1. 鉴于有许多后面报班的学员没有上过写作课,作文不知道如何下手,所以我还是给大家提供一些模板,但请大家务必一定灵活使用。自己已经整理出模板的同学尽量不要换模板了,免得考场遗忘。
为了大家方面背诵,建议顺序词(一二三)大家每次都用自己熟悉那个。
大家在背诵模板时一定要将作文的结构了然于心,哪一部分该写什么要清楚。今年大作文还是主要关注图表类作文。英语(一)近十多年一直考图画作文,英语(二)应该考图表作文。
2. 小作文今年主要关注以下四种书信:道歉信,询问信,求职信,申请信(继续深造)后面提供了范文。
3. 一点备考意见:
剩最后20天左右,请同学们不要急躁,急躁对考试毫无益处,只会浪费时间。强迫自己学习,做题,审查反省题目。下面就英语这块我给出几点备考意见以供参考:
1)请大家把这10套模拟题认真做完,每一篇作文都要亲自动手写,作文是写出来的。平时多练手,考试时才能有东西可写。模拟题对完答案后要仔细看一下自己是怎么错的。
2)回头把近三年的真题找出来重新做一遍,熟悉里面的每一个单词和短语,因为单词和短语重现频率很高。同时大家重点关注阅读理解错误选项是如何设置陷阱的,自己又是如何掉入陷阱的,避免重蹈覆辙。
3)即使在临考前最后一天大家也要看英语,甚至是找点题目来做,让自己保持预感,并处于做题状态。
4)大家在考试时翻译和写作一定要保持卷面干净整洁,并且每题要答在对应的位置,不可超出答题区,这样会扫描不上的。
5)下面给大家提供几个话题练练手:作文以不变应万变,好好练习即可。
A. Credit Cards. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 越来越多的人使用信用卡。
2. 信用卡的优点及信用卡的弊端。
3.我的看法。
B.Should the University Campus Be Used as Public Lots? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 目前一些大学开放校园作为公共停车场。
2. 有人认为这样可以资源共享,有人认为这样会搅乱教学秩序。
3. 我认为…….
C. Should the University Abandon Military Training? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 目前,一些大学废除了大学生的入学军训。
2. 有人对此持肯定态度,有人持否定态度。
3. 我的看法。
D. 人们出行选择各种交通工具的比例变化
1) interpret the chart and
2) give your comments.
You should write at least 150 words,
一:柱状图使用模板:
1. 增长变化型模板1
The diagram above clearly illustrates that dramatic acceleration has occurred in the_题目内容________ in the past___ years. According to the statistics given above, we may conclude that ____ was on a steady rise from ____ to____。In 1998, the number was a a low level, only about____. Surprisingly, it reached more than____ in 20## within no more than seven years.
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. First and foremost, China has become particularly active in____, which leads to the increased demand of _____. In addition, the development of job market makes_____ possible. Last but not least, _______.
Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that with speedy advance of our society, the _____ will keep growing in the forthcoming decade.
2. 增长变化型模板2
As can be clearly observed from the chart above, the trend of_题目内容 is going up these years. From 1999 to 2001, the number of ____ was on a steady rise. According to the chart, the number increased from 3 million in 2005 to 7 million in 2008.
I assume there are at least three fundamental factors to account for the above-mentioned changes. Most obviously, the changes are primarily concerned with the income of Chinese. They are better off and can afford to____. Less obvious but of the same importance, such trend has a lot to do with________. Last but not least, the changes are closely related to our policy of opening up to the outside world.
From what has been discussed so far, it’s evident that the increase in the number of ______ is of great concern of our life. It reflects the improvement of our living standards and the development of our economy.
二:表格类使用模板:
遇到表格类作文时,如果数字比较少,大家可以逐一描述;如果数字比较多,大家这样处理:先综述一句,然后选择典型数字描述(最高点,最低点,变化最大的等)。
What is revealed in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in 表格内容。/ As is clearly manifested in the table above, people’s attitudes towards_____ vary from person to person.(这两句综述句根据情况互换的,不可同时使用。)___后面根据表格内容展开描述_________
Such difference/growth may be rooted in the following reasons. In the first place, the risen income resulting from economic growth plays a vital role in ______. In the second place, __________________________. As a result of such a shift, the varieties above mentioned come naturally.
From the analyses achieved above, with further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the _____ in the table will continue in the future.
三:饼状图
As is shown in the pie chart, 综合描述一下图表。 _____takes the lead with 54%, followed by_____ with 47%, ______ taking the third place with 36%. (该段描述主要部分的次序以及所占比例。)
It is no easy/simpletask/job to furnish/identify/find every reason/cause for sth, but/while, on the whole, three factors shout louder than(/ weigh heavier than others/stand out from) others.(划横线部分是可以互换的单词短语。) The first consideration is that …(1~2 sentences) Another point to note is that … (1~2 sentences) The third element is that … (1~2 sentences)
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold this phenomenon is quite normal. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend, which is a blessing to the whole society as well as individuals.
如果图表反映的内容是不良现象,改一下结尾如下:
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold this phenomenon is quite abnormal. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in reversing this trend, which is a curse to the whole society as well as individuals.
四:问题解决型文章
Over the past couple of years, the case of______ has been exposed many times. Therefore, ______ has become a hot topic across the country, which can never be ignored any longer.
第二部分大家可以写原因或者严重后果。
原因段跟上面格式相同,再次不赘述。
严重后果段如下:
Given the serious/grim/severe nature of the problem, I feel sure if things go like this and nothing to better it, there is every chance that we have to pay “high price” for it. (翻译:考虑到该问题的严重性,我确信如果不采取任何改善措施,任其发展,我们将很有可能性为此付出高昂代价。)The most serious should be highlighted here is it has posed a potential threat to the development of society. What’s more, it’s harmful to… Another point that can never be overlooked is that it will be an obstacle to…
In view of the severe consequences, effective and efficient measures should be taken before things get worse. To put it this way, government should launch a massive campaign and lay down tougher laws to crack down the irresponsible behaviors. Meanwhile, the public should raise their awareness to boycott it. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy much safer and greener world in the days ahead.
五:现象评论型文章。(阐述原因的)
The past few years / Recent years have witnessed/seen the event of a widespread phenomenon that an increasing number of people are asking for network real name system(网络实名制) , which has immediately aroused a heated discussion among public.
Facing this problem/phenomenon/tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors/driving forces that are responsible.(后面写几条原因自己决定)
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold this phenomenon is quite normal. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend, which is a blessing to the whole society as well as individuals.
如果图表反映的内容是不良现象,改一下结尾如下:
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold this phenomenon is quite abnormal. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in reversing this trend, which is a curse to the whole society as well as individuals.
六: 利弊分析型文章(跟A4作文一样)
大作文
Structure1:
Para1: Description of the phenomenon
Para2: Diverse views
Para3: Your own opinion+causes
Para4: Restate your opinion
Structure2:
Para1: Phenomenon+ Diverse views
Para2: Your own opinion+causes
Para3: Restate your opinion
A4作文(采用结构1)
With more countries stepping to aging societies, pension systems will not pull through in twenty years with current retirement policies, as is reported by the World Bank. Therefore, whether retirement time should be delayed has hit the headline of numerous prevalent websites.
In light of this issue, there spring up a wide variety of voices. Some people view it as beneficial in that human life span has been extended substantially, the retirement time should be delayed accordingly. Instead, still some others consider that it is unsuitable /unacceptable for a developing country like China.
As for me, I am on board with the latter one for the following two fuels. To begin with, tense and severe employment pressure of young people makes the limited open posts harder to land with delayed retirement, which, in turn, presumably gives rise to unstable society. A case in point, the increasing criminal rate of youth can justify this threat. Additionally, compared with young workers, the middle-aged one are declining in many aspects, for example, the vigor, passion, energy, creativity and son on, which will be an obstacle to/ in the way of advancing our society.
Consequently, I, once again, hold firm belief that current retirement time should not be delayed, which is a blessing to the whole society as well as individuals.(214words)
模板2(采用结构2)
It seems that nothing could please everyone and _____ is no exception. People hold diverse/different/contraryviews/opinions towards it. Some people believe… is a blessing because…, however, the other contends it as a curse in that…
As far as I am aware, I am inclined to support the former/latter one. It’s no difficulty for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint. 后面阐述自己的理由。
There is no denying the fact that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well-founded in the foregoing discussion. Therefore, I believe, the current trend should be encouraged rather than discouraged.
小作文:
1. 道歉信 (系统班讲义第71页第一篇, A2模考作文)
Dear Mr. Smith,
I wish to personally apologize for your unfortunate treatment by our employee, Anlin, last Friday. Her actions toward you were totally inappropriate.
Because of this occurrence, we have relieved Ms. Anlin of her position. We would also like to offer you a gift certificate for 50 Yuan worth of merchandise at our store. We value our customers and hope that this token will help compensate for the embarrassment/ inconvenience we brought to you. We are improving the training program on service awareness for all our employees to avoid such problems in the future.
Thanks you for your business and you understanding. We hope that this is a satisfactory solution to the problem.(115words)
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◆常用句式:
1. I am writing to apologize for … /I am writing to say sorry for
我写这封信是因……向你致歉。
2. I would like to give you my apology for…
对于……我向你道歉。
3 .Please accept my sincere apology for…
关于……请接受我真诚的道歉。
4.I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but believe I had no intention to…
对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……
5. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
6. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。
7. Please accept my apologies for my oversight.
请原谅我的疏忽。
8. Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次表示歉意。
9. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.
我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。
10. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.
对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
2. 询问信 (另外,系统班讲义上第72页第三篇和第75页第十篇)
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. I am writing the letter in purpose of inquiring/seeking/obtaining/requesting information concerning/regarding the following aspects.
First of all, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Secondly, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours?
I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
◆常用句式:
1. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning…
如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。
2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…
我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。
3. I wonder if you could tell me the information about…
我想知道您能否给我提供……的信息。
4. I am writing for the information about…
我写信是想知道关于……的信息。
5. I would like to know whether you could provide me with information regarding…
我想知道您是否能给我提供……的信息。
6. I wish to request materials for…
我想要关于……的资料。
7. Would you be so kind as to tell me…
您能告诉我……?
8. I look forward to your immediate response.
期待您及时答复。
9. Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
感谢您对此信的关注。
10. I am waiting for your quick reply.
望尽快回复。
3.求职信(系统班讲义第75页第十一篇,)求职信其实是申请信的一种,因此开头结尾几乎一样。
其他范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of business manager you advertised in yesterday’sChina Daily.
To briefly introduce myself, I am a graduate student of Peking University majoring in business administration, and expect graduation this June.Not only have I excellent academic performance in all courses, I also possess the rich experience of assisting management staff of several renowned international companies, such as IBM and Microsoft. My interactive personal skills and teamwork spirit are also appropriate for this post.For further information, please refer to my attached resume.
I would be grateful if you could arrange an interview at your earliest convenience. / Should you grant me an interview, I would be most grateful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
4. 申请信
Dear Sir or Madam:
I wish to apply for admission to your department as a graduate student. I am writing to ask whether it will be possible for you to grant me a full scholarship, considering my academic record.
I completed a four-year course in chemistry at Beijing University last June. During my four years in the university, I have passed all the required courses of study with satisfactory marks. Besides, my English is very good. I have been learning English since early childhood with the help of my father who is a professor of English in Fudan University, Shanghai. I therefore believe that I will not have difficulties while studying in the United States.
I should be most grateful if you would give my request favorable consideration. Thank you very much and look forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Wei
◆常用句式
1. I beg to apply for… 特此申请……
2. I would like to apply for admission to your college.
我想申请进入贵校。
3. I am very much interested in going abroad to obtain an advanced degree in the field of…
我对出国留学攻读……学位很感兴趣。
4. I shall be mush obliged if you will be so kind as to help me accomplish my long-cherished wish.
如果您能帮我实现这一梦寐以求的愿望,本人将不胜感激。
5. I should be very much obliged if you could grant my application.
如果能批准我的申请,我将万分感谢。
6. Thank you again for you time on this matter.
再次感谢您抽出时间处理这件事。
7. I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.
多谢您在这件事上慷慨相助。
8. Please make the arrangement at your earliest convenience.
如果方便,请您尽快安排此事。
9. Thanks in advance for your prompt attention.
先行感谢您及时的关注。
10. Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to an early reply.
多谢您的关注,希望尽早得到您的回复。