篇一 :20xx年1月新SAT官方新样题第一时间解读:满分写作范文解析

20xx年1月新SAT官方新样题第一时间解读:满分写作范文解析 本次官方给出了两道样题,北京新东方张卉老师针对第一篇样题(节选自Paul Bogard于2012.12.21发表在《洛杉矶时报》的“Let There Be Dark.”)的满分作文进行了官方得分理由的第一时间解读。

满分作文(阅读部分4分,理解部分4分,写作部分4分)

阅读理解部分---4分:这篇作文通过熟练的间接引用--转述技巧(paraphrases)和直接引用技巧(direct quotations)展现出了对材料文章全面充分的理解能力。作者用简洁的语言概括了Bogard’s piece这篇文章的主旨,即(natural darkness should be preserved; we must preserve true, unaffected darkness),并从材料文章中找寻证据来说明作者如何支持主旨:如提及作者用个人轶事来开篇;提及Bogard对Paris’ reputation as “The City of Light”这一历史典故的引用。考生并未直接引用大段的作者原文,而是用自己简洁精确的转述语言来全面解读Bogard的这篇argument,考生能够清晰有条理的说明Bogard如何使用细节来支持主旨。这篇文章没有对材料文章事实的误读或曲解。总而言之,此文反映出了考生优秀的阅读理解技巧。 分析能力部分—4分:北京新东方张卉老师通过结合官方理由解读,这篇满分文章展现了考生深刻透彻的分析能力并展现出考生对分析技巧这一要求的深刻理解。考生认真全面地解释了Bogard如何通过使用个人轶事,艺术和历史引喻,修辞手段等方法来展开他的议论。例如:考生分析了Bogard为何采用个人轶事这一手段来进行开篇,并描述了作者采用这一方法对读者产生的整体效果,如(In telling this brief anecdote, Bogard challenges the audience to remember a time where they could fully amass themselves in natural darkness void of artificial light. By drawing in his readers with a personal encounter...the author means to establish the potential for beauty, glamour, and awe-inspiring mystery that genuine darkness can possess.... This

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篇二 :SAT写作 范文一篇

In 2008, a devastating earthquake struck Wenchuan, a small town of Sichuan, china. Shortly after the disaster, many countries expressed their sympathy and humanity support by either donating large sum of money or delivering millions of tons of items, both of which served as a big relief in such a case. It was because of the helps from all over the world that the people who survived the earthquake could walk through the difficulties and recovered from the great pain quickly.

This event can be a good example to show the significance of global care. As the result of development of modern telecommunication, the geographic boundary has no longer been such a big barrier to limit the flow of information between countries. We suddenly become more informed of the issues of people from other countries. We can almost feel what other country’s people feel especially when they are in big troubles because we are the same race! Sympathy is a deeply rooted human nature.

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篇三 :SAT满分范文

20xx年5月SAT写作真题:

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.

It is often the case that revealing the complete truth may bring

trouble—discomfort, embarrassment, sadness, or even harm—to oneself or to another person. In these circumstances, it is better not to express our real thoughts and feelings. Whether or not we should tell the truth, therefore, depends on the circumstances.

Assignment: Do circumstances determine whether or not we should tell the truth? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

写作范文:

Even though it is true that honesty is a great virtue, I still cannot help but believe that under some circumstances, choosing not to tell the truth is a wise decision. Look at O.Henry’s short story, “the last leaf.” Johnsy suffers from pneumonia, a severe disease that can result in the death of a person. Johnsy sinks into the depths of hopelessness. Seeing the leaves of ivy outside her window fall down every day, she tells Sue, her best friend, that she must go when the last leaf falls. Fearing that Johnsy’s

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篇四 :[SAT精品]【SAT作文】官方(0-6分)评分标准说明+官方提供不同分数段范文



既然选择了远方便只顾风雨兼程









       前见古人悬梁刺股十年寒窗读书苦,后望来者身健智高海外留学势如虎。在这种情形下,我们既然明智地选择了海外求学之路,就一定要披荆斩棘,铺就辉煌人生之路!

     时光在飞逝,梦想在继续,各位备考SAT的朋友,你们的战斗并不孤独,与你分享着点点滴滴, share with you,直到成功!

     跟大家分享自己翻译的SAT作文的评分情况,因为它在我们作文分数的提高上也起着关键性的作用,只有了解了评分标准才会有一个质的飞跃。

      SAT作文Essay的满分为12分,考生要在25分钟时间内,依据试题要求,写出一篇完整的议论文。作文的字数没有硬性规定,但作文的篇幅约有一张半A4纸的大小,所以建议尽量多写。写满作文规定的篇幅,一般要用500至700个英语单词。        每一篇作文都要分别被两个评分人单独给出一个1-6的分数,这两个分数加起来就产生了一个2-12的分数,这些评分人都是一些有经验的和经过训练的高中和大学老师。



   



     如果这两个评分人的给出的分数相差大于一个分数点(很少见的情形),那么就会有第三个人来评分。






      下面让我们看看具体的评分标准和各个分数的作文与点评!

评分标准




         Score=6

       这类作文虽然可能也会有一些小错误,但是它展现出了考生对作文很明确的掌握和精通,评分标准:

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篇五 :SAT范文

Directions: You have 25 minutes to plan and write an essay on the given topic. Do not write on another topic, as essays not on the topic receive a score of zero. You will be scored on how clearly and effectively you express your thoughts in writing. Develop your point of view carefully, as your writing will be evaluated on quality, not quantity; but do plan on writing several paragraphs to cover the topic adequately. Write legibly (print if necessary) and be specific.

Prompt

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following quotations and the assigment below.

“The general fact is that the most effective way of utilizing human energy is through

organized competition.” —Adapted from Charles Horton Cooley

“Focus on competition has always been a formula for mediocrity.” —Daniel Burrus Assignment

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篇六 :SAT写作范文

Abraham Lincoln said, "Most people are about as happy as they make up their minds to be." In other words, our personal level of satisfaction is entirely within our control. Otherwise, why would the same experience disappoint one person but delight another? Happiness is not an accident but a choice.

Assignment: Is happiness something over which people have no control, or can people choose to be happy? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

My Essay:

Happiness is an elixir to all diseases, so everyone wants happiness and most of them think that it comes from success. But even if we fail something, we can still choose to be happy.

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篇七 :新东方在线sat语法讲义

新东方在线 [www.koolearn.com] 网络课堂电子教材系列 SAT 语法 1 20xx年SAT 语法讲义 主讲:李楠楠 欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材 Identifying Sentence Errors 一、主谓一致 1. 就前原则 (1) N1 of N2 verb(SAT 考试中动词的单复数与N1 有关,与N2 无关) 如: a group of students are the details of the problems are 例:The bright (A) fiberglass sculptures of Luis Jimenez has received (B) critical acclaim not only (C) in his home state, New Mexico, but also in (D) New York. No error (E). (P161.1) (2) 名词1+介词+名词2 如:students in the classroom 名词,插入语,verb 名词+doing/done 如:students studying hard 例:Flints found in (A) the region extending from the Nile Valley to (B) the highlands of eastern Iraq attests to (C) the presence of people there as long ago as (D) one hundred thousand years. No error (E). (P166.3)

2.“欲擒故纵”法 动词单复数做题基本原则是就前原则,如果句子太长、太难、太复杂时,用 “欲擒故纵”法。 新东方在线 [www.koolearn.com] 网络课堂电子教材系列 SAT 语法 2 3.动词单复数的特殊固定用法 (1) a number of 一些;一般情况下其后动词用复数,(不受任何规律限制); the number of ??的数量;其后的动词在任何情况下都用单数。 量词考点:a group/list/line of 使用“就前原则” (2) 倒装结构:就后原则。 如:here comes the bus a. 地点状语+动词+主语 b. Only 置于句首的倒装 例:In the foothills of that large mountain range is

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篇八 :SAT备考:三阶段学习方法

SAT备考:三阶段学习方法谈

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20xx-06-16 09:55:31 作者:李现伟 来源:上海新东方学校

今天我们以SAT的客观指标来谈一下SAT的学习方法。所谓的SAT的客观指标是指我们能得到的关于SAT的考试数量,考试难度,考试分数分布等客观性数据。众所周知,SAT考试每年可以考5次(美国本土6次),而且成绩有效性是2年,而且成绩具有各个部分最高分的加合性,同时我们分析考试后的难度分布表也可以得到每次考试总难度分布在150左右,然后每个部分难度也维持了基本的稳定性。

要保证以上所有这些数据在两年内可以比较,那么必须要体现SAT考试在每次考试的公平性。要使得SAT考试公平,那么必须有一套通用的稳定的比较准则,这套稳定的比较准则就使得SAT考试的出题者必须以某种稳定的出题法则来出每套试题,否则会影响稳定性,则会进一步影响公平性,从而影响SAT考试整个评价体系。既然这样,如果我们能够得到这套通用的比较法则,那么对于我们准备SAT考试显然是事半功倍的。

当然,这套法则显然不会明目张胆的出现在官方指南中,也不会出现在某本教刊杂志上,而是需要我们通过大量的做题和总结来得到的。即:多做题——归纳,总结出题准则——通过做题再检验总结出的这些法则,这至少是中国学生准备SAT考试的基本应对思路。在这里我们对上面的三个步骤都具体说明一下,此即SAT的学习的方法。

(一) 多做题

做什么题?怎么做?什么时间做?做几遍?这些都是每个准备这项考试的考生会问的问题。

做什么题?当然是做那些最能体现出题原则的题,所以建议考生一上来就接触SAT的官方指南和真题,因为相比起来,其他参考书顶多也就是二手货,即是另外一些考试辅导机构对机构的解读,与其曲径通幽,不如直如虎穴。其他参考书可以作为第三步检验的时候用,否则容易混听,尤其是对于时间的机会成本非常巨大的高中生来说。

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