导语：下面YJBYS小编与您分享英语作文评语，感谢阅读!

　　1,简单交待时间,地点和结果…

　　In 1, a brief introduction of the time, place and results ...

　　语言简练,规范,开篇吸引人.

　　Concise language, norms, begins to attract people.

　　…以…开头,较有新意.前因后果娓娓道来.

　　... In order to ... First, a new, Weiweidaolai antecedents and consequences.

　　开篇简明扼要,精炼有序;重点描述…给人留下深刻印象.

　　The opening be concise and to the point, refining orderly; key description ... Very impressive.

　　以景喻情,开头颇有新意;倒叙开头,渲染意境.

　　To view the metaphor, beginning quite new; flashback beginning, rendering the mood.

　　开头直奔主题,也是一种写法.

　　At the beginning of straight to the subject, is also a kind of way.

　　开头很活泼.拟人化手法的运用使开头显得活泼,

　　Beginning very lively. Personification makes beginning is lively,

　　反问句开头,吸引读者.

　　Asked at the beginning of a sentence, to attract readers.

　　开头直奔主题,让人一目了然.

　　At the beginning of straight to the subject, let people stick out a mile.

　　开头点题,用词很吸引人.

　　At the beginning of the theme, with the word is very attractive.

　　2,场面和气氛描写为文章增色不少;

　　2, scene and the atmosphere for the description of grace;

　　…对精彩地方进行简单描述;点面结合

　　... On the exciting place for a simple description; Dianmianjiege

　　简单介绍情况,自然过渡到下一段;

　　Brief introduction of situation, natural transition to the next paragraph;

　　情境描写调动起悬念;

　　Situation description arouse suspense;

　　充分运用语言,动作,心理描写,使事情具体,生动.

　　Make full use of the language, action, psychological description, make something specific, vivid.

　　简要叙述前因,进行铺垫.

　　Brief description of antecedents, to pave the way.

　　这一部分可以加入对话或者一些心理描写.

　　This part can join the conversation or some psychological description.

　　将…改成…更合适些,

　　Will be ... Change into ... Some more appropriate,

　　自然承上启下,细节描写突出人物品质,令人感动.

　　Natural bridge, details of outstanding character, moving.

　　叙事中夹写景,以已度人,将心比心.

　　In his narration clip, Yiyiduren, feel for others.

　　拟人化语言使文章更显得生动活泼.

　　Anthropomorphic language make the article more appear to be lively and vivid.

　　外形描写十分有趣,突出了…的可爱.介绍中融入了自己的思想,有感染力.

英语作文评语的大众写法是怎么样的？下面小编带给大家啦。

　　mynameisjinjiahong,andmyenglishnameiskaci.i’m14yearsold,37kg.ilikeenglish,andbooks,red,orange,pink,blue,shuttlecock,waternmelon,apple,andbananas.yesterday,iwenttozhejianguniversitytolearnenglish.oh,hereisbeautiful!imakeafriend.hernameismayun.sheisfromhangzhou,she’s10yearsold,andlikesapples.

　　today,i’mveryhappy.

　　班主任评语：verygood!keepstudyinghard,andibelieveyoucanlearnalothere!

　　mychinesenameis范依昀。myenglishnameiskate.brown.myfamilynameisbrown.myfirstnameiskate.i’m12yearsold.iamchinese.i’mfromhuzhou.ihavemanyhobbies.ilikeplayingfootball,andplayingcomputer.ilikebluebest.ihaveafriend.hernameis蒋姣姣。shelookshappy,sheislovely.ilikeherverymuch.shelikeswatchingtvandsinging.thereisthreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,motherandme.myfatherisadoctor,mymotherisadoctortoo.ilikethemverymuch.iamhappyeveryday.mytelephonenumberis********.welcometomyhome.

　　班主任评语：verygood!yourhand-writhingisverynice.

　　todayisthefirstdayofthesummercamp.icouldn’tsleepwellyesterdayevening.maybeifeltalittleuncomfortable.iseldomlivewithothers.andthebedroomisdifferentformhome.butimetthreenewfriendshere.they’refriendlyandlovely.

　　afterthebeginningceremony,ihadanexam.thefirstpassagewasalittledifficultforme.somewordsihaven’tlearnbefore.ispentsomeminutesonit.anyway,ithoughtipassedit.

　　intheafternoon,isawtheforeignteacher.hernameisjane.abeautifulfirlwhocomesfromusa.sheisnotold,just22.butshehadbeentoeurope,beijing.sheletusplaysomegames,becauseshewantedustoknoweachtherquickly.butithinkthegamesisnotinteresting.sosomestudentsdon’tputtheirheartsinthegame.alsotheteacherspokesoquicklythaticouldn’tunderstandher.

　　班主任评语：beautifulhand-writing!exceptforsomegrammermistakes,thisdairycouldbeperfect!asfortheclass,ithink