作文指导

Writing

(根据要求写一篇不少于6句话，但含有三种不同句式的短文。要求意思连贯，语句通顺。)

写作小贴士：

1、所谓的句子类型就是：

1）根据动词分类的5种：to be, there be, 含有can/may/must等情态动词的句型, to have和to do句型。

（其中to have句型中有特例：如We have a rest under the tree.虽然含有have但是此句型属于to do句型，否定句只能写成We don’t have a rest under the tree.一般疑问句Do you have a rest under the tree?除了have a rest之外，have a break, have a meeting, have a barbeque, have a lesson, have lunch这几个含有have 的句型属于to do句型。）

2）根据句式分类的四种：

1）陈述句（包括肯定句和否定句）如：He is a teacher. We can’t fly.

2）疑问句（包括一般疑问句和特殊疑问句）如：Is he a policeman? What do you like?

3）祈使句（动词原形开头表示命令和请求的句子，否定句以Don’t开头）如：Come in, please. Don’t leave rubbish!

4）感叹句(以what 或how开头，表示强烈情感的句子)如：What a wonderful phrase! How wonderful the phrase is !

2、写作时注意事项

1）现在三年级要求写作时又三种句型，同学们可以把两种不同分类的句子写在一起，在运用to be, there be, can/may/must, to have, to do 句型的同时可加入祈使句，如，Look at…感叹句, 如，How big it is! What a nice pet!等，这样就不用担心句型不够了。

2）在同学们完成习作是经常会出现单复数，和指代不明的现象， 如， I like tigers. It is big. It can run fast.这时咱们不妨这样写：Of all the animals, I like tigers best. They are… They can…或者Of all the animals, I like tigers best. There’s a tiger in the zoo. It’s….It can…

3)在同学们完成习作是还会出现这样的情况:I have a pet. It is ….It is…It can…It likes…It lives…在文中连续出现一串相同的开头，这样的作文严格说来是要扣分的！咱们不妨这样来解决。I have a pet. It is lovely. Touch it, it feels smooth. It is small. I can put it in my hands. It can jump high. Do you think it’s super? It likes eating mice. So the mice hate it. And it lives in my house. We are good friends. Do you know what animal it is?

1.Animals in the zoo (A)

I like the zoo. I like the animals. I can see many animals in the zoo. There are lions and tigers. The tigers are black and orange. The lions are brown and yellow. They have got big teeth and they are noisy. I like the monkeys, too. They climb trees and eat bananas.

Animals in the zoo(B)

There are many animals in the zoo. Do you want to go? You can see the tigers, monkeys and elephants. The elephants are big and grey. The monkeys can jump and climb. They are naughty. They like eating bananas. I like the zoo. It's fun. Come and see the animals.

2.The Dog and the Cat (A)

A dog and a cat are in the park. The dog has a new skateboard. The cat has a toy robot. It can walk. They have fun together. Oh, no! The robot hits the skateboard. The dog falls on the ground. He isn't happy. He doesn't like robots!

The Dog and the Cat (B)

There are two animals in the park. The dog plays with the cat. The dog has a skateboard. He can ride it very well. He's fast. The cat has a toy, too. It's a robot. It's super. They play together and the robot hits the skateboard. The dog falls down on the ground. The cat is sorry. The dog is angry. Poor dog!

3. I have gloves for winter(A)

It is winter and it is cold. I have my new gloves on my hands. They are nice and warm. They are red and black. I like these colours. I can touch the snow. My hands aren't cold, they are warm!

I have gloves for winter(B)

Here are my new gloves! I wear them on my hands. You can buy them at the clothes shop. They are red and black. They are super. I put on my gloves and I can touch the snow. I can play in the garden and throw snow. I can make a snowman and my hands are warm. Go buy some! You can play with me, too.

4.My good friend(A)

Sarah is my good friend. We are in Class 3 together. Sarah is very lovely and she's clever. She is good at Maths and English. She can play the piano well. We play with dolls and ride our bikes. We have fun!

My good friend(B)

Do you have a good friend? I have a very good friend. His name is Ben. He lives in the house next to my house. He's tall and he has got short black hair. He can play football very well. He's on the school team. He plays football on Saturday and Sunday. I often play with him at the weekend. We play computer games and watch television together， too. He's a good friend.

5.I like fruit(A)

Do you like fruit? I like fruit. I like oranges, apples and bananas. I eat oranges at school. They are sweet. I don't like lemons. They taste sour.

I like fruit(B)

I like fruit. I buy fruit with my mother at the supermarket. There are oranges, apples and bananas. The bananas are long and smooth. They are sweet. The apples and oranges are round. They are sweet, too. I eat fruit at breakfast, lunch and supper. I eat fruit and I feel good!

6. My favourite toy(A)

I have many toys. My favourite toy is my doll. Her name is Mary. She is three years old. She has got brown hair and black eyes. She has a beautiful pink dress. I sleep with Mary and I go to the park with Mary, too. She is my good friend. She's a super toy.

My favourite toy(B)

My favourite toy is my toy robot. He's blue and grey. He has four arms and big eyes. He has big feet. He can walk fast and sing a song. He has lights on his head. They go blink-blink! The lights are red. It's an expensive robot. It's 100 yuan.

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