20xx年6月英语六级作文高分亮点表达：知识与实践

来源：文都教育

无论是考研也好，还是四六级考试，作文都是属于分值比较大的专项。文都教育的都教授在考前就给大家作了权威方面的预测，预测的题目是知识与经验（knowledge and experience），这里的经验和实践是一个语义，可以做为同义替换的词。凡是用心关注并准备的童鞋完成该作文完全不成问题。但是如果写出一篇出彩的文章，就需要掌握一些好的句型和结构，通过背诵，改写，套用才能达到。任何知识的习得都是由少到多，慢慢积累的过程。

下面都教授将会给出六级考试的作文范文，并就高分亮点表达进行总结罗列。

（由于本次考试采取“多题多卷”模式，试题顺序不统一，请同学依据试题进行核对。）

首段：引入主题

As is known to all, knowledge is power, which can be acquired from lots of sources. we could gain it from books, TV, radio and so on, but we have little chance to undergo in daily life. Thus, the practice is the key to the knowledge. If it is not put into use, knowledge remains theoretical and useless.

【亮点表达】

因为题干是给出一句名言要求大家来阐述其所句包含的哲理性。多数情况下，我们需要用到这样一个表达即“众所周知”，如果大家平时没有积累的话，一般只会说“we all know that”，这样的表达虽不算错，但是不够出彩，吸引不到阅读老师的眼光。

1) as is known to all;

2) It is a truth universally acknowledged that;

3) Generally there is a belief that;

4) It is widely believed that;

5) It is commonly accepted that;

以上五个结构都可以表示“众所周知”；

put theory into use/practice 理论投入到实践中：

have little chance to undergo 很少有机会去经历：

展开段：例证展开

Take my personal experience for example, l love swimming very much from my childhood, but I have an innate to fear water. So I just learned about so many theoretical swimming skills from the book and television while I never jump into the water to practice. Until my father forced me to proved myself, I realized that the practice is of great importance.Some people are unwilling to attempt to do something, as they are afraid of making a mistake.As a matter of fact, I deem that making errors is the best method to learn.

【亮点表达】

take sth for example: 以??为例

have an innate....天生??

force sb to do sth: 强迫某人去做某事

be of great importance/significance ??很重要

be unwilling to do sth / be reluctance to do sth: 不情愿做某事

attempt to do sth 试图去做某事

make a mistake/make errors 犯错

as a matter of fact: 实际上

I deem that: 我认为

结论段：归纳重申

What’s more, if we want to get some new progress, it is essential to go into action. At last, one can put the thoughts and insights obtained through learning books into practical experience, letting an already meaningful experience more practical. Therefore, that is why I’m convinced that knowledge gained from practical experience is more significant than that obtained from reading books.

【亮点表达】

go into action: 投入行动

I’m convinced that= I believe that 我认为

第二篇：20xx年6月英语六级作文

The Certificate Craze

There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailingtrend for people to take part in various examswith the purpose of obtaining certificates of many kinds: that forCET-4 or CET-6, that for computer level, the driver’s license,etc。

Of course people pursue certificates for various purposes. Someclaim that owning these certificates can give them more edge incompetition. One more certificate means a bit more chance ofwinning in the job market. Others, however, merelytake this practice as a stimulus for them to study or studyharder. They assert that, byworking for those certificates, they can broadentheir horizon and enrich their knowledge。

Personally, I believe that oneshould choose to learn what he or she truly likesor really needs, instead of merely working for some certificates.As for me, I shall focus my energy on a few fields, for I believeconcentration of attention and energy is the key to success.Besides, keen interest is the strongest motivation for study. To bespecific, I would like to learn kungfu and Beijing Opera inmy spare time. I may attend some relevant tests and be awardedcertain certificates, but they are just a natural result of mystudy, instead of my motivation。

My opinion on certificate craze

The growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, why’s the craze?

The reason behind this phenomenon is common — the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one’s ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another. Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally.

文章点评：

这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。 本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。 本篇亮点表达：

The growing tendency … has now evolved into…

be busily engaged in doing

The reason behind…

harsh job market

have no choice but to…

parlay their qualifications

sth. weighs heavily in terms of…

increasing one’s odds of…

be involved in doing …

be compelled to do…

have an open mind toward…

capability boosting

本文有待提高之处：

1. 文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。 逻辑严谨，论证严密;句式表达灵活，用语较为地道。

2. 微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diploma and certificates still weighs heavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦，比quite possibly, you would get the answer that… 大可简化成you’d most likely be told that… 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复，比如job多次出现;为了避免此类现象，文中的the enormous pressure of finding a job 不妨改为 the enormous pressure of getting employed。

从整体看，本篇文章不错，值得参考借鉴，不过用语方面还有待提高。

Part I Writing

The job market today is increasingly sophisticated, requiring workers to have specialized knowledge in their fields. As a result, becoming certified is a trend among today’s job

seeking youth. More and more people, students especially, look at obtaining certification as a means to getting a better job and, therefore, enjoying brighter future.

There are as many certificates as there are fields of study. Lawyers will take the LSAT, business majors will take the GMAT to further their study in the US, and those who study a foreign language, like English, might take the TOEFL, TOEIC, or any number of English certification exams.

Is this necessary? Or, is the “certification craze” just a trend that will eventually pass? I myself have obtained two different certifications: one in Japanese (N2) and another in teaching English as a foreign language (TEFL). Both of these certifications have been beneficial in getting good jobs. Therefore, it is my opinion that, trend or not, the results of becoming certified are real and can be invaluable in opening up future opportunities. 作文点评：

1. 逻辑结构上，本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)”“分析问题(背后的动力)”和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。

2. 本文的亮点非常多