浅谈高三英语范文模仿写作的策略与方法

淄川般阳中学 殷玲玲

写作教学是高中英语教学的重要任务之一，是高考英语试题的重要组成部分，也是高三英语学习的一个难点（英语教学中的一个薄弱环节）。从近几年高考试题中书面表达所占分值比例及其发展趋势来看，其语言写作在高考中占有越来越重要地位。不少学生虽然经过高一、高二的学习，但由于新授课教学任务重，大多数教师为了赶进度，注重知识点的传授，在日常的教学中对写作这一教学环节重视不够甚至无暇顾及写作课。所以多数高三学生还是对写作充满畏难情绪，且写作质量低下，错误百出。如何在高三学生时间紧、任务重的情况下，省时高效地提高学生的英语写作能力呢?经过多年送高三的探索与实践，笔者认为运用模仿范文写作的方法对于提高学生写作水平是一种便捷、有效的途径。下面结合近几年的教学实践来谈谈自己的一些措施和方法。

俗话说，模仿是最好的老师。“临本描摹”自古以来就是是一种有效的学习手段。 “熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会吟”说明了模仿在写作中的作用。模仿不仅是母语习得的重要途径，同时也是二语习得过程中一种行之有效的方法。特别是在非自然语境下的外语学习，学习者只有通过各种途径获得范例，在模仿、对比分析中掌握语言规律，才能有效地培养自己的语言能力。仿写(Imitating Writing)，也有人称模写，（模仿作为英语写作的有效方法之一,指的是仿照现成的词语、短语、句子、段落、文章,甚至中心思想来写出与模仿对象相似的英文语言形式。）是指导学生模仿英语中比较精彩的词句、段落进行模仿写作。范文模仿法是一种行之有效的写作教学法提高写作的一个捷径。模仿范例能直接提高学生谋篇布局和衔接上下文的能力。

那么在高三英语教学中，主要采取以下的方法进行范文模仿写作的训练。

一、 搜集、并分类整理范文。

高考对书面表达的考查内容涉及记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文(书信、调查报告)、表格及汉语提示类材料作文、看图作文、开放性作文等。由教师提供各种各样的不同体裁、题材的英语写作范文和模板。范文可选择全国各地历年高考作文，学生优秀习作。英语作文模板有图表作文、书信作文模板、话题作文、对比观点作文。具体内容包括：说明原因型、对比观点类、 解决方法题型、明利弊题型、求职信、欢迎词、通知、广播稿图画、个人想法、写信。期中议论文的框架模板包括：（1）不同观点列举型、（ 选择型 ）（2）利弊型的议论文 ( 3 ) 答题性议论文 图表作文的框架 ( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文

二、 采取“一读二背三模仿”三环节。 1、对每一篇要练习的范文，首先要理解范文并读熟。反复地大声地朗读对于培养学生的语感有着积极的作用。其次在阅读过程中，教师要指导学生认清体裁，分析文章，讲明各种文体的要求,并给予必要的提示。范文在结构、格式、内容要点、语法修辞、大小写和标点符号与语言习惯上给学生以导向，认真观察注意文章的主体时态和语态。学生了解作文题可分自由式、半控制式和全控制式。高考的“书面表达”题历来采用全控制式，亦称指导性写作。它的体裁、内容和篇幅都有明确的限定。

2、熟背英语范文，出口成章。学习语言首先是模仿，而模仿和背诵是密不可分的，对提高写作水平很有帮助，特别是当自己还写不出地道的英语句子时更是如此。通过背诵，熟悉并掌握一些英文的习惯用法，了解英美人的思维方式，使自己的英语表达地道准确，从中可以体会出命题人对书面表达的目的和要求。特别注意范文中好的词、句子结构、过渡词要熟记在心。总结出高考写作中出现频率极高的一些高级词汇，高级句型，让学生随身携带，随时记忆、随时复习、随时扩充，背诵是增强语感的好方法，也是积累语言材料的好方法。在范文背诵过程中，在写作实践过程中，你可能会豁然开朗：提高写作原来真有捷径!

3、模仿训练

学生通过读、背连个环节，积累了句法、词汇等知识和素材，从范文中得到一些启发，这时再进行模仿训练，熟练运用所学的各方面的技巧，高质高效地完成写作任务。一般计划是:每周安排一种类型的写作，一至二篇范文，先教师课堂讲解，然后学生课堂上或课外模仿范文写短文二至三篇。

三、 模仿训练（注意事项）遵循的原则

高中起始年级的写作教学大多注重词、句的翻译，而忽略文章的布局结构。所以在训练时，要引导学生不仅要模仿短语、结构词和句式表达，而且要注意篇章的结构的仿写。仿写时，不要盲目动笔，要先分析，仔细审题，包括审体裁、人称和时态等题目要求。写出要点，先找出材料所包含的主要要点，然后尽量选择合适的范文或模板，套用学过的，熟悉的句子结构、范文结构逐一在草稿纸上写出每个要点的英语表达。不要把模仿变成抄袭，而是通过模仿产生自己的见解，并能融会贯通，能通过模仿来产生创新。学生经过比较规范的答卷和自己的作业,可初步衡量出自己的答题的准确度,找出差距,及时查出作业中的毛病。要教会学生根据不同体裁选择适当的行文方式。最后进行必要和适当的检查，加以完善，之后誊写清楚同学们应该根据写

作内容列好简要提纲，分清文章的层次，确定详略，写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词或句子使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，该分段时要分段，这样文章才能中心突出，一目了然，整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齐划一。

四、实例剖析

1、呈现话题作文模板。

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______. Besides,_____. The third one is _____. To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,_____. For another thing, _____.

All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____. Personally, I believe that……

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

（１） 问题现状 (２)．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) 2.适用话题：private cars , fresh water, mobile phones, keeping pets,

五、及时讲评

落实讲评,及时反馈信息,是提高学生书面表达能力不可缺少的一项工作。教师可以抽查部分学生的习作, 有选择地对个别学生进行面批，也可以让学生互评，组织学生参与到活动中，并在活动中不断地鼓励学生，使其获得成功的喜悦，不断增强其成就感，从而调动学生的极积性和主动性。批阅过程中,，教师要做好必要的记录，充分准备好讲评内容，及时纠正学生作文中的错误，肯定他们的劳动成果也得不到。有的放矢的讲评，对学生写作能力的提高是不言而喻的。认真记录习作中存在的带有普遍性和典型性的错误讲评课时印发给学生讨论修改,然后教师发表见解。要求学生对照自己的习作,将错题收集到各人错题笔记本里去,以便借鉴查阅。将较好的习作张贴出来,或讲评时读给全班学生听,给予鼓励。

经过这样的长期训练,学生在写书面表达时使用语言就会丰富、地道、流畅,写作就会得心应手,只要我们坚持不懈，相信我们会得到属于我们成功。

英语书面表达能力的提高并非是一蹴而成的,必须经过量变到质变的过程,它必须由浅人深、由简到繁、循序渐进、一环紧扣一环地进行训练。要教师重视英语写作教学，有计划、有目的地指导学生勤于练笔，一定能在高考局面表达中取得优异的成绩。

第二篇：(英语)高三英语基础写作范文背诵

高三英语基础写作范文背诵

基础写作

1．学生/学校生活类

A．高三毕业班全体学生将进行一次体格检查。假如你是班长，你要向全班同学宣布这个事情，请你就如下内容作一个口头通知：

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容，开头和结尾不算入内。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

In order to know about our health condition and choose an ideal university and a proper subject to major in, we are going to have a physical examination on April 13,2014, Sunday in the clinic building of the People's Hospital.// We'll have our eyes, ears, mouths, height, weight, blood pressure and liver function and so on examined.// To get a good result, we can't eat or drink anything, including boiled water after 10 o'clock the night before the examination.//We're going to gather at the school gate at 7:30 and we'll go there by bus because the examination will begin at 8am.//

What's more, we won't be able to have any lessons that day but we can do some exercises ourselves if possible.//

B．最近，你作为研究学习课题组的成员就高中英语新教材的看法在同学中开展了一次调查，调查结果如下：

参考词汇： 门诊大楼：clinic building 肝功能：liver function

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【写作内容】

请根据以上调查结果，写一份简单的调查报告，给你的外籍英语老师，以作为他今后教学的根据。报告的开头已给出（不算入总数）。

【写作要求】

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new English textbook......

I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it because they thought the texts were very attractive, which greatly aroused their interests in learning. Moreover, the book was very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural knowledge of the world. However, 15% of us disliked it because they complained there were too many new words and difficult sentences, making the texts difficult for them to understand. 5% had no opinion. In a word, the new English textbooks have helped most students improve their English.

C．最近，你班试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据下表的信息，给班主任Mr Li写一封100词左右的信，客观介绍大家的看法。

Dear Mr Li,

Recently we have carried out the suggestion to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it. Their opinions mainly fail into two groups. Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy. On the other hand, some students disagree. In their opinion, they can't get the expected result from listening to music, as break between classes is too short. What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise produced by the music. In addition, in class some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the break.

改为五句话：

Dear Mr Li,

Recently we have carried out the suggestion to play music during the class break, and the students have had many private talks about it.//Their opinions mainly fall into two groups (去掉此 2

句). Most of us agree that music should be played because we think music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.//Besides, music brings us relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness and what's more, listening to music also makes us feel happy.//On the other hand, some break between classes is too short.//What is needed during the break is peace instead of noise in the music they have heard drying the break.//

D．今年来，中学生打零工变得越来越普遍。请你就这一现象结合下表，写一篇英语短文。

【写作内容】

【写作要求】

1、只能用5个句子表达全部的内容。

2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

According to a recent survey, about 25% of the high school students who do part-time jobs work as tutors, waiters or salesmen. This figure will increase to 75% on the summer vacation. Why they want part-time jobs is that they want to earn some money to help pay part of the high school tuition and that they hope to be economically independent and buy what they need. By doing part-time jobs, high school students can gain some work experience, and broaden their outlooks. They can get valuable chances to know about the outside world at the same time.

E．请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范句子表达全部的内容。

开学初老师和家长都要刘海住校学习，他却不喜欢，双方各持己见，假如你是刘海，用英语把这个情况写信告诉英语周报请求帮助。

【写作要求】

1．必须用5句话表达全部内容。

2．信的开头，结尾已为你写好。

Sir, Dear

I'm a senior 3 student and I'm writing to tell you the discussion about whether to board in 3

the school or at home. My parents and teachers suggested I board in the school with a handful of reasons. They said it would be convenient for me to ask teachers questions at any time, make the most of the/my night time, and make it possible to develop my ability of independence. However, I think when staying at home in the evening, I can have more time to work at my lessons, especially the subjects I'm not good at. I realty don't know what to do and want you to give me your advice.

Yours,

Liu Hai

F．假如你是某中学学生李华。最近，你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次话题为：“父母有没有必要陪读？”

请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。

注意：

1．信的形式已经为你写好。

2．用5句话表达所有内容。

3．参考词汇：陪读accompany sb. studying at school 督促urge

Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school. ……

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school. We do have different opinions on this matter.(可去掉此句) Most of us (about 70%) think out parents should not accompany us studying at school since it make us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we won't form the good habit of studying. What's more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves and at the same time it affects our parents' work studies and rest. While about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for our studies and we shall be more healthy for their cooking. On the other hand our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

G．上周，你在班会课就”高三学生是否应带手机回学校”在你所在的高三(1)班进行了调查，如下是调查结果。

【写作内容】根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：

1．调查组织者、调查问题以及调查对象；

2．三种不同的态度及原因；

3．在手机使用问题上，学校应有相应的规章制度。

Last week, I did a survey among the 60 students in my class, Class 1, Senior 3 on the theme of "whether the Senior 3 students should carry their mobile phones at school?"//According to (the result of) the servey, 21 of them agree that they should because moblie phones can help them get in touch with their parents in a convenient way and they can surf the internet for information, which benefits their study.//However, 30 of them think just the opposite for the reason that they are not able to control themselves because of the games they are so interested in and this has very bad effects on their study and their health as well.//What we can not neglect is that 9 of them don't have any mobile phones because their families are not rich enough to affbrd them and this helps them to focus more on their study.//As to how to use the mobile phones as students, I insist our school should make some rules.//

2. 对比类（表格）

假如你校的外籍教师想了解中学生是否赞成对外国人因为旅游或学业来到中国人的家庭里住一段时间。（即home-stay现象），你在100个人里做了个问卷调查，得到以下一些基本观点。

at their home will create more opportunities for them to 5

communicate in English, which will surely improve English listening and speaking. In addition this kind of home-stay helps deepen their knowledge of English cultures customs and living habits. the home-stay foreigner.

3.新闻报导类

情景说明

A 根据下面表格提供的材料写一篇报道。

【写作要求】

必须使用5个句子，组织成连贯的短文开头已经给出。

【评分标准】

1.句子结构的复杂度和准确性

2.短文内容的完整性和连贯性

During the beginning of 2008, Guangzhou people won a battle over the great problem caused by terrible weather…

Continual sleet made all highways and railways closed so that Guangzhou government not only opened up Yuehan Exhibition Centre and Guangzhou International Conference and Exhibition Centre to accommodate the delayed passengers but also called on Party members and cadres to work for them.

B．假如你是李芳，是学校广播窒的播音员。请就以下新闻内容编辑一篇发言稿在下午的广播时间里播出： 6

20xx年1月13日，星期二，加勒比岛国海地首都太子港发生里氏7级地震。地震估计将导致4.5至5万人遇难，另有300万人受伤或无家可归。首都太子港将近50%的房屋被损毁，目前海地首都太子巷到处是一片废墟。地震后，国际社会纷纷伸出援助之手。包括捐衣服，食品和药物。中国国际救援队也于1月14日抵达海地，并立即展开搜救工作；医务工作者们也已经在海地建立了流动医院，救治当地的受伤民众。

Haiti 海地 PortauPrince 太子港 里氏 7 at a scale of 7 on the Richter calculations

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

On Jan. 13th,2010, a significant earthquake at magnitude 7 on the Richter calculations hit PortauPrince, the capital of Haiti on the Caribbean. It is estimated that approximately between 4.5 thousand and 5 thousand people were killed in the quake, with 3 million more people injured or homeless. At present, the capital city PortauPrince is in ruins everywhere in that about 50% of its houses have been smashed down in the quake. Fortunately, the good news is that international societies offered their helping hands shortly after the earthquake---donating clothes, food and medicine. Meanwhile, the Chinese International Rescue Team also arrived in Haiti on Jan. 14th to carry out the rescue for the survivors and medical workers have even set up mobile hospitals in the capital district, providing medical service for the local people.

4.名胜古迹介绍

我国文化遗产是人类文明的重要组成部分，获联合国文化遗产保护大奖第一名的广裕祠是其代表之一。请根据以下提示向你的美国朋友Patti 介绍广裕祠。

1． 广裕祠位于广东省从化钱岗村。

2． 据说建于1426-1435年间。占地约900平方米。

3． 始建后历代均有维修，有七处文字记载。

4． 广东第一次发现有确切建筑年代的古建筑。

5． 当地村民与政府珍爱文化遗产，精心保护与修复。

6． 20xx年获联合国文化遗产保护大奖第一名。 big repairs were done in different dynasties, seven of which were recorded in words. This is the first discovery of ancient buildings in our province with exact time. To let it survive, Because of their great efforts, in 2003,

5.名著介绍

假设你是John，你刚读完一本书，觉得很精彩，打算介绍给你的朋友Eric，以下是这本书的基本情况。

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【写作内容】 根据以上信息，写一篇短文，并包括以下内容：

1．想推荐一本感动你的书：

2．海明威，美国作家，1899年生于芝加哥Chicago；

3．圣地亚哥: 古巴老人，一位很有经验的老渔夫；

4．作者因该书获1954诺贝尔文学奖；

5．读后你一定会被感动。

【写作要求】

必须使用5个句子表达全部内容。

Eric，

wonderful story about a fierce fight between a shark and Santiago, an old experienced Cuban All the best John.

6.人物介绍

假如你叫Peter，你从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。

1 姓名：Peter，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄27岁。

2 20xx年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。

3 有数学天赋，20xx年因数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。

4 英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。

5 为了报效祖国，于20xx年毅然回国。

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

Dear Sir，

How do you do? Through the ad. I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.

I’m Peter born in Yuexiu District, Guangzhou City, aged 27. a doctor’s degree in2005. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, 8

I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.

looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours

Peter

7. 天气预报

假如你是业余气象员，你从电台天气预报节目得知了今晚和明天上午本镇的天气情况，你下午6点钟在校广播室用英语向全体师生作天气预报，并提出忠告。

要点如下：

① 午夜至凌晨两点有强劲北风。

② 气温将下降5-8度。

③ 明天上午有阵雨。

④ 要求同学们今晚离开教室时关好门窗。

⑤ 明天早上起床时多穿些衣服，以防感冒。

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容

Teachers and schoolmates

Attention please.

It is six o’clock in the afternoon. I’m now giving the weather forecast as usual. From midnight to 2 a.m. tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing across our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8℃. Also there will be showers tomorrow morning. Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your classroom tonight. In addition when you get up tomorrow morning please put on more clothes in order to protect yourself from catching cold.

Thats all. Thank you.

8.图表

下图反映的是某校20xx年与20xx年学生健康状况调查的部分数据。请你用英文为某报写一份报告，反映该校3年间学生健康状况的变化情况，

应包括以下内容：

1. 过去三年学生的健康状况变化的总体情况是怎样的？

2. 学生近视的情况发生什么变化？

3. 学生的体重变化是怎样的？

4. 学生的睡眠质量和精神状况的变化是怎样的？

5. 请提出你认为的相应改进措施。

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【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达所给的全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整、连贯

A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. The number of students who are short-sighted increased from 78.2 in 2011 to 92.5 in 2014. Overweight students are getting more from 36 to 52.4. Nearly 10 more students don’t have enough sleep and over 15 more students have mental problems. To be healthier both physically and mentally students need plenty of sleep to refresh themselves.

9. 广告

请根据以下资料说明，描述全部所给的信息内容。

参考词汇：卡其色 khaki 客服中心Customer Service Centre

【写作要求】

1．标题：Summer Lightweight Climber Pants

2．必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容

【评分标准】

1．句子结构的复杂度和准确性

2．短文内容的完整性和连贯性

Summer Lightweight Climber Pants

Our product, made from summer lightweight cotton, is specially designed for kids. In the

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long summer days, it is cool and comfortable for active kids to play in our pants. We have two colors black or khaki, for you to choose from. Each pair is sold at 50 Yuan with small, medium ,large children’s sizes. If you have any questions, please dial our Customer Service Centre hotline: 020-87654321. Please call our Customer Service Centre at 020-87654321 10.

10．个人观点

（尝试把下面一段话变成五句话）

Failure is the mother of success

We middle school students have had many tests or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Different students take different attitudes to failure.

Some fall in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.

I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men have failed many times before they succeeded. So we must learn to deal with our failure correctly.

改为五句话：

Failure is the mother of success

As middle school students we have had many tests or exams and we have both achieved success and suffered from failure but different students take different attitudes to failure.//

Some fall in low spirits when they don't do will in the exams and they usually lose heart and no longer study hard as before. //However, most students take an active attitude towards failure and they encourage themselves to be self-confident by finding out and analyzing the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.//

I agree with those with active attitudes because as we all know, failure is the mother of success.//Even great men have failed many times before they succeeded and that's the very reason why we must learn to deaf with our failure correctly.//

读写任务

1．阅读下面的新闻，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．

From security guard to top college student

In Shandong Normal University, one student in particular has drawn much attention as he used to be a security guard at Qinghua University. During his spare time, he went to different classes at the top university as his goal was to get into college one day.

Jia is from a poor rural family in Shandong province. Although he never finished high school, his college ambitions never stopped. He became a security guard at Qinghua University. 11

Guarding the school and taking free classes at Qinghua during his spare time, self-taught Jia took the college entrance exam in June last year and he made the grade.

His family is very proud of his achievement. They didn't know about his college dream. All they wanted from him was a decent marriage and grandchildren.

Jia says he has made plans for his new college life and up to now everything has been fine. He wants to finish his degree in three years and then go to an even better graduate school. He says everyone should strive to improve their life and is confident about his future.

[写作内容]

假设你看完上面这则新闻故事后深有感触，决定在班上英语课前活动中做一个英语演讲。演讲的开头和结尾已为你写好，内容包括以下几点。

1．以约30词概括上面新闻故事的主要内容。

2．以约120词发表你的看法，内容包括：

(1) 这则新闻故事带给你的感受。

(2) 你认为主人公的成功最重要的原因是什么？为什么？

(3) 受到的启发并进行呼吁。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 写作中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

A possible version:

Fly Your Dream

Ladies and gentlemen,

Today I would like to begin my speech with Jia’s story.

Born poor and previously a safety guard at Qinghua University, Jia never gave up on his college dream. By taking advantage of the academic resources at Qinghua, he finally made his way to college last year.

Reading this piece of news, I am both shocked and moved. Jia pursued his dream and made achievements despite his disadvantaged financial and occupational background. Among the many reasons why he succeeded, I would point out the role of having a dream as the most critical one. As we can see around us, many would have dropped their dream and thought of themselves as doomed to be underprivileged the whole life, should they be in Jia’s shoes. Yet that’s far from the worst case. Take a look around us, and it is not unusual to find students with better family background than Jia but without a dream, spending their youth playing games and surfing the net. In my opinion, they are simply not making their life as worthwhile as a security guard did.

Therefore, I would appeal that we all follow the example of Jia, find a dream and fight for it. After all, only if we do have a dream can we fly it and finally realize it!

That’s the end of my speech. Thank you.

Keys words and sentences in the summary:

1. Jia; 2. poor rural family; 3. his college ambitions never stopped;

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4. Guarding the school and taking free classes at Qinghua University during his spare time, self-taught Jia took the college entrance exam last year and he made it.

2. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didn’t offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person.

In a series of cases nationwide, we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport, which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.

People with moral deficiency (who don’t give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned, but they don’t deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values and not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave worse.

The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats. It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice, but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violence justice?

This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same, especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.

If cruel and rude acts are rooted in children’s hearts, society will never step into civilization. The practice violates common values, neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.

【写作内容】

1、以约30个词概括短文的要点。

2、以约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法，内容包括：

1）读完这则新闻，你有什么感受？

2）假如你是车上的一名乘客，你会怎样做？

3）就如何创建和谐社会提出你的建议。

【写作要求】

你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

The news is about a young disabled man attacked on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby, which leads a debate about who is right and who is wrong.

I am so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so implite. it was wrong of her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.

Today in our society ,many other people like her would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus, as the morality requires. However, it I were a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability。So it is still a long way for us to build up a harmonious society. in my opinion, we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it from happening so as to solve such kind of problems an safeguard our civilized society

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3. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

This weekend in Sydney, Australia “lights out” activity will be staged.

Sydney people will keep lights off for an hour, so that the Australia’s

largest city will be thrown into darkness in the night.

In Sydney, a large number of businessmen have been added to this

action plan. government officials and tens of thousands of people have

also answered the call enthusiastically.

The landscapes of Sydney such as Sydney Opera House, Sydney

Harbor Bridge and dozens of skyscrapers will keep lights off for one hour from 7:30, and even McDonald’s big “M” logo will be switched off. But its significant lighting, such as the flying lights and the traffic lights will be on as usual.

This event is called “Earth Hour”. One of the organizers says this action will encourage Australians to switch off unnecessary lights in their daily life.

“Our aim to do this is very simple. We do not want people to return to live in cave time. We just want to reduce greenhouse gases into the atmosphere as much as possible.” He also said; “One hour blackout is only the beginning, and the next step is to improve people’s awareness off energy saving.”

[写作内容]

1. 以约 30 词概括上文的主要内容；

2. 以约 120 个词就“熄灯一小时”活动发表看法, 内容包括：

(1)你是否赞成这种做法并说明其理由；

(2)你是否动员你的家人或你周围的人参加此活动？

(3)日常生活中为了保护环境我们还可以做些什么？

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出现真是姓名和学校名称。

During the “Earth Hour”, people in Sydney will have a one-hour blackout activity throughout the city, the purpose of which is to make people be aware of energy saving better.

I am strongly for this activity, which is really meaningful and helpful for preventing our earth from getting warmer. Besides, it can improve people’s awareness of environment protection.

As for me, I will tell my family and people around about Earth Hour and try to ask them to join in it, for just one hour’s blackout may not affect our life much, but it will help them know more about low carbon life and saving energy.

As a student, I will make great efforts to help protect our environment. I won’t ask my father to drive me to school but take buses or just ride my bike. When doing shopping, I will try to use a cloth or paper bag instead of plastic ones.

Every little counts, why not join us!

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