中考书面表达精析及范例

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模块36中考书面表达解析与精选

真题解析

真题1(2008北京)根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

汶川地震(Wenchuan Earthquake)发生后,9岁学生林浩(Lin Hao)救了两名同学,然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。

请你就林浩同学的事迹,以“Learn from the Hero”为题,给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简介,你对这件事的感受,以及你要向他学习什么。

提示词语:a student, nine years old, happen, save, walk, to safety, be deeply moved,

brave, give up

Learn from the Hero

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作要点:

(1)讲述林浩的事迹;

(2)谈自己的感想;

(3)向他学习什么。

【参考范文】

Learn from the Hero

Lin Hao is a student. He is only nine years old. After Wenchuan Earthquake

happened, he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hours to

safety.

I was deeply moved by his story. I think he is a brave boy. He did his best when

he faced great danger. I should learn from him. I will think of others first and

help them as much as possible. I will never give up when I face any

difficulties.

解析:文章简洁明了,层次分明。第一段中讲述事迹,第二段谈感受。所给提示词运用准确、恰当。同时,自己也加了很多地道的英语表达方法,如do one’s best,

learn from, as much as possible等等。可见学生对所学知识运用自如,提升了文章的档次。

真题2(2007北京,五)你校美籍学生Tom和Mary刚来到北京。他们在校园网坛上各发了一个帖子。Tom想了解北京的基本情况;Mary感到很孤独。假如你是李华,看到他们的帖子,请写一个回帖。首先做自我介绍,然后提出建议,并说一说你将如何帮助他或她。 注意事项:●请从下面表格的A、B两个题目中任选一个;

●短文必须包括表格中三个方面的内容;

●表格中的词汇供选用,文中不得出现网络专用语(如:不能用字母u代替单词you等); ●词数不少于60;

●文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

AB

To TomTo Mary

About yourself Li Hua, Class 2, Grade 3, be born in

Beijing, know(well)?Li Hua, Class 2, Grade 3, like

meeting people, friendly…

Suggestionsbuy a map, on the Internet, watch

TV, visit…make friends, talk with your

classmates, read books, listen to…

How to help

him/her ……

Hi ,

____________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua

写作要点:(1)李华的自我介绍;

(2)提建议;

(3)帮助的具体方法。

【参考范文】

A

Hi Tom,

I’m Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. I was born in Beijing. I know Beijing very

well. So I think I can give you some good suggestions. Why not buy a map of

Beijing or a guide book? Or try to find the information on the Internet. Also,

you can watch TV programs and read China Daily. Would you like to go around

Beijing with me on weekends? I’m glad to be your tour guide. Come to my class if

you need my help.

Li Hua

B

Hi Mary,

I’m Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. Everyone says I am kind and friendly. I like

meeting people and have many friends. I’d like to give you some suggestions. Try

to talk with your classmates as much as possible. Soon, you will feel better.

When you are alone, you’d better do some reading or listen to music. Would you

like to go to book stores with me? We can find some interesting books and CDs.

Also, we can go to parks or concerts on weekends. Let me know if you need my

help.

Li Hua

真题3 (2006北京)根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信(信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内)。

假如你叫李玲,是英国中学生露西的好友,你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉她应该做什么,不应该做什么。

Dear Li Ling,

These days Tom Cruise, the film star, always comes into my mind. I think

of him day and night. I just sit in my room and watch videos of his films

again and again. I’ve written hundreds of letters to him and sent E-mails

to his fan club, but all I get back are only photos with his names on

them. I dream that some day I’ll meet him and that he’ll feel the same way

about me. I don’t want to learn my lessons any more, and I’ll have final

exams next month.

I’m thinking of running away to Hollywood(好莱坞)to meet him. Can you help me with the problem?

Yours,

Lucy

Hi Lucy,

Nice to hear from you.__________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ling

写作要点:(1)认真读来信;

(2)根据信的内容提建议,如:①看一些有趣的书 ,②做一些运动,③告诉父母

(3)注意用should, may。

【参考范文】

Hi Lucy,

Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there’s nothing wrong

with that. I understand you. But I don’t think what you do is right since you

are a student. You’d better read more interesting books and have more sports in

your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell

your problem to your parents and teachers. I’m sure they’ll help you. Running

away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for

the exams. Your future is in your hands.

Yours,

Li Ling

真题4 (2008安徽)一个美国中学生代表团将到你校交流学习,并与你校学生座谈。请根据表格中的内容写一个发言稿,介绍你校学生开展小组合作学习和自主学习的情况。

小组合作学习自主学习

·互相帮助

·学会倾听

·与他人合作

·发表个人见解

??·制订学习计划

·合理安排时间

·独立思考

·做学习的主人

……

注意:

(1)词数100左右;

(2)可适当发挥,加入自己的观点;

(3)发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。

参考词汇:study is groups, work together, make good use of time

Dear friends,

Welcome to our school.__________________________________________________________ &nbs, p;

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening!

【参考范文】

Dear friends,

Welcome to our school. I would like to talk about two ways of study in our

school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, we can

help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together.

Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. The other way we like

is to study by ourselves. We can make our own plans for study and learn to make

good use of time. We can also learn to think by ourselves. And the most

important thing is that we can be the master of our own study.

Thanks for listening!

解析:此文简洁明了,结构紧凑,文章使用了一些高级词组和句子:would like to?,The first way is to?,each other,

express his own ideas, make good use of等,使文章增色很多,提升了文章的档次。

真题5

(2008黄冈)背景设定:为了保护环境,节约能源,中国政府出台了一条禁令:从20xx年6月1日起,禁止在超市和商店中使用超薄塑料袋。针对这条禁令,某学校组织了一次讨论

会,请同学们畅所欲言,发表自己的看法。下面是汪进峰同学的发言内容:

姓名发言中心内容

Wang

Jinfeng1.禁令内容:禁止使用超薄塑料袋;阻止超市、商店向顾客提供免费塑料袋;如果提供,需要付费。

2.个人认识:对我们有益;能帮助保护环境。原因:a.引起白色污染;b.污染土壤和水;c.生产塑料袋浪费能源。目的:贯彻执行该禁令,改善环境。

3.今后做法:鼓励家人和朋友购物时自带布袋、竹篮;不乱丢垃圾,对塑料瓶、易拉罐进行回收??

请你根据Wang Jinfeng同学的发言内容,以他的名义写一篇书面发言材料。

要求:(1)围绕汪峰的观点和意愿进行表达,所表达的内容可以适当拓展;

(2)所表达的内容必须包含上表中的3个要点;

(3)词数80左右,开始语已给出(不讲入总词数)。

提示词汇:ban(禁令),provide, free(免费), protect, cause, pollute, soil(土壤), energy, carry out, improve, recycle, soft drink can(易拉罐)

Hello, everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June 1,

2008.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!

写作要点:(1)禁令内容:

①禁止使用超薄塑料袋;

②阻止超市、商店向顾客提供免费塑料袋;

③如果提供,需要付费。

(2)个人认识:

①对我们有益;

②能帮助保护环境。

原理:a.引起白色污染;b.污染土壤和水;c.生产塑料袋浪费能源。

(3)今后做法:

①鼓励家人和朋友购物时自带布袋、竹篮;

【参考范文】

Hello, everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June 1,

2008. The ban can stop the supermarkets and shops from providing free plastic

bags. People should pay for every plastic bag if they need it.

I think this ban is very helpful to us. It helps to protect our environment. In

my opinion, plastic bags can cause “white” pollution and they can also pollute

the soil and water. They are harmful to our health. What’s more, producing

plastic bags can waste a lot of energy, too. So we should carry out this ban in

order to improve our environment.

What should we do? I think we should encourage our family members to carry cloth

bags or baskets when they go shopping. In the school, we must’t throw the

rubbish everywhere. We should reduce the waste, reuse, some bags and recycle

plastic bottles, soft drink cans, waste paper and so on. If every one of us does

like this, our environment will be better and better.

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!

解析:此文主题具有时代气息,关注社会热点,要点详尽,写作要求较高,丰富的内容加上灵活多变的语言表达,如:表现观点时的句式就有I think?, In my

opinion?以及stop? from等,使文章既厚实又不呆板。同时还激发了学生保护环境的意识。

真题6 (2006吉林)请根据下表内容提示,以“The way to keep healthy”为题,用英文写一篇短文。

三要五不要

多吃水果和蔬菜不要吃含脂肪太多的食品

晚上睡眠不少于8小时不要喝太多的咖啡

多活动不要工作太劳累

不吸烟

不要吃太多的糖

注意:短文必须包括表格内所有信息,可以适当发挥。

写作要点:(1)仔细审题,“The way to keep healthy”,将“三要”“五不要”重新分类为属于健康饮食方面的和良好习惯方面的;

(2)确定要点:健康饮食

良好习惯

【参考范文】

The Way to Keep Healthy

It’s very important for us to keep healthy in our daily life. But how? Here is

some advice for you to follow.

You should have a healthy diet. It’ s necessary to eat enough fresh fruit and

vegetables, because our bodies need all kinds of vitamins every day. But don’ t

eat too much fat, such as cheese, butter or anything too fatty. Too much sweet

can be bad for your teeth. So you’d better not eat chocolate and drink as much

coffee as possible.

Good habits can help you keep healthy. Doing exercise is certainly a good way to

make you healthy. After a day’s work, you need to have an eight-hour sleep. And

you’d better not work or study too late. Remember that smoking is not good for

your health, so never smoke.

真题7(2008天津)假如你叫李华,5月11日母亲节那天,你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息,用英语写一篇日记。

上午你用零花钱给母亲买了一些鲜花,放在花瓶内

下午你去市场买菜,为一家做了一顿简单而可口的饭菜

晚饭后

你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡,并祝她节日快乐;告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康,不要过度劳累,你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动;母亲感动得流下了眼泪

注意:(1)词数80~100左右。

(2)日记的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

(3)日记须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节和适当发挥,使其通顺、连贯。

词汇:pocket money零花钱,vase(n.)花瓶,overwork(v.)过度劳累,be moved to tears感动得流泪。

11th May Sunday Rainy

Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.

In the morning I bought ______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

写作要点:

(1)上午,你用零用钱给母亲买了一些鲜花,放在花瓶里;

(2)下午,你去市场买菜,为家人做了一顿简单而可口的饭菜;

(3)晚饭后,你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡,并祝她节日快乐;告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康,不要过度劳累,你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动;母亲感动得流下了眼泪。

【参考范文】

11th May Sunday Rainy Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.

In the morning I bought some flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase.

In the afternoon I went to the market to buy some vegetables and cooked a simple

but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I gave mother the card that I

made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more

attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some

housework from today on. Hearing the words, Mother was moved to tears.

Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

解析:短文条理清晰,过渡自然。定语从句“I gave mother the card that I made myself?”及分词作状语“Hearing

the words, ?”等较为复杂的句子结构的运用,提升了文章的档次。

模拟题训练

1. (08海淀区一模)

还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?某英文报纸正在以An Unforgettable

Experience为题进行征文活动。请你写一篇短文,描述一次难忘的经历,并谈谈你的感想。 注意:文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;

词数不少于60。

参考词语:remember, help, wonderful, feel, think

An Unforgettable Experience

Everyone has some unforgettable experience.

2. (08海淀中考二模)

一家英文报纸在开展“合理安排周末体育活动时间”的征文活动。你对你班40人作了调查,结果如下。请你根据图表和提示词语描述调查结果,介绍你个人周末体育活动情况,发表看法并说明理由。

注意:1.请不要写出真实姓名和校名。

2.词数不少于60(不包括所给的开头部分)。

提示词语:play sports, do exercise, practice running, spend, think, because, like?

I did a survey of how long we play sports on weekends. Here are the results.

3. (08西城中考一模)

根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的文章。(词数不少于60,英文提示词供选用)

我校正举办题为“迎奥运,作贡献”的英语征文活动。请你根据自己的经历,谈谈你做过些什么,有何感受,并打算??

文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Think, teach English, help, pick up the litter, from now on

The 29th Olympic Games are coming soon and we’ll welcome lots of visitors.

4. (08西域中考二模)

根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的文章。(词数不少于60,英文提示词供选用)

有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

5. (08东城中考一模)

学校的英语报正在就倡导节约进行征文。请你列举身边出现的浪费现象(如:浪费学习用品、食物、水、电等),分析造成的原因,并提出你的改进建议。

注意事项:1)必须包括三个方面的内容。

2)提示词汇供选用。

3)词数不少于60。

4)请不要写出真实校名和姓名。

提示词语:live a happy life, waste, a bad habit, make full use of(充分利用)

6. (08东城中考二模)

20xx年奥运会即将在北京举办,为了增强同学们的安全意识,学校英语角开展“做安全小公民”的演讲比赛,要求同学们结合自己的日常出行方式(步行、骑自行车、乘车或是家长开车送),谈谈你自己如何遵守交通规则,以及安全的重要性。

提示词:pavement人行道 hold handlebars扶自行车把

注意事项:1)词数不少于60。

2)提示词汇供选用。

3)请不要写出真实校名和姓名。

7. (08朝阳一模)

20xx年奥运会即将来临,全国人民都在为奥运会而努力。某家英文杂志特邀你撰稿。内容包括:你的心情如何?你做了什么有意义的事?奥运会结束后,你打算怎样继续弘扬奥运精神?

注意事项:1. 内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑,可适当发挥。

2. 英文提示词语供选用,词数不少于60。

提示词语:Olympic Games, learn a lot, work hard, ready, help, develop

8. (08朝阳二模)

根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的文章。(词数不少于60,英文提示词语供选用)

一家英语俱乐部准备在假期组织同学们去国外举办夏令营,请你就此发表自己的意见。 内容包括:你是否愿意参加本次夏令营,你对夏令营的活动有哪些建议,以及你的理由。 提示词语:be glad, hear the news, would love, take part in, the summer camp(夏令营), hold parties, visit, relax, help

9. (08崇文一模)

根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。

看电视已成为我们生活的一部分。但对我们学生来说看电视也有许多弊端。请就此谈谈你的看法。

useful, harmful, have no time to…, be bad for…, wear glasses, TV programmes

unhealthy

10. (08崇文二模)

根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。不能出现自己的真实姓名。

英文报的Aunt Lisa栏目是专门帮助学生解决问题的栏目。假如你是王力,现在给Aunt Lisa写一封信,按要点提示,谈出你的问题和烦恼并寻求帮助。信的开头已给出。 要点提示:在校乐队拉小提琴 没时间做作业 如继续下去考试会不及格

请求帮助play, the violin, band, practise, four times a week, teacher, warn, keep,

pass

Dear Aunt Lisa,

I have a problem now.

11. (08宣武一模)

根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。

在我们小时候,父母和老师就告诉我们要对别人有礼貌,你是如何做的呢?请举出三个以上的例子,并谈谈你对有关讲礼貌的看法和建议。

提示词语:young, tell, polite, for example, think, the 29th Olympic Games

12. (08宣武二模)

根据中文大意和英文提示词语。写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。

假如你是李雷。你想加入你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands

Club)”,请用英语写一封自荐信,写出你的“爱心”具体表现,并说明为什么要参加。你的想法是什么?

(注意:开头和结尾已写出,不计处总词数。请不要写出真实姓名和学校。)

提示词语:work hard at, help others, get on with, because, the 29th Olympic Games

Dear Chairman,

I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. I’d like to be a member of the Helping

Hands Club.

_ I will be glad if I am received. I am waiting for your answer.

Yours,

Li Lei

13. (08丰台一模)

请根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、合乎逻辑且不少于60词的短文。英文提示词仅供选用。

你校与一所中学联合举办以“友谊”为主题的征文交流活动,要求投稿者描述一个自己最好的朋友,介绍在你们的交往过程中他/她对你的帮助,以及你的感受。

提示词:

my best friend, clever, play together, help, think, happy, friendship, important

14. (08丰台二模)

请根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、合乎逻辑且不少于60词的短文。英文提示词供参考选用。

假设温哥华(Vancouver)的一所中学(Discovery Middle School)与你校是姊妹校,该校校刊Discovery

将以“北京中学生与2008奥运”为主题向你征稿。你决定投稿,侧重介绍你校、你所在的社区或北京市开展的促进“绿色奥运”的一些活动,这些活动为学校、社区或城市带来的变化,以及你从中获得的感受。注意:请不要在文中出现真实校名或姓名。

提示词:

the Beijing 2008 Olympics, “Green Olympics”, idea, volunteers, plant, save,

change, environment, good for

15. (07北京中考课标)

你校美籍学生Tom和Mary刚来到北京。他们在校园网坛上各发了一个帖子。Tom想了解北京的基本情况;Mary感到很孤独。假如你是李华,看到他们的帖子,请写一个回帖。首先做自我介绍,然后提出建议,并说一说你将如何帮助他或她。

注意事项:1. 请从下面表格的A、B两个题目中任选一个。

2. 短文必须包括表格中三个方面的内容。

3. 表格中的词汇供选用,文中不得出现网络专用语(如:不能用字母u代替单词you等)。

4. 词数不少于60。

5. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

AB

To TomTo Mary

About yourself Li Hua, Class 2, Grade 3, be born in

Beijing, know(well)?Li Hua, Class 2, Grade 3, like

meeting people, friendly…

Suggestionsbuy a map, on the Internet, watch

TV, visit…make friends, talk with,

read books, listen to…

How to help

him/her ……

Hi,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua.

16. (07海淀一模)

无论是在校内还是校外,你一定有不少美好的经历。请你把其中有意义的一天描述出来。谈谈那天的天气怎样,发生了什么事,你有什么心情、感受或体会。

注意事项:1. 请从两个题目中任选一个。

2. 请选用表格中的词汇。

3. 词数不少于60。

4. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

A good day at schoolA good day out of school

Weathercloudy, sunny, …cloudy, sunny, …

Activities

have a… class, be interested in… like…, learn…, play…, do…, help…

with…visit…, be interested in…, like…, go to…, play…, do…, help… with…, work for…

A Good Day School

? I had a good time…

17. (07海淀二模)

盼望已久的假期就要到了。假期里你通常做些什么呢?这个假期,你准备留在本地还是去外地?打算做什么?为什么?

注意事项:1. 请从两个题目中任选一个。

2. 短文必须包括表格中的内容并选用所提供的词汇。

3. 词数不少于60;

4. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。

In BeijingOut of Beijing

Whatplay…, do…, go…, visit…, study…, join…, enjoy…, …

Whywant…, like…, be interesting/ralaxing/helpful/…,

be good at…, be interested in…, …

The summer vacation is coming.

18. (07东城一模)

每个人都有自己喜欢的老师和同学,你们班将以Mr Favorite Teacher/Classmate为题,举行英语主题班会,请你写一篇英语班会的发言稿。

注意:

1. 从所给的两个题目中任选一个。

2. 短文必须包括题目要求要点,使用表格中的词语,适当发挥。

3. 词数:不少于60。

4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。

PersonMy Favorite TeacherMy Favorite Classmate

Appearancetall/short, …tall/short, …

Personalitypatient, …friendly, …

Reason

love teaching, give interesting lessons, talk with me, …hard-working,

active in class, spend(time), ?

只选一个哟!

A

My Favorite Teacher

19. (07东城二模)

现在宠物已经成为许多人生活的一部分。课外活动小组以“动物在我们身边”为题举行英语征文。请你写一篇短文,说明自己对养宠物的看法。内容包括自己是否养宠物,养宠物有哪些利弊。

注意:

1. 从所给的两个题目中任选一个。

2. 短文必须包括题目要求要点,参考使用表格中的词语,适当发挥。

3. 词数:不少于60。

4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。

TopicI Love PetsI Don’t Want Pets

Do you have pets?YesNo

Why do(not)you keep pets?close friends, lovely,?Busy, noise, ?

What are your suggestions

For people who keep pets?

只选一个呦!

A

I Love Pets

B

I Don’t Want pets

20. (07朝阳一模)

每个都应该考敬父母,尊敬老师。在日常生活中,你和长辈的关系如何?遇到问题时,你是怎样做的?写一篇短文,谈谈在这些方面,你的具体做法和想法,参加校刊英语专栏征文活动。

注意:

1. 从下面所给的题目中任选一个。

2. 短文必须包括表格内容。

3. 词数:不少于60词。

4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

We should respect(尊敬)our parents,We should respect out teachers.

look after, help, worry about, …talk to, agree with, do one’s best, …

We Should Respect Our

21. (2008上海)学校准备为我们定做校服,对于这件事,同学们意见不一,有的同学认为穿校服好,有的同学则认为穿校服不好,请根据英文提示,写一篇英文小短文。 提示词:discipline,comfortable, design, beautiful, study

要求:(1)词数80个左右,所有的提示词都要用上。

(2)列举两三个同学的观点以及自己的观点。

(3)文中不能出现真实的地点与姓名。

22.水果沙拉味道鲜美,制作简单,深受大众喜爱。

请你根据参考词汇,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,叙述制作水果沙拉的全过程。开头已给出。

参考词汇:peel剥去果皮,mix混合,stir搅拌,salad cream沙拉奶油 This is how to make a fruit salad.

参考范文:

1. 参考范文 1: An Unforgettable Class

I’ll never forget that class which was given by a foreign teacher, Mr. Black, who comes from America.

On that day, Mr. Black had a free talk with us in easy English. He spoke slowly so that we could understand him well. If something seemed difficult for us, he would say it again and again. The students who took part in the class were

active. I was glad that I could understand him well and was able to answer a few questions in English, too.

I have learned a lot from the class. I’m sure if we keep on practicing, it will be much easier for us to learn spoken English well.

参考范文 2: An Unforgettable After-Class Activity

I’ll never forget that basketball match between our class and Class One. On that day after class many students came to the playground and waited to watch the match. As soon as the match began, I made the first basket. Everyone on our team was excited and we believed we were going to win. To our surprise, our team lost this match in the end. We were very sad. Then I learned that we failed because each of us wanted to play in his own way and forgot we were a team. So we had lost many good chances.

The match has taught me an important lesson: to win needs working together.

2. 参考范文:

I did a survey of how long we play sports on weekends. Here are the results. Most of us spend one or two hours on sports. Some exercise less than one hour. Only five students spend three or four hours. However, there are two who have no time for sports.

As for me, most of my sports time is for running. Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me. I often play about three hours.

Most of the students enjoy sports every weekend. I think it’s necessary for everyone to go out to play because it’s good for our health and study.

3. The 29th Olympic Games are coming soon and we’ll welcome lots of visitors. As a student, I think it’s our duty to do something for the Games. I once taught older people English so that they could possibly help foreign visitors. Besides, I took part in some activities to learn some knowledge of the Olympics. I always picked up the litter I saw in the streets to keep our city clean. I feel happy

because I’ve done what I can for the Games. From now on, I will ask my parents to drive less and tell my classmates to go to school by bus. There’s still a lot for us to do.

Let’s try our best.

4. 参考范文:

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.

In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

5. 参考范文:

We are living a happy life. Our parents love us so much that we can have what we want. But some of our classmates don’t take good care of these things. They throw away their pens and paper. Some of them even waste food. I think it is a bad habit. As students, we should make full use of what we are given. If we don’t need something, we can give it to those who are in great need. It’s important to save the resources and it’s also our duty.

6.参考范文:

We go to school in different ways. Some of us go on foot, some go by bike and some go by bus or car. As for me, I go to school by bus every day since my home is far away. I think it’s important for us to learn to protect ourselves while we are on the way to school or on the way home. When I walk, I walk on the pavement. When I cross the street, I wait till the traffic lights are green. I usually wait in line for the bus. People usually get on the bus orderly. I think everyone must obey the traffic rules in order to keep safe. It is not only for ourselves but also for our families and friends.

7.参考范文:

I’m very excited that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing and I’m proud of my country. I often try my best to do something for it. Every Friday I teach the old people English with my classmates after school. At the same time. I also learn a lot from them. I think I should work harder at my lessons in order th help the old better, even after the Games. I’ll be always ready to help others as usual because Olympic spirits mean to give, to help and to develop together.

8. 参考范文:

I’m very glad to hear the news. I’d love to take part in the summer camp. Here are some suggestions. First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better. Next we can visit some museums and places of interest to open our eyes. Finally I hope we will have a chance to stay in foreign families. I think it’s a good way to understand the different culture between the two countries. I really want to make friends with foreign students

because we’re in the same world. At the same time, the activities can help us relax after the examinations and improve our English.

9. 参考范文:

Watching TV has become part of our life. It is useful. Yet, it can also be

harmful. If we spend too much time on it, we may have no time to study or do other important things. It can harm our eyes, too. Some students wear glasses

because they watch TV for long hours. Some TV programmes are unhealthy and some students may copy what they see on it. So, I don’t often watch TV.

10.参考范文:

Dear Aunt Lisa,

I have a problem now. I play the violin in the school band, and I really enjoy it. But I have to practise four times a week, and sometimes I don’t have time to do my homework. At first my teachers didn’t say anything because they knew I liked music very much. But last week one of my teachers warned me. He said if I kept playing in the band I wouldn’t pass the final exams. So I’m worried. Can you help me?

Yours,

Wang Li

11. 参考范文:

Our parents and teachers told us to be polite to others when we were very young. Now I am doing things as they tell me. For example, I always wait in line while doing shopping and give my seat to the old on the bus. I never forget to greet teachers when I meet them in or out of the school. And I also say the words “Thank you”“Sorry” and “You’re welcome” to others whenever necessary. In my opinion, politeness is very important to us all because it can help us only get on very well with each other, but also make the society better and

warmer, especially in the year of 2008, when the 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. So I strongly suggest that we all should be polite to each other.

12. 参考范文:

Dear Chairman,

I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am well. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the streets.

On the bus, I always give my seats to women with babies. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park in order to protect our environment because I must do what I can do to meet the 29th Olympic Games.

If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others.

I’ll be glad if I’m received. I am waiting for your answer.

Yours,

Li Lei

13.参考范文:

(1)My best friend is Jin Zimei. We’re classmates. Jin is quite tall. She is good at math. She often helps me with maths both in class and after class. When I find a maths problem too difficult and go to her for help, she always explains it carefully to me. With her help, I got a better grade in the maths test last term.

I’m very happy to have a friend like her. I think friendship is important to me.

(2)My best friend is Jin Zimei. We’re classmates. Jin is kind and very

interesting. When I’m ill and miss classes, she comes to my home to help me with the lessons. Sometimes I’m in trouble and feel sad. Then she tries to talk to me about something interesting and helps me to forget the sad story. Those are just part of the help I’ve had from her. She is the person who often thinks about others.

I’m very happy to have a friend like her. I think friendship is important to me.

14. 参考范文 1:

One important idea for the Beijing Olympics is “Green Olympics” for which the whole city has done a lot to improve the environment. So has our school.

Last month, my school formed a group of volunteers in every class. I was one of them. We cleaned up our school, watered the trees and flowers in our school garden. Now our school looks nicer. The more pleasant thing is that many students are beginning to change in behavior for the better, like stopping littering.

We’re proud of ourselves because we have done something both for the Beijing Olympics and the environment.

参考范文 2:

“Green Olympics” is a new idea for the Beijing Olympics. It tells us that the

environment and the Beijing Olympics should improve each other. We’re acting on it.

Since last month, an activity has been going on in our neighborhood. Being friendly to the environment is a favor to the Beijing Olympics. Many of us have taken part in it. Some clean up the yard. Some water the garden. Others give

away cloth shopping bags they made so that people can use less plastic ones. Now our neighborhood becomes cleaner and nicer.

Many of us take pride in doing one kind action for the environment because we know it is good for the Beijing Olympics.

参考范文 3:

“Green Olympics”gives us a new idea about the relationship between the Beijing Olympics and the environment. It helps us understand that we can help our Olympic Games by being friendly to the environment.

Now more and more students in my school are acting on this idea. Some are beginning to collect used paper and bottles for recycling. Some sweep the school

yard and some water the school garden. All this has made our school cleaner and nicer.

By doing this, we feel happy because we know most of us have done a bit for “Green Olympics”.

15. 参考范文 1:

Hi Tom,

I’m Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. I was born in Beijing. I know Beijing very well. So I think I can give you some good suggestions. Why not buy a map of Beijing or a guide book? Or try to find the information on the Internet. Also, you can watch TV programs and read China Daily. Would you like to go around Beijing with me on weekends? I’m glad to be your tour guide. Come to my class if you need my help.

Li Hua

参考范文 2:

Hi Mary,

I’m Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. Everyone says I am kind and friendly. I like meeting people and have many friends. I’d like to give you some suggestions. Try to talk with your classmates as much as possible. Soon, you will feel better.

When you are alone, you’d better do some reading or listen to music. Would you like to go to bookstores with me? We can find some interesting books and CDs. Also, we can go to parks or concerts on weekends. Let me know if you need my help.

Li Hua

16.参考范文1:

A Good Day at School

Today I had a good time, though it was cloudy. As we know, cloudy days usually make people sad, but I felt really happy today.

In my English class, Miss Chen praised me. She said I was good at speaking and my pronunciation was as good as that of native speakers. That made me excited indeed. In my opinion, English is one of the most useful subjects in and out of school. I have decided when the 29th Olympics is held in August in 2008, I will volunteer to help foreigners as a guide.

The teacher’s encouragement has impressed me a mot. I believe if I try my best to study, I’ll surely be able to do better in the future.

参考范文 2:

A Good Day out of School

That day I had a good time. It was sunny and hot, and you know sunny days always make me happy.

My friends invited me to go to the beach to have fun. There we did a lot of

things. In the morning we all went out boating far into the sea. In the

afternoon, some were playing beach volleyball joyfully, while others were

swimming in the sea. As for me, I especially enjoyed the charming sunshine. So I

lay on the beach and read my favorite novel under my umbrella. It was so relaxing.

Study is important, and so is relaxation.

17. 参考范文 1:

The summer vacation is coming. I usually spend vacations traveling. As for this vacation, I’ll stay in Beijing. I’d like to join an English summer camp to

improve my English. It’s a good place for me to practice spoken English with both native speakers and my partners. And also, we can enjoy English movies and sing songs together. Besides, I can relax myself. I hope I can not only make new friends but also get ready for further study.

参考范文 2:

The summer vacation is coming. I usually spend vacations studying. As for this vacation, I’ll go to Dalian with my family. I’ve never been there and I want to relax myself in the beautiful city. First, I will go sightseeing there. And then, I’m going out boating far into the sea. Besides, I’d like to play beach volleyball joyfully with my family and enjoy the charming shine. I hope I can get not only relaxed but also energetic for the new term.

18. 参考范文 1:

My Favorite Teacher

Miss Li is my favorite teacher. She is neither tall nor short. She is not only

patient but also helpful. Do you know why I love her so much? I love her because she loves teaching and treats us as her friends. And her class is so lively and interesting that we can enjoy ourselves in her class. Although she is busy, she always finds time talking with us. We are proud of being her students.

参考范文 2:

My Favorite Classmate

I have a good classmate called Sally. She is good looking and short. She is a hard-working girl. She is never late for school. In class she always listens carefully. She is active in class and does her homework carefully after class.

She is good at English. So she spends a lot of time helping me with my English. She is very friendly to others. Whenever you are in trouble, she always helps you. So everyone in our class likes her.

19. 参考范文 1:

I Love Pets

I’ve got a pet dog in my family. His name is Bobby. I like him very much. When I get home every day, he always waits for me at the door and often gives me a warm welcome. He is not only a pet dog but also a good doctor. A lot of people are in good health after having a pet dog at home. So if you want to keep healthy, keep a dog. My suggestion is that people should be careful when they take their dogs out.

参考范文 2:

I Don’t Want Pets

Many people around us have all kinds of pets. Some people think pets bring

people happiness and make lonely people feel better. But I’m too busy to keep pets. It takes people a lot of time to look after them. On the other hand, I am a quiet person. I can’t stand too much noise. And I don’t want it to disturb me. I don’t want pets. I think people should take good care of their pets not to make the environment dirty.

20. 参考范文 1: We Should Respect Our Parents

We should respect our parents. They look after us as well as they can and they are always there when we need them. To show my respect, I often talk to them politely, help with the housework and try to do everything by myself. Being hard-working is another way of showing my respect. I don’t want to make them worry about my lessons. So I always finish my homework on time and do my best in every subject. I usually get on well with my parents, but sometimes we can’t agree with each other. When it happens, I try to think on their side and find out whether I am wrong or not. If they are right, I’ll do as they tell me.

My parents’ love helps me to feel good about myself. I think they’re great. They are the most important persons in my life.

参考范文 2: We Should Respect Our Teachers

We should respect our teachers. They teach us not only everything they know but also the way to be a good man. To show my respect, in class I listen to them and take notes carefully; after class I talk to them politely. Being hard-working is

another way of showing my respect. So I always finish my homework on time and do my best in every subject. I usually get on well with my teachers, but sometimes we can’t agree with each other. When it happens, I try to think on the teachers’ side and find out whether I am wrong or not. If they are right, I’ll do as they tell me.

21.

Our school is planning to make school uniforms for us. Tom likes uniforms very much. He thinks uniforms can show good discipline. And it’s comfortable that we wear them for study. But Ann doesn’t like uniforms at all. She thinks they will look ugly on her. She can’t choose the clothes what she likes. I don’t like

uniforms, either. Because I am short. I like to design my own clothes, and they will make me look beautiful.

22. This is how to make a fruit salad. First, we need an apple, a pear, 20

grapes, an orange and two bananas. Then wash the apple, pear and grapes, and peel the oranges and bananas. Cut them into small pieces and put them on a plate. After that, add some salad cream, a little sugar and salt.

Mix and stir them up. Put the grapes around in the plate to make the salad look nicer.

Now the fruit salad is ready and it should be delicious.

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