生命是永恒不断的创造，因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力，它不断流溢，越出时间和空间的界限，它不停地追求，以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。

－－泰戈尔

雅思8分作文经典900句：议论文经典语句

2008-04-30 14:07:24 来源：昂立英语 标签：英语

1.结交朋友本身就是件有意义的事情，因为这可以使学生们更加喜欢自己的班级，而这种状况从长远角度讲肯定是有利于学习成效的。

Making friends itself is meaningful in that it makes the class a more attractive place and in

the long run, it makes for students' learning.

2.另外一方面，我们应该承认：班小、班大绝对没有老师来得关键。

On the other hand, we must acknowledge that no matter how small or big a class is, it is

simply not that important as the teacher.

3.相反，如果老师好，哪怕有一千名学生，也照样可以保证老师讲得起劲，学生听得有滋味，学习的效果也就不言自喻了。

Quite the opposite, if the teacher is good, then no matter how many students there are in one

class, say, 1,000 of them, the teacher would still be able to teach enthusiastically and the

students listen enjoyably, and the learning effect would be beyond any doubt.

4.当然，为了维护男女平等，很多科目一定要招收同等比例的男女生也没有什么问题，但关键的问题是：这样做公平吗？

Sure, it is okay to recruit the same number of male and female students just for the sake of

maintaining equality between the two sexes, but the key point is: is it fair?

5.基于以上论证，我们可以得出这样一个结论：坚持招收同比例的学生数目没有道理，因此，是不可取的作法。

From the foregoing discussion, we can come to the conclusion that accepting the same

number of male and female students in every subject does not hold water; therefore, it is

totally unadvisable.

6.老师有丰富的教学经验可以保证我们不走弯路，让我们很快弄明白我们应该明白的一切，这一点是我们自学所做不到的。

Teachers have rich experience which can help ensure that we learn more effectively and that

we can quickly understand what we should understand. This will be hard to achieve if we

learn by ourselves.

7.当然，我们不能否认，自学也是必要的。如果期望一切都靠老师来教授，那是不现实的。

Of course, we can not deny the fact that self-learning is also indispensable. It is simply

unrealistic to totally rely on our teachers for leaning everything.

8.老师跟我们在一起的时间毕竟是有限的，无论如何也不可能随时随地跟我们在一起，这就需要我们具备自主学习的能力和习惯。

After all, the time that our teachers can afford to stay with us is limited and there is no way

for them to be with us wherever and whenever we need them. Therefore, we need to possess

the ability and habit for self-study.

9.综上所述，在老师的指导下学习可以使学习本身成为一件轻松快乐的事情，但是我们也不能完全依赖老师，我们还需要投入很多时间和精力进行自学，只有这样的结合，才能保证我们能够学到知识、掌握知识。

Based on the above discussion, we see that leaning under the guidance of teachers can make

the learning process itself easier and more enjoyable. However, we should never depend

entirely on our teachers. We also need to invest a lot of time and effort into self-study and

only by doing so can we be sure to really learn and gain knowledge.

10.人们缓解压力的方式确实千差万别：有人痛哭，有人大笑，有人狂饮，有人狂舞，凡此种种，不一而足。可我感到对自己来讲最有效的方式是猛睡觉和散长步。

The way or ways that people relieve their stress are very much different: some cry, some

laugh, some overdrink themselves and some dance wildly, so on and so forth, to name just a

few. However, the two most effective ways that work on me are sleeping in and taking long walks.

11.压力大时，我们往往会感到烦躁、容易上火，这只会加重我们的压力感。一有机会，猛睡一场，我们的神经就会得到相应的调整，从而有助于克服紧疲劳。

While under great pressure, we tend to be impatient and easily lose our temper which could

only aggravate our feeling of pressure. Sleeping in once there is a chance can help adjust our

nerves and this is conducive to getting over nervousness and tiredness.

12.不管我们是谁，不管我们生活在哪里，也不管我们的语言或文化是什么样子的，我们与所有的其他人都有着很多共同的地方。

No matter who we are or where we live, no matter what our language or our culture is, we

have many things in common with all other human beings.

13.我们还都进行思考，由于思考，我们都知道这个物质世界实实在在地存在着，不管我们有没有能力去感知它。

We can also all think and as a result of thinking, we all know that the physical world exists

apart from our ability to sense it.

14.一位初次来到中国的欧洲人也许会认为这里的每个人看上去都一摸一样，因为他所到之处看到的都是黑头发黑眼睛的人们。

A European coming to China for the first time may think that everyone looks alike because

he sees people with black hair and dark eyes everywhere.

15.我们的感知以及独立于我们的肉体而存在的这个世界都是与我们的文化毫无关系的客观现实，然而，我们又是通过我们的感知去解释或破译我们所接收到的信息的，而这个解释或破译的过程是受文化影响的。

Our senses and the world beyond our bodies are physical realities that have nothing to do

with culture, yet we interpret the information we receive from our senses and this process of

interpretation is molded by culture.

16.我希望通过这些例子能够让你明白我们对世界的感知是受到我们自身文化的影响的。

I hope these examples convince you that how we experience the world through our senses is

molded by our home culture.

17.为什么会有如此多的美国人不相信他们从报纸上读到的东西呢？

Why do so many Americans distrust what they read in their newspapers?

18.说来可悲，这个调查项目的结果大多是些低级的发现：事实性的错误、拼写错误、语法错误以及很多令人挠头的困惑：读者究竟想要什么呢？

Sad to say, this project has turned out to be mostly low-level findings about factual errors and

spelling and grammar mistakes, combined with lots of head-scratching puzzlement about

what in the world those readers really want.

19.只要体育是作为一项竞争性的赛事而不是处于对比赛的热爱来从事，那么此类事件就会继续。

Incidents of this kind will continue as long as sport is played competitively rather than for the

love of the game.

20.人因为性格不同、能力不同等方方面面的原因从而适合做队员或是领导，所以，不能一概而论地讲做队员比做领导好，要根据自己的情况而定。

Due to different personalities and abilities, some people are more suitable to be members or

leaders rather than the other way round, so it is incorrect to claim that being a member is

better than being a leader of the group. This must proceed from one's own actual situations.

21.当然，人的个性和能力是可以培养的，并非一成不变的。

Sure, people's personalities and abilities can be remolded and cultivated and will not just

remain to be as it is.

22.基于以上论证，我们说，选择做领导或是做普通一员需根据自己的实际情况和个人的偏好去断定，简单地认为做普通一员比做领导者好的观点是不对的。

From the above discussion, we can see that whether to be a member or a leader of a group

should be based on one's actual conditions and personal preferences, so the view that being a

member of a group is always better than being a leader can not really hold water.

23.大学教育的目的究竟应该是为了保证学生将来能找份好工作呢，还是为了要切实培养学生的能力呢？

Should the goal of college education be to ensure that the students find a good job or should

it aim at cultivating the students' overall abilities?

24.我认为大学教育的目的首先应该是确保学生毕业后能够找到一份称心如意的工作。 I hold that the goal of college education should primarily be to help students find a

satisfactory job upon graduation.

25.我始终认为大学教育的意义是培养学生的综合能力，包括学习能力、交流沟通能力和管理组织能力。

I always argue that the significance of college education is that it cultivates the students'

overall abilities, including the ability for learning, for communication and for management

and organization.

第二篇：雅思议论文写作

雅思议论文中的“三明治”结构

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写雅思大作文就如同在建筑一座大楼一般。首先是进行大楼结构设计，然后再进行实际的建筑工程，最后经过装修而成为耐用而漂亮的大楼。良好的结构对于 大楼的实用以及美观有着非常重要的作用。同样道理，良好的作文结构也将提高文章的质量和成绩。从一定意义上来说，优秀的作文结构可以使内容条理清晰易懂， 还可以弥补语言表达上的不足。

议论文的整体结构

雅思专家认为，一篇好的议论文一般由三个部分构成，分别是导语段（Introduction），主体段落（Body）与总结段 （Conclusion）。这个结构很像三明治，其中导语段与总结段就像最上层和最下层的面包，而主体段落为论证段，相对较为重要，就像三明治中间的肉和 菜。其结构如下图所示：

通常情况下按照实际的需要，中间的主体部分（Body）又可以分成二到四个段落，其结构图分别如下：

(注：*段落视需要而增加)

由于导语段中最重要部分是中心句（Thesis statement），它是全文的立足点，决定文章的发展方向，覆盖全文；段落主题句（Topic sentence）是每一段的重点，覆盖各自所在的段落。因此，我们可以通过思考后得出议论文的中心句（Thesis statement）以及各主体段落主题句（Topic sentence）。此外，为求达到全文的统一性(Unity)和连贯性(Coherence), 考生们应当合理地安排中心句和各段的主题句的关系，使得中心句覆盖全文，使得各段的主题句很好地支持着中心句。如果中心句没有覆盖主题句，说明正文偏题了。如果中心句超过主题句，刚说明内容有遗漏，或者说内容不够全面。中心句各段的主题句的关系情况可由下面三张图表示：

其中，第一张图显示了正文内容超过了中心句内容；第二张图则相反；第三张图中正文内容与中心句题才是相吻合的。（*号表示在双边型结构的文章中没有主体段的第三段。）

接下来我们通过实例来了解中心句, 主题句与总结段的布置。比如:

Topic1: Is it not necessary to learn the skill of cooking due to the success of convenience food and read-made meals?

Thesis statement: But in my opinion, cooking is a very important ability we should not lose.

Topic sentence 1: First of all, the fact is that ready-made meals are not usually that good for us.
Topic sentence 2: Moreover, it is extremely important for children to learn how to cook, so that they will be fully independent when they grow up.
Topic sentence 3: Speaking personally, I have always enjoyed experimenting in the kitchen, by cooking slightly unconventional meals.

Conclusion: In conclusion, although some use of convenience food is natural, no one should rely on it exclusively at the expense of home-cooked food. Not only is this unhealthy but it is also threatening important skills with extinction.

Topic 2: Who should be responsible for our old people?

Thesis statement: In my essay I would like to note four different models.

Topic sentence 1: Firstly, the company can be responsible for their retired employees.
Topic sentence 2: A second solution is that the government has to have the responsibility for the old people's care.
Topic sentence 3: Another way of solving this problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual.
Topic sentence 4: A last solution is to go back to the old model of the big family who cares for all their members.

Conclusion: To sum up I have to admit that I can't find a really good solution for this problem. All models have advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we will have to go on thinking.

Topic3: Should students in high school study music as a compulsory school subject?

Thesis statement: While some think the study of music in high school is a waste of valuable school time, musical training and study is an important part of educational development.

Topic sentence 1: It is true that when it comes to the study and application of music, not everyone is suited.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, it is quite well-known that music can play an important part in the development of the human brain.

Conclusion: While not every student may be musically inclined, the study of music is a valuable inclusion in any student's course of study. In addition to being excellent for mental growth and development, students of music learn discipline, persistence and patience. Music should be a compulsory part of a high school student's education.

议论文的段落结构

与议论文的整体结构布置相类似，在段落的写作中我们也用"三明治"结构来进行写作，即把段落分为主题句(Topic Sentence)，支持部分(Supporting Sentences)和结尾句部分(Concluding Sentences)。（注意：并不是每个段落都一定要有结尾句，重要地是要让这个段落自然地结束，不能给读者留下话还没有说完的感觉。）段落结构如下图如示：

                PARAGRAPH

接下来我们通过实例来了解主题句，支持句与总结句的布置。比如：

1. Topic Sentence: First of all, the fact is that ready-made meals are not usually that good for us.

Supporting Sentences: They contain high levels of salt and sugar, not to mention harmful preservatives and artificial colorants.

Concluding Sentence: Therefore, a diet that is exclusively made up of such food is bound to be unhealthy.

2. Topic sentence: Teenagers find many ways to drive their parents crazy.

Supporting Sentence 1: First, they may dye their hair purple or they may shave their heads bald. They may also shred their new and expensive jeans and sit hours after hours in front of computers playing games or chatting with someone they never see.

Supporting Sentence 2: In addition, they spend hours windowing-shopping and on the phone. They have time to watch TV, but they do not have time to do their homework.

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Supporting Sentence 3: Also, they are always too busy to clean their rooms, but they are never too busy to hang around in the streets.

Concluding Sentence: It is hard to be a teenager, but it is even harder to be parent of one.

3. Topic Sentence: In the second place, corporal punishment is by no means a desirable way of education a child.

Supporting Sentence 1: Numerous studies have shown that it does far more harm than good to children in their mental as well as physical development.

Supporting Sentence 2: For example, corporal punishment can give a child a sense of being treated unfairly, making him rebellious.

Concluding Sentence: This will be detrimental to the molding of the child's character, and therefore should be avoided.

通过以上例子，我们可以清楚地把握雅思议论文结构（三明治结构），并可以通过练习一些雅思作文题目加以模仿，使得所写的文章结构良好，内容清晰、易 读。良好的结构，清晰易读的内容也是好作文的一些特点。另外，朗阁雅思专家建议考生在详细地学会如何发展段落以及组织整篇文章之后，可以把更多的时间放在 对一系列常考写作话题"脑力震荡"上，即尽量地准备更多话题的相关地ideas来组织论据