高考英语专题辅导-------看图作文 ? 记叙+议论（结合自身经历或简要描述图片为记叙，由此展开讨论）

一：写作技巧:

1. 仔细审图,看懂图片所表达的意思,根据图画内容整理出几个要点，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。

2. 根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式，确定短文须用的时态和该用的人称。

3. 确定体裁（说明文还是记叙文），

4. 接着用简洁的语句描述图片大意。

5. 根据图片进行议论，发表看法。

,理解画面意思,因此考生须仔细观察每幅图画所描绘的情景,深刻理解作者通过图画所传达的信息,列出写作的要点.

二、图片写作提纲Outline:

第一段：图片描写，提出问题

常用开头：

? In the picture, I can see that ………….. ? As is shown in the picture/ cartoon,…………

? As is vividly described in the picture,………..

第二段：我的看法 + 议论 ( 议论文常规写法)

1. 支持或反对

2. 理由

第三段：总结自己的观点

要求：前后呼应，强调结论

三、图片写作范文

? 20xx年上海高考英语作文

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below

简要描述图片内容，就图片的主题

谈谈自己的感想。

Possible version

In the picture, I can see that a

girl is riding a bicycle but her father is on her left showing the direction, her mother on her right with a

first-aid box and behind her is her granny, who is already out of breath. They are all running as they are holding the bicycle with sweat falling down their foreheads. The girl is shouting, “Leave me alone. I can manage.”

There is no denying (the fact) that this is a common phenomenon in society nowadays. A majority of parents and grandparents tend to worry too much about their children. As an only child in the family, I am also too much looked after by my parents. But is it necessary for them to do so? As far as I am concerned, there is no need for them to do so. My reasons are as follows.

Although they indeed love me very much, I don’t want this kind of “love” just as the girl in the picture because this kind of “love” may spoil me. What I really need is to be more independent myself. Independence is a most important quality needed in modern society, without which we’ll not be able to meet challenges in the future. Of course, I don’t mean that I don’t need my parents’ help, but I want them to help me form the habit of study and think

independently.

Dear parents, please understand what we need. Let us solve the problems on our own.

第二篇：高考英语看图作文写作指导

议论文：

例题展示1：

简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

（一） 内容要点：

1． 描述文字说明：

1） 学生被迫上很多补习班

2） 无兴趣可言

2． 议论文字说明：

1） 太多的补习班是浪费时间

2） 学习要有兴趣

3） 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习

4） 表达希望

（二）One possible version:

Looking at this picture，you will understand better ―Too much work makes Jack a dull boy‖. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.

In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect! 例题展示2：

请根据图画和所给词语的提示，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。然后，再根据此故事内容，发表你自己的感想（自拟），不得少于三点想法。

参考词汇：

help, stop, knock…down, the fallen oil bottle, straighten, disagree, set a good example to,build up our society

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注意：不要受所给词语的限制

要求：1．词数：100词左右；2．开头已给出。

One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over._______________________

一、选择要点

左边一幅图

1.女孩跌倒

2.小明要帮她

3.小明的母亲阻拦他说：―不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。‖

右边一幅图

1.有一天，小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子

2.小明说： ―我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的‖

二、简译要点

左边一幅图 （试题中已给出）

2.Xiao Ming wanted to help the girl up.

3.His mother stopped him and said, ―Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.‖

右边一幅图

1.Another day, the mother saw the fallen oil bottle on the ground.

2.Xiao Ming said to his mother,

(注意小明的话要用虚拟语气)

―If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.‖

三、增加要点,以使文章连贯

1.小明的母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子，而小明却视而不见，心情如何：

比如表示惊讶，震惊等

2.小明的母亲看到这种情形后，可能对小明说些什么：

比如：你为什么不把倒在地上的瓶子扶起来呢？

翻译增加的要点

（Another day,） the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be，saying to him, ―Can’t you see the fallen oil? Why can’t you straighten it up?‖

四、自拟感想

1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法：不同意

2.我想：①父母应该为孩子树立好榜样

②父母不仅要关心孩子的身体，还要关心他们的思想

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③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。因为我们生活在社会这

个大家庭中。

译出上述感想

1. I disagree with what the mother did in the story.

2. ①I think parents should set a good example to their children .

②They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds.

③They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Because we live in the society which is a big family for all of us.

五、增加结尾句，整理成文 stopped him and said, ―Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.‖ Another day, the mother was shocked to see XiaoMing just let the fallen oil bottle be saying to him, ―Can’t you see the fallen oil? Why can’t you straighten it up?‖ But XiaoMing said to his mother, ―If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.‖

I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children .They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society which is a big family for all of us.

Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

例题展示3：

根据图画内容，以―We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter‖题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。

1.简单描述漫画的内容；

2.作业负担过重；

3.精讲精练；

4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter l says to the woman, ―If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will

our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.

例题展示4：

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Directions: write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.

简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。

tells her that unless she puts her heart into learning, she can’t ride well. Her mother isShe warns her that if she doesn’t be will get hurt. The girl’s grandmother is

例题展示5：

请根据下面的漫画， 以―What Will the Child Become?‖为标题，写一篇短文。

要求：1 词数100左右，不包括已给出的开头部分；

2 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法。

参考词汇：电子琴—— electronic piano

What Will the Child Become?

Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five. Who is the ―King‖ of the family? The only child! He is a proud ―King‖ he is! His grandfather is What is his grandmother doing behind? She is But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more than anyone else. He’ll become no good for the world.

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例题展示6：

下面这幅画描述了一个情景。请根据中文提示以―They’re Thinking Along the Same Line‖为题写一篇短文。注意：1 短文须忠实描述图画内容，可发挥想象适当增加细节也可进行简单评述，但短文必须连贯。2 词数100字左右。

They’re Thinking Along the Same Line think alike. Today their minds happen to run along the same line: ―Anyway he wouldn’t dare to run into me.‖ In no time they’ll crash into each other, fall to the ground and roll together into the same 例题展示8：

The Tutor Mother Invited

is known to all that birds like chickens can’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim following the tutor. We can imagine the final result.

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