英语四六级作文评分标准及错误总结

时间:2024.4.14

评分标准

2分……条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。 5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。

11分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。

14分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)

写作中要注意的问题

1、最后十天应该怎样复习?

2、四级话题、六级话题:

把过去两到三年的题再写写,最好准备出一套文章,对于任何题目都适用。

四级偏向日常生活中的话题,六级关于环境或社会发展的方面。

考试在于语言,而不在于思维。

考场时间把握

1、前三分钟不要动笔,先想想这个题目可以有哪些句式套用,然后想想有哪些词可以替

换,变词越多,考官印象越好(eg. teacher->lecture->professor)

2、不建议用30分钟写,利用20-25分钟即可

3、提前完成后做检查并准备快速阅读

六级是否会出图表作文

四六级均有可能,每年的6月份出图表题的可能性大。

1、应用文:

2、图表:如果图简单,数字越少越好。第一段描述(最大)变化在哪里,第二段讲述变

化后的原因是什么,第三段照提纲写或推测未来。若有提纲,以提纲为中心句。

若没有模板,先想三句开头结尾,考试时候用上去,50-70字就不用写了。

四六级作文思路越简单越好

五大错误不能犯

1、主谓一致 2、时态 3、单复数 4、简单词的拼写 5、搭配

不是用句美才能及格,是不犯错误。四六级是淘劣不选优的考试。

三个应该注意的问题

(一)卷面整洁,书写清楚

1、齐头式卷面:段与段之间空一行,全部向左边靠。

2、写错的地方可以用透明胶带粘干净。

3、用黑笔做。

(二)构思简单,少犯错误

容易犯的两个错误:

1、名词:单数可数名词前加a/an,复数加s。不知道的解决方法:所有名词前面都加the。

2、主谓语错误:从句出现多个谓语。注意主谓搭配得当

(三)中心明确,层次分明

每段第一句都是中心句,从提纲变过来。下面加逻辑词一、二、三。

eg.除夕的春节联欢晚会

如何拿高分?

变化式拿高分,而不是用词用句难。

eg.学生->年轻人->学习者

开头结尾各自背5-7句,用自己熟悉的语言。eg.名言:生存或者死亡,这是一个问题。

宁可错杀一千,不可错过一个!

宁可错杀一千个美丽的句子,也不要用一个错的句子。先证明是正确的,再去用。

常见写作错误

一、主语错误

1. 主语缺失

1)In our country feels very free.

People feel free in our country.

2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.

People in my hometown are very busy.

2. 非名词主语

1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.

Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.

2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

3. 主谓错位

1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.

People can acquire knowledge from books.

2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.

Now people can’t do without TV.

二、谓语错误

1. 多重谓语

1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.

In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.

2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.

Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.

2. 非动词谓语

1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.

Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.

2)It is said that the place worths touring.

It is said that the place is worth touring.

3. 主谓不一致

1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.

I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.

2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.

I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..

4. 误用词组

1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.

They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.

2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.

I am afraid that it’s going to rain.

三、冠词错误

1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.

In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.

2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones. They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.

四、代词错误

1. 偷梁换柱

1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize. An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.

2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

2. 指代不明

1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.

五、形容词、副词错误

1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.

What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.

2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

六、分词误用

1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera. Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

七、修饰语误置

1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.

Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside. To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

八、垂悬修饰语

1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

九、平行错误

1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

十、搭配错误

1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

十一、破句

1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.


第二篇:英语四级作文评分标准及错误总结


英语四级作文评分标准及错误总结

评分标准

2分……条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。

5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。

11分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。

14分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)

常见写作错误

一、主语错误

1. 主语缺失

1)In our country feels very free.

People feel free in our country.

2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.

People in my hometown are very busy.

2. 非名词主语

1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.

Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.

2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

3. 主谓错位

1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.

People can acquire knowledge from books.

2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.

Now people can’t do without TV.

二、谓语错误

1. 多重谓语

1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.

In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. /

A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.

2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.

Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.

2. 非动词谓语

1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.

Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.

2)It is said that the place worths touring.

It is said that the place is worth touring.

3. 主谓不一致

1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.

I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.

2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.

I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..

4. 误用词组

1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.

They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.

2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.

I am afraid that it’s going to rain.

三、冠词错误

1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.

In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.

2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.

They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.

四、代词错误

1. 偷梁换柱

1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.

An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.

2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

2. 指代不明

1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear. Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.

五、形容词、副词错误

1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.

What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.

2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

六、分词误用

1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem. Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.

Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

七、修饰语误置

1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.

Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

八、垂悬修饰语

1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.

Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

九、平行错误

1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased. While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

十、搭配错误

1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

十一、破句

1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important


第三篇:四六级英语作文必背句子


背7个句子,6级作文拿100分 .四级照样百分百

6级作文模板:

1)先背3个句子

1 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)

2 The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life. On the one hand …, But on the other hand.(讲影响)

3 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.(结尾段)

Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句,根据不同模板自由组合。

2)模板(2个模板)

1 开头段:先讲重要性,然后转讲不好的地方。

中间段:措施

结尾段:先来个小转折再进入总结

开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……

结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword. With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.

2 开头段:先讲重要性,然后转讲争论

中间段:转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)

结尾段:直接进入总结(即你的观点)

开头段:It is accepted that …. Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of….. However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.

中间段:On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..

On the other hand, a great many people insist that….

结尾段:From my perspective, however…. (你的观点) . Therefore, it’s time that (措施之类的)

6级作文万能句子(补充在”…..”里面的万能句子,自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合) 重点背:1)5)6)7)句子,最好全部都被过一遍,自己琢磨怎么用。

1)Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life. 。。。能让我们的生活更美好,也就是说,。。。可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩

2)For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说,学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。

3)。。。。。, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom. 。。。占据了某人大部分时间,使得某人没空想东想西(充实了某人生活)

4)What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. 住校为学生省去了不少时间,这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上

5)Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 一点一滴,这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野

6)For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说,抽空学习一门新技术很重要

7)The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧,这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力

8)By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验

9)Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

10)1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响 2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响

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