假如你是李明,你的堂兄李华在国外学习,你们经常用英语通信。他即将完成学业,不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示和要求给他回一封信。
1、 建议他回国;
2、 你的理由是:(1)所学专业在国内容易就业;(2)照顾父母。
注意:词数:100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
思路点拨
如何写一封建议信
建议信主要是向对方(单位或个人等)提出建议,以便对方接受自己的建议,从而解决有关问题。英语的建议信至少要分为三段。
第一段:要开门见山,让收信人明白写信人要提的建议,要用概括性的句子说明提的是什么建议,同时一定要有礼貌。
第二段:说明提出建议的理由。注意陈述理由是要条理清晰,分层展开。
第三段:为书信的结尾,通常要用客套话来表达祝愿、希望对方采纳自己的建议或希望自己的建议对对方有帮助。
范文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.
For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a job. In fact, I know several big companies in our city are hoping to employ people like you. For another reason, I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting older and older. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?
Best wishes!\
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
第二篇:英语 建议信 写作指导及模板
应用文
建议信 (Letter of suggestion)
一、简介
(1) 建议信写作注意事项
写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
(2) 写作方法
① 首段:
a. 简介自己,不要罗嗦;
b. 说明目的,注意语气。
② 主体:
a. 提出具体建议;
b. 首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则变成投诉信;
c. 经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文,因为内容与议论文相似。
③ 尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,易于接受。
(3) 写作流程图
二、结构
第一部分:说明写信的目的
套语:
(1) 来信收到,得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问,我建议……
I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that……
(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。
I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.
第二部分:介绍详情、提出建议
套语:
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that ……
May I suggest that……
In my opinion ……
I would like to make a recommendation that …
I am writing to advise you of ……
If I were you, I would ……
第三部分:提出希望采纳建议,盼望回复
套语:
(1) 请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.
三、示例
Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.
1、表示欢迎。 2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿
建议信模板
Dear ,
① I am very ______ to know that . ① 写信的原因
② I'm looking forward to . ② 表示欢迎
③ I'm afraid that . ③ 表述建议理由
④ I'd like to suggest that first……then _ . ④ 提出建议
⑤ I believe this kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤ 有说服力
⑥ Moreover,if _____________ , ⑥ 补充建议
⑦ It is necessary for you to . ⑦ 提出建议
⑧ With_______________you will . ⑧ 建议理由
⑨ Wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿
A Letter to a Schoolmate
June 23rd, 2001
Dear Xiao Wang,
I am very glad to knowthat you are soon
coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示欢迎
I 'm looking forward to your arrival.
If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因
I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule 语气亲切,符合说话人身份关系
for visiting a number of places of historic interest.
I'd like to suggest that you first visit some famous 叙述词和副词
places that you have the greatest interest in,such as 一目了然
the Palace Museum, the Summer Place(颐和园), the Great
Wall; then you can visit those places you think less then使文章结构
important. I believe this kind of arrangement
will make you have enough time to appreciate(欣赏) 使自己的安排具有说服力
what you really want to see.
Moreover if you really want to be a good
traveler,It is necessary for you to read some 建议有理有据
books about these places before you come to see
them with your own eyes. With more knowledge
about these places, you willhave a better
understanding of Chinese history and culture.
I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing.
Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing. 表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求
Best wishes!
Yours ever,