N d一），图表手机的用户的注册量
S1The chart above demonstrates cleanly that remarkable change have taken place with regard to the mobile-phone subscription in the world.S2Based upon the data provided, one can see that the subscription number in developing countries has been on a rapid rise all the time .S3In the year of 2000,the number was only about 0.5 billon, while within no more than several years ,it went sharply to 4 billon in 2008. S5Meanwhile,the subscriptions in developed countries have witnessed a slight increase ,reaching 1 billon in 2008 .
S1It’s not difficult job for me to put forward some factor responsible for those changes.//At top of the list, a growing number of people are rich enough to afford mobile-phone.//According to a recent internet survey ,approximately 78% oof the people think that mobile phone in life are necessary .//In addition ,we must admit that developing countries have a far greater population and therefore a larger demand for mobile service.//Last but not the list, the fact cannot be ignored that the mobile services in developing countries has been increasing cheaper.
Taking into account what has been argued so far, a conclusion can be drawn safely that the trend is normal and acceptable. S2 And I firmly believe that the situation will continue in the forthcoming year.
汽车占有量的变图
二）The chart above demonstrates cleanly that remarkable change have taken place with regard to the market share owned by different car brands.// Based upon the data provided, one can see that the market share enjoyed by domestic cars has increased a lot ,climbing nearly to 35% in 2009.//Meanwhile ,the market percentage of Japanese cars have witnessed a dramatic fall ,reaching 25% in 2009.// In comparison ,the share of American brands has remained almost constant all the time .
It’s not difficult job for me to put forward some factor responsible for those changes. //At top of the list, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and society, Chinese motor industry has rapid developement . //In addition ,we must admit that home-made cars enjoys an advantage in price so they can afforded by more consumers. //According to a recent internet survey ,approximately 54%of the consumers r would consider price factors//Last but not the list , the fact cannot be ignored that with the globalization of economy, Chinese consumers have exchanged their prejudiced outlook on domestic car brands.
Taking into account what has been argued so far, a conclusion can be drawn safely that the current trend is positive and beneficial . //And I firmly believe that the situation will continue in the forthcoming year.
出国学生和国内留学生的数据变化将军虎的模拟卷子
三）The chat above demonstrates clearly that significant changes have taken place in recent years with regard to the cultural exchange between China and other countries .//based upon the data provided, one can see that the number of foreign students in china has been on a steady rise all the time.//in the year of 2006,the number was only about 15,000,but within more than several years ,it went to 25000.//meanwhile ,it can be noticed that the number of Chinese students studying abroad has been climbing as well ,reaching 280000 in 2010.
Its no difficult job for me to put forward some factors responsible for these changes. ///At top of the list, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and society, more and more families can afford the children ,s high education in advanced countries . //According to a recent internet survey ,approximately 54%of the families in big cities have such financial resources.//In addition ,we must admit that china as one of the oldest civilized countries ,enjoys a splendid traditional culture ,which never fail to fascinate foreigners. /Last but not the list , the fact cannot be ignored that with the globalization of economy, cultural exchange has turned out to be a trend that anyone cannot evade.
………………...the current trend is positive and beneficial . //And I firmly believe that the situation will continue in the forthcoming year.
现象内:
P1 S1 有话题(现象)+具体话题(现象) S2 有对立观点S3 具体对立观点S4 自己的观点
P2 S1 有论据S2 论据1 S3 例子1 S4 据2 S5 据3(或者换句话说,to put it in another way)
P3 S1 评论(可分两方面评论,视讨论话题而定,话题积极则积极,若论证问题,则消极) 正常的/积极的 normal/positive/acceptable 不正常的/消极的 abnormal/negative/unacceptable S2 建议 人们不应该焦虑/应该制止/中止这种行为S3预测→持续
Passage 1成人的再学习
四）S1 These days, it has become an increasingly hot topic among the public that {a growing number of adults choose to study further.} S2 Whenever it comes to this issue , there will always spring up a opposite voices. S3 Some tend to view the event as a blessing, while the others claim that it’s a hell.S4 For my part, I’m inclined to support the former opinion.
S1 It’s of no difficultly to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint. S2 At the top of list, with the rapid development of economy and society, {those with high degrees are in greater demand, especially in hi-tech industries}. S In addition, we must admit that {acquiring another degree can enable people to find well-paid positions with great ease.} S4 Based upon a recent Internet survey, {approximately 78% of the job hunters with diverse educational backgrounds have found their desirable jobs.} S Last but not the list ,the fact cannot be ignored that {lifelong education has become a must in the current era of knowledge explosion .to put another way ,one has to recharge himself with updated information so as to keep up with the time .}.
S1 ……………this phenomenon is normal and positive. S2 （Accordingly, it’s of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.） S3 And I firmly believe that this phenomenon is bound to continue in forthcoming year..
现象内Passage 2手机短信
五）S1 These days, {text massage} has become an increasingly hot issue among the public. S2 Whenever it comes to this topic, there will always spring up a opposite voices. S3 Some tend to view it as a blessing, while the others claim that it’s a hell.S4For my part, I’m inclined to support the former view.
S1 It’s of no difficultly to put forward several arguments to illustrate my standpoint. S2 At the top of list, with the rapid development of economy and our society, {text massaging has become more and more increasing indispensable in our daily life}. S3 , According to a recent internet survey, {approximately 78% of the youngsters in the big city might send and receive hundreds of massages a day.} S4In addition, we must admit that {text messaging, as a high efficient means of communications, shorten the distance between people.}S5Last but not the list, the fact cannot be ignored that {text message will help us to keep up with the latest information wherever we are}.
S1 …….the text messaging is normal and beneficial. S2 And I firmly believe that with the innovation of technology, it will produce more convenience and comfort to the world.
P1 S1 有变化 P2 S1 有因 P3 S1 评论
S2 具体变化 S2 因1 S2建议 不焦虑/扭转情形
S3 引用数据 S3 例子1 预期 持续
S4 因2
S5 因3(或者换句话说,强调因
beneficial/acceptable/positive/normal/abnormal/negative
Passage 3图表工程再读
六）S1 The diagram above demonstrates clearly that remarkable changes have taken place with regard to {the recruitment of Master of Engineering.} S2 Based upon the data provided, one can see that {the recruitment number of ME has been in steady rise all the time,} S3 {In the years of 1998, the number was merely about 2500, while within no more than several years, it went sharply up to more than 35,000 in 2004.}
S1 It’s not difficult job for me to put forward some factor responsible for those changes.S2At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and society, {those with high degree are in high demand, especially in high-tech industries.} S3 In addition, we must admit that {ME can enable people to find well-paid positions with great ease.}S4 According to a recent Internet survey, {approximately 78% of the job hunters with ME have found their desirable jobs.}S5Finally, the fact cannot be ignored that {lifelong study has become a must in the current era of knowledge explosion.} S6To put it in another way, one has to recharging himself with updated information so as to keep up with the time.
S1 …..is normal and positive. S2 （Accordingly, it’s of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.） S3 And I firmly believe that this phenomenon is bound to continue in forthcoming year..
Passage 5交通事故发生表
七）S1 The table above demonstrates clearly that some changes have taken place with regard to {traffic accidents in a Chinese city.} S2 Based upon the data provided, one can see that {a few factors have contributed to the rise of accident number.} S3 {In 2005, the number of accidents resulting from divers turning life without due care rose by 10%, reaching 60%.Meanwhile, the accidents related to drivers driving under the influence of alcohol witnessed the greatest rise——a 15% increase. In comparison, pedestrians crossing roads carelessly led to 401 accidents.}
S1 It’s not difficult job for me to put forward some factor responsible for those changes.S2At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and society, {a growing number of people are rich enough to afford private cars.} S3 According to a recent Internet survey, { approximately 48% of the families in big cities have owned their motor vehicles.}S4Besides, we must admit that {a great many new drivers are short of proper training both in theory and practice.}S5Finally, the fact cannot be ignored that {pedestrians as well as drivers have little respect for traffic rules.}
S1………. is abnormal and therefore intolerable. S2 Accordingly, it is imperative that immediate should be taken to reverse the grim situation.
Passage 6
漫画作文开头第1段模板如下，2,3段逻辑同上。
S1 Looking at the cartoon, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation opon its implications.
S2 As it depicted in the picture{具体描述}
S3 Needless to say, this drawing is intend to convey{解读出的主题}
吸烟漫画
S1Looking at the cartoon, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation u upon its implications. S2As is showed /depicted in the picture ,a rude and arrogant man is smoking at ease in a restaurant ,totally disregarding the ban on smoking . S3 Needless to say, this cartoon is intend /meant to convey{解读出的主题the phenomenon of the severity of smoking in the public places,
It must be pointed out that the current situation is going form bad to worse immediate measures must be taken to reverse the increasing grim trend . The top of the list, we should enhance the publics awareness of the gravity of it , which is of vital importance to the solution of the problem. Moreover ,we need to appeal to the authorities concerned to lay down some regulations or even laws., and put them into effective practice. Last but not the least, mass media had better help devise ways of alleviating the worsening situation. To conclude , I am certain that we can cope with the thorny problem in the ways mentioned above. And I genuinely hope to see some new changes in our society as soon as possible.
………negative and harmful . accordingly immediate measures should be taken to eliminate or at least ease it
火锅
S1 Looking at the cartoon, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation opon its implications.
S2 As it depicted in the picture{具体描述various culture ingredients /elements/products such as Buddhism .kungfu ,beijing opera and postmodernism ,as being boiled together in a hotpot }
S3 Needless to say, this drawing is intend to convey{解读出的主题}call attention to /emphasize/convey the significance of cultural exchange.
漫画两人走天下
Paha1
S1 Looking at the cartoon, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation opon its implications.
S2 As it depicted in the picture{具体描述}two disable younger are sticking/running forward ,supporting each other all the way.
S3 Needless to say, this drawing is intend to convey{解读出的主题}the importance of mutual aid/support
原因分析paha2
Paha3哲理类
S1Taking into account what has been argued so far , its sensible that we should highly value the spirit of play a high valuation upon the spirit of mutual support .
S2Let ,s never forget the famous say : united we stand , divided we fall .
A dink family of people thought that no child their life will still have very good,
30% of that children will lower their quality of life.
At present people work pressure was simply too great, and there is no time to take good care of their children.
Their income is just enough with their own, can not afford the burden of raising children