历年作文题（本科）

（00.4）五，作文（40分）

以《勿以善小而不为》为题写一篇议论文，不少于600字，不超过1000字。

（00.10）五、作文（40分）

以《起点与终点》为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章，除诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（01.4）五、作文(30分)

以《感动》为题，写一篇600-1000字的文章。不得写成诗歌，其他文体不限。

（01.10）五、作文（40分）

以《我与书》为题，写一篇不少于600字、有真情实感的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（02.4）五、作文(30分)

41.以《真诚》为题，写一篇不少于600字，有真情实感的文章，除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（02.10）五、作文（30分）

41.以《期盼》为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（03.4）五、作文（30分）

41．以《心灵关爱》为题，写一篇不少于600字、有真情实感的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（03.10）五、作文(30分)

41.以《桥》为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限

（04.4）五、作文题（30分）

41．以《思念》为题，写一篇不少于600字，有真情实感的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（04.10）五、作文(30分)

41.清代诗人袁枚曾经说过：“蚕食桑而吐者丝，非桑也。”请以《“食桑吐丝”的启发》为题

写一篇不少于600字的文章。

（05.4）五、作文题（30分）

41.请以《期待》为题，写一篇不少于800字的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（05.10）五、作文（ 30 分）

41. 庄子《秋水》中的河伯，“以天下之美为尽在己”，因而“欣然自喜”，当看到“不见水端”的大海之后，才望洋兴叹道：“闻道百，以为莫己若者，我之谓也。”

请以《眼界》为题，写一篇不少于 800 字的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（06.4）五、作文（30分）

41.以《倾听》为题，写一篇不少于800字的作文。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

（06.10）五、作文（30分）

41．请以《付出与收获》为题，写一篇不少于800字的文章。除不得写成诗歌外，其他文体不限。

以下是过去《大学语文（专）》的作文题

（00.4）五、作文题（40分）

孔子说：“学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。”（罔：无，无所得。殆：疑惑。）请以《学与思》为题，写一篇议论文，不少于600字，不超过800字。

（00.10）五、作文题（40分）

以《开卷有益》为题，写一篇议论文，不少于600字，不超过800字。

（01.4）五、作文(30分)

劳动模范、铁人王进喜说过，油井滑压力就喷不出原油，人没有压力就干不好工作。根据以上材料，自拟题目，写一篇议论文，不少于600字，不超过800字。

（01.10）五、作文 (30分)

请以《 <我与地坛> 读后》为题，写一篇不少于600字的读后感。

（02.4）五、作文题（30分）

以《小议“异想天开”》为题写一篇不少于600字的议论文。

（02.10）五、作文(30分)

古语云：“千里之堤，溃于一穴”。据此，请自拟题目，写一篇不少于600字的议论文。

（03.4）五、作文(30分)

蒲公英老了，小蒲公英问：“留下什么遗产?”老蒲公英默默地在每个孩子头上戴上了一把远飞的伞。根据以上材料，自拟题目，写一篇不少于600字的议论文。

（03.10）五、作文(30分)

第24届奥运会金牌得主，我国著名女子跳水运动员高敏在回答记者“你的对手是谁”的提问时说：“是我自己，我首先要战胜自己。”以《战胜自己》为题，写一篇不少于700字的议论文。

（04.4）五、作文(30分)

以《挫折》为题，写一篇不少于700字的记叙文或议论文。

（04.10）五、作文(30分)

以《生命的价值》为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章。

（05.4）五、作文（30分）

以《路就在脚下》为题，写一篇不少于700字的文章。

(05.10)五、作文（30分）

以《关于钥匙的联想》为题写一篇不少于700字的议论文。

(06.4) 五、作文（30分）

有人说：“世界并不完美，人生当有不足。留些遗憾，可使人清醒，催人进取，反是好事。”根据以上材料，自拟题目，除诗歌外，文体不限，写一篇不少于700字的文章。

(06.10) 五、作文（30分）

以《乡情》为题，写一篇不少于700字的记叙文。

第二篇：历年四级作文题目

大学英语四级考前辅导—作文部分 一

一、历年英语四级考试作文试题汇总

11987.09 Women in the Modern World ○

21988.06 An Early Morning Walk ○

31989.01 The Tape Recorder ○

41990.01 What Would Happen If There Were No Power ○

○51990.06

○61991.01

○71991.06

○81992.01

○91992.06

○101993.01

○111993.06

○121994.01

○131994.06

○141995.01

○151995.06

○161996.01

○171996.06

○181997.01

○191997.06

○201998.01

○211998.06

Make Our Cities Greener Bicycle — An Important Means of Transport in China Changes in People?s Diet Is Failure a Bad Thing? How I Overcome My Difficulties in Learning English Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport My Most Favorite Program The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller My Ideal Job Can Money Buy Happiness? Advantage of Job Interview The Two-day Weekend Global Shortage of Fresh Water Practice Makes Perfect Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus Harmfulness of Fake Commodities Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1

221999.01 Don?t Hesitate to Say “No” ○231999.06 Reading Selectively or Extensively? ○242000.01 How I Finance My College Education ○252000.06 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? ○262001.01 How to Succeed in a Job Interview? ○○272001.06 ○282002.01 ○292002.06 ○302002.12 ○312003.06 ○322003.09 ○332004.01 ○342004.06 ○352005.01 ○362005.06 ○372005.12 ○382006.06 ○392006.06 ○402006.12 ○412007.06 ○422007.12 ○432008.06 ○442008.12

A Letter to a Schoolmate (Who Is Going to Visit You) A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus Student Use of Computers It Pays to Be Honest An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured) A Letter in Reply to a Friend (?s inquiry about applying admission to your school) A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction A Campaign Speech Teacher?s Day Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? Volunteers Needed On Students Selecting Lecturers On the Spring Festival Gala Welcome to Our Club What Electives to Choose Recreational Activities Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 2

452009.06 Free Admission to Museums ○

二、历年英语四级考试作文试题分类分析

根据教育部颁布的《大学英语课程教学要求》和《大学英语四级考试大纲（2006版）》，大学英语四级考试作文部分的命题形式主要有以下几种：段首句作文、提纲作文、关键词作文、命题作文、情景作文、图表作文、应用文作文等。

三、英语四级写作命题趋势分析

20xx年6月的作文题目是要求学生以导游的身份写一篇演讲稿，不仅要包含表示欢迎的话语，对行程安排进行说明，而且还要阐述如此安排的理由。

20xx年1月的作文题目是要求考生以参选者的身份写一篇竞选演说的讲稿，不仅要说明自己所具备的条件，而且还得表明如果当选学生会主席将准备为大家做些什么事情。

20xx年6月的作文题目是教师节。要求考生除表达节日问候外，还要从某件小事来回忆老师的谆谆教诲和奉献精神等。

20xx年12月的作文题目是校园文化旅游。要求考生就校园是否应对游客开放这一问题阐述自己的看法。

20xx年6月新旧四级考试并行。20xx年6月17日的作文题目要求考生拟定一则招募志愿者的海报，其中必须包括此次活动的目的、安排以及报名条件等。20xx年6月24日新四级考试的作文是传统的议论文形式，讨论大学生选择任课老师的问题。

20xx年12月的作文也是传统的议论文形式，探讨对春节联欢晚会所持的不同观点。 20xx年6月的作文题目是一则欢迎同学加入某俱乐部的海报。

20xx年12月的作文题目又是传统的议论文形式，要求考生就大学选修课的选择问题谈谈自己的看法。

20xx年6月的作文题目还是传统的议论文形式。要求考生就娱乐活动的多样性及其利与弊，谈谈作为大学生的你的看法。

20xx年12月的作文题目依然是传统的议论文形式。要求考生就一次性塑料袋问题，通过描写现象阐述问题，进而说明意义，发表评论。每一个大学生都有使用一次性塑料袋的经历，而20xx年6月1日我国刚实行“限塑令”。

20xx年6月的作文题目还是传统的议论文形式，考查社会热点问题。要求考生对博物馆免费对外开放的问题分析原因，阐明自己的看法。

大学英语四级作文评分标准及评卷实例

1、大学英语四级考试大纲

根据20xx年夏颁布的《大学英语课程教学要求（试行）》修订的《大学英语四级考试大纲（2006版）》对写作部分做了如下规定：考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。写作部分要求思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。所占分值比例为15%，考试时间30分钟。

2、评分标准

a. 本题满分为15分。

b. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

c. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分），若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。

d. 评分标准：

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2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分—基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中

有一些是严重错误。

11分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

[注： 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分]

2. 规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。

3. 如果扣为0分，要慎重处理。]

f. 为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得

总结评判作文

四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

写的过程当中以及写完之后的修改要注意一下几点：（内容方面尽量不要修改）

1、主谓一致

3、单词拼写

4、名词单复数

5、动词时态

6、字母大小写以及标点

实例一

题目：Bicycles ― An Important Means of Transport in China

提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较

（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:2

As every body know, China a big developing country. So, the living standard of people not very high at present people's income is not enough for they to buy cars motorcycles. And bike is easy to ride. Bicycle is cheaper be made. And I think bicycle the useful tool of transport in China now. So, it is quite porpular and wildly used in China's cities and country sides than the personal transportation—tool.

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Bike is a kind of clean tools of transport. It not use gas and other energers. For this reason is not creat polution. But in fact in any way Bicycle is not advanced than car. If it is raining, the rider will suffer from wet, on the other hand, bike can not carry much goods.

According to the our country's developing rate, I firmly believe that Bicycle will replaced by car or motorcycle in that nearly future. But undoubtfully it continue the important means of transport in China for a long time.

Score:5

Perhaps the amount of bicycle in China is the largest in the world. Why was it so widely used in China? I thought the answer was: the population in China is too large and the price of bicycle is much cheaper. The third answer is that the bicycle is easier in using than other transportations.

Comparing with the car, the bicycle is cheaper and it is easier in using than the car, but its speed is lower than that of the car.

The bicycle will be remained for a long time in China but in the end it will be disappeared with the improval of people's living level.

Score: 8

Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the

economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.

The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn?t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn?t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn?t need any oil, and it can?t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.

In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.

Score: 11

There millions of bicycles in today?s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people?s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider?s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.

Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.

I think the population of China?s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it?s quality will be improved.

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Score: 14

Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.

Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover, they often cause traffic jams and accidents.

In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.

回顾历年四级作文名师改卷感悟及针对建议

1. 大家拿到作文题目之后，先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。这一点是非常关键的。因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。如果没有一个很清楚的结构，一定会失去一定的分数。四级作文一般有下面三种结构：说明文，议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的，利弊类型的，原因结果类型的，解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。应用文写作主要包括演讲词，求职求学信，邀请信，感谢信和投诉信等。所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构，这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题，也不会因为写跑题而失分。

2. 开始写作文时一定要段落清楚，有明显的开头，主体和结论部分。也就是大家要学会分段落，不要象记流水帐一样，一段到底，这样就会给老师留下很坏的印象。同时在文章写作过程中，一定要学会使用一些句子之间以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词，这样的话可以使文章很自然，流畅。比如在写文章主体的时候可以用首先、其次、再次这样的连接词，或者一方面、另一方面、等这样的词。这些都是很容易引起老师的注意，可以得分的地方。

3. 写文章时候尽量多用一些四级词汇，这样也可以提高老师的印象。但不是说你用的词很多，而写出的句子结构，语法错误太多。这样也会很糟糕的。因此大家一定要注意，如果自己词汇不怎么多的时候，你不要用自己不明确和不会拼写的词，还有一定要确保句子的正确性，尽量避免语法结构的错误。即使你使用的简单句，但是写的很清楚，没任何错误，也可以得到不错的分数。

4. 注意文章的长度安排，短的作文一定是不可以的，也就是字数要达到要求。但是长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能得到好的分数。所以大家一定要注意，写的时候要长度适中，确保写出的句子错误很少，即使观点只是很一般，没什么新的地方。也能得到相对好的分数。

5. 卷面一定要整洁，字一定要写的漂亮，这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的 ，所以大家也要注意平时handwriting的练习。

根据写作题型针对性辅导和训练

1. 对比观点选择型

2. 社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

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I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为??； 2.另外一些人认为??； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

99年6月真题

Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3. 我的想法

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范文. Travelling

People who like travelling have their reasons. They maintain that travelling can help them

expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have.

Those who dislike travelling have their reasons. They would argue that travelling means a

considerable amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and accommodation require

money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.

In practice, travelling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you

might as well do some travelling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.

专题一、文章开头常用的语句

1. When asked about

When it comes to ..., most/many people believe that ..., but other people

Faced with? ? ?

as… consider …differently

? ? ?

2. When asked about

When it comes to ..., people's opinions differ. Some believe that ...,

while others claim that…

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role

3. There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of .... Some people ? ? ? ? ?

claim that ..., while others believe that ....

issue

4. There is a general discussion today about the problem of .... Those who criticize ... argue that .... They believe that .... But people who advocate ..., on the other hand, argue that ....

5. Most people are of the opinion that .... But in spite of ..., I personally believe that ....

6. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that ....

7. Now, it is generally acknowledged that ..., they believe .... But I doubt whether ....

.专题二、过渡性词语

1．表示举例 (exemplification): for example, for instance, as an example, as an illustration, such

as

2．表示比较 (comparison): similarly, likewise, in the same way, equally important,

in common

3． 表示对照 (contrast): on the contrary, on the other hand, otherwise, unlike, in contrast,

whereas, conversely, by contrast

4．表示让步 (concession): although, nevertheless, however, but, admittedly, even though,

in spite of

5．表示原因 (cause): because, because of, as, since, for, owing to, due to, on account of,

as a result of ...

6．表示结果 (result): thus, so, consequently, hence, therefore, accordingly, as a result,

as a consequence, on that account

7．表示强调 (emphasis): chiefly, especially, indeed, in fact, certainly, particularly, actually

8．表示列举 (enumeration): first, second, in the first place, first of all, to begin with, in the second

place, furthermore, moreover, for one thing, for another

9．表示总结 (summary): in conclusion, in short, in brief, in summary, on the whole,

to sum up, to conclude

课堂练习 Private Cars写成3段

首段写法：

With the development of / With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people can own private cars.

Today, cars are entering ordinary families.

The growing number of people can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)

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主体段 支持观点的主题句： there are some advantages of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely. 支持分论点： ① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation. ② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ ③ a private car can show a person's 否定观点的主题句：

① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owning a private ② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem ③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.

⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.

⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......

⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced. ⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.

否定的分论点：

① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space. ② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.

③ 污染环境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO

第三段（总结段）的写法：

① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.

② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.

③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be eliminated.

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④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private

cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.

选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.）

选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph 1:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；

（2）也可以简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

Paragraph 2:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）；

（2）举例加以论证。

Paragraph 3:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点）。

范文17. My View on Fate

There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life. There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.”In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can?t realize how much inner strength and ability they have. Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was a baby, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune, she showed great courage and strong spirit in fighting against fate and made achievements for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.

In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born to be the builder of his own fate. We can have good fortune only if we work hard. We should bear it in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.” We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.

II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构

Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）；

(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点（或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法

specific）。

Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象或问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句；

(2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）；

(3) 本段总结（可以省略）。

Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。

四级作文试题20xx年1月

Directions:

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For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I

Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多多种途径解决。

2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。

How I Finance My College Education

第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点： for college students are

【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance college education has become a matter of concern.

第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱

第二段主题句：There are many ways to support college education financially./ Ways to support 第二段分写：In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.

In the second placeespeciallyWhat’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.

第三段：我所赞同的方法（阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法）。

prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.

For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.

For anotherIn addition, I believe I can huntTherefore /So /Hence, I choose to apply for/ ask for a bank loan.

真题演练： It Pays to be Honest（20xx年1月）

It is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on. I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others and the whole society.

The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, only honest people can be truly

respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time. Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if 12

dealers are honest, and thus dealers can win over more customers. Thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable. A case in point is that Singapore, a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity, has a comparatively low criminal rate.

It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals. There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty. In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.

课堂练习：

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Celebrities as the products’ spokesmen？You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 明星代言现象很普遍。

2. 明星代言广告存在一些问题。

3. 我的看法。

Celebrities as the products’ spokesmen

In the contemporary society, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokesmen or representatives for a wide variety of products. Celebrities’ advertisements can be easily found on the Internet, televisions, newspapers, magazines and even on the walls of some buildings.

There are, however, some problems for celebrities and the consumers. To begin with, before representing, a star may know nothing about the product. Thus, consumers may be misled. Even worse, for the sake of money, some stars advertise for items with low quality, even for fake commodities. In the case of Sanlu, the public image of stars involved was spoiled. Last but not least, the high income of advertising does not deserve their labor, which widens the gap between the poor and the rich.

From my point of view, it is high time that measures were taken to eliminate the demerits. Firstly, laws should be worked out to regulate celebrities’ advertising. Secondly, stars should be required to tell the truth to the public. Only by doing so can stars be trusted by their fans and can consumers benefit.(183)

使文章富有表现力的手段：

1、使用有难度的词汇；

2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；

3、使用被动语态；

4、使用倒装句；(not only... but also...；only...)

5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。

四级作文练习

绿化我们的城市

第一段：

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近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们做出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。

普通版

Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities. We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees. But, it is important to realize to make our cities green.

润色版

In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experiencedAlthough remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.

绿化我们的城市（续）

第二段： 绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。

普通版

There are many advantages in making cities greener. First, it makes our air clean. Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere

through absorption. Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities. With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature. Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber. And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.

润色版

What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner. Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by

producing a lot of oxygen. This will improve the quality of the urban environment. Second, our cities will look more beautiful. Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers. What an attractive garden it is! What?s more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.

第三段：

绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。

普通版

Making cities greener requires people?s efforts all over the country. And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business.

润色版

Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness; it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.

(Making cities greener requires the whole nation?s efforts. And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.)

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