便条评分细则:
1. 格式(2分)
包括：日期（date）May 10, 2001
称呼（heading）Dear Professor Wang,
结尾（Ending）Yours sincerely
2. 内容（3分）拼写错误3个扣一分
3. 评分总体要求
语言无错误，格式对 内容齐，字数符合要求（40-60），不足40和超过80扣一分 用简洁非正规的书面语解决实际生活中的问题：
需要考虑：我是谁；收件人是谁；我希望收件人看到便条后了解什么、去做什么、怎样去做；
4． 标准：
格式正确，日期称呼落款
语言的题，作者与接受者之间的关系
内容完整不罗嗦语法正确
Invitation: Invite
常用表达：
Let’s go to…
This is to bring to you a kind notice that…
Shall we meet at… to talk about…?
Would you care to join our little party?
Is it possible for you to meet at…. To discuss…?
If it doesn’t trouble you much, shall we meet … at tonight
We are going to have a dance to celebrate … and would love to have you join us.
We’d like to invite you to a spring picnic with us.
If you have no other appointments or plans tomorrow, shall we have a talk over…
It would be a great pleasure to have you among the guests.
I would be delighted if you could spare some time from your busy schedule to attend
I am writing on behalf to all the memebers of our Literature Society to ask..
Professor Jiang, I want youu to give me some suggestion on… if it doesn’t touble you too much, shall we meet at your office at 9 o’clock?
I’m sure you would not disappoint us.
二. 应邀常用语（应有accept一词）
We are delighted to accept
We looke forward with pleasure to joining you.
It is with great pleasure…
We are sincerely happy to join you…
Nothing could give us greater pleasure than accepting your kind invitation…
三.婉拒
包括三部分（收到邀请，表示感谢，阐述不能赴邀请的原因；表示遗憾和良好祝愿）
I have much pleasure in accepting your invitation, but deeply regret having refused owing to a previous engagement.
I wouuld have been so much delighted to be with you but…
Nothing would please me more than to join you for dinner, but unfortunately…
I shall have to say no to our kind invitation…
Very regretfully…
Unfortunately, I am not well
Unfortunately, it will be impossible
Because of… we find we cannot…
How I wish I could reach there.
I do hope you would accept my sincere apologies for my absence.
It’s a pity I cannot join you for the occasion.
It is too bad that the date coincides with my grandfather’s birthday.
四、致谢（thank appreciate）
包括三部分：感谢之情；解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
再次表示诚挚感谢
I don’t know how to express my gratitude for you…
I’m wrting to tell you how much I enjoyed the weekend in your village.
The note is just to express my appreciateion for inviting me over.
I cannot tell you how much I owe you…
I’m writing to express my appreciation for all that you did for me during my visit in Beijin. It was thoughtfull of you….
I thank you from the core of my heart for your sending me the gift.
Thank you so much for the favor.
Many thanks for inviting me to the grand dance.
Thank you again for your generosity (hospitality, generous help)
I’m so lucky that I have such a generous and charming friend.’
I’m grateful for your kind letter of sympathy regarding my bereavevement.
the card you sent has touched me deeply
I hope I have the chance to reciprocate your kindness.
April 3, 2006
Dear Pro. Johnson,
Thanks to you, I’m now a post-graduate of the English Department of Hopkins University. Dr. Smith has read your letter over again, and he is very satisfied with me. I don’t have to tell you that I’m sincerely grateful for all your help in recommending me as a post-graduate. The mailman will bring you a package tomorrow, which is a small token of carload of appreciation.
Cordially
Robert
五、祝贺
内容： 得知喜讯的喜悦心情；对喜讯的评价和对对方的钦佩；祝贺和美好祝愿
I’m so happy to learn / know…
I’m so pleased / delighted to hear that…
My heart is filled with joy to learn about…
That’s great news about…
It’s such a pleasure to find your name on the pass list.
It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…
I am writing to express my heartiest congratulaitons on your…
Congratulations on your success.
Please accept my warmest / heartelt congratulations on…
Accept my sincere congratulations from the bottom of my heart on your…
I wish to congratulate you on you finishing high school and entering Qing Hua University.
It’s the kind of news I like to hear, because it proves once again a hard-working man always gets ahead. Let me offer my warmest congratulations. I know you are going to be a great success in… 表示评价和钦佩的用语：
You’re really deserve it because…
It is really a splendid achievement and we are all proud of you.
This has meant years of your hard work, and it’s an achievement you can well be proud of… 表示祝愿：
You will have a brilliant future.
I believe that your school life will be more colorful.
With every good wish.
I wish you still further success.
April 12
Dear SHElly,
I’m so excited to learn that you’ve been admitted by Beijing University as a gradate. Warm congratulations on the realization of your dream. This has meant years of your hard work, and you can really be proud of it. Your success is really encourage to me and I wish we could meet there next year. You will have a brilliant future.
Yours
Li Hua
第二篇：英语便条写作的格式句型以及范文
时间日期
称谓：正式或非正式（是否全名，是否不知
道对方名称）
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Yours Sincerely,
署名的正式性应该和对方称谓一致
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Truthfully, respectfully,
Kate
约请(Invitation)
Directions: You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is visiting and you want to give it to your friend Alice. Write a note to her and say:
1) the time of the show,
2) the place where you will wait for her
You should write about 60 words.
? 诚挚邀请对方参加某活动
? 介绍活动的内容、时间、地点，相关内容
? 再次发出邀请或者期待对方回复
开头用语
① Will you do us the favor of joining our party?
② May I take this opportunity to invite you to our university to give a lecture?
③ If you have no other plans for Monday， May 15th， will you come to our party at my home? ④ I hope you will give me the pleasure of your company on the occasion of a dinner with a few friends next Saturday， the 16th this month， at 6 o’clock.
⑤ I am extending to you our formal invitation to...
⑥ It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to cordially invite you to attend the meeting. ⑦ It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to visit this exhibition.
⑧ Will you give the pleasure of dining with us at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday， October the tenth， at eight o’clock p.m.?
结束用语
① We would be very pleased if you could honor us with your company. Anticipating your reply. ② I hope you won’t decline my invitation.
③ We hope you can come and look forward to seeing you later.
④ We are anticipating your reply.
⑤ Awaiting an early acceptance of our cordial invitation and with kind regards.
Sunday
Dear Alice,
Here is a piece of good news for you. The Russian National Ballet Troupe will give a performance in the Beijing Grand Theater tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it and I leave you an admission card. The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you are prevented from coming or not.
Yours sincerely,
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道歉（Apology）
Directions: You have missed a date of your friend, now you have to write a letter for apology in about 60 words.
? 道歉的行为与内容，
? 具体理由，
? 弥补方法，
? 进一步致歉。
? 道歉行为： I’m writing to show my apology for?/ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to?/I’m sorry to say that I’ve not finished reading it through, and have to keep it until next Sunday. / Excuse me for my delaying in turning in my assignment.
? 道歉理由：I had a minor accident./ I had a minor operation.
? 弥补纠正及其承诺：I am sure I can make up the loss by?/ I promise it will never happen again. / It would be very kind(considerate) of you to give me another chance to?( to give me another two days
? 进一步致歉： Many apologies. / Do please forgive me.
May 20th Dear Lily,
I am sorry I missed seeing you yesterday. I know that you must have been disappointed. I also feel worried and anxious in my heart. The fact is that my manager at the last moment asked me to prepare an urgent plan while I could not get to a phone to call you and yesterday I have worked late until about 8:30 p. m. I am terribly sorry. However, I would like to ask you out this weekend to make up for yesterday. Please give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
×××
April 18，2009
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I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: zhang123@ .Heartfelt thanks.
Yours respectfully
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祝贺(Congratulation)
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? 祝贺内容 b．表示祝贺 c．积极评价 d．忠心祝福（再次祝贺＋祝福未来） 祝贺之事和自己的反应： I’m so happy to learn that you’ve just passed your thesis defense. / I’m so pleased to hear that you’ve got the admission by the Cambridge University to further your graduate study.
? 祝贺行为: Please accept my warmest congratulations.
? 对成功的评价和对对方的钦佩；You really deserve it because?/ This meant years of your hard work, and it’s an achievement you can well be proud of. / I have been appreciating your excellent performance in study and ability in your work.
? 美好祝愿； You will have a brilliant future. / I believe our school life will be more colorful under your leadership. / I believe that the knowledge you’ve acquired will enable you to be successful in whatever aspect of life. Congratulations again and all good wishes for your future study.
开头用语
① It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.
② I was pleasantly surprised to read in the newspaper that you...
③ Congratulations on your promotion/graduation/success/progress/achievements. ④ I am delighted to learn that...
结束用语
① I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world.
② We hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life together and in your chosen career.
③ Wish you the best luck and every happiness.
④ Please accept my heartfelt congratulations!
⑤ I would like to express my best wishes and warmest congratulations to you.
⑥ Here is a word of cheer on your birthday from a warm friend， congratulations and all good wishes to you!
⑦ Thank you for anything you can do for sb.
April 18，2009
Dear Shirly,
I am so excited to learn that you’ve been admitted by Shanghai International Studies University as a graduate. Warm congratulations on the realization of your dream. This has meant years of your hard work, and you can really be proud of it. Your success is really an encouragement to me and I wish we can meet there next year, Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Amelia
致谢(Thanks)
? 致谢内容，交代感谢原因：I am writing to tell you how much I enjoyed the weekend in your village./ / I am writing to express my appreciation for all that you did for me during my visit in Shanghai. / I am writing to tell you how much I appreciate your hospitality. Thank you so much for your assistance/ for the information your gave us.
? 进一步解释对方的帮助给自己带来的好处，
? 再次致谢， 回馈承诺Please accept my warmest thanks; I hope I have the chance to reciprocate your kindness.
范文：
April 18，2009
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to show my gratitude for your invitation to your birthday party. That was a really wonderful party. I appreciate your considerate arrangement and wonderful performance you had prepared. And it also offered me a chance to meet many old friends. I really enjoyed that night and I do hope you will have a wonderful life.
Yours,
Amelia
April 18，2009
Dear Professor Chen,
It is just three weeks since I consulted you on how to write a research paper and I’d like to assure you that I really appreciate your help.Your advice has been very valuable, and I have read the books recommended by you with gratifying results. I have finished my research paper, and I owe it to your help. I would like to express my gratitude, along with my best wishes.
Respectful yours
Amelia
咨询（Inquiry）
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? 被咨询的部门以及有关人员 咨询的目的 咨询的具体内容 希望给予答复并表示感谢
① I am writing to inquire about the details of the trip to Tibet.
② I wonder if you have made any definite plan for the coming summer vocation. ③ The news of your sorrow has just reached me.
④ I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. 结束用语
① I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience. ② I am looking forward to your reply.
③ I shall be grateful if you will take necessary measures to trace and recover it.
With reference to your advertisement on the local newspaper, i want to know more about… I have learned fromXXX that you will…i just want to know specially about…
Would you please be so kind as to give me more information about…
I am writing to ask whether you could send me some information about…
I would appreciate much it you can provide me with more details about…
April 18，2009
Dear Prof. Li,
I have a few questions i should like you to englighten me on for the paper i am currently writing. I would appreciate it very much if you would kindly recommend me some relevaent reference books and let me know the details about the paper format. Could you please send me a booklist and a copy of last year’s thesis to my email box:
Respectful yours
Amelia
申请(Application)
开头用语
① I am writing to apply for the post of...advertised in...
② Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for...， I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time. ③ In reply to your advertisement in...， I beg to apply for the post of...in your company. ④ I hope to go to Stanford University next year， and get my Ph.D. in 2006.
⑤ I wish to become a graduate student in the Department of Economics at your university. ⑥ I wish to apply for a place at your school in April， in order to study for Master of Business Administration for a period of a year.
⑦ The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.
⑧ I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of... advertised in the paper.
结束用语
① I shall bring with me the full details of my testimonials as you request.
② I hope I may be granted an interview， when I can explain my qualification more fully. ③ I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience， when I could give you further details concerning myself.
④ It seems to me that this experience， together with my education， has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of...in a firm such as yours.
April 18, 2009
Dear Sirs:
I have learned from the newspaper that there is a vacancy for a teacher of English during the summer vacation. I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position. Enclosed is my resume. I would be greatly grateful if you would grant me a chance for an interview
Respectfully yours,
Amelia
April 18, 2009
Dear Sir,
I am seeking an opportunity to study English in your university after my graduation from the Foreign Language Department of Zhejiang University, Hangzhou, the People’s Republic of China next year. Please inform me of the application procedure for admission. I intend to support myself financially during the period of my study in your university. I should be grateful if you would kindly let me have the details concerning the eligibility of a student from a foreign country for any scholarship in your English department. I am looking forward to your reply in due time.
Yours faithfully,
Amelia
失物招领 (Lost and Found )
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? 时间地点以及丢失物品的描述 若看到遗失物品，请与失主联系 联系地点，方式，时间 致谢
April 18, 2009
Gentlemen,
I took the last bus (No. 406) home last night and got off at Zhejiang University. After arriving home, I noticed that I had left my bag on the bus. It is a black bag made of leather with a zipper. Inside are some books, a bunch of keys and my photos.
If you happen to find the above bag, would you kindly let me know about it?
My address: Room 321, Dormitory Building Eight, DMU
My phone number: 4718123
Profound thanks from
Loser,
Amelia
April 18, 2009
Found
I happened to find a bag on the playground yesterday afternoon, in which there are some books, a pencil box and a watch. The loser is expected to come to the office of Foreign Language Department to claim it. The phone number is 4729646.
Finder,
Amelia
通知（Announcement）
通知的主题
通知的具体内容（时间地点人物，注意事项）
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April 18, 2009
Dear classmates,
Tomorrow is March 12th—Tree Planting Day. In order to protect our environment, we’ll go to the West Hill to plant tress there. Please meet at 7:00 in the morning at the school gate. We’ll go there by school bus. You’d better put on your old clothes and bring tools and lunch with you. Please don’t be late.
Yours,
Amelia