一篇优秀的出国留学ps范文(英文)

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20##-04-07 11:51:43

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　　下面是一篇全英文的出国留学ps范文，是一篇优秀的展示真我型(A Revealing Look at the Real Me)的留学ps。出国留学ps在申请过程中占有举足轻重的地位。希望下面这篇出国留学ps范文能够对大家有所帮助。

　　I can’t tell you in which peer group I’d fit best because I’m a social chameleon and am comfortable in most; I will instead describe my own social situation and the various cliques I drift in and out of.

　　My high school’s student body is from a part of town that is much more diverse than the rest of the city, and the city as a whole is more diverse than most of the state. The location of my school, only a few blocks from the University of Oregon, is greatly responsible for the social atmosphere. Whereas the other high schools in town draw mainly from middle-class white suburban families, mine sits in the division between the poor west university neighborhood and the affluent east university one. East university is hilly and forested with quiet residential streets and peaceful, large houses. A few blocks west, using the university as the divider, the houses become small and seedy. On the west side of my school there are many dirty apartments; crime is high and social status is low.

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已经成功的读书计划范例(信息科技)

To Whom It May Concern:

Re: Application of Student Visa to study in RMIT University

In additional to all my documents provided, I would like to take this opportunity to write a personal statement to clarify the main reasons that drive me to study in Australia.

I was born in 1981, the starting period of China's economy reform designed and implemented under the leadership of Mr. De Xiaoping. I have witnessed the dramatic changes in the continuous infrastructure construction, observable improvement of living standards, greater enrichment of social life, gradual deregulation of policies and strong growth of local economy. All the positive sides make everybody fond of the market economy, especially my parents, both of who are managers of property development companies. My parents have great influence on me, so when I was young, I start to learn how to keep abreast of the modern society by learning the new knowledge and skills.

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读书计划/个人陈述 (PERSONAL STATEMENT或STATEMENT OF PURPOSE)

读书计划是在申请过程中按照学校的要求来写一篇有关申请人过去背景，目前成就和未来目标的文章，一篇成功的读书计划不但应语言流畅，且文章逻辑严谨，层次分明，能充分显示申请人的才华并抓住审阅人的注意力。要写出这样的文章，既使对于母语为英语的澳大利亚人来说都是十分不易的，更不要说对于母语为非英语的中国学生。但是澳大利亚的学校在读书计划这项材料上并不对中国学生降低要求，他们认为既然申请人被录取后会与澳大利亚学生一起学习，那么就应用同样的标准衡量国际学生，一篇成功优秀的读书计划不仅仅要求文法上没有错误，还要求语言流畅并具有感染力与吸引力，同时要说明自己的整体素质与学术成就，这的确不是一件容易的事。许多学生为了写一篇优秀的读书计划要花上一个月的时间，这并不奇怪。

然而，写好一篇读书计划并非很难，首先我们要明白审阅这篇读书计划的人想要知道什么，审阅人最看重什么，什么样的读书计划才算是出色的。然后我们才可以根据自己的情况写出这篇文章。

读书计划可以分为两种不同的类型:

一种是总括型读书计划，这种类型的读书计划实质上是一种个人散文（Essay），即用最大的广度、最可能的深度来介绍申请人的情况，无论是背景、现状、还是未来。这种类型的读书计划被广泛应用于医学院、法学院等研究生院中。

另一种是专业型读书计划，这类读书计划往往着重介绍申请人在某学业或事业领域上的成就与见解，在一种小范围内尽可能详尽他说明自己的情况，这种类型的读书计划常在商学院的申请人中见到。

无论是采取哪种类型的读书计划，申请者都一定要了解清楚学校需要申请人回答什么样的问题，是单一的对未来学习生活的展望与计划，还是全面的介绍自己各方面情况。

许多学校不要求提供读书计划，或是不规定读书计划的内容与形式，这样的学校也应备一份连同申请材料寄去。如果不规定具体形式，就把文章重点放在有利字自己申请的一个或几个方面上。一所澳大利亚名牌大学的招生办主任对读书计划的看法是：我们仅仅是想让申请人回答一个问题，就是“你认为我们应了解你哪些方面是最重要的”。假如你需要5分钟去面对一位审核官员说明这些，那么你在这5分钟内所说的内容就是读书计划。

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出国留学ps 个人陈述写作注意事项

PS肯定是自己先写，然后找同学或者老师帮忙改最好.因为面试的时候，有的老师会有针对性地问，如果PS写得好，也必须结合出众的Resume和面试表现辅助。

1. 什么样的PS可以算在中国学生里面比较outstanding?

凸显你的特别之处，你的优势, convince admission committee why you fit for this program, and why they have to choose you over other applicants

当然无论如何出众，必须是和program 录取要求相关有联系的

就像高考老师批作文一样，读了很多前篇一律夸自己的PS,突然眼前这一篇很不一样，能打动人心，就高分了。

上面的那个链接就有Writing the Personal Statement: Top 10 Rules Strive for depth rather than breadth. Narrow focus to one or two key themes, ideas or experiences

Try to tell the reader something that no other applicant will be able to say

Provide the reader with insight into what drives you

Be yourself, not the 'ideal' applicant

Get creative and imaginative in the opening remarks, but make sure it's something that no one else could write

Address the school's unique features that interest you

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已经成功的读书计划范例(信息科技)

To Whom It May Concern:

Re: Application of Student Visa to study in RMIT

University

In additional to all my documents provided, I would like to take this opportunity to write a personal statement to clarify the main reasons

that drive me to study in Australia.

I was born in 1981, the starting period of China's economy reform designed and implemented under the leadership of Mr. De Xiaoping. I have witnessed the dramatic changes in the continuous

infrastructure construction, observable improvement of living standards, greater enrichment of social life, gradual deregulation of policies and strong growth of local economy. All the positive sides make everybody fond of the market economy, especially my parents, both of who are managers of property development panies. My parents have great influence on me, so when I was young, I start to learn how to keep abreast of the modern society by learning the new

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Personal Statement

I found my faithful love for finance quite early as my uncle, a financial accountant, began to teach me some simple financial knowledge when he provided me with additional coaching of mathematics since I was young. Then as I learned more academic knowledge in finance, E-Finance for example, in college, I gradually made up my mind to develop it as my future career. Thus I’m now applying to your programme of Accounting and Finance MSc to enrich me with more in-depth knowledge in finance.

During undergraduate study, I’ve got a systematic learning in Microeconomics, E-Finance, E-Commerce, E-Marketing and Logistics Management of E-Commerce. In particular, I performed excellent in E-Finance as I scored 91, the highest mark in my class, and I became much more familiar with e-banking, online securities trading and the working processes of call center. In the final year of undergraduate study, I’m now learning Principle of Management, Case Study of the Security of E-Commerce, The Criteria and Law in E-Commerce, Customer Behavior and International Trade Affairs. In terms of quantitative courses, I have learned Advanced Mathematics, Linear Algebra and Probability Theory & Mathematical Statistics and in the last course I’ve mainly studied central limit theorem, the principal distributions, testing of statistical hypotheses, parameter estimation, linearity regression and equal analysis, and stochastic differential equations. With my great efforts, I got 85.66 for current overall average and 87.64 for the average of E-Commerce major specializations and ranked of 5/53 and 4/53 respectively in my class. In addition, I was awarded B-class scholarship and won the title of ‘Excellent Student’ as well in 2008.

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1.专业原则

你在你的PS和RL里首先要写大量的专业性的东西，并且在写RL的时候尤其要以指导老师的口吻写很多你做实验的细节性的东西，并且说你如何解决了一些决定性的问题。因为谁都可以说自己做了什么什么很难的东西，可是如何让对方信服，就看这些细节性的东西了。就象去骗签证官，如果你无法说出一两个专业名词的话，即使有大学毕业证书证明你是哪所学校什么专业毕业的，也不能让签证官相信你确实是去美国上学，而不是去打工或移民什么的。因为任何文件都可以造假，而你的思想是造不了假的。你要尽量把你的思想给反映出来。道理是一样的。

你一定要记住，美国的大学之所以给你奖学金，求着你去学他们的理工科专业，并不是因为你的英语学的比美国人好，GRE考的比美国人高，或是想给中国免费培养人才，而是你能为他们做实验，能给他们出文章，你在美国攻读学位期间所做的工作将会或大或小的为美国的经济发展做出贡献，尽管也许一时还看不出来。所以，专业原则是最重要的一个原则。你可以在写作的时候出一点小错误(当然最好是没有)，也许你的辞藻不是很华丽，但是，这些小纰漏都可以原谅，我相信美国大学的录取老师不会就这些表面的东西抓住不放，因为你的母语毕竟不是英语，但如果你对自己的专业一无所知的话，这就不可原谅了！

正因为这个原则，所以我不认为求助于一些专业的写作机构可以给你带来什么好处。

2.个性原则

我相信申请出国的大多数人都不是牛人。当你不是牛人，无法向对方吹嘘自己是多么的聪明的时候，你就必须向对方展现自己的个人魅力。当你坐在计算机前开始写作的时候，你一定要想清楚自己是什么样的人，自己有什么优点。如果你不能让对方相信你的聪明和爱因斯坦是同数量级的(这种人指的是毕业于名校，GPA在3.8以上)，那么你就应该让他相信你的勤奋或是坚韧的毅力与阿甘相比有过之而无不及，—当然你也可以想出你的其他优点。不过，你也不要把我的意思弄拧了，我并不是说，你不能说自己是聪明的，而是说，你或许可以着更多的笔墨在你的勤奋上。毕竟，聪明仅仅是成功的一个因素，而你的毅力，合作力等等可能是成功更重要的因素。你应该善于揣摩对方的心理，要知道，不管是中国的导师还是外国

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