书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ago,last…——过去时
next,in…——将来时等
人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English.
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅
笔标出,写完后再涂掉。
根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause( 从句),In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand…
Some…,while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because,As
So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。 宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous.
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
常用状语从句句型:
1)时间when,not…until,as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do( 为了)
3)结果so…that+clause,too…to 。。。(太……以至于……)
4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)
5)让步though,although,even though,even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.We live more and more comfortable.
改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers.
改正:much information
(不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There has many programs in TV.
改正:There are many programs on TV.
(There be句型和介词短语)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.
改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼,并解决问题。假设你叫刘明,是美国中学生爱丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件,请给她回复,回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。
十、文段表达
75.One possible version:
Hi!Alice ,
I'm glad to hear from you.
Yes,I sometimes have the same problem.
I think if she really needs the money,you'd better lend it to her.You don't need to worry too much.She'll probably pay you back when she has money.If you don't lend her the money,I'm afraid you may lose the friend.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other.So when my friends need money,I will try my best to help them.Maybe I'll get it back,or maybe I won't.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
为配合我市举行的"6月x日世界环境日"万人骑自行车城区环游活动,请你写一篇以"Lower Carbon(低碳), Happier Life"为主题的英语短文。(以上背景内容无需表述)
短文要点如下:
1.在6月x日自己骑自行车上学,父母骑车上班;
2.在家使用节能灯;减少洗澡淋浴时间;
3.将用过的课本留给下届学生;
4.请你就此话题补充1-2个个人做法。
要求:
1.不要逐词翻译;
2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名;
3.词数80左右;短文标题和首尾句已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:
节能灯 energy-saving lamp
用过的 used
下届 lower grades
Lower carbon, happier life
It's our duty to save the environment. Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.
范文:
It's our duty to save the environment. I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus on June 5. And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day. At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Don't throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they are shopping.(I will turn off the lights before leaving.)
Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.
81.你的家长或老师可能经常和你谈学习问题。请你叙述一次你的家长或老师对你谈学习的情景、内容以及你的感想。
要求:
1) 不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
2) 内容完整,书写整齐。词数80-100。
范文:
When I was in Grade 7, my English was very poor. I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class. I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English. One day, Mrs Zhang, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice. This helped me a lot. I became confident from then on and made much progress. I believe my English will be much better in the future
第二篇:英语作文写作技巧
结尾模板
作评价
1.Indeed, we have learnt many things from it. (意义)
2.If every member in our society is willing to contribute himself to A, our ___ will be better and better. (前景)
3.As far as I am concerned, it’s important to __. Only in this way can we build our country stronger and stronger. (意义+前景)
下结论
1.By consistent hard work, we will be able to achieve our goals. (或 we cannot fail to achieve …)
2.There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but … might be helpful. (或 but the general awareness of the necessity of A should be the first step. )
3.Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health. (危害)
4.If you try to learn too many things at a time, you may get confused. (负面结果)
表决心
1.We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.
2.As I mentioned above, what really counts is not A, but B. I believe that as long as …, we will soon achieve our goal. (或 I am confident that…)
3.Let?s join hands and work together to contribute a greater part to the harmony of our society.
万能整句
1.A can help one stand tall and aim far; it will broaden one‘s vision and enlarge our horizon…(极力肯定)
2.Many solutions are offered here. All of them make some sense, but they’re not adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth. (模糊总结)
3.Following these methods may not guarantee the success in solution to A, but the result will be worth the effort. (凑字数法)
有用的连接词
表原因
For this reason, due to, thanks to, because (of), owing to, as, since
强调
indeed, apparently, after all, interestingly, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, in fact, especially, most importantly, obviously, clearly…
表结果
As a result, thus, therefore, accordingly, hence, consequently (=as consequence)
表归纳
On the whole, in conclusion, to sum up, in summary, to summarize, all in all, briefly, finally, eventually, generally, in general, worst of all… …
问题解决型作文
一.问题解决型作文的要求:
1.从给出的提示文字/图表等入手,描述材料反映的问题
2.指出原因/危害性, 或解决该问题的紧迫性 (见“意义”)
3.提出解决问题的方案/措施。(How to…?)
二.基本结构
1.描述要解决的问题+背景 及其严重性或必要性,
2.(简要)分析其产生的原因, 或造成的危害;
3.提出解决问题的基本方法或措施;
4表明自己的态度,提出建议并展望前景。
首段模板
1.Recently, there has been a discussion about (总述该问题)./ Nowadays, it has been a common phenomenon that (A).
2.(危害1/原因1)。Additionally, (危害2/原因2)
3.Therefore, it is high time that (解决该问题) …
1.引出问题,指出问题的现状
2.问题主要危害1,原因1;主要危害2,原因2;
3.表达解决该问题的必要性或紧迫性
中间段模板
1.The following ways can be adopted to (解决该问题)./ Some effective measures have been taken to(解决该问题)./ Many a factor plays an important role in (A).
2.First and foremost, 方法一/因素一. In addition, 方法二/因素二. Besides/ Moreover, 方法三/ 因素三.
3.Only through these ways/ only in this way(该问题才能解决).
1.承上启下,引出该问题的解决方法或决定因素。
2.具体阐述解决方法1/决定因素1;解决方法2/决定因素2;解决方法3/决定因素3。
3.总结以上方法或因素,强调其必要性等。
结尾段模板
1.结尾段(总结观点段)
2.It is no doubt that (解决该问题的意义).
3.As for me, 作者的建议或看法.
1.总结观点
2.承上启下,强调解决该问题的意义。
3.阐述作者本人的建议或看法。
4.总结观点,发出呼吁或做出展望。
一.首段+中间段
1.首段(描述问题)
Nowadays it is generally accepted that(总述现状).
具体表现1;具体表现2。
2.中间段(说明原因)
There are many reason accounting for (A)./ It should be paid attention to that (A) is bringing great damage.
On one hand/ For one thing, 原因一/危害一;On the other hand/ For another, 原因二/ 危害二。 Therefore, it is high time that(解决该问题).(说明解决该问题的必要性)
结尾段(总结观点)
1.Many a way can be adopted to(解决该问题).
2.Many a factor plays an important role in (解决该问题).
3.(高水平地罗列)解决方法或因素
4.Only through those ways/ Only in this way(该问题才能够被解决).
二.首段+中间段
首段(描述问题)
1.Nowadays it is generally accepted that (总述现状)。
2.表现1/ 作用1;表现2/ 作用2。
3.Therefore, how to (A) is worth paying more attention to.(解决该问题的必要性和紧迫性) 中间段(说明原因)
The following ways can be adopted. Some effective measures have been taken to solve…/ Many factor plays an important role in solve…
列举并阐述方法/ 因素
结尾段(总结观点)
As for me/ As far as I am concerned, 本人的建议和看法;
作者的理由1;Besides/ In addition, 作者的理由2;
总结观点、发出呼吁或作出展望。
提出问题
There is little doubt that serious attention must be paid to … (双重否定表强调)
列出原因
There are many reasons explaining that .
The reasons of A lie in several aspects. The main reason is …
找出措施, 解决办法
1.(It is important that) effective actions should be taken to prevent this situation. Firstly,…
2.In order to make our world a better place, we should make great efforts to …On the one hand...
3.To conclude, we can see that the best way to solve A is …And what’s more, we should…
万能号召句
The government should take effective measures to overcome current difficulties.
As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help the holding of the Olympic Games.
The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions for the teachers.
If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is + 口号.
(*凑字数综合法)
观点罗列
1.To begin with, and then, furthermore, finally
2.To start with, next, in addition, finally
3.First and foremost, besides, last but not least
4.Most important of all, moreover, finally
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1.On the one hand, on the other hand
2.For one thing, for another thing