高考作文（建议信范文一）

假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点些回信。

要点：（1）参加中文学习班；

（2）看中文书刊，电视；

（3）学唱英文歌

（4）交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头已给出，不计入词数。

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magzines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can als make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about china and help you learn Chinese.

Try writing to me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes, Li Hua

高考作文（建议信范文二）

假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：

问题：学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小，家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。

建议：政府应采取措施，如修天桥等。

参考词汇：穿行 thread one’s way 天桥overpass

Dear Mayor,

I am a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

Next to our school stands an elementary school, and both schools face a busy road. In rush hours, the traffic is much too heavy. What’s more, so many parents pick up their children here that the situation of the traffic become worse and worse. Now students and pupils always thread their way through masses of cars, which is too dangerous.

As far as I’m concerned, it’s high time that the government took measures to solve this problem, like building a overpass, to protect the students.

高考作文（建议信范文三）

假如你是李雷，你发现学校的校报上都是一些关于校园生活的话题，你觉得应该多加一点关于时事和学习方法的内容，这样对于学习是一个很好的方法。请你给校报编辑写一篇文章。

Dear editor,

I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think some articles about current affairs and learning methods must be better. In my opinion, current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world and sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study. I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

第二篇：20xx年湖南高考英语作文 xiugai

20xx年湖南高考英语作文

Section C（25 marks）

Directions: write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

请你下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文，

match winner loser result

内容：

1. 自己或他人的一次经历

2. 你的感受

注意：

1. 必须使用所给的4个关键词；

2. 次数不少于120词；

3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校。

20xx年湖南高考英语作文评分细则

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分数档

五档: 完全达到交际目的（perfect communication）21-25’

1. 充分具体涵盖所有的内容要点

2. 语法结构使用广泛，准确而灵活，用词丰富而地道，句际及段际衔接自 然，紧密，语义连贯

3. 极少出现小错误，如标点，单复数，大小写等。

四档：有效达到交际目的（proper communication）16-20’

1. 完全而具体地涵盖所有要点

2. 语法结构使用丰富，正确而自然，词汇使用多样而流畅，信息和观点安 排有序，分段充分，适当

3. 有少数小错误

三档：基本达标（passable communication）11-15’

1. 涵盖所有内容要点

2. 多数词句语法结构正确，使用交际词汇量，信息和观点有一定组织性， 但缺少整体延续性

3. 语法，拼写，衔接及标点错误多，导致难以理解。

二档：微略达标 （partial communication）6-10’

1. 涵盖某一要点

2. 仅有极少数语法正确，使用的词汇和表达非常有限；信息和观点缺乏组 织性

3. 语法，拼写，衔接及标点错误非常多，严重影响信息传递

一档：略微达标 （problematic communication）1-5’

1. 仅涉及某个要点的部分内容

2. 除背诵和抄写的词外，无法写出正确而完整的句子；词汇使用极其有限， 基本没有掌握构词法和拼写规则

Excellent sentences adapted by Gail

1. “You will never be a loser unless you quit trying.” when I failed an important exam, my English teacher told me that, which I can’t agree with more.

2. Memories came flooding when looking at the 4 words.

3. In my opinion, there is no definition of winner and loser. If we have tried our best when we are in trouble, we are still winners.

4. Only when a student begins to study can he know the power of knowledge; Only when a child helps her mother do housework can he know the hardship of life; Only when a person takes part in a match can he understand the most important thing in a match is not the winner or loser, but the friendship.

5. Life is like a match where there is a winner, there is a loser.

6. Don’t let any failures discourage you, for you can never tell how close we may be to victory. 蚕茧) for beautiful butterflies.

8. Wherever you are, friendship is very important for everyone. Love your friend as they love you, and you will find your world is more colorful because of friendship. 2

9. Whether you are a winner or loser, please remember it that the result of a match is not important at all. The most important is the friendship, which can provide us with real happiness.

10. It is not the result but the process of the matter that really counts. That is what I learned from a basketball match.

满分作文No.1

It is inevitable that we may face match during our life. But from where I stand, no matter what the result will be, the most important thing is to enjoy the process.

I once took part in a match held by a TV show. In order to win a prize, I practiced my singing skills everyday and my parents both spared no efforts to help me. Upon hearing the news that I didn’t win any prize after the match. I burst into tears, thinking I was a total fool. To my surprise, my Mom told me that she was so proud of me that I dared to perform on a stage alone. What she did impress me a lot: you are the winner yourself.

As far as I am concerned, maybe sometimes we can be a loser when compared to others, but as long as we put our heart into the task, we are sure that we are the winner. It is the process of the match, not the result that shapes us into stronger people.

满分作文No.2

As the College Entrance Examination was around the corner, our teachers put

forward the advice that students spare some time to have a basketball match to release stress.

With teachers and students cheering around the court, the players were, somehow, in tension. Upon getting the ball, the players were chasing each other to score for themselves. All of a sudden, one player of our class tripped over and fell down,

breaking his knee. It was such a great pain as to make him hard to get up. However, another player came and gave him a hand, encouraging him. Finally the exciting match ended up with a tie, about which all of us felt pleased. Nobody is the winner.

On a personal note, I hold the view that we should not think the winning position so important that we get it by 不择手段), or we will fall into abyss of chasing winner. Therefore, the result concerning who is the winner or loser doesn’t matterr. It was the touching help received from each other that is really of great importance.

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满分作文No.3

Generally, those who get a bad result in a match, in people’s opinion, are the

losers. However, as for me, we can be winners even if we lose the match in that there are something more significant than the result.

Last year, my best friend along with me participated in a running game. We

believed that we wouldn’t be beaten by anyone as both of us are good at running. So eager were we to become the number one that we were not as close as before. I

decided to beat him and I was sure I would make it. Unfortunately, I didn’t feel well on that day and was too sick to run. Therefore, I fell down during the match and

couldn’t stand myself. Upon seeing my terrible situation, my best friend ran back to support me and sent me to the hospital. Both of us lost the game.

But I don’t think we are losers because we found our friendship is more

important than the result. We are winners of our friendship. From this experience, I know what people should pay attention to is not the result but what they have learnt.

满分作文No. 4

Enjoy the process

Once there is a winner, there will be a loser-such is the result of almost every

match. Too often, we can’t decide the result, but it is the process that we participants can enjoy exactly.

I once took part in a speech contest, which I viewed very important. Devoted to the preparation, I watched various famous videos and spoke in front of the whole

class several times. However, I finally didn’t become the winner. But I never thought of myself as a loser, for I did put my heart into it and the result was sort of less important. Instead, the process was what I really enjoyed.

Life is like a match, if we pay too much attention to the result, we shall never enjoy the beauty of the process. So why not enjoy the process. Only in this way can we enjoy the real life.

满分作文No.5

The true winner

Last week, our school held a basketball match against another school. Near the end of the match, they only had an edge over us. When our captain got the ball, one of them pretended to be knocked into by our captain. Our captain tried to help him up and the match was over. They won. Although we lost the game, we were all happy in that we went all out.

From this match I come to the conclusion that being a winner doesn’t mean gaining while a loser doesn’t mean losing everything. What really counts is the spirit, not the result. As long as we try our best, there is no need in regretting. In reality, a true lose is even more precious than a false winner. Had it not been for that match, I couldn’t have learnt the importance of spirit.

To sum up, a true winner is to a match what water to fish. It is not the result but the process that matters. Life without spirit is like sailing without compasses, so be a true winner and you will find its importance.

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