20##年湖南省邵阳市中考英语   材料作文  特殊句式和变化句式

作文 (计10分) 

交网友须慎重。假如有几位网友想加你为QQ好友。请根据下面表格信息，以Who can be my QQ good friends?为标题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；

2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；

3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。                 

Who can be my QQ good friends?

 Dear friends,

we should be careful when we make QQ friends. I’d like to make QQ friends with those who have the same hobbies as me.                                                           

                                                                             

                                                                              

                                                                             

I think friendship is so important in our lives that we we’ll never lose it.

材料作文写作技巧之2 特殊句式和变化句式

特殊句式尤其是倒装句、感叹句、强调句型、非谓语的使用，这些句式的使用不仅使文章生动、表达准确，同时还证明了学生深厚的语言功夫以及表达能力。

通常，我们在草稿上，按照通常的做法，我们将材料遣词造句，连句成篇。但是，有时，为了避免文章句子的重复或达到高分的目的，我们需要在修改及文章润色过程，将句子变换一下，通常要应用倒装句、感叹句、强调句型、非谓语结构。

该材料常规的遣词造句为如下：

Liu Xing is15  he is male, his hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine.

Li Tao is 14 he is male   his hobbies are smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors.

Xia Xue is 16, she is female her hobbies are reading good books; listening to music and playing table tennis.

特殊句式和变化句式

Liu Xing is15. Being a male, his hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine. (非谓语结构)

Li Tao is an14-year-old boy. What bad hobbies he has. He likes smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors.( 感叹句)

Xia Xue is a girl of 16 years old, and reading good books; listening to music and playing table tennis are her hobbies.( 倒装句)

Who can be my QQ good friends?

Dear friends, we should be careful when we make QQ friends. I’d like to make QQ friends with those who have the same hobbies as me. I think that Xia Xue can be my QQ friend because she does have the same hobbies as me. Reading good books; listening to music and playing table tennis are her hobbies. What is more she is a girl of 16 years old so am I. Liu Xing can also be my QQ friend. Being a male, his hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine. I like such a boy. I think that Li Tao isn’t supposed to be my QQ friend. He likes smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors. What bad hobbies he has. He is 14 and too young to have these bad hobbies. They are harmful to his health. I think friendship is so important in our lives that we we’ll never lose it.

本文的过渡词

递进型：what is more

因果型 because

顺承型 and, also

译文

谁能成为我的QQ 好友?

朋友，我们应该慎重交QQ 好友。我将跟我有共同兴趣爱好的人成为QQ 好友。我认为夏雪可成为我的QQ 好友，因为她真跟我有相同的兴趣爱好。她的爱好是读好书，听音乐和打网球。另外，她是一个16岁的女孩，我也是。刘星也可成为我的QQ 好友，作为男性，他喜欢钓鱼，弹吉他和看杂志。我喜欢这样的男孩。我认为李涛不可成为我的QQ 好友，她他嗜好吸烟喝酒，还有染发。他的兴趣爱好多么不好。他十四岁，不能养成这些坏的毛病，这些对他的健康有害。我想友谊对我们生活很重要，我们不能没有它。

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20##年湖南省邵阳市中考英语    材料作文技巧之1---遣词造句 暑假计划

作文（10分) 

暑假即将开始，假如你是陈岩，你和家人打算去美丽的宝岛台湾旅游。请根据下面表格提供的信息，用英语给你在台湾的笔友李杰写一封信，谈谈你在台湾的行程和安排。

要求：

1.语句通顺，书写规范。文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

2. 要求包括所有要点，可适当发挥。 

3. 词数不少于70个单词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Jie,

How is it going?  Summer holiday is coming. I'd like to go to Taiwan to see you.                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

I'm looking forward to the trip. I can't wait for it. Best wishes to you. 

Yours ，  Chen Yan

材料作文技巧之1---遣词造句

材料给出的信息，不是完整的句子，这要求考生根据材料信息写出完整的句子。最基本的句子结构通常有六种

1）基本句型一：（定语）+ 主语+谓语动词+(状语)（有些简单句子可能没有定语和状语）

The red sun rises in the east.

红太阳在东方升起。

I am leaving.

我要走了。

2）基本句型二：（定语）+ 主语+系动词+ （定语）/(状语)+表语+(状语)

（有些简单句子可能没有定语和状语,表语为名称时，前面可能有定语修饰，表语为形容词，前面可能有副词做状语）

His dream is a good teacher in this school.

他的梦想是成为这个学校的一个好老师。

The flower is red

花是红色的。

3）基本句型三：（定语）+ 主语+谓语动词+（定语）+ 宾语+(状语)

（有些简单句子可能没有定语和状语）

Our English teacher opened a English bookstore in this town two years ago.

我们的英语老师两年前在这个城镇开办了一个书店。

I write a letter.

我写一封信

4）基本句型四：（定语）+ 主语+谓语动词+（定语）+间接宾语+（定语）+直接宾语+(状语) （有些简单句子可能没有定语和状语）

The beautiful lady gave her little son a small car 3 days ago.

漂亮的妇人三天前给她小儿子一辆小汽车。

5）基本句型五：（定语）+ 主语+谓语动词+（定语）+宾语+（定语）+宾语补语+(状语) （有些简单句子可能没有定语和状语，宾语补语可以是名词，形容词，现在分词，过去分词，不定式）

The little boy heard his girlfriend singing in the next room.

那个小男孩听到他女朋友在隔壁唱歌。

He makes her angry.

他使她生气了。

6）基本句型六：There be

There are many books in this bookstore.

在这个书店有很多书

根据上述基本句型，我们可以将对材料进行遣词造句。

On June 28 my family will go to Taiwan by plane.

I will visit Li Jie on June 29 (the next day)

My family will visit some interesting places, such as Ali Mountain and Sun-Moon Lake during July 1—10.

My family will go shopping, eat special food on July 11?-12 (on the following two days).   

On July 13 I will come back with my family.

遣词造句之后，根据连句成篇的要求，整理成一篇文章，并适当追加两三个句子，以便达到文章字数要求，同时丰富文章内容。

Dear Li Jie，

How is it going?  Summer holiday is coming. I'd like to go to Taiwan to see you. Taiwan is the largest island in China and I like it very much. On June 28th, my family will go to Taiwan by plane. I'll visit you the next day. I will tell you something about mainland when we stay together. My family will visit some interesting places, such as Ali Mountain and Sun-Moon Lake , which is the place I long for, during July 1—10. On the following two days my family will go shopping and eat special food. On July 13th, I will come back with my family.  I'm looking forward to the trip. I can't wait for it. Best wishes to you.

      Yours ，

  Chen Yan

译文

李杰你好，

近况如何？暑假来临，我将去台湾看你。台湾是中国最大的岛屿，我非常喜欢它。在6月28日，我家将坐飞机去台湾。我第二天去看你。我们相聚时，我将告诉你很多关于大陆的新鲜事。我家将在7月1日到10日游览阿里山和日月潭，它是我向往的地方。后续的两天我们将购物和品尝美食。在7月13日，我同家人返回大陆。我期盼这日旅行。我急不可待。祝福。

      你的朋友 ，

  陈岩

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