大学英语四级考试作文预测（2011.11）

恩波教育英语研究所

预测作文（一）

Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students

1．    不少大学生的生活方式消极，不上课，不运动，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，导致知识水平下降的同时身体素质也在下降。

2．    你对此有什么看法和建议？

【范文】

In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities. This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.

Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on. To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed. As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard. Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home. Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.

【点评】

文章开门见上，指出大学生的不良生活方式，简单提及其危害。之后第二段分析了导致生活方式消极的原因：生物钟颠倒，沉迷于网络游戏，饮食习惯不规律以及各种竞争的压力。同时分别给大学，父母和大学生给出建议。 

文章第一段中would like… rather than意为“宁愿……而不愿……”； to some extend意为“在某种程度上”；reversed biological clock意为“颠倒的生物钟”；health comes first意为“健康第一”；conscientiously observe意为“认真遵守”；form意为“培养”。

预测作文（二）

Character Education

1．  学校教育除了培养学生的学习能力之外，还应注重诸如孝顺、诚实等的品德培养；

2．  品德培养的重要性。

【范文】

Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think. But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life. As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.

Character education plays an important role in the development of future society. It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities. In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives. What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their motherland.

【点评】

本题谈论的是学校教育，说明了只注重培养学生的学习，思考能力，很难建成和谐舒适的社会，由此引出需要加强道德教育。第二段从几个方面说明品德教育的重要性：满足学生全面发展的需要；防止学生变得自私，自利，自负，没有礼貌等等；教导学生对自己和祖国的将来负责。

第一段第一句中hardly意为“几乎不”；leading a harmonious life意为“引领和谐生活”； attach more attention to 意为“更加重视”； 第二段第一句 plays an important role in意为“起重要作用”；efficiently，colourfully和seriously作为副词，修饰前面的动词，分别指代有效地学习，多姿多彩地生活，认真负责地做事。

预测作文（三）

Does Knowledge Change Fate?

1．    “知识改变命运”曾是无数寒门子弟奋斗的动力所在，可如今现实却是，不仅知识难以改变命运，穷孩子能接触到知识的机会也在减少。

2．    你对此有什么看法，且应采取什么措施阻止这种现象？

【范文】

Large number of children from poor families once held the belief "Knowledge can change fate" and thought that hardworking could reward them-- As one sows, so will one reap. But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.

This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society. First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening. Second, it may let many real potential genius go away. Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.

Therefore it needs to take urgent measures. On the part of government, it should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students. As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.

【点评】

文章由习语“知识改变命运”引出话题，指出当今社会现实---知识无法改变命运。文章第二段分析了该现象的危害：加剧穷富差距和不公平；导致“潜在的”人才流失；不利于建立和谐社会。最后一段分别给政府，学校提出建议，采取措施改变这种状况。

第一段中reward 意为“回报”；As one sows, so will one reap.为习语，意为“ 一分耕耘,一分收获。” 文章第二段中列举该现象的危害，分别用 First,_…Second,_…Third表示“首先……其次……再次”。building a people-oriented, harmonious society意为“创建以人为本的和谐社会”。

第三段中 make preferential policies意为“制订优惠政策”，establish completed systems意为“建立完善的体系”。

预测作文（四）

Indirect Employment

1．    工作难找，大学生流行“曲线就业”，通过实习或做一些杂活积累社会经验。

2．    你对此有什么看法？

【范文】

Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out. Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.

I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment. Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which can't be gotten from books. Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests. Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs. 

【点评】

文章第一段指出大学生就业形势严峻，随之出现“曲线就业”。文章第二段开门见山，说明自己的观点---赞成这种做法，然后一一列出了好处：第一，缓解就业压力，获取新的知识和实践经验；第二，有利于大学生认识自己兴趣所在；第三，锻炼学生的社会技能和个性。

第一段中severe employment situation意为“严峻的就业形势”；finding ways out意为“寻求出路”；第二段中in favor of 意为“支持”；not only_…but also意为“不仅……而且……”；Last but not the least意为“最后但是最重要的是”。

预测作文（五）

Who Should Pay the University's Tuition？

1．    大学学费不断上涨，有人认为大学学费应由学生自己赚取，有人认为应由父母供给。

2．    作为大学生，谈谈你自己的观点，并给出理由。

【范文】            

University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities. With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition. Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life. Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.    

As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part. It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies. But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money. Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.

【点评】

文章第一段开门见山，指出关于谁支付大学学费的不同意见。第二段说明自己的观点----希望父母和孩子共同承担学费，这样有助于减轻家庭负担，学生也有机会通过社会实践获取更多社会经验。

第一段中With the rising of university's tuition意为“随着大学学费的上涨”；be beyond one' s ability意为“超出某人的能力范围”。第二段中gain working experience意为 “获取社会经验”；lighten financial burdens意为“减轻经济负担”。

第二篇：20xx年12月四级考试作文总结

20xx年x月四级考试作文总结

付力菘

1． 书信及记叙文

Passage 1

求学信（将划线部分替换为括号内内容就成为求职信）

Dear Sir or Madam,

I, the under signed, am a senior from the Department of Business Administration and writing the letter in purpose of applying for (your recently advertised position for a staff member).

I am confident that I am qualified for it. In the first place, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualification and work experience. Secondly, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, staff menber).

Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Passage 2 （四级）

英语学习讨论会开幕辞

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to this meeting! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of the student union.

The following is my introduction the the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of English Study. Second, on behalf of our student union, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the students and teachers. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.

I hope all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.

2． 图表作文（略）

参见教材P18-21 / 参见课堂笔记

3． 观点对比

Passage 1

The Role of Migrant Workers

（农民工的作用）

Currently, an increasing number of people realize that migrant workers, who are an indispensible part of our work force, make a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. Specifically, there is no doubt that, on construction sites, without migrant workers many of the construction projects would have to be held up. Apart from that, the large number of migrant workers is a factor which stimulates the consumption of daily items.

While placing great emphasis on the positive impacts of these migrant workers, we are not to ignore troubles facing them. To begin with, these migrants have trouble getting their

children into child care centers and schools because they are unregistered residents in the city. As you know, illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of lays, tend to make troubles concerning law and order. Additionally, most of the migrant workers swarm into cities merely for money, some of whom would stop at nothing to get what they want and become a potential threat to the peace and stability of society.

Taking into account of all these influences, I can safely come to the conclusion that while we are appreciating their great contribution, we are supposed to pay enough attention to the problems caused by them. In sum, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-side to affirm or to negate everything.

4． 综合（现象阐释 + 观点对比 + 原因分析 + 个人见解）

Passage 1

My View on Examinations

1. 有很多大学以考试来衡量学生的学习效果；

2. 考试可能带来的副作用；

3. 我对考试的看法。

Traditionally, in most colleges and universities, examinations are adopted as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Specifically, it is not surprising to see students burn the candle at both ends to get prepared for their final examinations at the end of each semester. Apparently, examinations function positively to urge students working diligently.

Actually, when attaching great emphasis on examinations, we are not to ignore the side effects. To begin with, examinations lower the standard of teaching, because teachers tend to train their students merely in exam techniques as they are judged by examination results. Apart from that, the prevalence of examinations will definitely encourage undesirable study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.

Taking into account all these factors, I can safely come to the conclusion that few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?