BEC 2 Report Sample

Part Two

? Your department needs to recruit more staff. Your line manager wants you to write a report

explaining your requirements and commenting on recruitment methods.

? Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes. ? Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.

? Write 120-140 words.

Compare and evaluate the following two samples of this report:

Sample 1:

Recruit Require new staff

I am Sun Lee from production department. This report is provide to Human Resources department manager to explain our requirement and comment on recruitment method.

Finding

In order to improve our company productivity, our depart

第二篇：BEC Report writing

Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)Reassessment of job satisfaction: Sue Pearson(PR Dept.)

Introduction

This report sets out to use Workset colours to assess the accuracy of my job description as PR officer and to suggest a number of changes.

Findings

It is clear that there is a difference between the way the company views the job and the reality as I perceive it.

Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. The segment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little. Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out computer problems. I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.

Conclusions

The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.

Recommendations

I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours. It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart and to investigate whether work in these areas

could be carried out by someone else more suited to these tasks.

图表作文是BEC考试中常出的题型。对于如何描述图表，很多学习常感到困难。下面是一些常用的描述图表的句型，供大家参考。

1. At a slower rate...

2. It reflects the great differences that exist between...

3. These figures were overwhelmingly greater than the corresponding figure of...

4. It can be seen from the chart that significantly...~er(比较级)...than...

5. In all locations, A out numbered B...

6. These two pie charts (饼状图) show the differences between two groups of...

7. The first point to note is the huge increase (in the number of)...

8. A is more than... times (bigger) than B

9. The biggest loss was to A, which decreased from... to... of the whole.

10. The biggest gains (in graduate numbers) were made by A which, as a group, have increased by over...

11. To sum up, ...

12. This bar chart displays the numbers of...

13. The chart reflects several trends.

14. But... we see a different trend emerging.

15. When we compare..., we see...

16. This suggests increased educational opportunities for women in higher education.

17. According to the graph, ...

18. The proportion of...

19. There was a slight recovery...

20. ... has dropped dramatically.

21. The general trend appears to be increases.

22. There were approximately...

23. ... had jumped four fold to...

24. ... rose sharply from... to...

25. Remained constant at...

26. The overall trend for...

27. The graph shows the percentage of...

28. We can see that... swell during the... hours, peaking at... am.

29. Although the raw data does not provide an explanation for these trends

30. When coupled with the graphic information, leads to some possible conclusions...?

31. This may serve to explain, at least in part, the mirror image of the two lines.

32. Perhaps the most telling feature of the chart is the dominance of...

33. The graph relates the percentage of...

34. Rise gradually to about 10%.

35. After a slight drop around lunch time, audiences begin a fairly steady climb towards the peak viewer ship in the hours from 6pm to 10pm at some 40-45%.

36. A sharp decline follows to...

37. Listenership drops steadily from this peak, crossing the line for television views at around 2pm.

38. It continues to decline throughout the evening until reaching a low point at 2am.

39. The graph proves the dominance of...

40. During the peak period of...

41. The diagram unfolds a clear comparison between...

42. The United States as a whole in four aspects, namely, ...

43. Obviously, in every aspect...

44. ... had a much higher growth rate than... as a whole during that period.

45. The number of... increased by %.

46. The most rapid increase of all the four aspects... As to the other three, though the growth rates were not so high, they were indeed

remarkable and impressive.

47. The number of... dropped by %.

48. From the diagram it can be safely concluded that (in the years)...

49. There were many significant changes (in modes of transport)...

50. The following paragraphs will identify and discuss the trends in the accompanying graph.

51. A very noticeable trend was the steady decrease in...

52. During the same period, there was a large increase...

53. This increased again...

20xx年商务英语考试(BEC)经典小作文第一篇

The two bar charts illustrate the changes in the wheat production and the average prices between 1990 and 2000 in a European country.

The first chart reveals that the decade saw a sharp increase in the production. In 1990 the European country output approximately 0.8 millions of tonnes. Till 2000 the figure peaked at about 2.4 million, a three time jump. According to the second chart, the wheat prices dramatically surged from less than 1500 Pound Sterling per tonne in 1990 to almost 3000 in 1995. Nevertheless, in the following five years, the changes in prices were featured by decrease. By 2000, the prices had dropped to 2,200 pound sterling.

Obviously, the changes in the production were not the same as those in the prices during the ten years.

20xx年商务英语考试(BEC)经典小作文第二篇

Bristol factories, with 600 employees in 2003, generated the largest profits in each quarter during 2003. But the profits reduced from ￡12 million in the first quarter to about ￡8.2 million in the fourth.

London factories, by contrast, contributed the least in the whole year. Although the profits slightly climbed in the second quarter, they declined in the following periods. The highest profits in the second quarter reached ￡4.1 million.

The profits produced by the Leeds factories were relatively stable in that only in the third quarter did the profits dropped by one million pound sterling to the bottom of ￡7million . The other three quarters saw the same profits.

Noticeably, the number of employees in Leeds was 350, compared with 150 in London.

20xx年商务英语考试(BEC)经典小作文第三篇

Introduction

The purpose of this report is to compare the turnover for three outlets in a company from 2000 to 2002.

Findings

In each of the three years, the turnover for supermarkets was always the highest. By contrast, that for small shops was the lowest. Department stores remained the middle position. In 2002, for instance, supermarkets reached its heyday of 80, more than twice larger than the turnover for department stores, which was about 35, the same as the previous year. Nevertheless, in this year small shops had only 25.

As far as the trend is concerned, while supermarkets experiences steady increase, department stores declined from 50 in 2000 to 35 in 2000 and 2001. Similarly, the turnover for small shops dropped from 30 in 2000 to 20 in 2001. Conclusion

Supermarkets were always the largest turnover contributor.