六级考试作文范文(沪江版)

The Way to Success

Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. It’s indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing。

To achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream. In other words, they are “what” “why” and “how” of success. It’s really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful。

Although it’s never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, you’ll be the one。

【作文解析】

这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题”what is success?”，但并没

有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨，而是直接引出了自己的观点：success is doing something one really feels like doing. 算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看，行文流畅，用语规范地道。

本篇亮点：

1. 排比词组或句子的运用：

Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for。

…namely, knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream。

2. bear in mind

3. lie in

4. strong will to pursue your interest

本文有待提高之处：

1. 文中人称有些混乱。有些使用第二人称代指读者，有些又以第三人称指代，建议统一。

2. 结构上，一般情况下我们建议考生使用典型的“三段式”，即，提出问题、分析问题、解决问题。该作者基本上遵循了这个原则，但

第三段更多的却是重复了第二段的中心思想，并没有起到很好的总结作用。如果第三段，作者可以与第一段的“成功定义”相呼应，例如：即使没有这些身外之物，但心灵上的满足，梦想的实现，才是我心中成功的本质。

整体看，文章在语言表达和立意上还不错。但在文章结构上有些松散，有待提高。

高分版

The Way to Success

"Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration." And here comes our question, what is the way to success?

A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of success。

Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty. A man of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be。

Would Thomas Edison be such a great man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he finally made his great bulb light up. Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed。

To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success. Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way。

【作文解析】

本次六级考试作文题为The way to success，与本次四级考试作文Nothing succeeds without a strong will遥相呼应，大同小异，都是在讨论成功这一话题。

此次六级考试作文的话题依然是老生常谈，即通往成功的道路，相信很多考生对此并不陌生，背过范文的同学写起来肯定也是得心应手。

该范文段落结构清晰，阐释说理也足以让人信服，是一篇不错的作文。

开篇作者通过引用爱迪生关于天才的一句名言来引出问题，吸引读者注意，引起读者的思考。紧随其后，作者就开门见山地亮出了自己的观点：只有坚强的意志和不懈的努力才能打开成功的大门。

第二段，作者同样以一个问题来引领全段，引发思考。然后通过对比不成功和最终成功的人的不同表现，来阐释坚强的意志对获得成功的重要作用。

第三段，作者进一步阐释“仅有坚强的意志，没有实在的努力，也能成功吗？”同样是先发问，然后举了爱迪生的事例，来证明答案是否定的。举名人的例子，而非个人的实例来作为文章的论据才更有

说服力，这也是这篇作文的高明之处。

最后一段，作者先以第一句话进行了总结，然后为了加强作文结尾的力度，作者还对名言“Where there is a will, there is

way”进行了改编，换成了自己的观点，为我所用，这也是本篇范文的一个两点之处。注意，写作文时对名言进行恰当地改编，不仅能体现幽默创新的一面，同样也体现了作者不错的文字驾驭技巧，考官也是很欢迎这样的文章的。

第二篇：历届英语六级真题作文范文

20xx年6月英语六级真题作文

六级范文：

Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed

1.有的人认为应该有回报

2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报

3.我的看法

参考范文：

The argument over whether we do good deeds for a reward is heated. Some argue strongly that great deads deserve recognition and acclaim. In this selfish and materialistic world, it is vitally important to recognize and promote various noble deeds. Rewarding and encouraging good deeds helps set an inspiring example to the public.

The opposing view is that we should perform good deeds without expectations of any outcomes or rewards. Acknowledgements and credit shouldn't be given people who do good deeds with mixed motives. For example, some entrepreneurs supporting charity aims at tax reduction instead of lending a helping hand to others with a real motive. So we should do something good for others like Lei Feng without expectations of any economic and immaterial return.

From my perspective, doing good deeds in exchange for rewards isn't an offense. We merit them. In fact, receiving sufficient public praise and attention serves as a contributing force behind the widespread promotion of good values. A role model sometimes outweighs a sole good deed.

20xx年12月英语六级真题作文

六级作文题：

The digital age

1. 如今，数字化产品越来越多，如?

2. 使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响。

范文：

Living in the digital age, we are unavoidably exposed to all kinds of digital products, such as digital camera, digital computer, digital television, and so on, which grow in an increasing categories and

quantities. Believe it or not, look around yourself and you can easily find one or two of these stuffs.

Here is a question，what kind of influence do the digital products bring to people’s life.? Frankly speaking, these modern digital products offer us a more convenient life than before. For example, the digital camera makes it possible to delete or correct the “unsuccessful” photo of ours, which was impossible with the traditional camera. While, unfortunately, these fashionable digital items have cultivated a

generation more isolated from the real life. It is hard to imagine that a man so accustomed to the digital mobile on-line chatting can be capable of the practical communication with others. Finally, too much dependent on the digital things, human seem to be more indifferent to the real world, which we, though reluctant to admit, have to accept.

Thus, as the generation assailed by all kinds of digital miracles, we might as well initiatively avoid some of them despite efficiency and comfort they can supply. Don’t forget those old days when you were going to visit an old school friend though there would be a long train journey, which, in today’s digital era, has been thoroughly replaced by the digital on-line chatting.

20xx年6月英语六级真题作文（新东方版）

Will e-books replace traditional books?

A new era has come. With the mass production of electronic devices and application of new technologies, mankind has entered an “e” age. Nowadays, we have e-mails, e-tickets, e-tests, and e-books, and

consequently, paper-based materials gradually vanish. Nowadays, e-books become extremely popular among youngsters, while traditional ones seem suffer a great loss of their readers.

For some people, electronic and internet based books are convenient and accessible. Environmentalists even advocate the benefit of e-books on the ground of forest protection. E-books lovers even assert that traditional books will disappear in the near future.

I have been a book worm for a long time. For me, reading experience is unique and rewarding. Nothing can be more thought-provoking than thumbing through a book bought years ago under a table lamp in a dark night. As to note-taking, scanning and skimming, and portability, traditional books have advantages. Just as the invention of camera didn’t put an end to the history of painting, traditional books are, and will still be, an intimate friend of

20xx年12月英语六级真题作文

20xx年12月六级作文 ：

怎样改善学生的心理健康

1.学生心理健康的重要性

2.学校应该怎样做

3.学生自己应该怎样做

How to improve psychological health?

As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/her growth. However, it’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.

Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students’ psychological health. Relevant

courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it. For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.

Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves. From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools. To be more specific, they can participate in some

activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind. Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.

20xx年6月英语六级真题作文

On the Importance of a Name

有人认为名字（名称）不重要；

有人认为非常重要；

你认为呢？

On the Importance of a Name

A name is the representation of a person or an entity. It plays an important role in social recognition, just as the old saying goes: a thing is the entity of a name. However, people have diverse opinions on the importance of a name. Some people say that name is important, while the others maintain the other way round. But I think name is of great importance because it is the symbol that distinguishes one thing or person from the others.

We cannot deny the importance of a name, be it for a person or a thing. In the world today, no one can live without identification because they must get social recognition, and name is the symbol of the identification. Once a person or a thing gets social recognition, people will remember their names, and they will get further improvement. Besides, a good name will bring people some nice association. A person with a special name may be easily accepted by a group or a community because of the deep impression the name leaves.

As for companies or products, a name is also vitally important. Years ago, a computer company spent millions of dollars for the name “Acer”. Since then, the company caught the attention of potential customers and became one of giants in the field. However, another company was facing bankruptcy, for the name of its product implies unfavorable meaning thus cannot be sold out. Can we say that name is not important?

A name may affect the whole life of a person, and a name may also influence the future of a company and its products. Therefore, we must treat names carefully.

20xx年12月英语六级真题作文

Should parents send their kids to art classes?

现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；

1、对这种做法有人表示支持，

2、有人并不赞成；

3、我认为?

范文（收集于网上）

Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes

Children are the future of the nation, the pearl in their parents’ eyes. Hoping that their kids can become the cream of the crop among others, more and more parents send their kids to various art classes to let them learn more. However, people hold different opinions toward this phenomenon。

Some people hold a firm position that it is a beneficial thing for kids to attend art classes. There, kids can not only learn some art skills that may helpful for them someday, they can also get a chance to expand their interests to a great extent, and their minds can also be broadened. Besides, kids can also make a lot of friends there, thus their

communication skills may also be sharpened. While for the others, they hold an opposite opinion. They think parents should not send their kids to art classes blindly against kids’ will, because this will get a definitely negative impact on kids. Kids, in these parents’ eyes, should be given more flexible time to relax and do whatever they are interested in. And kids also need freedom because unacceptable art classes will

absolutely eliminate the nature of kids. Thus, sending kids to these classes will undoubtedly hurt them。

Every coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, I think children’s interests should be taken into careful consideration before being sent to art classes. Children should be given enough freedom to develop by themselves. Whether parents should send their kids to art classes, it depends。

20xx年6月英语六级真题作文

六级作文题：

DueAttention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese

1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；

2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果；

3. 我认为?。

范文：

Along with the step of globalization, moststudents’ attention has shifted from Chinese to foreign cultures. Such a shiftbrought on great worries among people because it is not good for thedevelopment of Chinese culture。

There may be several reasons account forwhy this phenomenon could happen. First and foremost, the globalization greatlystimulated the spread of foreign cultures, which in turn stirred great interestamong Chinese students; second, college students are, to some extent, forced tostudy certain foreign languages so as to pass exams or find good jobs so thatthey could not spare any time to study Chinese; last but not least, schoolshave no strict demand on students’ Chinese standard. No doubt, neglecting thestudy of Chinese will ultimately hold back the development

of Chinese culture,and Chinese people may lose their cultural identity in such a competitive world。

In order change this situation and save ouridentity, due attention should be given to the study of Chinese. To begin with,government should put great efforts on the development of Chinese culture tomake more people proud of it; besides, colleges and universities should makeexams more balanced, not simply emphasizing the importance of foreignlanguages; finally, schools should also attach great importance to the study

ofChinese, making it a compulsory curriculum. Through these efforts, I think, chancesof changing this phenomenon are prosperous。

20xx年12月英语六级真题作文

【作文真题】

1、 当今社会，高校排名很流行

2、 个人看法不同

3、 我自己的观点

【作文范文】（收集整理于网上）

Nowadays , university and college ranking has become increasingly popular thoughout the nation. According to the survry conducted by China Daily , an estimated 85$ universities are closely concerned about the ranking.In other words, we cannot fail to notice the obvious trend that university ranking has become a social focus , triggering a wide concerns across the nation, especially fromschool campuses.

A host of individuals are divided over this issue about university ranking . an army of folks deem that we are supposed to be concerned about the ranking because the ranking is the sole standard of measuring the school’s comprehensive level . Plus, when choosing the university for their kids, a growing number of parents take the ranking into account. However, others maintain that it’s not a wise and rational idea to view the university ranking as the only standard ,put in another way , we should not over-value the ranking. The ranking is the outward style of the university .

On my personal level, however, ranking matters much to a university , but enhancing the teaching and comprehensive quality is on the top of university’s priority, ranging from the faculty to teaching methods to teaching instruments and so forth . Only in these ways can we bulid up fast-paced and flagship university smoothly .

20xx年6月英语六级真题作文

作文题目：

1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

2.其目的各不相同

3.在我看来

作文范文：

Certificate Craze

For the past year or two, the pursuit of various certificates has emerged as a gold rush across the Chinese landscape. According to a recent report released by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, a leading think-tank in the Middle Kingdom, some 60 percent of individuals are keen on obtaining a great variety of certifications, ranging from Business English Certificate to diverse Professional Certificates. This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot afford to ignore。

Digging into this prevailing tide, we can identify that a couple of driving forces are at work, and the single most important one, on my personal level, is the mounting strain stemming from the cut-throat competition on the Chinese mainland. People's intentions are sharply different when pursuing a certificate. As far as the graduates are concerned, a host of students argue that diverse certificates can demonstrate their abilities and their competitive edge is hugely

sharpened compared with their peers. Take a concrete example. Candidates holding a highly recognized certification will stand a much better chance of landing a decent and high-paying post. On the part of the white-collar staff, the professional certificates matter much in the course of progressing up the corporate ladder。

However, whether a certificate can truly reflect an individual's capability is widely questionable. As might be expected, folks are split over this issue. From my own perspective, we should be rational as to the craze of getting certificates. Most importantly, we are supposed to put honing our real skills at the top of the agenda. Only in this way can we hope to stay ahead of the increasingly stiff competition。

20xx年12月英语六级真题作文

The Way to Success

Just as the old saying goes “Good beginning is half done”，

illustrating the importance and necessity of the preparation work on the condition that you have the longing for the success .A great proportion of individuals hold the view that preparation makes an essential part of in the process of achievement; on the contrary, the other parts of persons are in favor of the idea that the previous arrangement is a minor factor for success。

The essentiality of the preparation work is able to be accounted by the following example .As a matter of fact, the method accounts more than the results for the majority of situations, For instance, a student who wants to win outstanding academic performance ought to learn the effective and reasonable methods and approaches for memory and comprehension of the subjects such as physics, chemistry, mathematics and so on. The workers in the factories should learn to master the technique of operating the machines beforehand and in this way can they produce the qualified goods and merchandises。

Generally speaking ，Lincoln’s remark “give me six hours to chop down a tree and I will spend the first four hours sharpening the

axe ”reveals the imperative of make preparation .Undoubtedly, only by arranging beforehand can we achieve success whenever we face the perplexing and tough situations。（本范文收集整理自网上