Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题

2)分析导致该问题的原因

3)大学生应该如何应对该问题

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。

高分范文

Employment Pressure Facing College Students

[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?

[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities,

[4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.

[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation.

[3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.

【亮点点评】

[1]过去和现在进行对比。

[2]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[4]“大学生供过于求”。

[5]“倾向，趋于”。

[6]“面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。

[7]“用心学习”。

[8]“积累相关的实际经验”。

[9]“更加关注”。

佳句临摹

1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation. 临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。

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2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary

临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。

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【KEY】

1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.

2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree. 09年12月英语六级作文预测及范文：大学生就业难问题

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College students’ job hunting

范文一：

In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job. It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent,

well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?

There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs. So

companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.

Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They should be down-to–earth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.

范文二：

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find

satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present. In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of

graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation.

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing

recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy.

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their

competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society. Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job

expectations at a suitable level. Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future.

怎样保持健康-How to Keep Fit

A healthy body is very important to every one of us. When you are sick, you feel painful all over your body, have no energy to work; and the only thing you want to do is lying on the bed.

When you are healthy, you can eat well, sleep well, sing and jump happily, do all the things you like to enjoy life.

The methods to keep us fit vary. In the morning, you can get up early, go

outdoors, breathe the fresh air, and do physical exercises. Running and swimming are extremely helpful to keep one fit. If you are a busy person and have no special time allocated to do these things, there are still some ways useful for to keep fit. The easiest way is to walk to your office instead of riding a bike or taking

a bus.

You also have to take a routine physical check – up. Your doctor will know the condition of your body most clearly, and he will give you the most valuable advice to keep fit. You should always try to make yourself happy. If you feel happy, you can eat well, sleep well, and your body is sure to be in an excellent condition. Health is the most valuable possession a person expects in his life. Try every means to keep fit is my advice to the people who want to live a happy life in this beautiful world

第二篇：给大家一篇健康英语作文

给大家一篇健康英语作文

In the modern world, mental health has become a matter of great concern. Firstly, let’s look at the pictures above. There are four pictures, which give us some advice about how to be in good mental health. The first picture tells us that happiness depends not on what you have, but on what you can give. The second one shows that you cannot decide what the weather is like, but you can decide what mood you are in. The third one shows that you should examine your own words and deeds before correcting the others. The fourth one shows you should not be always upset and should say to yourself everyday, ” I’m really good.”

These pictures indicate that we should try to be in good mental health. Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that people go to have some psychological consultations. This is because people in the modern world are facing great pressure from work and life. Being depressed for a long time, some problems will come out in people’s mental health. These problems will do great harm. They may cause some health problems and affect our daily life and work. To be a healthy person, mental health seems to be more important.

To become a real healthy modern man, we should take the advice of the pictures. Besides, we should remember some important points. Firstly, we should be open with people. Talk with your family and your friends when you meet some difficulties. Secondly, we should be sympathetic. Since we are a part of a society, we should be concerned with it. Thirdly, we should spend some time in reading, listening to the music and learning to lessen our pressure. In this way, we can become a healthy modern man, ready to take on any challenges.