好作文的“四化” 结构清晰化 语言凶悍化 内容充实化 开头个性化
三段式： 1.提出问题2.分析问题3.个人总结及补充
1.高级化 高兴？ Happy Delighted
重要的 选修课很重要？Elective course
Elective course is important.
Elective course plays an indispensable role in our campus life. Nothing equals elective course in significance in our campus life.
2.书面化 Cop Policeman 再见？ Goodbye Farewell
挥别过去：wave farewell to my yesterday
产生了很大的影响 Make a great effect on Exert a profound impact on… 话题 Topic Issue Problem Contention
我认为： I think…… I argue that… I contend that… I deem the opinion that… I favor the idea that…
句子写作：长短搭配 什么地方最需要写长句？ 1.开篇第一句 2.中间段非第一句 内容充实化：万能论据
开头个性化：开头思路
1.背景描述式
2.名人名言式
技巧：不知道什么名人名言怎么办？
1.名人法
2.亲人法
3.谚语法
3.古今对比式
结构：总分结构 主题句 支持句1 支持句2 支持句3
1.原因There are numerous reasons accounting for this phenomenon,
2.结果This phenomenon, in a large sense, gives rise to a series of consequences.
3.措施
4.罗列细节 无主题句
支持句 十大金刚 健康 乐趣 交流 效率 安全 方便 经济 细节 名言 影响
健康 be beneficial/dreadful to our health 乐趣 interesting/entertaining/amusing 交流 communicate 效率 efficient 安全 safe/reliable
方便 convenient 经济 boost/impair local economy 影响 exert a profound influence on… 结尾段思路
思路1：个人总结
Personally speaking/ From my perspective /to summarize, …….
Personally speaking, the convenience and excitement of online shopping is beyond all doubts. 思路2：个人总结+原因/结果
思路3：个人总结+建议补充
True nobility is being superior to your former self ----English proverb
第二篇：英语作文写作技巧
结尾模板
作评价
1.Indeed, we have learnt many things from it. (意义)
2.If every member in our society is willing to contribute himself to A, our ___ will be better and better. (前景)
3.As far as I am concerned, it’s important to __. Only in this way can we build our country stronger and stronger. (意义+前景)
下结论
1.By consistent hard work, we will be able to achieve our goals. (或 we cannot fail to achieve …)
2.There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but … might be helpful. (或 but the general awareness of the necessity of A should be the first step. )
3.Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health. (危害)
4.If you try to learn too many things at a time, you may get confused. (负面结果)
表决心
1.We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.
2.As I mentioned above, what really counts is not A, but B. I believe that as long as …, we will soon achieve our goal. (或 I am confident that…)
3.Let?s join hands and work together to contribute a greater part to the harmony of our society.
万能整句
1.A can help one stand tall and aim far; it will broaden one‘s vision and enlarge our horizon…(极力肯定)
2.Many solutions are offered here. All of them make some sense, but they’re not adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth. (模糊总结)
3.Following these methods may not guarantee the success in solution to A, but the result will be worth the effort. (凑字数法)
有用的连接词
表原因
For this reason, due to, thanks to, because (of), owing to, as, since
强调
indeed, apparently, after all, interestingly, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, in fact, especially, most importantly, obviously, clearly…
表结果
As a result, thus, therefore, accordingly, hence, consequently (=as consequence)
表归纳
On the whole, in conclusion, to sum up, in summary, to summarize, all in all, briefly, finally, eventually, generally, in general, worst of all… …
问题解决型作文
一.问题解决型作文的要求：
1.从给出的提示文字/图表等入手，描述材料反映的问题
2.指出原因/危害性, 或解决该问题的紧迫性 (见“意义”)
3.提出解决问题的方案/措施。(How to…?)
二.基本结构
1.描述要解决的问题+背景 及其严重性或必要性，
2.(简要)分析其产生的原因, 或造成的危害；
3.提出解决问题的基本方法或措施；
4表明自己的态度，提出建议并展望前景。
首段模板
1.Recently, there has been a discussion about （总述该问题）./ Nowadays, it has been a common phenomenon that (A).
2.（危害1/原因1）。Additionally, （危害2/原因2）
3.Therefore, it is high time that （解决该问题） …
1.引出问题，指出问题的现状
2.问题主要危害1，原因1；主要危害2，原因2；
3.表达解决该问题的必要性或紧迫性
中间段模板
1.The following ways can be adopted to （解决该问题）./ Some effective measures have been taken to（解决该问题）./ Many a factor plays an important role in (A).
2.First and foremost, 方法一/因素一. In addition, 方法二/因素二. Besides/ Moreover, 方法三/ 因素三.
3.Only through these ways/ only in this way（该问题才能解决）.
1.承上启下，引出该问题的解决方法或决定因素。
2.具体阐述解决方法1/决定因素1；解决方法2/决定因素2；解决方法3/决定因素3。
3.总结以上方法或因素，强调其必要性等。
结尾段模板
1.结尾段（总结观点段）
2.It is no doubt that （解决该问题的意义）.
3.As for me, 作者的建议或看法.
1.总结观点
2.承上启下，强调解决该问题的意义。
3.阐述作者本人的建议或看法。
4.总结观点，发出呼吁或做出展望。
一.首段+中间段
1.首段（描述问题）
Nowadays it is generally accepted that（总述现状）.
具体表现1；具体表现2。
2.中间段（说明原因）
There are many reason accounting for (A)./ It should be paid attention to that (A) is bringing great damage.
On one hand/ For one thing, 原因一/危害一；On the other hand/ For another, 原因二/ 危害二。 Therefore, it is high time that（解决该问题）.（说明解决该问题的必要性）
结尾段（总结观点）
1.Many a way can be adopted to（解决该问题）.
2.Many a factor plays an important role in （解决该问题）.
3.（高水平地罗列）解决方法或因素
4.Only through those ways/ Only in this way（该问题才能够被解决）.
二.首段+中间段
首段（描述问题）
1.Nowadays it is generally accepted that （总述现状）。
2.表现1/ 作用1；表现2/ 作用2。
3.Therefore, how to (A) is worth paying more attention to.（解决该问题的必要性和紧迫性） 中间段（说明原因）
The following ways can be adopted. Some effective measures have been taken to solve…/ Many factor plays an important role in solve…
列举并阐述方法/ 因素
结尾段（总结观点）
As for me/ As far as I am concerned, 本人的建议和看法；
作者的理由1；Besides/ In addition, 作者的理由2；
总结观点、发出呼吁或作出展望。
提出问题
There is little doubt that serious attention must be paid to … (双重否定表强调)
列出原因
There are many reasons explaining that .
The reasons of A lie in several aspects. The main reason is …
找出措施, 解决办法
1.(It is important that) effective actions should be taken to prevent this situation. Firstly,…
2.In order to make our world a better place, we should make great efforts to …On the one hand...
3.To conclude, we can see that the best way to solve A is …And what’s more, we should…
万能号召句
The government should take effective measures to overcome current difficulties.
As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help the holding of the Olympic Games.
The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions for the teachers.
If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is + 口号.
(*凑字数综合法)
观点罗列
1.To begin with, and then, furthermore, finally
2.To start with, next, in addition, finally
3.First and foremost, besides, last but not least
4.Most important of all, moreover, finally
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1.On the one hand, on the other hand
2.For one thing, for another thing