考研写作
四大高分句型 1.倒装句 2.强调句
3.虚拟语气 4.非谓语动词
第一句 画面导入
第一个半句
套路一：What we can observe/see/catch sight of/find (主语从句) is that … (表语从句)
套路二：As is vividly/symbolically/clearly/distinctly
(定语从句)
套路三：The above picture/drawing/cartoon/chart a scene where (定语从句) …
第二个半句
there is/are …… (with ……) doing …… (非谓语动词), who …… (定语从句)
两幅图：At the mean time, we can also observe/see/catch sight ……
第二句 含义引出
套路一：两句话
of …… (主题词)
套路二：一句话
of …… (主题词)
套路三：一句话
of …… (主题词)
其他套路：
The real implication of the picture lies in that ……
The drawing makes us think a lot about ……
It reflects a prevailing trend of ……
The cartoon conveys such a message that ……
The implication carried by this picture is that ……
This picture reveals a non-uncommon phenomenon that …… As can be clearly seen from the above picture, ……
It is clear that the picture implies a common phenomenon in our society today that ……
Yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.
Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implication from these thought-provoking drawings.
第二段 分析论证
一、 热门话题展开方式：
1. “环境保护”的四个展开方向：
1). 我们仅有一个地球，保护地球就是保护我们自己。
高分例句1：It has long been agreed by all nations around the world that we have one but only one earth, on which our ancestors have been inhabiting for more than thousands of years.
高分例句2：To make sure that our descendants have the opportunity to enjoy the same fresh air and clean water as our predecessor once did, things must be done.
2). 合理的利用自然资源是一回事儿，过度开采就是另外一回事儿了。
高分例句1：Now that nature has its own way to maintain itself, trying hard not to interfere too much is the first step we should make.
高分例句2：Reasonable utilizing of natural resources is one thing, aggressive exploiting is another.
3). 从工业革命开始，人类已经污染地球几百年了，我们应该尽自己最大的努力不再制造更多的污染。
高分例句1：In contrast with other "residents" on the earth, we human beings have been polluting the planet for over hundreds of years since Industrial Revolution.
高分例句2：It is high time that we stopped such irresponsible actions as unrestricted pouring carbon dioxide into the air and immoderate drainage of waste water into the rivers.
4). “环境保护”和“责任义务”的结合。
2、“文化交流”的四个展开方向：
1). 中国是一个拥有悠久历史的文化古国，现在很多影响全世界的文化都最初起源于中国。
高分例句1：Being a nation with a history of more than thousands years, China has a long standing civilization.
高分例句2：Many culture elements which today influence the whole world originally took root in China, such as Confucianism,
benevolence, Taoism, rite, kung fu, and so on.
2). 但是随着改革开放，打开国门，很多西方文化元素越来越多的影响中国人，特别是年轻人。
高分例句1：However, with the reform and opening to the outside world, western culture strongly impacts our Chinese traditional cultures.
高分例句2：In recent years, there have been great concerns over the fact that more and more young people are increasingly influenced by foreign cultures.
3). 对于中国传统文化的精髓，我们应该发扬；对于西方文化中的糟粕，我们应该抛弃。
高分例句1：So the point is: should we totally abandon our conventions or should we absolutely deny the western ones? According to my
opinion, neither way would be a wise choice. What we really should do is to discard the dross and select the essence.
高分例句2：Our society/government is expected to appeal to the general public, especially to the youth, to resist the bad effects of foreign cultures/ to carry on the outstanding institutions of our Chinese traditional culture.
4). “文化交流”与责任义务的结合
二、人生哲理展开方式
1、 “乐观积极”的四个展开方向：
1). 在面对问题的时候，人们总是有“积极”和“消极”两种截然不同的态度。
高分例句1：From my point of view, what the drawing tries to tell us is that problems can always divide people into the pessimistic ones and the optimistic ones.
高分例句2：The impact of attitude on our life is immense, which means the two contrasting attitudes, pessimistic or optimistic, usually lead to opposite results.
2). “积极”和“消极”两种截然不同的态度导致截然不同的结果。
高分例句1：Just as an old saying puts it, "life is 10 percent what happens and 90 percent how we react to it,” which means that it is attitude that ultimately makes or mars our life.
高分例句2：On one hand, positively thinking keeps us self-confidence; while on the other hand, negatively thinking leads to self-doubtfulness.
3). “积极”使人自信并且成功，“消极”使人自疑并且失败。
高分例句1：To awake one`s dormant spirit and achieve bigger success, a positive attitude and self confidence are indispensable.
高分例句2：What is true is that people with tremendous potential have already lost their chance to win the moment they lose their confidence in their own ability.
4). 名言引语。
高分例句1: Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. 高分例句2：Content is better than riches.
2. “毅力坚持”的四个展开方向：
1). 人生中会面临许多艰难险阻，能否坚持很重要。
高分例句1：Just like the famous line from Shakespeare’s Hamlet, “To be or not to be, that is the question,” to be persistent or not to be persistent, that is the question we all have to face.
高分例句2：Be we rich or poor, young or old, we may definitely come across various of problems and frustrations during our life journey.
2). 有志者事竟成，只有坚持的人才会取得成功。
高分例句1：Where there is a will, there is a way. Rome is not built in a day. Will is power. Success belongs to the persevering. He laughs best who laughs last.
高分例句2：God helps those who help themselves. All things are difficult before they are easy. No pains, no gains. Diligence is the mother of success. Life is not all roses.
3). “毅力”和“坚持”这种品质能帮助我们克服很多困难。
高分例句1：It is this spirit of persistence and willpower that allows us to overcome problems and frustrations time and time again.
高分例句2：Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. Care and diligence bring luck. Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.
4). 举例论证。
高分例句1：Many much told stories reiterate this time-honored virtue of … and …, like … Such stimulating stories are not rare in our daily life. I can think of no better illustration than the example of …
高分例句2：To my best understanding, the story of …… could be a case in point. The most persuasive example is ……
3. “责任义务”的四个展开方向：
1). 责任感是一个人重要的品质。
高分例句1：Reliability is the touchstone of a man`s moral character.
高分例句2：Taking the responsibilities that you should take makes you a man who could be trusted and counted on.
2). 名言引语。
高分例句1：Just as a famous speech puts it, "Ask not what the country can do for you, ask what you can do for the country", we may also ask not what other people can do for you, but ask what you can do for others.
高分例句2：Responsibility is a keyword that we should never
disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.
3). 因果论证。
高分例句1：The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.
高分例句2： on account of … owing to … due to … for the reason that … it is due to … that… derive from … arise from … stem from … root in … ascribe … to …
4). 正反论证。
高分例句1：Those who tried every means to avoid their duties of …… should bear in mind that ……
高分例句2：Just as the old saying puts it, “Honesty is the best policy.” But unreliability makes you distrustful.
4. “团结关爱”的四个展开方向：
1). 我们应该学会合作。
高分例句1：In this ever changing modern society, it is important for everyone of us to bear it in mind that we should learn to be a team player, and that we should take active part in cooperation.
高分例句2：Without cooperation, a person or organization can not accomplish much in the increasingly interdependent society we now live in.
2). 团结关爱是中华民族的传统美德，我们应该继承并且发扬。
高分例句1：As a nation renewed in the world for many of its virtues, the Chinese people have been practicing compassion throughout history.
高分例句2：Solidarity and friendship are traditional virtues cherished by Chinese people, so it is our responsibility to carry forward these merits and show consideration for whoever around us.
3). 只有团结关爱，才能取得成功。
高分例句1：It is the cooperation based on the complementary advantages that will contribute to the ultimate success.
高分例句2：The spirit of cooperation should be embraced by every nation in the world. Cooperation is an essential element of success. Only in this way can we have a harmonious society and live a happy live.
4). 名言引语。
高分例句1：The more we care about and help each other, the better life we will live. The less care about and help each other, the worse life we will live.
高分例句2：Many hands make light work. Many heads are better than one.
第三段 总结收尾
1)热门话题第三段
套路一
So, in one word, ___ 主题词 ___ is one of the most popular topics which has been discussed by people from all over
the world. Other than its popularity, its remarkably influence on us also makes it noteworthy. Therefore, a panoramic perspective is crucial to the notion of ___ 主题词 ___.
套路二
So, it goes without saying that the value of ___ 主题词 ___ can be easily proved. What happened in the picture can frequently be used to enlighten the youth on the importance of ___ 主题词 ___. At the
mean time, all of us accept the fact that the government should vividly appeal to the whole society to notice this inevitable trend.
2)人生哲理第三段
套路一
主题词 ___ is career. To my best understanding, only when we realize that and take a further step to fulfill it, a brighter future could be seized.
套路二
So, as mentioned above, many successful people benefit from ___ 主题词 ___. Therefore, we should regard it as one of our basic life principles. Only in this way can we make both our life and career
successful, and only in this way can we be worthy of the name of a Chinese. I am pretty much sure that my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
图文结合句
What the picture described is a good example of
What has been shown in the picture is a good example of
What the picture mirrors is a good example of
In the above picture, there is a good example that
What has been revealed in this picture is that