20##年中考英语书面表达专题《写人类记叙文》
【写法指导】
◇【题型设置与意图】
写人的记叙文，是以人物为主要叙述对象，通过对人物年龄、身份、籍贯、外貌、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面的描述来达到对所描述的对象进行初步了解的目的。根据不同的目的，记人方式可以分为直接记人和间接记人。直接记人主要是对人物进行肖像描写和性格描写，准确而生动地勾画出人物的相貌特征和性格特点。间接记人是指通过描述事件、行为、对话或他人叙述等方式描写人物，有时也叫做侧面描写。由于初中生英语单词量和写作水平的限制，中考试题中，主要以直接记人的写作为主，难度较小。题型旨在考查学生对人物描写的陈述句型的掌握和运用，同时考查学生对一般现在时态，特别是主语是第三人称单数时主谓一致的正确表达。
◇【写作角度与注意事项】
写作时要从直接写人的角度入笔，侧重对人物情况的介绍。最好以开门见山的方式直接入题，不可拖泥带水，无病呻吟。内容要涵盖提示词中的所有要点，不可缺漏，可适当发挥，但不可太多或不着边际。另外，这类题目中对外貌、兴趣爱好、特长等方面的提示通常会有多个要点，在写作时要注意不要多个要点的表述都用相同的句式，使得文章呆板，要注意句式的变化。如描写外貌时可以将He／She is．．．，He／She has…，He／She is of．．．，His／Her．．．is．．．等句型交替使用。在对兴趣爱好、特长等进行描述时，可用He／She likes．．．，He／She is interested in．．．，He／She shows great interest in．．．，His／Her favorite．．．is…，He／She is good at．．．，He／She does well in．．．，He／She does．．．well等不同句型进行表达。根据题目的要求选择第一人称或第三人称进行写作。(自我介绍类的题目用第一人称，介绍他人的题目用第三人称)
写 作 演 示
◇【真题再现】
(2014·黄冈)假设你叫王伟，你想加人英语沙龙俱乐部，现在请在俱乐部成员面前作一下自我介绍，词数80左右。
【写作思路】
1．中心人称：第一人称
2．主体时态：一般现在时态
3．要点梳理：姓名、班级、性格、兴趣和爱好、特长与成绩(侧重于英语相关方面)；参加英语俱乐部的原因
【语句构建】
引出人物→I will introduce myself to you．
介绍人物→I am．．．(tall，strong，slim，smart)；My favorite color／sport is．．．；I like．．．
典型事迹→I often…；One day，I…
希望与祝愿→I hope that．．．
【写作模板】
问候，打招呼：Hello，everyone! How is everything going?
自我介绍：My name is Ma Hua．／I＇m Tom．
外貌及性格：I have a round face／two big eyes／long hair．I am outgoing／shy．
兴趣爱好、特长：I like sports and I am good at playing basketball．
经历：I traveled to England last year．I had a very good time there and learnt a lot．
愿望：I hope that I can make friends with you and I believe we can get on well with each other．
【范文展示】
Hello，everyone! How is everything going? I＇d like to introduce myself to you．
My name is Wang Wei．I＇m in Class 5，Grade 3．I'm very brave，outgoing and easy-going．
I like traveling a lot．My favorite sport is basketball and I am very good at it．I enjoy reading English novels as well．In 2011，I won the first prize in the school English
competition．
I went to England to study last year．I think my spoken English is good．And I’d like to be with you in the English Club．We can learn from each other．I really want to make friends with you!
【名师点评】
这是一篇自我介绍的短文。范文审题明确，重点突出，由于是在俱乐部成员面前作自我介绍，所以没有过多的外貌描写，而侧重于性格、兴趣爱好、特长等内在特征的介绍。语言简练，思路清晰，句式灵活多样，布局合理。
◇【真题再现】
(2013·聊城)在父亲节(6月16日)来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My father”为题的英语作文，介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲"的评价。
要求：1．词数：80左右。
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
My father
【写作思路】
1．中心人称：第三人称
2．主体时态：一般现在时态
3．要点梳理：年龄、外貌、职业、性格、爱好
【语句构建】
引出人物→Do you know．．．I’d like to introduce．．．
介绍人物→He is…(tall，strong，slim，smart)；His favorite color／sport is．．．；He likes．．．
典型事迹→He often．．．；One day，．．．
希望与祝愿→I hope that．．．
【写作模板】
引出人物：I would like to introduce my father to you．
我和爸爸的关系：I love my father and he loves me，too．We are like good friends．
【范文展示】
My father
My father is a 40-year-old math teacher．He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes．He always works hard．His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved by his students．
My father is an honest and kind man．He often helps other children and me with our math．
My father＇s hobby is playing ping-pong．We often play ping-pong together on weekends．
My father is not only a good father but also a good friend．I have learnt a lot from him．I love my father very much．
【名师点评】
这是一篇介绍他人的短文。范文融合了提示中的要点，运用了较多的新颖句式，既保证了对父亲年龄、外貌、性格、职业及爱好的介绍，又避免了短文的枯燥、呆板，同时还打破了提示要点的原有顺序，体现了作者较高的语言功底。
【实战演练】
(一)
请根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文。
施光南是一位伟大的作曲家，1940年出生于重庆，1964年毕业于天津音乐学院。在20多年的音乐生涯中，他创作了100多部作品，如《在希望的田野上》，《周总理，你在哪里》等。无论青年人还是老年人都喜欢他的歌曲，他被称为“时代歌手”和“人民音乐家”。不幸的是，施光南先生于1990年5月2日因病逝世。
参考词汇：Conservatory of Music音乐学院；compose谱曲；In Hope Field《在希望的田野上》；Premier Zhou，Where Were You《周总理，你在哪里》
The composer，Shi Guangnan
(二)
假如你是高一新生李华，在开学第一堂英语课上，用英语向大家作自我介绍。
要求：1．词数：80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．覆盖所有要点，结合个人情况适当发挥。
Hello，everyone!
My name is Li Hua．I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．
That＇s all．Thank you!
(三)
假如你是李强，你的美国笔友Shirley正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她汉语老师的情况。请根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Miss Li。
要求：1．词数：80左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3．根据所给信息作适当发挥，要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
Dear Shirley，
Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher．I think he has a good sense of humor．
Best wishes!
Li Qiang
(四)
假如刘丽是你的好朋友，长得很漂亮，学习刻苦，兴趣广泛(读书、弹钢琴等)，为了让别人更好地了解你的朋友，请你根据所给信息介绍你的朋友。词数：80—100。
My friend Liu Li
（五）
父母的鼓励有利于孩子健康成长。鼓励可以是赞许的话语，也可以是一份礼物。请根据表格描述李江的父母曾经对他鼓励的方式。对此做出你的评价并表达你希望你的父母如何鼓励你。
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.评价李江父母的做法；表达你希望你的父母如何鼓励你。
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
4.语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Parents' encouragement is good for their children's growth. It's a nice way for parents to speak highly of their children when they make progress.
（六）
假设你是一名中学生，名叫田梅。你从南京青奥会英文网站上获悉他们正在招收志愿者，你想给组委会写一封英文自荐信。内容提示见下表：
注意事项：
1.自荐信须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.“相关经历”一栏中省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3.词数在80个左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总次数；
4.信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
参考词汇：
新城中学（New Town Middle School）
志愿者工作（voluntary work）
2014无锡国际马拉松赛（the 20## Wuxi International Marathon）
（七）
以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿。
注意：
1. 所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
2. 词数：100个词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；
4. 文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其它信息，否则，不予评分。
Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker . His experience inspires a lot of people in the world . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（八）
请你以"Great People in History"为题，用英文写一篇短文，介绍美国总统奥巴马。
要点提示：
1、奥巴马于1961年8月4日出生，在大学时是优等生；
2、他的嗓音是如此振奋人心，被认为是个天生的演说家；
3、他曾经害怕当众演讲，但没有放弃，而是不断改进演讲技巧，终获成功；
4、20##年，47岁的奥巴马成功当选为首位非洲裔美国总统；
5、他经常鼓励黑人学子（black students）......
6、我相信他将......
注意事项:1、短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2、第5和第6要点须各用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3、词数在90个左右，短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great People in History
Dear classmates, I'm glad to introduce to you a great person in history--Barack Hussein Obama.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（九）
假设你是周杰伦的粉丝，请根据所给信息写一篇有关他的短文。内容提示如下：
1. 我最喜欢的明星是周杰伦（Jay Chou）, 他三十几岁了，结婚四个月了；
2. 15岁试图写歌曲，梦想成为一名成功的歌星；
3. 他认为古典音乐具有永恒价值，也擅长西方乐器，且听说即将加盟“中国好声音”；
4. 成就不局限于音乐界，他还在电影头文字D(Initial D)中担任主角。
5. 我相信……
注意：短文必须包括所给要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
1. 第5点必须用二至三句话展开合理想象；
2. 词数90个左右。
（十）
在一节写作课上，老师要求你们写一篇名为“心目中的同学”的短文，现在请你用英文来介绍一下你的同学Mike。
1. Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；
2. 他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大；
3. 他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖；
4. 现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷；
5. 他的梦想……我认为……
注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第5要点的内容必须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
有创意的 creative 爱迪生 Edison
My classmate Mike is ______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
（十一）
请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的偶像刘翔。
1. 平易近人，被公认是最受欢迎的中国运动员之一；
2. 从小对体育感兴趣；
3. 训练刻苦，20##年荣获雅典奥运会男子110米栏金牌，标志他成功事业的开端；
4. 赢得中国乃至全世界的高度赞扬；
5. 尽管他不再是运动员，但我觉得……
注意：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 第5点省略部分请作2-3句合理的想象发挥；
3. 词数在90个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：事业 career；雅典Athens；男子110米栏Men’s 110-meter hurdles；运动员athlete
Liu Xiang is my hero. He was born in Shanghai on July 13 ,1983.
【参考答案】
(一)
The composer，Shi Guangnan
Have you heard of Shi Guangnan? He is one of China＇s greatest composers．
He was born in Chongqing 1940 and graduated from Tianjin Conservatory of Music in 1964．He composed more than 100 works during over 20 years，such as the songs In HopeField，PremierZhou，Where Were You and so on．Not only the young but also the old like his songs．He is called“the era singer”and“the people’s musician．Unfortunately，he died of a terrible illness on May 2nd，1990．
I believe all Chinese people will love and miss him forever．
(二)
Hello，everyone!
My name is Li Hua．I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．
I was born in March，1998．I'm outgoing．I like to make friends with others．And I get on well with my classmates．I 1ike doing sports．Running is my favorite sport，so I do best in running．I always remember that I was once a star of a running class．My dream is to become a teacher．I think，on the one hand，being a teacher can achieve my teaching ideals；on the other hand，I can also play with kids，so I will be happy．
That＇s all．Thank you!
(三)
Dear Shirley，
Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher．I think he has a good sense of humor．Now I'd like to introduce my English teacher，Miss Li．She is a nice teacher and has taught us for three years．She is tall and slim，and she is also smart．Blue is her favorite color and she often wears blue clothes．She likes reading and she often travels in her spare time．She is kind and helpful．As a teacher，she is very patient．She spends lots of time explaining difficult things to us. She teaches so well that she won the first prize in the teaching competition this year．A1l of us like her．I hope that I can be a teacher like her．
Best wishes!
Li Qiang
(四)
My friend Liu Li
One of my friends is a beautiful and clever girl．Her name is Liu Li．
She has rosy cheeks and two bright eyes，which shine below her curved eyebrows．In her small mouth there are two lines of white teeth．Her hair is straight and long，hanging down to her shoulder．She is healthy and attractive．
She is very diligent in her 1essons．She always gets straight A marks in the examinations．Her teachers like her very much．She can also play the piano and sing sweet songs．At every New Year＇s party，she is always asked to perform programs for her classmates who love her very much．She likes reading books，playing games，eating delicious food and sleeping．She is a good girl．Today，a little boy tripped over a stone．She went to help the boy．
From now on，I will be a good student，developing in all ways like her．
（五）
One possible version:
Parents’ encouragement is good for their children’s growth. It’s a nice way for parents to speak highly of their children when they make progress. It is very common for parents to buy their children presents. For example, when Li Jiang made progress in his study, his parents bought him stationery, a mobile phone and so on. After Li Jiang won prizes in the competitions, his parents took him to the restaurant for a big dinner. When Li Jiang did some housework, he could get some extra pocket money from his parents.
I don’t think it’s really a good way for Li Jiang’s parents to give him something or money as encouragement. I don’t want my parents to buy me something when I’ve done very well in my study. I hope they can give me more chances to decide what I can do in my free time. If so, I will be more confident to do everything better. And it’s good for my growth.
（六）
Dear sir/madam:
I have visited your English website and have learned that volunteers are wanted. My name is Tian Mei a Grade Nine student from New Middle School .I an sixteen years old.I am energetic,outgoing and patient.I speak English well and good at working with others.In April this year,I became a volunteer for the 20## Wuxi International Marathon I worked hard and did well.Youth Olympic Games .I look forward to hearing from you.
（七）
Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker . His experience inspires a lot of people in the world . He was born on December 4th ,1982 in Australia. Unluckily ,he was born without arms or legs ,but he learnt to swim ,get dressed ,used a computer and so on. At 21 ,Nick graduated from university . Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams . He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far . He has ever visited China five times . In 20## ,he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake.
From his story , I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life .
（八）
Great People in History
Dear classmates, I'm glad to introduce to you a great person in history---Barack Hussein Obama. Obama was born on August 4, 1961. He was a top student at university. His voice is so exciting that he is considered to be a born speaker. However, he was once afraid to speak in front of many people. He kept improving his speaking skills instead of giving up. Finally he succeeded. In 2008, he successfully became the first African American president at the age of 47. He often encourages black students to study hard and never to give up. I believe he will lead America to a brighter future.
（九）
My favourite star is Jay Zhou. He’s in his thirties. He has been married for 4 months. He tried to write songs at the age of fifteen. He dreamed of becoming a successful singing star. He thinks classical music has a lasting value. He’s also good at western musical instruments. He will take part in the TV programme Vocie of China. His achievements went beyond the music industry. He also played the lead role in the film Initial D. I believe he will be a world-famous star one day. And I should learn from him.
（十）
My classmate Michael is hard-working. He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas. In his childhood, he read many books about scientists. The story of Edison influenced him most. He is crazy about inventing things. So far, he has won several awards for inventions. Now he is busy with his study, but he has never given up his hobby. He says it’s great fun for him. His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison. I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day.
（十一）
Liu Xiang is my hero. He was born in Shanghai on July 13, 1983. He’s easy to get along /on with. He is considered as/ to be one of the most popular athletes in China. He has been interested in sports since he was young. He practised very hard. In 2004, he won the Men’s 110-metre hurdles at the Athens Olympic Games. It marked the beginning of his successful career. He won high praise not only from China but also from all over the world. Although he isn’t an athlete any more, I think he is the pride of our country, and he is the person I admire most.