中考作文点评

今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时”(This Time Next Year )，黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的想象空间，可以说是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体，加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 20xx年中考英语作文：

题目：This time next year

This time next year I will be enjoying my senior school life 1.which I have expected for a long time. The life then will be 2.as colorful as flowers.I will take an active part in all kinds of activities in high school 3.because the saying goes ”All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. In addition, making friends 4.will be on top of the list since a real friendship5.is of great importance to me. As for me, I will be definitely6.turning a new leaf of my future life this time next year, and I’m really looking forward to it. ? 精彩亮点分析：

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【范文一】

Recently many university students launch spontaneous donations for helping classmates suffering from serious illnesses or victims in disasters. Along with the behavior of donating, the donation amount has become a controversial topic. Some even hold the opinion that the amount is a standard for measuring love. The more amounts are donated, the more help the needed can get.

I support that donation for the needed is a kind of behavior which shows kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion, benefiting in improving interpersonal relationship and building up a harmonious society. What matters a lot is not how much money is donated, but the care and support hidden behind.

All in all, the behavior of donation itself should be encouraged, but it shouldn’t become a competition. The money donated cannot be equated with the love and the meaning hidden. Every penny is an expression of love.

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中考英语优秀作文评析

优秀作文评析（一）——记叙文 1

【习作要求】根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上；每组英文提示所写的句数不限。
   彼得只有五岁，和他的祖母住在一起。一天他的祖母得了重感冒，彼得急得直哭，后来他……
(1) Peter, five　 (2) live, grandma (3) have, cold, worried, cry
(4) idea, find, parents' telephone number, call 　(5) news, hurry, home, hospital
　【参考范文】
　　Peter is only five (years old). He lives with his grandma. One day his grandma had a cold. Peter was so worried that he began to cry. Then he had an idea. He found his parents' telephone number and gave them a call. When his parents heard the news, they hurried back home and took Peter's grandma to the hospital.
【名师点评】
　　根据中英文提示可理清需要进行表达的大致情节是：彼得只有五岁，他和他的祖母住在一起，一天他的祖母得了重感冒，他急得直哭。后来有了一个主意，他找到了他父母的电话号码，他打电话给了他们，当他的父母得知这一消息后迅速地赶回家，把祖母送进医院。须注意前面介绍的是一般情况用一般现在时，后面叙述的是过去发生的事用一般过去时。动词的运用及动词的时态是在进行书面表达时尤其要注意的。

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PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

My friend and I

I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!

【要领点评】

写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物，就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。

时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。

句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。

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20##高考复习英语考案

书面表达

【专题考案】一、（2009.江西卷）

学校即将举行以“Turning a bad mood（心情）into a good one ”为题目的英语作文比赛，请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的记叙文或议论文。

记叙文                                    议论文

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20##大学英语六级考试作文范文及点评

在大学英语六级考试中，写作部分是不是会另很多同学头疼。不知如何下笔，写出来之后也不知道自己写的怎么样。为了让同学有更加清晰地写作思路，下面为为大家提供点评作文，希望能帮助到同学们。

My opinion on certificate craze

The growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, why’s the craze?

The reason behind this phenomenon is common — the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one’s ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.

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中考英语作文范例：我们的住宅小区

Our Housing Estate

我们的小区

There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our housing Rainbow Estate, is one of them.

浦东新区有很多漂亮的小区，我们的小区——彩虹小区，是其中之一。

You can see three in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2. In the gardon there is a . There is a shop on the right of Block 1. A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there.

小区中间有三条街道。在第二条街道前面是一个美丽的花园，花园里有个喷泉。在第一条街道的右面是一个商店，而第三街道的左边是一个巨大的运动场，可以看到男男女女在那边做运动。

There is a small in our housing estate. It is and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate.

在我们的小区有一个小小的幼儿园。对于我们来说，住在小区十分方便和舒服。 点评：文章的结构与布局较合理，有一定的顺序，层次分明。

中考英语作文范例：我们的语音室 编辑点评：中考英语作文的另一种类型是说明文。说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。

说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的，可以自上而下，自左而右，从里到外，从整体到局部等等。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。

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