argument全部官方范文分析

写在前面的话：

1、官方范文的重要性不言而喻，论坛里对官方范文的态度也有褒有贬，有人说这些6分的官方文章都是大牛写出来的，我们学不来，于是有的同学的重心就转向了北美范文。但有一点是不可否认的——官方范文是真的6分，可是ets从来没承认过任何一个北美范文是六分的，尽管也确实都是很好的文章。

2、关于argument的重要性：很多人认为argument相对于issue来说容易些，也更好操作些，更容易拿高分。我个人认为这是个误区。我们最后拿到的成绩是个平均分，没有人知道具体每篇是多少。尽管有的同学会猜测自己得分是多少多少，但是猜测毕竟是猜测。因为游戏是ets定的，他的标准和我们心中接受的标准肯定是不一样的，打个比方，看看后面第三篇满分范文，让一般人看，估计没有几个人会毫不犹豫地给满分，甚至高分，但在ets眼中它就是满分；另外，实际上新东方的模版写出来的argu文章和官方范文给出的满分文章是有很大差别的，主要体现在是一个是零散凑成的（所谓的让步式攻击有时只是形式上的）而另一个是有核心思想的，我会在后面的分析中具体说明。既然这样，那完全有可能最终4分是来源于3分的argue加5分的issue，而不是反之。所以说，我们有可能高估了我们写argument的能力。

3、对于官方范文，实际上这些看上去很天马行空的文章，潜在的蕴涵了ets所要求的所有要点。之所以很多人看了很多遍没有看出什么可借鉴的地方，源于两点：一是没有和awintro上的要求相对应起来看，二是没有把有限的6篇官方范文进行横比。。

4、本文整体结构：

第一部分awintro中A部分重点语句的归纳和梳理，方便与后面的分析相对照。这里所有的英文均一字不差的摘自awintro。同时也作为我的另一篇文章“awintro的解读”中的argument部分的补充。

第二部分是我的对于全部6份官方范文（结合awintro）的分析，本文属于个人观点，一家之言难免存在偏颇和不足之处，恳请大家多多指教。欢迎讨论哦！

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Argument

Sample 1

In this argument the author employs a variety of evidence about Paleans, including their geographical isolation and the discovery of a basket, to argue that Palean baskets could have been made by non-Palean cultures. We may accept part of the author’s claim regarding the Paleans, but in the absence of some critical evidence, we cannot accept the conclusion that the Paleans have no means of transporting one of their baskets to other region.

In the first place, the author assumes that the Paleans could not have reached Lithos because no Palean boat has been found. However, the author is treating a lack of proof that the Paleans could have possessed some kind of boat as sufficient proof that they did not possess any such vehicles at all. From the passage we are only informed that Palean boats “were not found”, but the mere fact that no boat found currently could not fully illustrate that the Paleans did not have boats. We need concrete evidence to show that the Paleans did not master the skill of shipbuilding.

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gre 写作复习策略

　　本文是对GRE写作的综述，涉及立论(ISSUE)以及驳论文(ARGUMENT)的试题特点和备考计划的解析。

　　公元20##年11月，被勤劳智慧的中国考生折磨得恼羞成怒的ETS推出了Analytical Writing Section，打破了中国学生机考时代以来对GRE高分的垄断地位，在接下来的两次GRE考试中，中国学生的写作平均成绩远远低于世界其他地区的考生。GRE写作成为横在中国学生的理想和现实之间的一大障碍，因此，如何攻克写作这道屏障，成为摆在我们面前的首要任务。

　　一. Analytical Writing Section简介

　　逻辑写作是General GRE Test考试的三个必考部分之一，它的前身是ETS设计的写作单项考试AWA(Analytical Writing Assessment)。ETS从20##年10月份开始，正式将写作单项考试并入GRE考试，取代原有的GRE逻辑部分(Analytical Section)。它用于评价考生的逻辑思维和英文写作能力，即分析问题，阐述立场，论证观点的能力和独立的完成一篇中心明确逻辑严谨的英文文章的能力。在这里请注意：逻辑写作不测试学生所掌握的具体知识，以确保对于有不同教育背景的考生的公平性。

　　GRE写作要求考生在45分钟+30分钟内分别完成两篇文章，它是美国所有作文考试中时间最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试。此外，GRE作文不仅是普林斯顿的教授给个分就算，它还要我们花钱将其寄到我们申请的学校，然后由这帮决定我们命运的委员会的委员们严格把关，看你是否在科研文章的写作方面具备一定的水准，因为你们将来的老板对写作的要求是比较高的，所以这自然是构成了你能不能得到奖学金的重要标准之一。当然大家也不要怕，GRE写作的题目是全世界公开的，有点像我们的开卷考试，只要花一定的精力准备，再加上临危不惧的心态，一般的中国考生基本都能考到4.5分以上，所以请大家在准备GRE写作的第一天开始就要具备这种必胜的心态。

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GRE写作Argument高分范文

题目：

The following appeared in a memorandum from the general manager of KNOW radio station:

"KNOW should shift its programming from rock-and-roll music to a continuous news format. There are a number of reasons why: the number of older people in our listening area has increased dramatically, while the total number of our listeners has recently declined, music stores in our area report decreased sales of recorded music and continuous news stations in neighboring cities have been very successful. Furthermore, a survey taken just before the recent election shows that locals are interested in becoming better informed about politics."

范文：

This memo recommends that KNOW radio station shift from rock-and-roll (R&R) music programming to all-news programming based on a number of reasons. As the manager indicates, the total number of KNOW listeners are decreasing in number while the number of older people in KNOW's listening area is increasing. The manager also points out that area sales of music recordings are in decline. Furthermore, the manager cites a recent survey that indicates local residents are interested in becoming better informed about politics. The manager also points out

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太傻留学北美gre范文精讲

  　本文是为大家搜索整理的有关gre北美范文总结之科学研究类文章要点知识，希望对大家的gre作文备考有所帮助。

　　fundamental objectivesand nature of research 研究的基本目标和本性

　　research is the exploration of the unknownfor true answers to our questions, and for lasting solutions to our enduringproblems. Research is also the chief means by which we humans attempt to satisfyour insatiable appetite for knowledge, and our craving to understand ourselvesand the world around us.

　　explore unchartedand unpredictable territory 探索未知和不可预见的领域

　　Indisputably不可否认的 , the many complex technological marvels 科学奇迹 that are significant of our lives are the result ofthe extraordinary cumulative累积的 efforts of ourengineers, entrepreneurs, and others . and such achievements always call forthe courage to risk failing in a large way.

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GRE写作Argument满分范文

题目：

“The Mozart School of Music should obviously be the first choice of any music student. First of all, the Mozart School stresses intensive practice and training, so students typically begin their training at a very young age. Second, the school has ample facilities and up-to-date professional equipment. Also, its faculty includes some of the most distinguished music teachers in the world. Finally, many Mozart graduates have gone on to be the most renowned and most highly paid musicians in the nation.”

范文：

This argument concludes that the Mozart School should be the first choice of any music student based on (1) its intensive practice requirements for students of all ages, (2) its outstanding facilities, up-to-date equipment, and distinguished faculty, and (3) the accomplishments of its graduates. The evidence provided indicates that the Mozart School of Music should, in fact, be the first choice but the argument has several fatal flaws.

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6.

开头：

1. In this article, the author concludes that the decline in arctic deer population must be due to global warming, which has led to the melting of ice.

2. Her conclusion is mainly based on the following evidence. (1)Local hunter reports that deer number is decreasing; (2) arctic deer needs to travel on ice from island to island in order to find food; (3) global warming has caused ice to melt.

3. However, the above evidence is insufficient for the author to draw the conclusion, unless she provides more relevant information.

正文：

第一段：

1. First of all, the author clearly assumes that the global warming trend is significant enough to impact the thickness of ice over the region where arctic deer live.

2. However, granted that much ice is beginning to melt, it may happen in places relatively warmer than where the deer reside. In fact, this area may still be quite cold

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