记叙文写作方法与技巧

二．六大要素时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等

名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised． Mary refused the invitation．

We were very much surprised at／by Mary’s refusal of the invitation．

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches． The winner was hot and tired．

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches．(转换成形容词短语)

七．范文分析

Directions: Now you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the title My Best Friend. You should write at least 100-120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.简要介绍你最好的朋友。 2.你们之间的故事。

3.你对朋友的理解。 范文：

My Best Friend

Upon the words “best friend”, a figure Jumps into my mind (jump这个词使一个人物形象活灵活现地展现在读者眼前) —Zhang Ye—my schoolmate in senior high school and also my best friend. During the three years in high school, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow. (排比句式能使表达更有力度，而且将与朋友的共同经历描绘得丰富多彩)

She is of medium height and slim figure. Though not strong, she is really a girl with amazing stamina(毅力). Despite the similarities in our outlook on life and living, it is always she, the physically weaker one, who encouraged and urged me to finish some tasks when I attempted to give up. When we were preparing for the National Entrance Exam, she cheered me up emotionally and would give me a hand whenever I was in trouble. But for everything she did for me, I couldn’t have had this opportunity to give a decent job with a decent pay. After the exam, she got enrolled by Tsinghua University in Beijing while I went to a college in south China. (对3年中两人共同勉励、共同奋斗经历的叙述为读者展示了一段难忘的人生时光，确实不愧为best friend)

For the past several years, we have been in touch and share everything we are experiencing, sad or happy, dull or exciting.

True friendship lasts life long. Friendship is a magic. It can melt the ice in one’s heart and blow away the mist on one’s mind. It can inspire others and outdo the self. (再次应用排比句式表达了对友谊真谛的理解，感人至深) I believe the friendship between Zhang Ye and me will be the life-time beacon for both of us.

八．参考模版

例文1：

题目: An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident

Directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below: 1) 车祸发生的时间及地点 2) 你所见到的车祸情况 3) 你对车祸原因的分析

例文2

A Special Social Practice

Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it. 2. To me, it happened

4. It was a sunny day and things were awfully ⑧talking happily about a great success of a project. 7. It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would

8.Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to First of all, no one can deny its us to 十一. 记叙文中常用谚语、格言(以字母为序)

1. A friend to everybody is a friend to nobody.

人人是朋友，没有真朋友。

2. A good book is a best friend who never turns his back upon you.

好书如挚友，永远不相负。

3. A good example is the best sermon.

身教重于言教。

4. A good fame is better than a good name.

美名胜于美貌。

5. All roads lead to Rome.

条条大陆通罗马。

6. All time is no time when it is past.

时间一去不复返。

7. All things are difficult before they are easy.

万事开头难。

8. Actions speak louder than word.

事实胜于雄辩。

9. A young idler, an old beggar.

少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。 10. Caution is the parent of safety.

小心驶得万年船。

11. Fine feature makes fine birds.

人靠衣装，马靠鞍装。

12. Friendship is both a source of pleasure and a component of good health.

友谊既是快乐的源泉，又是健康的源泉。 13. Good company on the road is the shortest cut.

行路有良伴就是捷径。

14. Good advice is beyond all price.

忠告是无价之宝。

15. Love me little, love me long.

爱不贵深，而贵久。

16. Many hands make light work.

人多力量大。

17. Never do things by halves.

不要半途而废。

18. Nothing is impossible for a willing person.

苍天不负有心人。 19. No cross, no crown.

不经历风雨，不能见彩虹。 20. One lie makes many.

一次说谎，百次圆谎。 21. Time tries all.

路遥知马力，日久见人心。 22. Two heads are better than one.

三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。

第二篇：英语四级作文例句

20xx年英语四级作文提分背诵例句(1)

1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person‘s physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。

10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers. 许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。(超循环背诵大表)

11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students‘ too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes

Jack a dull boy.

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。

14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

16. In view of the seriousness of this problem

, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。

17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

20. No one can deny the fact that a person‘s education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。(超循环背诵大表)