有条理，叙述层次清楚（如：one way to ...；Besides...； Last but not least），段落之间联系自然（如：So what can we do when we feel
overwhelmed and stressed about the things over which we have little control?和 As is mentioned above, like it or not, it is impossible for us to live completely free of stress.），句子连贯
语言上：
语法：没有句子结构上的重大错误。句式变换丰富，错落有致（如：Last but not least, I try to get enough rest and eat well, both of which enable me to be healthy enough and properly fueled to help me de-stress.）。
用词：准确、恰当，词汇层级较高（如：confide，de-stress），用词细腻（如：a growing amount of，a great source of）。
得体：语言得体，语气恰当，有说服力，不矫揉造作，通俗易懂。
综上所述：此篇作文打14分为佳。