20xx年江苏省苏州市中考写作指导及范文（2篇）

题目

【考场真题】

请以“心中有支欢乐的歌”为题写一篇文章。

要求：①将题目抄写在答题卡上；②除诗歌、剧本以外文体不限；③不要少于600字；④文中不要出现（或暗示）本人的姓名、校名；⑤卷面整洁，书写工整。

【写作指导】

一、审题立意是关键。“心中”，表明要写内心最真实的感受。“有支”，即“有一支”，所以只可写一支歌，准确地讲只可写一种基调或一种主旋律。“欢乐”代表积极向上的情绪，其中可适当带点儿苦，苦中也可有乐。“歌”可以实指歌曲，也喻指某种情感、志趣、精神，或艺术风格、科学道理、人生理想等。要注意其他词语都是对“歌”进行限制的。

二、选材求新拒平庸。要使选材出新出彩，关键要抓住 “心中”，可以选择别人“不屑”写的材料，即别人经历过或见过，但认为是常见的而不愿写、不想写的材料；可以选择别人“不曾”写的材料，即指别人未曾经历过的，或别人不易想到的材料；也可以选择别人“不敢”写的材料??只要对平时看到的生活细节，进行仔细观察与思考，就一定能写出成功作文。

三、谋篇布局巧安排。构思时，既可以写“歌”的本义，也可以写“歌”的比喻义；既可以实写，也可以虚写。最佳思路就是虚实结合，以实带虚，虚中见实，将自己心中“欢乐的歌”展现出来。行文时，可以运用“镜头剪接法”，或纵向排列组合，即以时间为序展开镜头，用“镜头一”“镜头二”“镜头三”或用简明醒目的小标题，对各部分内容进行简要概括；还可以采用段落排比、小段剪辑、反复穿插、散点铺排等形式，对材料进行巧妙组接。在写法上，要着重突出细节描写，让自己心中这支欢乐的歌“于细微处见精神”。

【佳作展示一】

心中有支欢乐的歌

苏州一考生

这个季节，太阳非常毒，成片的麦子泛着金色的波浪，散发出诱人的麦香。几台收割机正在远处挥舞着手臂，快乐前行。

我和母亲躬身在一片油菜地中，手持镰刀，一把一把地收割着成熟的油菜。油菜曾经芬芳的黄花已成记忆，一些菜荚被阳光晒得枯黄。收割油菜时，必须小心翼翼，否则它会调皮地炸开，那枣红色的菜籽立刻蹦跳得无影无踪。上午得把这片田收割完，下午再趁着天气好初打一遍。由于父亲突然生病，我的星期天要全部支农了。我暗想，将来一定发明一种收割

油菜的机器，机器一响，全部搞定，那多好。

突然，两只柴雀从前面蹿起，在我们头顶盘旋着，哀鸣着。我抬头一看，不远处一个很精致的鸟巢搭建在油菜秆上，四只肉滚滚的小鸟挤在一起。这些小家伙刚出生不久，还没睁眼呢！

怎么办？如果割倒那片油菜，鸟巢只能移到地上，这些小鸟有可能成为野猫的美味。

母亲好像看出了我的心思，说：“女儿呀，把那片油菜留下来吧，损失一点儿菜籽不要紧，伤害了四条生命可有罪啊！”

我向母亲竖起大拇指，绕过有鸟巢的这片油菜，继续往前收割。那两只柴雀好像看懂了我们的用意，不再哀鸣，而是欢快地歌唱着，像是在夸奖我们呢。田地里，最后只剩下一片方桌大小的油菜站立在那里，显得很孤独，但那里不时传来幸福的歌声。听着这欢乐的鸟鸣，我的心暖融融的。

真心期盼那些小鸟快快长大，自由飞翔，唱出更动听的歌。

我心中有支欢乐的歌——让我们了解小鸟、保护小鸟！

【点 评】

选材独特，文章叙写了母女二人收割油菜时保护一窝柴雀的小事，展现了作者心中那支人与自然和谐共处的欢乐之歌。

构思新颖，张弛有度，先叙事，后点题，过渡自然。

【佳作展示二】

心中有支欢乐的歌

苏州一考生

外婆，你是我心中的一支歌。

15年间，外婆以不变的爱谱成了这首歌，藏于我心中的欢乐的歌。

小时候，外婆拉着我的手，用身体在人群中挤出一条小路。推推搡搡的人挤到了我，我摔坐在地，外婆连忙蹲下，抚摩着我的头发，一字一顿地说：“孩子，别怕，有外婆在。”我看着外婆眼里充满了慈爱和温暖，掉下了幸福的眼泪。

外婆，你是我心中一支欢乐的歌！

小学时，我的周末都是在外婆家度过。外婆会坐在我身旁看我写作业，遇到不会的题，

我便推给外婆，自己则躲到一旁看漫画书。外婆则握着我的手，让我跟她一起读题，还不厌其烦地告诉我：“要记住，遇到困难不能退缩。”外婆手上的温暖瞬间从指尖传递过来，我高兴地点了点头，说：“好。”外婆的耐心，使我的小学生活充满了欢声笑语。

外婆，你是我心中一支欢乐的歌！

进入初中，我没有时间每周都去外婆家了，见外婆的次数少了，但每次见到外婆，积聚在心中的忧虑甚至痛苦就会烟消云散。记得那次考试考砸了，到了外婆家，眼泪似乎在和我作对，不住地往下掉。外婆见状，忙打开音响，我听到了《歌声与微笑》。接着，外婆笑了笑，说：“一次考差了并不代表次次都会考差啊！难过时，记得给自己一个微笑。”外婆简短而朴实的话语抚慰着我，让我摆脱了考试失利的烦恼??

外婆，你是我心中一支欢乐的歌！

我相信这支歌是世界上最动听的歌，它深深定格在我的心中，不断催我奋进。

【点 评】

考生按时间顺序记叙了自己成长中与外婆有关的几件事，条理清晰，饱含深情。主要表现在：一是描绘动人的画面间接点题——儿时外婆拉着小手鼓励我走路、小学时教育我要有耐心、初中时教我难过时给自己一个微笑，自然流露出“我”对外婆的感激之情。二是描绘画面后用感叹句——“外婆，你是心中一支欢乐的歌”反复点题，扣题紧。

第二篇：20xx年江苏省苏州市中考英语试题及答案

20xx年苏州市初中毕业暨升学考试试卷

英 语

注意事项：

1.本试卷共六大题，满分100分（不含听力口语30分），考试用时100分钟；

2.答题前，考生务必将自己的姓名、考点名称、考场号、座位号用0. 5毫米黑色墨水签字笔填写 在答题卡相对应的位置上，并认真核对条形码上的准考号、姓名是否与本人相符合；

3.答选择题必须用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑，如需改动，请用橡皮擦干净 后，再选涂其他答案；答非选择题必须用0. 5毫米黑色墨水签字笔写在答题卡指定的位置 上，不在答题区域内的答案一律无效，不得用其他笔答题；

4.考生答题必须答在答题卡上，答在试卷和草稿纸上一律无效。

一、单项填空（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）

从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

1、— She has gone abroad，__________?

—No. She is still teaching us English at our school now.

A. is she

—________

A. Oh，no B. It doesn’t matter C. That’s a good idea D. Many thanks

3、In order to find_____better job，she planned to learn______second foreign language.

A. the； a B. a; a C. the； the D. a; the

4、— Could we see each other at 9 o’clock tomorrow morning?

—Sorry，let’s make it________time.

A. other’s

movies my computer.

A . from； on B . with； in C . in； with

C . such； as D . on; from D . so； that 6、It was______lovely weather________we decided to spend the day on the beach. A . such a； that B . such； that

—B. isn’t she C. has she D. hasn’t she 2、 — Congratulations! Your speech is excellent. B. the other C. another D. other 5、 Yesterday I downloaded a new program_______the Internet. Now I can watch TV and 7、— I hear you’ve got a new iPhone 4s.________I have a look? Yes certainly

B. Do C. Shall D. Should

D. hundreds ，A. May 8、The chairperson received about three_________applications to join the Birdwatching Club. A. hundred B. hundreds of C. hundred of

9、You don?t know

A . how soon

I want to see you again. It?s a year since I last saw you. B . how long

C . how often

D . how much

10、— What would you do if it_________tomorrow?

—We have to carry it on，since we?ve got everything ready. A. is raining A. heavy A. feels

B . rains B. heavier B. smells

C. will rain C. the heavier C. looks

D. rain D. the heaviest D. tastes

11、I had to call a taxi because the box was_________than I’d expected.

12、Some of my friends eat with their eyes. They prefer to order what_______nice. 13、We haven’t discussed yet__________.

A. where we are going to put our new table B. where are we going to put our new table C. what we are going to put our new table D. what are we going to put our new table 14、Maggie wanted an evening job that would allow her to_______her son during the day.

A. look at B. look around C. look after D. look out 15、The film made by Walt Disney________all over the world.

A. is used to show B. is used to showing C. used to show D. used to be shown 二、完形填空（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

先通读下面的短文，掌握其大意，然后在每小题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

Is the art of conversation dying? The other day，my wife 16 two teenage children die ，a TV screen，batteries ...or it so much we’re thinking of doing ii again sometime.

We had a conversation. The kind of real，growing up，but which seems all too rare these days. Today we have chat rooms，text messages，e-mails . . . but we seem to be losing the 20 of communicating face-to-face. We all know 21 young people are out on a date(约会)these days，they spend most of that time 22 their mobile phones. And teenagers nowadays seem to 23 communicating wit their friends by sending text messages rather than actually 24 to them.

If we carry on like this，in the future，we’l. What do you think? E-mall me，and who knows? Maybe we could even have a real conversation about it! 16、A. and 17、A. made 18、A. acted 19、A. common

B. or B. known B. blamed B. careful

C. but C. done C. decided C. extra

D. after D. seen D. enjoyed D. enough

20、A. name 21、A. because 22、A. buying 23、A. dislike 24、A. writing 25、A. eyes

B. art B. how B. collecting B. prefer B. introducing B. voices

C. attention C. when C. repairing C. admire C. speaking C. mouths

D. aim D. unless D. answering D. believe D. hurrying D. hand

三、阅读理解（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D)中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡 上将该项涂黑。

A

You may not have heard the words “freshman fifteen” before， but they are very important for students who are entering university. A freshman is a first-year college student. “Fifteen” refers to fifteen pounds—the fifteen pounds added to a student’s weight in his or her first year. There are a number of reasons why first-year university students gain (增加）weight；but it’s encouraging to know that freshmen don' have to add these harmful fifteen pounds. Mistakes choosing food

University kitchens serve (供应)many kinds of food. Some students choose unhealthy food，because now their parents are not nearby to help them choose. Some students visit the kitchen many times while studying. Late at night，some students get harmful fast food such as fish and chips with Coke to drink. Students also have less time for walking，running，and doing sports because of their schoolwork. Eating right

If you're careful，you don' have to add fifteen pounds. Here are some ideas： ·Think more about what you eat

·Eat plenty of vegetables and healthy meats.

·Don' eat desserts full of sugar；have fruit after dinner. ·Try not to eat so much unhealthy food while you study. ·It’s all right to have a little fast food sometimes—but not often. ·Write down the foods you eat

·Walk，run，do sports—move and you will feel better ！

Remember that the “freshman fifteen” can happen to anyone. Talk to your friends about it. Together，try to eat healthy food and not to eat unhealthy food. Walking，running，and playing sports is always more fun with friends. Help each other and you can have a healthy and happy freshman year.

26、The “freshman fifteen” is____________.

A. weight that high school students gain

B. weight that first-year university students can gain

C.fifteen pounds of food that first-year students eat

D. fifteen students who eat unhealthy food

27、The main idea of this reading is to___________.

A. get students ready to gain fifteen pounds

B. sell healthy food to new students

C.help new university students not to gain fifteen pounds

D. show the mistakes students make in studying

28、Which of these mistakes students make choosing food is not mentioned in the reading?

A. Choosing unhealthy food.

C. Getting fast food at night.

A. You’d better not eat unhealthy food.

B. Not eating unhealthy foods is easier with friends’ help.

C.Gaining fifteen pounds can help you study better.

D. Some students can eat anything they want.

B

What would you do if you found a snake in your house? Many people might be afraid or try to kill it. However，if you live in North Carolina in the USA，one thing you can do is to call the Snake Catchers.

The Snake Catchers are four men who love snakes，even poisonous ones. Their newspaper advertisement says，“Snake Catchers ： free snake removal(除去）一Please do not kill them 一 Call us.”

The Snake Catchers， who started their service in 1998， don’t charge anything for helping people. “We do this as a hobby, ”explained Fred Johnson，one of the Snake Catchers．

Because of their love of snakes, the Snake Catchers try to keep them alive. “One man asked us to kill a python(蟒蛇）,so he could make a pair of boots from the skin. We refused, because we like snakes, and we don’t want to see them killed,” said Fred.

Some of the snakes that they catch are kept as pets；some are given to the North Carolina State University. Most, including the poisonous snakes, are set free in the wild, usually in a national park.

Fred suggests that people should treat snakes with care. “Actually snakes are very shy and gentle creatures. They only attack if they are frightened. However, you have to know how to treat a snake properly!”

According to one happy family, the Snake Catchers are good. One day, the Greenwood family found a snake skin in the kitchen. They looked very carefully and saw a snake sleeping B. Visiting the kitchen while studying. D. Eating too much chocolate. 29、Which of these ideas would the writer of the reading probably agree with?

behind a cupboard. They thought about what to do. Then Steve Greenwood remembered the advertisement for the Snake Catchers. He called them.

“The Snake Catchers arrived within an hour and they finished the job quickly too,”said

Steve Greenwood. “One of them went into the kitchen, found the snake and took it out alive. The Snake Catchers did a very good job. ”

Last year, the Snake Catchers removed more than seventy snakes from houses in North Carolina.

30、The Snake Catchers catch snakes because___________.

A. they want to kill the snakes B. they like trying to catch snakes

C. they don’t want people to hurt snakes D. they like eating snakes

31、When a man asked them to kill a python, the Snake Catchers___________.

A. made some boots from the skin

C. gave him some old boots

A. in a national park

C. in a garden

33、According to Fred，___________.

A. snakes are very dangerous

C. snakes are not usually dangerous

C

In 1901，the citizens of Colorado Springs in the USA decided to collect everyday items and to seal (封住)them in a special box. The box was marked “To be opened after midnight， December 31st，AD 2000”，and was kept in the Colorado College Library.

One hundred years later，on the appointed(约定）day，300 people gathered to watch the opening of the box. Many in the crowd were the descendants(后代)of people who had placed things inside the box.

When the box was opened after midnight，the things inside the box were in very good

condition. There were newspapers， photos，diaries，name cards，family trees，books and lots of letters，including one written by Theodore Roosevelt，who became the President of the USA later that year. One of Roosevelt’s friends lived in Colorado Springs at that time.

Many of the letters were written to their descendants. They describe the hopes that the

people of 1901 had for the people of the next century. At that time， Colorado Springs had just a few thousand people. Now nearly half a million people live there.

Colorado College Library has scanned the materials and put them on a website. Cecll Muller，whose grandfather had placed a collection of postcards in the box，said that the time capsule was a great treasure. “This is a wonderful educational resource(资源).We can learn so B. were very happy D. did not agree B. in a university D. in their own houses B. people should attack snakes D. people should run away if they see a snake 32、The Snake Catchers set most of the snakes free___________.

much about our history,” he said. “I never knew my grandfather，but now I feel very close to him. ”

34、According to the passage，“time capsule” means___________.

A. a collection of clocks and watches

B. a machine for travelling through time

C.a collection of items for people to look at in the future

D. a collection of unwanted items

35、Many of the letters in the time capsule talked about___________.

A. the history of the town

C. the politics of the USA

A. helps him to get to know his grandfather

B. is worth a lot of money

C.brings back his memories of his grandfather

D. helps him to remember his younger days

D

TOKYO，JAPAN—What do you do when you see a cockroach(蜂螂）？ Do you hit it with a newspaper? Do you step on it?

When researchers at Tokyo University see a cockroach，they take the remote control and make the cockroach turn around，run left or right，or go forward. These scientists are changing the cockroaches into robots. Each cockroach has a very small pack that has in it a

microprocessor(微处理器).Then researchers can send signals from the remote control to the pack. The signals control the movements of the cockroaches.

Why does anyone want to control a cockroach? “Insects can do many things that people

can't，”says Isao Shimoyama，head of robot research at Tokyo University. In a few years， he says，these robot insects will carry very small cameras. They will be able to move through earthquake rubble(瓦砾)to look for people or move under doors to find information about someone.

This may seem strange，but the Japanese government thinks the research is very important. The government is giving the scientists $ 5 million for this research.

First， the researchers breed (培育)hundreds of cockroaches. They use only the American cockroach because it is bigger and stronger than other cockroaches. Then they choose the best cockroaches and remove their wings and antennae(触须).They put small packs where the antennae were. The packs weigh about three grams，or about two times the weight of the cockroaches themselves. “Cockroaches are very strong，”says Ralph Holzer，who is a researcher at Tokyo University. “They can lift 20 times their own weight. ”

B. the people who lived in the town D. people’s hopes for the future 36、Cecll Muller says that the time capsule___________.

With a remote control，the scientists send signals to the packs. When a cockroach gets the signal，it moves. The problem is that the cockroaches don' always move in the right direction.

37、The scientists are changing the cockroaches into robots because___________.

A. they want cockroaches to do things people can' in the future

B. they want to control the movements of the cockroaches

C .they want cockroaches to take photos of the earthquakes

D. they want to send signals to the packs on the cockroaches

38、What can cockroaches do to help people?

A. They can lift 20 times their own weight.

B. They can help people to carry very small cameras.

C .They can breed hundreds of cockroaches.

D. They can search for those people in rubble after an earthquake.

39、Scientists control cockroaches' movements___________.

A. by removing their wings

C .by using very small cameras

40、What problem do the researchers meet with?

A. The cockroaches sometimes don' move.

B . The cockroaches sometimes move in the wrong direction.

C . The cockroaches are too big to move through earthquake rubble.

D. The cockroaches can only lift 20 times their own weight.

四、词汇检测（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

根据下列句子及所给汉语注释或通过上下文，在答题卡上标有题号的横线上，写出空 缺处各单词的正确形式。每空只写一词。

41、(干燥的）enough to burn？

42、I’m so tired that I can 几乎不）stay awake.

43、The cat was (卧）fast asleep by the tire.

44、Have you given the kids their bus ▲ (车费）？

45、She ▲ (掉落)the plate and it broke into pieces.

46、The Olympic team were given a ▲ (英雄般的)welcome on their return home.

47、My grandma is in her (八十多岁)，but she can still take care of herself .

48、— How much does it cost?

—I just 49、— Could you tell me the to the Johnsons，please?

—Sorry，we don' have a Johnson here in the village.

50、— I often to the song Rainbow.

—So do I. It sounds beautiful.

B. by sending signals from the remote control D. by removing their antennae

五、句子翻译（共5小题；每小题3分，满分15分）

将下列句子译成英语，并将所译句子写在答题卡上标有题号的横线上。

51、你爸爸穿红白相间的T恤衫，看上去真酷。

52、我有时怀疑这本书是否值得一读。

53、在苏州空气污染要比中国其他城市少。

54、许多车祸都因开车不小心造成。

55、要是把她和他的家庭作业比较一下，你就会发现她的要好得多。

六、书面表达（共1题；满分20分）

假设你是一名初三毕业生，考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天，请你根据下表所列的 内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，写下这一天的感受。

注意：

1、词数90左右；

2、日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3、日记须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

4、日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Monday， Sept. 3 Fine

Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.

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